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Bio:
I am a retired 72 year old grandmother from Texas. I was born and raised in Texas. My husband and I own a ranch in North central Texas and raise cattle. I have two children and 4 grandchildren. I love reading my favorite stories are about the mafia and mysteries.
She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159885
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
I hope they make it. I feel he stays with her out of guilt and she stays with him for the same reason. He was out cheating on her. I don't care what she said when you cheat it speaks of your character.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
okay now, Great story. I waited for you to get this far, before I started to read. I am hoping you will update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) next update will be a couple weeks, Real life is a bit insane right now:)
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Bella trying to make them stay together as a family. Bad parents and all. She knows the value of family, better than they all do.
Author's Response:
She really does...
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You never know when those words you say could be the last time you speak to one another. So YOU have to remember to count and sometimes not speak. Just say have a nice day instead of screw you asshole. Like you want to.
Author's Response:
Wise words:)
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
ahh now I get why you keep going back. TO show Bella the nasty Cullen parents. Bella tried to reason with him about not throwing them away for her.
Author's Response:
To understand where they are now, we have to learn where they were then:)
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I reread the whole story. Can not keep up when the updates are so slow. Please give us something more often even if it is just a half of a chapter. That way we can keep the story in our heads..
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Well, hopefully this will open up their eyes again to each other. Time is short and you never know when your day will be here and you will be gone from your loved ones. I only pray that my day comes after my children and grandchildren. I don't want to bury them. Selfish? Yes. When my spouse and I come to that point I am prepared for that. We always knew if we could stay married at one point death would take one of us. Sadly if I die first our daughter and son will have to take care of daddy. He does not know how to wash clothes, clean or pay bills. Yep I have spoiled him.
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Jasper is talking about pulling the plug. No sign of life. Oh no.. will Bella not make it? Then Edward will forever remember those hurtful words from that morning. The fact they had grown apart.
Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
it has been so long I will have to go back and read about Carlisle and Esme. Edward and B started out in this story almost at divorces door. Edward was ready to leave her. Then the hostage situation and he felt guilty. Then she could not walk and they are where they are now. Disfunctional and he stays with her because now he feels he has to. I get you have other stories it just is hard to keep this one going so the readers can follow along.. You know give us a a/n and overview of what has happened and where we are.
Bella Swan, Senior Intelligence Analyst with the CIA has uncovered a plot to blow up the capitol, but there's a traitor in CIA HQ and they have their eyes on her. In order to protect the country she loves, she has to risk losing everything.
AH/Some OOC behaviour. Heartfail Warning. Character Death.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131170 Read Count: 36690
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - 13th July 2010 - Flathead Lake Mt.
right direction. Two very smart people. Bella is all about the details. They will work this out. Great story... GREAT
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - 21st August 2010 - On the Run
That was damn close each time. Okay Victoria and James are dead. Yea. Now we are still on the run.
sigh,
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - 19th June 2010 - Port Angeles, WA.
Intrigue!
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - 21st June 2010 - Volterra Italy.
hmm, I get she has given up. She thinks they are killing me anyway so why give them ammunition.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - June 14th 2010 – CIA Headquarters - Mclean VA.
Ok good beginning. Lets see if you keep this going. Most of these with alot of suspense fall off quick. I am going to hope you are dedicated.
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18. 4th July 2010 - NNMC - Bethesda
Well I am glad they are now focused on who is doing this. Someone they work with for sure.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - June 14th 2010 – Ashton Heights – Arlington VA.
ugh.. more PLEASE
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5. 14th June 2010 – Springfield Virginia.
yikes
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - 22nd August 2010 - NAB, Little Creek.
Well get back to writing, we have a nuke in play. >LOL
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 -15th June 2010 - Springfield Virginia.
such a good story. Worth the read! We are excited to see our next chapter.
Bella is staying with Felix, and that is Never good.
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - 24th June 2010 - Bourtzi, Nafplion
thank you for not killing him off. Well so it seems that Bella can help them get out. Excellent.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - 17th June 2010 - Port Angeles, WA.
Glad to see you update. I hated to see you drop this. It has such a good plot. Sorry that you have been in the hospital.
Excellent chapter..
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - 17th - 18th June 2010 - Port Angeles. WA.
Oh no.. killed off our Edward..
:-(
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - 26th June 2010 - NAB - Little Creek.
this is good, if you keep us updated. This could have won awards.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - 23rd June 2010 - Bourtzi, Nafplion,
I can not read this part, I just skip over. Too much,
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter16 - 26th June 2010 - Island of Spetses - Greece
bad place for a wound. hurry up we are all on this little cliff and the wind is blowing and it is raining...
