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Bio:
I am a retired 72 year old grandmother from Texas. I was born and raised in Texas. My husband and I own a ranch in North central Texas and raise cattle. I have two children and 4 grandchildren. I love reading my favorite stories are about the mafia and mysteries.
For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.
The Banner was made by Christag Banners...She is phenominal...Thank you, Christag.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35248
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: And The Truth Will Be Known…
Oh hell Edward.. Come out and bob her on the head with something. Trick her say you will have sex but you need a shower and you will make her so happy. Then do something to her not a good something either.
Author's Response:
Lots of people felt the same way as you did after this chapter. He would never have sex with renee and honestly renee wouldn't either. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Now, What Do We Do?
Evil woman.. No mother for Bella.. I find it hard to say MOMMY TANYA. LOL
Author's Response:
I know we loved making Tanya a good person so often she is the bad guy, Loved it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Kidnap Aftermath
Renee.. well well. She is off her rocker. When she is caught and jailed, Bella will be better and so will Edward.. I would never give that woman the time of day again. Mother or not.
Author's Response:
Renee is a looney toon for sure! thanks for reading and reviewing, kasi (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Parking Lot Problems
Oh well.. bad you. Then again thanks for being ahead.. I hate the long waiting and rereading.. On this story it is my fault.
Author's Response:
I know I know believe me I know! There are only 3 chapters to post after tomorrow. YAY! the end is near. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: One Step Closer
I moved and somewhere in all that I lost this story. I am glad I am rereading it. Now perhaps I get a chance to figure out the stalker.
Author's Response:
Well we are so glad that you found it again too! YAY! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Well I wont leave a nasty review. It is your story. It is more added drama and angst. Your choice. So all I can say to that is I guess the story is mostly over, or is it over? I am not sure.
It was a good story.. Thanks,
Author's Response:
Mary~ the story has 3 more chapters, it will have a happy ending. No one can go through what they both have and not have baggage, I promise it will have a HEA please just hang in there and bear with us. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Suspicions
Victoria or Angela.. NOT Emily. Emily is nuts but wrong nut.
Author's Response:
I love reading all these reviews and playing catch up. Thanks for reading and reviewing. New chapter posts tomorrow! :)
Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Stalkers Revenge
I have proof he is not gay.!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed so hard.
Author's Response:
I know I loved the Esme texting carlisle. SO FUNNY. Thanks for all these reviews. Kasi~ (&Jess)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Bella's Night Out
Perhaps Bella should kick Renee out. I mean she is grown get her own life not mooch off her daughter. Her daughter has a job and she does not.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah I know you were not alone in thinking this. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
hmm OKay Edward has a female stalker. Could her name be Tanya or Lauren or Jessica? Well we shall see.
Author's Response:
Hello Mary~
Thank you for reading and reviewing our story. Jess and I are both super excited to see it is picking up some new readers. We post every week on Wed. We have several chapters written and ready to go. So we are glad you are on board with us, and we hope to hear more from you as we continue this journey into CRAZY!
Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: A Realization
Angela
Author's Response:
Hey mary, once you have read up to the 8th chapter when it posts, you will know for certain if it is Angela or not. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Love the guesses...
:)
Kasi (aka TeamAllTwilight) and (Jess aka: Jess2002)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: A Meeting with Billy
okay gt to writing.. good story. Has some edge to it.
Author's Response:
Mary~ Thank you yet again for another wonderful review today. Thanks for taking on our story, Jess and I both hope that you continue to enjoy it and read. The crazy has just begun, so settle in for a wil ride, see ya next Wed.
Kasi~ (&Jess)
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: This Changes Everything
Alice needs to get a hobby. I am busy and it is personal. I mean without saying We are having sex right now.. BY by................duh
Author's Response:
We love the way we have Alice, she is Edwards twin in this story so they are like polar oppisites he is more laid back and she is more on the go. We really love that Esme is the same way all happy cheery and bouncy, and you will see a bit more of Esme's funniness. Maybe they were just kissing, and not having sex. Next chapter we will hear from Bella right away. See ya next Wed.
Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20: Learning to Heal
ok she left him. flip from Twilight. I get that. Did you have to do that? I understand that renee tried to kill everyone to get him. Her own daughter would have been next.
Author's Response:
don't give up on us yet Mary, I promise that it will have a happy ever after. It was needed, because as the chapter explained had they went on as if they were both okay to be together it woudl have ended badly later. Sometimes you have to regroup and get your own head together in order to get fruther in things. Jess and I are both HEA gals and the way we have this wrapping up will please almost everyone, and I would say everyone, but we have a hater out there, and they are still leaving annonymous reviews slamming us. But clearly they are still reading..LOL Anyway I know it is heartbreaking, but in the end it will teach them both how to overcome many of lifes little bumps. We wanted this to be realistic, and I don;t know anyone who coudl withstand some of the things they did and not have baggage. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and there are 2 more chapters left to post and I promise it all gets better from here. Kasi (&Jess)
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21: The Other Side of the Door
Angst. Drama. BS
I get she feels responsible, but her mother needed to be in a mental hospital. Bella just failed to see that even though her actions were off the wall.
Author's Response:
The epilogue posts next Wednesday and thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Kasi (&Jess)
Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.
Banner by Rochelle_0089.
-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
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-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
Date: 11 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: On the Edge
This is going to end badly for everyone. Alice, Jasper, Edward and Bella. One big cluster.. ------k.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
This .... definitely has the potential to end badly for everyone. I don't wanna say too much, cause I don't wanna give away anything, but I will say this - hold out hope. There might be room for a few rays of HEA sunshine to shine down on some of the characters. ;)
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Beginning
Perhaps she is changing him. I can't seems to enjoy this when I know this dirty secret. Jasper and Edward should both suffer for this. They are both out to hurt Bella. Once this comes to light I hope they are both hurt by the out come. I know Bella will be. Why do we always have to hurt Bella to advance a story?
I am for hurting Edward. Send him back to Jessica. What ever in the hell happened there 8 years is too long to keep talking about it. Get the hell over it and go on. I just don't get people that hurt the rest of humanity over one person. One person!
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Home for the Holidays
well the bet is off. Okay I wonder how that can turn around and still bite him in the rear? Jessica Biers is out there and he still loves her? See right there if that is true then Edward does not need Bella he needs to work through the fact Jessica is gone.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Flying Solo
Okay well she is being smart. Make him work for it and in the end he will be happy he got there.
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Playing With Fire
Oh boo hoo Jessica must have been in love with the player and it didn't work out. So he is going to hurt anyone else for that. I hate that little tale. I have heard it too often. We should always be cautious but to treat everyone as they are underneath us because of one other person...........it is dumb.
Bella is being smart, wait till she finds out she is just a play for a house. He will hurt her and move right on.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long to get a reply out!
I got a kick out of this review! Edward .... well, he doesn't exactly think about others, at least not right now, so you're right, his behavior and method of thinking are dumb. Perhaps he'll be redeemable by the time the story concludes though. :)
I'll be curious to hear what you think if you read the outtakes! Those will show more about Edward and Jessica and what led up to the present.
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
Well hell, so much for professional behaviour. Back to throwing punches.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry my response took so dang long!
LOL, professional behavior seems to have flown right out the window! But there won't always be punches, I assure you. There might even be a wee bit of fluff tossed in here eventually. ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long to respond!
I'm glad the story amused you! I had hoped people would get a fair dosage of angst, humor, and a bit of romance in there too, so to see people laugh, makes me smile!
I hope you've enjoyed it as it's continued!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
Well nice start, I hope you update often.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed response to the review! School, work, RL, and my writing has kept me so busy I haven't had a breather to get to these! :)
I'm glad you liked the way the story started! I hope you've continued reading and that you like what's transpiring!
I will be trying to update every 2-3 weeks for now, and hopefully once we hit the New Year I can bump that up to every week because my classload will diminish greatly!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?
I say she should stay clear of him. Work and that is it. He is not Jasper.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Apologies for my delayed response.
