Reviews by MaryMary
Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215885
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Threats and Instructions

I thought Brady was Seth's father?  I guess King is because he would not want a child if he was not his. He strikes me as not paternal.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Following Directions

Creative is right. The secret service can not by law let the president do this. They have directives.To protect him at all costs. They are always shoot to kill when he is in concern.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Revelations

I know that you wont kill Bella, Seth and the President the rest of these people are up for grabs. Oh Alice you need to get your mind game on!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession

yikes and now Bella is beaten. Well Seth is fine and I bet so is Edward. Rose is shot, don't miss guys shoot Royce.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story

"Our son" that is what we want to hear.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

I loved this chapter after so much hurt. Poor Emmett.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1

good story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End

wow never saw that coming. Then again all things are possible. Thank you great story.

Blood Swan by katiecav Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Blood Swan Banner

Las Vegas, Nevada, 1980. In a city run by some of the biggest mobsters in the country, only the strongest survive. Entry for the LikeTotally80sContest. Now expanded. AU.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13744 Read Count: 3571
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well good job so far so good.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good story. I mean tough subject matter..

Summary:

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Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62156
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh sure. He is a mess. He keeps saying wife like he really has one. Nope on paper only. So best thing to do with that is get the papers done. Kill off the link to wife.

 

He smells her and is addicted already?? I am not sure if I buy that.. skeptic.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Now she is bright. Leave and tell Jacob off. Don't sit there and wallow in the mess he created.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't know. He knows she is all of this and yet he is still hooked on a hooker with a coke habit. I don't see him as being very bright. If he loves her so, then there is no future for him and Bella...........ever.

 

 

Summary:

Edward Masen and Bella Swan, high school sweethearts who married young, have their lives turned upside down when Edward is “discovered”. Celebrity, tragedy, alcohol and excess dissolve what seems to be indestructible… or does it? Can love rise above fame and indulgence? Or does Hollywood truly alter what is good in a man?

 

 

 

Celebrity, Deconstructed Banner, by EvilNat


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56283 Read Count: 10591
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2012 Updated: 17 Nov 2015
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

dang along way to get to this point and he did not cheat. sigh.



Author's Response:

It definitely is a long way to come, but it's only just really starting... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

We all know that the people that manage these stars have all these romances going for the public. But when someone is married it is just wrong.



Author's Response: James is... driven, I'll say that. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

backwards.. grr



Author's Response:

It's the last "past" chapter, sweets. Answers will be in the next one. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well good for you. I hope you get Bella out of this mess. Leave him divorce him and move on. He has, no man is owrth the cheating he has done to her. Just get a divorce don't take his money and leave..

Thump by chartwilightmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU OCC A drabble involving one vampire, one human, and one heartbeat. M for mature subjects.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9381 Read Count: 14589
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2012 Updated: 06 Mar 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen

thump & bump



Author's Response:

*giggles* i like that

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Thirteen

hmm



Author's Response:

indeed ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

thump



Author's Response:

thump thump!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Twenty-Seven

thump.. sputter



Author's Response:

*gulps*

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

:-( so bad



Author's Response:

bad? :(

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Seventeen

so many.. thumps.. so little else.



Author's Response:

well, his heartbeat is rather strong

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Eighteen

th..mp



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Sixteen

Thump



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Eight

Tanya, the whore of FFiction arrives. LOL



Author's Response:

ha! she does tend to be painted the whore of FF doesn't she

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Nine

these short chapters leave us all unsatisfied and ?

 

Well Tanya backed off. Wow!



Author's Response:

*evil laughs* but at least you get it posted daily

against bella, she stood no chance

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Ten

her Mate!



Author's Response:

i know right!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Eleven

well.



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

string us along.



Author's Response:

*evil laughs*

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Twenty-One

:-(



Author's Response:

because she bit him right?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Twenty-Three

why indeed?



Author's Response:

lots of questions both need to be answering

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Twenty-Four

??



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Twenty-Five

hmm



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Twenty-Nine

THUMP, JUMP, HUMP.  Now BITE,BURN,TURN.

 

 



Author's Response:

love that! too funny

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Little Blue Pill

thump thump.