Author's Response:
Hehehehe, its cold and its blowy but damn the view is good. ;o)
Yep it is a bad place for a wound, but don't forget Edward is a highly trained military man, and muscle mass can make a world of difference on a wound and his ability to heal. That and I've already 'killed' him once, so it's only fair I cut him some slack eh.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - 27th June 2010 - National Naval Medical Centre - Bethesda.
ahh Isabella we need her condtion too..
Someone sold them out was it Phil? He might try and kill her now...
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - 7th July 2010 - Flathead Lake MT
ahh now we have to find out the who in all this.
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - 5th July 2010 - Arlington VA.
got to uncover the mole. He or she is in the operations center where Bella works, because that is where Jessica talked to him.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - 14th July 2010 - Flathead Lake, Mt
ahh and now we have a budding relationship.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - 25th June 2010 - 4th July 2010 - Volterra, Italy
so good..
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 - 30th July 2010 - Flathead Lake, MT.
good story..
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - 5th August 2010 - Mclean, VA.
Yep I figured it was her. Now hopefully they caught her in this last betrayal.
Great story.
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - 19th August 2010 - Flathead Lake, MT.
On you have us on edge here!
At least they escaped.
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - 22nd August 2010 - Colorado Springs, CO
Glad you are back. Sorry to hear about your hospital stay. The situation with dialysis is like that.
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - 27th August 2010 - Mclean, VA.
oh so bad sweet you. Familiar voice. Yikes.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 - 6th September 2010 - Washington DC.
Okay now we might have to put a hit on you. LOL
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue
Great story, even if you killed them off. I guess it had to be this way.
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 - 6th September 2010 - End Game
you are killing me here..
When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.
MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Stop the peeks out business. This is serious. She has to tell Charlie, then Edward no matter what.
Third story in FBI saga: Bella is lured back into the FBI when one of the team is hurt. Will she be able to find the perp before they strike again? Cannon coupling, language, and lemons. AU&NC-17
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116669 Read Count: 63828
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I waited to start reading this until you were further along. I always love your writing. These stories have so much important information. I hate to wait weeks for updates. I am old I forget stuff!!..lol
gj
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Bella can not save everyone. Sometimes you have to back off.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I love this. I quit reading because with so much information if the updates are slow I have to reread. So I was waiting until you got ahead of me.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I am sorry too. YOu have a life like everyone.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
She hits the director and lives to tell about it? Well I am not sure I buy that. These guys get that high up for being tough.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Not confused just really into this.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
just keeps getting deeper. I don't usually read anything horrible about children. I don't even listen to it on the news. I just cant.. You have handled it well so far so good.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
oh I hate this. I am catching up to you again.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
well well, I am into this story. I was not talking about your notes..
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
You may not love this story, but let me tell you it is so much more that many stories out there. I jumped on this as soon as it was out. Too much steamy sex with not story line. I mean a lemon is a lemon.
Author's Response:
I love this story, very much so.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Embry is the mole. Poor zoe
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
You are an amazing writer. I think I have read your work for several years. I want to read your published work too.
Thank you, this is an amazing story.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
My chocolates melted. So I get RL.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Wonder what her name is? Something Dwyer?
It was just a bit of fun, a chance for an all-expenses paid vacation, and a favor for her bestie. Never in a billion years could Bella have imagined just how much meeting Edward Cullen would invert her world. This was an entry for the Pick a Pic challenge.
Thanks to Belindella for the beautiful banner.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12563 Read Count: 1860
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Billionaire
Well good job!.. Robert pattinson on the billionaire. Hmm He is still pretty young. You are discounting the fact he may already have found his one in a million. Remember they try and keep personal their personal lives. AS THEY SHOULD.
Good story,
He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.
–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40671
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Free
Whew.. intense.. I hope you can get us to where we see who is WHAT? LOl
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Mint
Oh my dear Bella, there is more to this than you know still. Yes he is a killer. He is made to do this. Who marks the kills? Who picks them?
SO much we still do not KNOW.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Want
Well I thought you were gone. Well yes and I had to read back to totally remember. It was really intense. Yes it was good. I still don't understand her running. She knew he has to do what they tell him to do. He is a killer. He has protected her. So, I guess I was somewhat upset with her.
I am so glad I never have to make those choices.
Through a young Bella Swan’s dreams, Alice begins having visions of events Jasper's past and soon realizes that Bella's destined to be tied to the Cullen’s. A series of visions prove that tragic events will bring her to the Cullen’s and that she is bound to Jasper in a unique twist of fate. Edward falls in love with Bella during Alice’s visions before he ever meets her. He tries to piece her back together under the protective watch of Jasper. Will Edward win Bella’s heart and build a happilyever after with Bella or will everything just fall to pieces.