You're definitely right, Edward isn't Jasper. Not even close. But, Edward does have some good bones in his body, and they might start cropping up here and there as we go.
Give him a chance, he might change your mind. ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Slipping
Wonderful and men say women gossip. Emmett will not let him take advantage of Bella. Why do I think this? Heck I don't know. I just do.
Edward in the end will get hurt on this one. He and Jasper diserve to be hurt.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
LOL .... these boys are good at the gossip!
I always enjoy hearing what people think about E & J in this story, because they really haven't been on their best behavior ... I guess I'll just keep everyone on their toes to see what happens to those two men! ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Surprise!
I want to be excited, but the doom is off out there getting closer.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Countdown
Well he have ignition Houston. I hope they don't burn up.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Celebrations and Revelations
hmm
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Minneapolis
I just don't trust him. He has not gotten over Jess. So having said that it means he still loves her in some way. Bella needs to know that and move her heart over to a safer place.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: We Need to Talk
SO he is still texting Jessica. still don't trust him.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Seattle
Well good that is out. Now, the original bet with Jasper I know that was called off. Emmett knows about that right? When is he going to spill that to Rose?
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: New Year, New Beginnings
thank you,
"
It was perfect, almost too perfect, to believe that their young, intense love would continue on forever, as most young lovers do. What happened between Edward and Bella that broke their genuine and beautiful relationship?
Prequel to "Anhelo Amarte".
Bella's POV.
Lemons and some angst because breaking up is hard to do.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Charlie (non sexual)
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72871 Read Count: 6237
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Influencia
THis is what happens when you grow up. Young people split and go with others. It happens. Edward will move on from Bella as soon as he leaves or within the first 6 months.
Don't you think Bella was too fast in accepting Edward back in her life? After all he made the decision to leave her. He has to now face the consequences of that decision.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73782 Read Count: 19856
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Observations
Well that made me feel better. Even if she ever takes him back, he needs time to consider she is not taking his shit anymore. He messed and he is history.
Author's Response:
Yes he messed up really badly and he can't just leave and come back and expect things to be the same as before.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Pain
Alice is right. If she really did not care she would not have gone. He needs to sit and hurt for a while, thinking he is unloved and there is no hope.
Author's Response:
He really did hurt her deeply. It's time he understood what he did to her. Thank you very much for reviewing.
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Consequences
she is not sick mentally. She just tunes out the crap she does not want to hear anymore.
Author's Response:
You are right.:) He's going to have to work hard to understand her. Well he's in for a few surprises in the next chapter. I'm waiting to hear what you think of it. I'll load it in a short while. Thank you very much for reviewing.
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The confrontation
here is the deal. Of course she is mad at him. He deserves it. She is either going to forgive him or she isn't that is all there is to it. He can not change what he did. He is still 17 in his actions sometimes he acts like a thoughtless kid.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. He sure is acting like a 17 year old now:)
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Surprise
it is time to either forgive him or be done with it. He can not undo the past. Only try and do better now.
Author's Response:
Yes they have to think of the future now. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
THis was SO DAMN funny. Thank you.
Author's Response:
It's so good to hear from you again!!! Yeah I had a great time writing it too!! Thank you so much for reviewing!!
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The hard truth
So funny, actually!
Bella and Edward have to move forward or forget it. Makes no sense to keep this bs up.
Author's Response:
Glad you found it funny:) thanks for the review.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Trouble with unmentionables
TO me this is dragging. Same deal. She is not ready, he is. She can't forget he is sorry. jake is her SUN. Let me say this right now about Jake. Yes he is a great friend, BUT if his imprint walked into HIS life he would abandoned Bella in almost every way. yes he would still be her friend, but all this helping would END. She is not his imprint.
I understand she is hurt and warry of Edward. Like I said if you forgive him then you have to move forward.
Author's Response:
Don't worry something interesting happens in the next chapter:) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Interrogation
LMAO
Author's Response:
Me too!:) Had loads of fun writing that one:) Hope you like the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing:)
Author's Response:
Me too!:) Had loads of fun writing that one:) Hope you like the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing:)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
Now I am up to Poor Edward.