Author's Response:

bring on the thump ;)

You Are My Home by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Edward never had a normal life. Working as a peddler in the Oklahoma Territory he saw images of the life he'd never have & the girl he wished he could have it with. Until she showed him that two lonely hearts can find peace together. Written for the Age of Edward 2012 Contest.

 

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Banners were made for the AoE Banner contest by Ms. Ambrosia and Tkegl


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11735 Read Count: 2039
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2012 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: You Are My Home

great story. I hope you write more..

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella had dreams, and a plan to chase them hand in hand.

Side by side they thought they could do anything, but what would happen when Edward had to leave Bella behind and chase them alone? **Drabblish little love story.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48417 Read Count: 33237
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2012 Updated: 18 Jan 2013
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well Carlisle told him more than anyone. Why doesn't he just say I am broke down in Bump no where Egypt and the car repair place said 3 days. The woman is a waitress in a resturant where he uses the phone and eats. She also has a big mouth and not many customers.

Summary:

E&B piano-NY

This is The Parachutist’ sequel.

It is the summer of 1945 and the war in Europe has ended. Despite his transformation in a vampire, Edward has found his love again, has prevailed over his bloodlust and they have married. Now he is going back to America with his human bride, where they’ll join Carlisle’s family. How will be their life with the Cullens, when will it be the right moment for Bella’s transformation? Will the Volturi discover them, will they face new dangers?

ONW has a blinkie too

ONW Blinkie


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50387 Read Count: 5177
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2012 Updated: 11 Sep 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Frenzied

Well I say burn both Irina and Tanya. Well Yves  is just being a vampire.. Poor B



Author's Response:

Irina loves awful men (in this she is in Canon) and they corrupt her. Tanya is rather a bitch, more shallow than evil and true, Yves is a vampire, but ready to become a rapist the moment his seductive lure doesn't work. I was so fed up with James that here I created another evil guy.

A bad trio, all in all.

Thank you so much for R&R!

 

The Western by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 92]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward's a hit-man with one rule; he doesn't do women.  When he learns his next target is Bella, he makes a decision that changes his life - and hers.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84930 Read Count: 22896
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hmm

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Someone wants that little girl dead.. Mala?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well so long Bella. wonderful guy this Edward.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

You know this crap goes on. I live in Texas. New Mexico, Arizona all have problems with the Mexican gangs. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The police are in on it.  I mean I even get that. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well I say you should go to New York. Why because there are so many people you can get lost there. You want to be lost. Stay there a while then move along to an unpopulated area get a job and stay for  a year.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Husband home with two broken legs. Oh POOR YOU. 

Summary:

This story is a one-shot explaining one of the million and one scenarios of what could have happened after the Cullen’s left Bella in New Moon.

 

This story contains angst and character death.

 

 

The banner is a gift from a beautiful friend and fellow author, MissKingAtYourService . If you haven’t already take a look at her stories on here.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4347 Read Count: 986
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Debt to Pay

boo hoo



Author's Response:

I know. But they can't all have a HEA. :(

 

Thanks for reading and reveiwing.

 

All my best,

Nickey

Summary:

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A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50406
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

so she will be Edward's wife. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

now wouldn't this be odd to come into the "future" so to speak and not step each new invention as it came. She has come from mummies into this land. A vampire! well well



Author's Response:

I've always wondered what it must ahve been like for people born in 1900... To grow up riding in horse-drawn buggies, and then see a man walk on the moon 60 yesrs later.

That had to be incredible.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ut oh. Indiana Cullen is it? Well you have woken up the Goddess Bellastone. LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This chapter left me wondering. Perhaps she being Bella will be better off with Shakob. Since he is obviously in tune with her. Edward is wierd. Then of course as soon as gold digging Tanya gets Edward on her continent she will be throwing fits and he will give in after all Shakob is better with Bella.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

this is pretty funny.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I had to laugh about the outlet.. Just like a child.

Get the child protective devices for the outlets. LMAO

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I know you have two versions. I just don't understand Why. I am reading this because this is where you started..