***I love Jasper and Alice. I love the idea of Bella and Jasper being tied together but I know in my heart of hearts that Jasper nor Alice could ever bare to hurt the other so I am delighted to see how this story is received.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95185 Read Count: 5228
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11~ Nothing will ever be the same
Edward and B as parents.. LOL
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Building Lives
I am so not a fan of Jake.. nope not at all.
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Changes
Oh Bella, finally someone to stay with you and love you. The minute that wolf imprints you my dear are history.
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Pain of Vision
time to ditch Rose.
Date: 07 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Learning to Live Again
I rather love how this is starting. I still think they need to tell Rose she can settle down and be nice or be gone. Bella is Jasper's great,great,great grand niece and Edward's mate. So deal with it.
After Bella's 18th birthday accident the entire Cullen family leaves Forks leaving behind a devastated Bella.
Four months later, when Bella seems to start healing from her heartbreak she is faced with one Edward Cullen, only he is not the same Edward she has known before.
As he reveals the reasons of his lies and actions Bella has to make a decision that will change her life forever...
New Moon Alternate Universe - canon couples (perhaps a little OOC later on). Rated 'T' but if everything goes according to plan the rating will change in the future *hint hint*
I know the NM AU is a very popular theme, but give it a try it's not your usual NM AU story! And yes, I did just shamelessly promote myself... An author's got to do what an author's got to do.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31557 Read Count: 4532
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Of unexpected visits and heart to hearts
great start
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Of truths and emotional rollercoasters
I know the drama factor. She loves him and he loves her. He did this for her. How much love is that? He gave up forever to give her a life time. That is beyond wonderful. I think.
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Of belated reunions and blissful unions
all I can do is smile. I got the 3rd person. It is you..
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 05 – Of Sweet Mornings and Grocery Shopping
love it.
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 06 - Of Hopeless Cooks and High School Drama
I am loving this. Edward is funny and ... human.
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Of Trouble in paradise 'n Mending Fences
I loved it...
What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart? He claims her, of course. Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong. Peter x Bella pairing.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81682
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Bella had a horrible mother. She has a loving one now and always her loveable father. Good chapter.
Missed you glad you are writin again.
Author's Response:
Bella's mother is horrible, but her father has always been wonderful. XOXO
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Alice can be a big problem. Edward Cullen roasted and will continue in his roast for eternity.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Of all of this Marcus and Esme made me smile. We miss you, please come back soon! We have Cullens to Fry! Mainly Carlisle, Edward and Alice. Who cares about the newbies.
Author's Response:
Sorry, I've been updating a bit slowly Mary. It's the end of the school year and I've been running ragged with all of the activities that they pile on in one month. Ten more days and it'll all be over. Phew!
Marcus and Esme will be a happy couple. it'll be useful to have the Volturi on our group's side.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Pauls transformation was really funny. I think that the fact Charlie and Bella are related to the wolves makes so much sense. That is why they were always going to La Push. That is why Charlie and Bella are shields. I am not sure I understand why Bella is the strongest shield.
The fact that Bella has this allure gift. Well we have all seen that. I know she is nervous about the Cullen's but she is a key player in taking them down. Peter and Brewmaster will defend her to the death, and of course her daddy and Paul.
I am ready for them to start hurting. THem=Cullen's
Author's Response:
Eleazar will be working with Bella and Charlie along with Luca. Sometimes there are no explanations for things, it's just inherent, but Eleazar's gift is coming in handy and was very much needed. Bella certainly is a key player in taking down the Cullens. In fact, all of our gang are very talented.
As for Paul, he wanted to change in comfort. *smirks*
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Okay down here in Texas we have oil and natural gas that are big. The natural gas right now is being taken from shale. They have to use a process called "fracking". People in rural areas, cities and suburbs are all getting paid from the local drilling. If you have your mineral rights you can be paid for the minerals as they are pumped out.
Carlisle is so all about the money. They never say if Edwierd is okay with Carlisle screwing his mate! I can not wait until they Edwierd & Carlisle see Vampire Bella. She needs to be dressed to the "9's". I am not sure how fast we want them to know she is mated to Peter. Let them make a play for her or try and bring her in because she has that great power. lmao... You got to tape Carlisle saying he has the mistresses so Esme can get out.
Author's Response:
Wait until you get to chapter 8. I have more info regarding Edward there.
I have tons planned for Esme, too.