Author's Response:
I know!! Thank you so much for reviewing!!:)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Making out
walls are a crumbling.
Author's Response:
Yes they are:) Thank you for your lovely review:) Hope to hear from you again:)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The sequel
glad i finally caught up.
Author's Response:
Hi!! So glad you finished the first story:) Thank you very much for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the next Romand, love and desire.
Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27183
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Cleaning House
De Pauling. Means Paul is the guy that left.. Not Edward.. sneaky snake.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Clawing
I can not form oppinions so quick. I need more information
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words
Oh no, she is going to kill them.. ... grrr.
Bella was a teacher at San Bernardino High. What started as a class project slowly becomes something more. Edward is fighting in Afghanistan when he receives a letter that will change his life. What happens when love blooms through letters?
This story has over 800 reviews on FanFiction.net!
thanks to LissyLock for the beautiful banner
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39298 Read Count: 47010
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Em could take a picture of her with his phone and send it. LOL
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
ahh tears again.. you gotta stop making me cry.
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
her mother should not have interfeared.
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
:-) so sweet and to think of all the families that endur this.
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
these things happen even with out earth quakes. It was just not meant to be. Cry now, you have had me going a lot in this story.
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
That woman in another state, deserves to cry. Her only daughter needed her.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Okay now Renee calls need to unanswered from here on out. Just delete! Tell Charlie about Jacob and Renee.
Take care of our boy
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
oh please not Edward.. Send Renee instead there is a life that could be forfeit.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
I am glad you took a chance and wrote this story. I have cried alot but it has been so good to read.
In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16
They used to call them French letters..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing, MaryMary!
French letters -- LOL :o)
xox
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
LOL
Well Bella welcome to the real world. In those times all the chores were MANUAL.Sweep, mop, boil water to wash clothes and dishes. Yep loads of fun.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Hey down here in Texas we still say boondocks. We as in the older population.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Spoiled isn't even the word for it. She has no idea how to exist without the trappings.
Author's Response:
Amen to that! Thank you for reviewing :o)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Yep welcome to the hot summers of the midwest. Texas girl here. We can get over 100 easy sometimes 30 days in a row.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17
Vinegar on the windows. Lie soap for washing clothes. Boil water on the stove but most washing takes place in sink. Some people boiled the water in the yard on a fire then after washing. They hung the clothes on the line.
Author's Response:
Bella could have used your cleaning know how, MaryMary!!!
Thank you for reviewing :o)
Date: 11 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18
oh no.. more bad people.
Author's Response: Oh, wait until you meet Phil's other henchmen.....yikes.
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19
oh no... james
Author's Response:
oh yes....and Winston isn't far behind.
Yikes!!
Jasper missed his chance in college, but when Bella and Edward's marriage falls apart 15 years later and he helps pick up the pieces, will Jasper finally get the chance at happiness he always longed for? J&B Eventually. Fair warning, this is major heartfail in the beginning, but will end up with a typical ACW ending.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42200 Read Count: 16464
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I can see this in him really. Always that self absorbed mind. I know better than you business. Well this stuff happens to women. So Help her rise above him. Go to a spa, take some time with yourself. Sue Edward for all his money, when He has his little piece and is broke, what will he do?
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
You know in the end. Cooper will side with his Mama. Boys always, always take care of mama. Girls sometimes don't but then again, if he is having too much fun with his plaything and they are old enough *(and they arent) to figure this out he burns a bridge with his daughter as well.
I say keep them busy quit worrying about Edward. Get your lawyer and all your documentation on his cheating and.........take his ass for all he is worth. Own that company if you have to when it is over those CHILDREN deserve that.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
You know, she is right and wrong. Do not take him back until he sees a councelor. He needs to make appointments and then go t them for a while.
If she could only here what he said about her. Sorry but children need both parents but not like this. This in the end does more harm than good.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Personally I think the job is a great thing for Bella. She should car pool with Jasper. Tell Edward not to judge her by his standards. He is the cheater not her.