Author's Response:

I have a explanation of why I decided to do it this way on my blog.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

now that last sentence shocked me. 

 

Look Jacob can love Bella and not sleep with her. That is Edwards wife. So his position is that of a brother or best friend. Now that sounds so close to Twilight I can no be shocked I said that.

I knew that Tanya would be there. She was not through fleecing the golden goose. Poor little gold digger.

Breaking Free by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Breaking Free Banner

Banner by Illicit Writer

 

Can people start anew after being abandoned by those who supposedly loved them?  Bella and Jasper build new lives for themselves after being torn asunder by Edward and Alice?  But what happens when they run into each other?  Will they give love a chance?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16150 Read Count: 3104
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2012 Updated: 16 Apr 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love everything you write. I loved it. Yes I wish it was longer, but then again you get to the point and don't write a chapter when two sentences get the job done.

 

thank you,



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary,

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story.  I had a ton of fun writing it.  Thanks for taking the time to review.  XOXO  mama4dukes 

Guilt by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Childhood sweethearts, separated by an ocean. Will their love be strong enough to survive or will their separation and suspicions tear them apart?

WARNING CONTAINS STRONG LANGUAGE & DARK THEMES. SEASON OF OUR DISCONTENT ANGST COMP ENTRY


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7049 Read Count: 424
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2012 Updated: 16 Apr 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is a good read. My problem is that Edward always gets everything. Bella gets screwed.  Is this some underlying message that being selfless lets the self be consumed with loss.   So he is remorsefull.  He gets a life with Vicky and a baby. Moral to the story?  Should have broken it off when he left and Bella could have found Jake.  She was after all just a working class girl.

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story



Edward Cullen, former Confederate soldier, begins a journey from his home in Tennessee, to that of his only living relative in Texas. Along the way, he meets a girl. He's running from the past. She's running from a future she doesn't want. drabble-ish

Thanks very much to Cared for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75743 Read Count: 123150
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Feb 2013
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well no night clothes most husbands would be fine with that.



Author's Response: so true! thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Speaking of his penis in the third person. lol



Author's Response: ah, poor Ed. THanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

good



Author's Response: THanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

what a simple time. Hard work, but not so darn complicated.



Author's Response: so true....i don't think I would have survived without the AC in Texas though.... just sayin. THanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

too little to review on yet. Dont know any more than I did when I started reading.



Author's Response: ahh.. the trouble with drabbles. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well he showed good judgement.  Jacob told him he was better off without Ellie. So on ward!



Author's Response: Jake's a good guy. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She is a runnaway. Why? Abused by the whore come to be her new... MAMA?



Author's Response: Thanks very much! arranged marriage wasn't her cup of tea obviously.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She hasnt seen his pecker?  Was she supposed to?



Author's Response: he was afraid she caught a glimpse when he didn't know she was hiding in the wagon...when he had to pee. lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well this has awakened the man in him. Since he is a virgin... too.



Author's Response: for sure. THanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

remember in that time people married young. Traveling together and not being married would be a............huge sin.



Author's Response: exactly. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:-)



Author's Response: THanks so much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

small things, simple things in a time past.



Author's Response: Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

sweet.  Reckon to see you next chapter.. bye and bye.



Author's Response: THanks much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well people back then where resourseful. They had to be police were not on ever corner. So Women could shoot and they had to.



Author's Response: true. I hope Izzy gets to shoot something..lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Get married next town.  Seriously and stay off the trail.



Author's Response: lol You're cracking me up. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

stay off the damn road.



Author's Response: lol unfortunately, they'd not be able to navigate the forest with a wagon...the roads were bad enough if it rained....fallen trees all that. THanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Good. marry her before they find  you.



Author's Response: lol you're killing me. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

ha ha.. lost count



Author's Response: Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

grr Jake should have turned around.



Author's Response: lol you are psychic. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Her uncle is dead. Why keep him alive?  He didnt want anyone hurt. So



Author's Response: I guess, in the end, he realized what a creep he'd been.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Come on we just found Izzy and James is still out there. Thankfully Jake came back.