You live in Texas? You're so lucky! My husband used to be stationed there years ago when he was in the Air Force.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I am telling you I laugh till I cry. So very funny. I get so mad about what Edward did to Bella. The fact the other Cullens just went along with it makes them so superficial. No sincerity there at all.
I hope you keep this going it is a WORTH THE READ story!
Author's Response:
I agree with you completely. I think that's why so many of us in fanfiction start at New Moon. We get annoyed at how pliable Bella was in the original stories. XOXO
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I am so tired and I have not reviewed, because of it. This story is a nice flip on the Cullens. I can not stop reading.
I hope you will update often.
Author's Response:
I love making good guys bad and bad guys good. XOXO
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Masen is Edward's human surname. I just can not wait until Carlisle and Edward see Vampire Bella that is MATED to Peter Whitlock. That will make my day!
Author's Response:
Yes, Masen is definitely Edward's surname and he's just as creepy as Carlisle is. XOXO
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Glad Esme is out of that. Peter and Bella it is the best match for her. He is normal and loving and he lets her be herself.
Who knew Edward, Carlisle and Alice were so sick? Deviant!
This story is so different and I am loving it.
Author's Response:
We had to get Esme out of there. It's a good thing that our vampires love Walmart so much.
Peter is actually a pretty sensitive vampire. He does his best to empathize with his mate and she does the same thing. They're really tuned in to each other.
As for the Cullen, they are pretty deviant in this story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Mama you need to give yourself a high five! I have tears on my face laughing at Edward. Too bad Bella would not talk to him and I mean drag it out. $10,000 would have been great!
Well at least we know the why to Bella and Tanya. Now I say we just kill Carlisle and now he is married to NO ONE. Everyone of those wives shares in his....ESTATE....SWEET.. lmao
Edward now that is another subject. He says that stuff about Peter infront of Bella and I do believe she would end him all on her own. They are all sickening. Edward and Charolette, yes he deserves her. The prude (sort of) married the HO.
Author's Response:
Carlisle is just sick. In his mind, women are just objects to be used as pawn in his crazy endeavor. Edward has also been brainwashed into subscribing to Carlisle's twisted beliefs.
More from Walmart soon. XOXO
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I am back to LMAO. I love this. I wish you would give up RL and just write this. Laughter is the best medicine. I loved that Bella & Peter have now been exposed to the Cullen's.
Author's Response:
Aw...thanks, I'm so happy you're enjoying this fic. The Cullens are stunned about Bella and Peter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Hooters was funny. Ahh let them look they Love what they have at home. Carlisle has sealed his fate! Charlete attacked Bella so she should be killed as well. Alice has committed many crimes, she may need to be punished say appropriately. Wear 2nd hand clothes and clean for the needy for at least 300 years.
Author's Response:
Hi Mary,
Hooters was a blast. I hope you don't think the boys are done with that place because boys will be boys, after all. The Cullens are dead and would have been if Alec hadn't stopped Peter and Emmett. It did prove that Charlotte is a formidable opponent, though.
More adventures next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I so love this story. I wish RL would let you update every week. I miss this. Your story so perfectly done. Everyone refitted. Who would think Charlie would be loved by all of them and called Dad. His instructions on going to Hooters is funny also. Caus now loves him I suppose as Dad too. The Wallmart Excursion was too funny. Then you switch to Time Square and of course something different happens.
OK.. Mams Sue is the new succubus........THAT will be Charlie's reward for having erictile disfunction as a human.
This is work worth reading and reviewing.
HOORAY FOR YOU.. and us.
Author's Response:
I wish RL would let me update weekly, too, but it's tough.
Charlie at Hooters was nutty, I know, but he's not really that old. You'll hear his history next.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
The phone answering thing hits us all! FUNNY
Author's Response:
You're not kidding. Automated phone systems drive me berserk. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I think I like your early review. I also think Alice & Charolette are sicko! Wait till Peter and Charlie find out they want to kidnap Bella. Break her bond with Peter.. He will be livid. Oh Yah.
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Well as you know I love this story. I will be so upset when you are done with it. I love what you write because of the humor. We all need to laugh.
Poor Marcus. I am happy for Maria. See in there was a good person needing love. A friend someone to treasure.
Author's Response:
Humor, huh? Well, with humor comes angst and in the next few weeks, I'll be posting an extremely angst ridden oneshot. Because we all need to cry sometimes.
Marcus was dealt a raw deal with Didyme.
Maria has found her first friend in Bella.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
now sweetie we can not have these wolves killing our favorite duo. No Please save them Mama!