Get ready put that money away, you will be earning because HE will cheat again.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
You know sometimes people like Bella have to have the shit kicked out of them before they stand up and fight back. She has to for her kids.
Just kick his ass out and file. You have got all the evidence of his cheating. He will judge her unfairly because of his guilt. If I remember he was tired of her.
Ass
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Yep perfect way to handle this. Bella should have never gone back after she found out about the cheating. Now she gave him his chance. He is finished in all ways that can be. Pictures of the house diseaster! Pictures tell lots more than twisted words. She needs proof of the cheating.
Now moving forward. Restraining order and no contact. Their children are now hurt.
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Well so Edward is hopeless. I want to say who cares, honestly everyone does. The future women he hurts, his children, his parents and siblings. Bella will be relieved to be away from him even though she still loves him.
sad
Date: 12 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
good chapter. Glad the divorce is over.
The Cullen crime family has been a problem for the law officers of Chicago for over fifty years. After dozens of failed attempts to infiltrate the family, the FBI decides it's time to send in more undercover agents, Edwards and Whitlock. However, the Feds do not realize that Edwards has an agenda all of her own, which doesn't necessarily include putting a stop to the family's business.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89721 Read Count: 44260
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Bella might deck her. Rose and Emmett may bed her..What will Edward do?
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Well you are progressing. Hard to review. I am not sure where we are here. Jessica was captured by Aro. The Fed's are on to Alice and Edward being siblings. Em & Rose like 3 some's with other women.
Yep that is it.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Okay.. now please update sooner..
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
With Edward's mother dead, Alice could be a half sister. Maybe.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
well I am with Bella on this. I would be livid. I would not want my kid in that mess. If he got in it I would want him out.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hard subject especially in the Mafia life. Hard to be a teen trying to figure out their sexuality. Edward surprised me, he did well.
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Well everything is fine but the teenage 3 some bothers me. On many levels. His parents get he is bisexual. They are relieved he is not gay. This is tough territory for me. You could forbid this and in a way they have but then they start sneaking around. I think I would really get them some information on sexually transmitted diseases and mental health issues surrounding this. They are too young for all this.
I know story.
I am just glad Bella and Edward are solid. His love for her and those children over ride my disgust in the illegal activities.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Never say never!
Good chapter.
A story about falling out of contact and how fate always has plans for us even if we believe it doesn't. How we choose when the slate can be wiped clean and who we really want to be.
Canon Pairings.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17019 Read Count: 825
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
ugh.
I know Tanya is Edwards.. fiance! UGH
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
not predictable so far. Thank you.
Author's Response:
You are very welcome! Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well, okay! I am a wait and see girl.
Author's Response:
Ahh sweet anticipation... it makes everything better lol. Thanks for your reviews and I hope you keep reading!
One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167523
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: 8 Do You See
different type story.. good
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: 17 Course Correction
Good chapter. I still think Edward and Lee would be better together. He has history with her and he loves her on some level. He is attracted to Bella but he pushes her away constantly. Maybe someone on the Ship they are going on will be attracted to Bella and act on it. Bella seeing a shark kill her father and then being on this ship. Balls..
*1955* Edward, a typical American youth of the fabulous fifties being ruled by his hormones, is the new kid in town. Romance/comedy/slight drama - a coming of age story with eventual E/B. AH. OOC. Rated M. EPOV
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79827 Read Count: 14895
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Only You
Okay sweetie, I have been on the ride with you. I trusted you. I hated he did those things but he is a guy with a broken heart. Gotta be matcho right?
I remember the 50's I was young but hey. we had a slower life. I think actually more fun!
"The worst lies are the lies we tell ourselves. We live in denial of what we do, even what we think. We do this because we're afraid."
The lie he told to protect her has had nine years to destroy her, and it's time to pick up the pieces.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19550 Read Count: 23621
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Okay I have read along. I get it he dumped her. He is still in love with her. Like he knows anything about love. She is the town whore. She has the label. She feels nothing anymore. WHY? Because the people she loved left. So she won't let anyone in. This is her coping. Seems like she has no hope.
I am still here wondering where this is going?