Author's Response: yep. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 May 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Huh. got me on that one.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Frog's legs are good they taste like chicken. Squirrel I have not tasted  (that I know of) although I have seen dressed out.  For me a squirrel is just a cute long bushy tailed RAT.  :-)

 

 



Author's Response: eww. I've had rabbit and escargot...but i've never even had deer meat and i live in the south. lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

women in those days were tough. Perhaps tougher than today. They had so much manual labor to do that helped to work off their nerves. They are traveling which gives Izzy nothing to do with her time but think.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Once they start traveling she will get better. Change of scenery. Then give her something to do when they settle down in Texas.  Time, space and being busy helps the mind.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

SHE IS PREGNANT.. heat will make her faint.  LOL

 

YOU KNOW!



Author's Response: yes I do. :) THanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Sweet times!



Author's Response: Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Epilogue 1

good story. thank you



Author's Response: very glad you liked it. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue 2

great story..



Author's Response: Thanks very much! glad you liked it.

Summary:

Edward and Bella overcome death, destruction, drugs, cheating, and everything in between. But can they withstand the possibility of divorce? AH OOC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30149 Read Count: 14870
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Truth Revealed

What Alice did may NOT be what Bella has done. She may not have cheated in the sexual kind of way. She may have felt an attraction and then got scared, thus the separation.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Car Ride

Yet we don't know exactly what she Has done. We know she wanted to seperate.  Perhaps out of fear of what she might do.  We shall see.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Growth

Okay.  progress has been made. A few chapters back you through us all for a loop when you relived the first chapter.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: No Regret

well after 12 years of marriage you need to talk. I have been married 3 times that and let me tell you there is always valleys. You have to work at marriage. She did not cheat while they were together and that is good. She however did find someone else. That is sad in so many ways.  That says lack of committment. Commit to the marriage and Make it work. At least have the balls to stand and fight.



Author's Response:

I couldn't agree more. :) And thats all I can really say without giving anything away for the future. <3  Thanks for all of the reviews.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Intoxication

No cheating says something about you personally! I taught my children you have to be honest in a marriage if you can not stay in your marriage and keep your vows then divorce. DONT cheat. It demeans you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews.  I will have another chapter up shortly and I hope you read it, especially after reading what you had to say. :)

 

-Jezz

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Glimmer of Hope

I think this is a start.  He is nothing. Well perhaps she never went further than perhaps talking and eating out. Let us hope that she did not damage her marriage by cheating.

 

I am not disappointed. Sometimes you have to shake things up to get a change. Let us hope that this will eventually heal their marriage.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Moment of Truth

hmm

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Is It Worth It

I don't think she is bad. I think like all people in relationships we get comfortable. Sometimes you forget to nurture your relationship like a child. Then it grows right along with you both. If you don't do this then you start loosing parts of each other. you replace that relationship part with something else, like work, sports, other people, reading etc.   This is the danger zone.



Author's Response:

Yes exactly and then the little things start to eat away at you when things go outside of that comfort zone and make little problems seem astronomical, and god forbid you have any underlying issues you need to deal with as well.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: A Flash of Anger

that was a short story. Fine. I don't blame him. Not being honest with your spouse is the beginning of the whole problem.  Perhaps she does not love Edward enough after all. You can not carry on with two men and not cheat someone. Obviously.

 

This is one part of Twilight I hated. The hole Jacob thing. I understood her feelings after he helped her but hey.. shit or get off the pot. Make a decision.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: I Don't Know

The dragging it out. She is obviously guilty. So I mean she cheated on him in some manner. She lied to him. I don't think I would trust her.  Let her go back to Jacob Black. Be done with hurt. DRAMA>

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Hear Me Out

I thought he filed divorce papers and she was gone. You are loosing me here going back and forth. He is calling girls and getting dates. So what is this chapter one you lost from way back there?

Summary:

Two Girls, One Heart

A story about a girl... who loves a girl... who loves a boy. 

**AU, AH, OOC, FS 

***Bella, Edward, Angela

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Alice, Edward/Angela
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37508 Read Count: 7394
[Report This] Published: 13 May 2012 Updated: 29 Mar 2013
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Swallowing Truth

no self worth. Yuk. Edward is awfull