I love this story and I am so glad you updated. I wish this was all you had to do. LOL
Author's Response:
Now, Mary, if the wolves kill Pete and Bella, I'd have to end the story. They are the main protagonists, you know. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
good chapter.. Sweet bella
Author's Response:
Bella certainly is a sweet girl, Petey is too. Glad you liked it. XOXO
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Jiffy Lube.. I died laughing.
Wow .. good chapter Mama.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. XOXO mama4dukes
Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.
Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.
A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89177
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Your Place Or Mine?
You know this is your story. I am not going to poop on it for you. I just want to say the whole Jacob vs Edward in Twilight Series got to be stupid. Everyone has friends of both sexes. When you have someone that is your friend that develops deeper feelings you either cut them loose or you go forward with the feelings. You can NOT have it both ways. Either way you loose a friend.
I was that girl in high school that had many friends that were guys. They were my buddies. They called me for advice with their girl friends. I used to think that I was just not pretty enough for dates. As you grow up you understand the specifics of life and relationships. Now I am glad I had those friends. I am glad I was not the gossipy silly girl. I was more grounded and loyal.
Author's Response:
Hi MaryMary!
I hope you will continue reading. I know what you are saying regarding the whole Edward vs. Jake thing. But since I am writing a canon-based fic it had to be Jake vs. Edward; it just won't be a throw-away-Jake in this story. I don't like fics that make Jake a complete jerk. He's a good guy, just not the right guy for Bella. I get that because it happens sometimes that way in life.
I am trying to portray a love triangle that is not something any of the participants wanted or intended. It is an emotional struggle for the three people involved. It's also a slightly personal/autobiographical story for me and something I was able to relate to. My Jacob isn't a complete asshole. He has redeeming qualities which is what Bella loves about him and why she will always want to remain friends with him. Edward will also see this down the road.
But Bella and Jake are moving apart, as much as neither one of them wants that to happen...it is happening, it has happened somewhat already. Enter Edward, also unwilling to become involved, yet there he is, having feelings for someone when he least expects it.
There is a little overlap of time where you are unwilling to cut the ties with what you have have become familiar with, loved so long, and have cherished and you are unwilling to acknowledge the change within you that has you focusing on someone new. You feel like you are cheating but it is really just a growing -in-different-directions and a change of heart and you do have to follow your heart in the long run.
I think as you continue reading you will see that my background is actually really close to your own, at least I think that comes across in the story. There will be turmoil, but that is the result of misunderstanding and misunderstandings can be overcome. In the end all three characters will be on good terms with one another. Give it time. We'll get there. :)
Thank you for the review and for sharing your thoughts.
-bannerday
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud
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Author's Response:
Hi MaryMary!
Glad you liked the heart to heart. Hope you continue to read and enjoy. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
has anyone stopped to think what has happened to Bella. James stalks her Edward fights him off after he is trying to kidnap her. Now after a stint in the hospital to fix said injuries from kidnapping. Edward shuns her...........
SCREW MEN.
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68: Moving Forward
Young guys, so emotional.
I think James needs a trip to the nut house. THose pictures show premeditated plans. Not all made in the same day..
On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,
where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.
No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:
Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.
AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E
Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187879
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
You know this is interesting. Very descriptive on the chores. I guess you young women today have never had all that much responsiblity. First thing in the morning is you turn on the oven. Fix coffee. While that is perking the first load of laundry goes in (if you have an automatic washer). The next thing is putting in the breakfast bread in the already heated oven. Next put on the meat that is cooking along with the bread first load of laundry is washed put in basket, then start second load. Bread is now done and meat should be done as well, cook eggs. Serve breakfast. Clean up the table place dishes in dishwater. Second laundry load is now washed, take out put in third load. Now while the dishes soak you and the third load is washing HANG the first two loads on the line. Come back in the house wash the dishes dry them and put them up. Sweep kitchen and mop if necessary. Then the third load is washed, hand it on line. Now if you are done washing clothes you can start cleaning the rest of the house making beads etc. By the time that is mostly done it is time for lunch. After lunch time to check hanging clothes start bringing dried ones in to fold or hang also seperate out ironing items. LOL.. this is how it was with no clothes dryers and no dishwasher. I was in hog heaven to have an electic washing machine @ HOME. Then when I got a dishwasher, I thought life was really great.
Author's Response:
I still hang my clothes out and my dishwasher is broke, so pretty much in the same situation as Bella...lol. But I have a breadmaker that makes my bread, so it does all the work. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
The story is very different.
Author's Response:
Well, that could be a good or a bad thing...lol. Whatever it is, thanks for the review!