Reviews by MaryMary
Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A History of Immortals

edward... hmm he needed to move on. He did when he left her PERIOD. I dont blame her for moving on.  I dont trust him any more. Playing two sided. I will always wait for you.. BS

 

The clans are both corrupt. I would do my best to let the war begin and then let them kill each other off while I watched. Who ever wins I would kill.  (vampire wise)

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Part 2

Well Edward lost because of his deeds, as he should.  Edward can not always win because he is beautiful. That is shallow.

 

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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You're in for one hell of a ride!  Bella and Jasper's worlds collide as they find solace and comfort in one another as friends.  However, as Bella's dreams begin to unfold and she begins gaining certain abilities...it seems that maybe everything that's happened to lead them here, was all part of an intricate plan.  Can road trips, fun times in Vegas, and a crazy Peter help them find their Heaven?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215333 Read Count: 67694
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Oct 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am reading along and not reviewing. I am sorry for that. Great story. Not all the hate. I like that.

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Can you blame her she has lost him again. She tried to prevent it.  I can only imagine her grief.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

this is so good.

 

GOOD JOB.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

ahh. come on!..

Insecurities by JamesRamsey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Suddenly I realized the family had it wrong. I had it wrong. Jasper was not attacking me and Edward was not protecting me. AU OOC Rated NC-17 to be safe

 

My first story - This story was originally posted on FanFiction.net and is being reposted here due to the amount of fic's being deleted there.  5167 reviews and counting. Winner of two 'Everything's Bigger in Texas Award


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200830 Read Count: 184834
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 May 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sorry I am reading and not reviewing. This is a great story. I would like to see Edward reap what he has sowed with Bella. She is a beautiful vamp. and she is strong.

She has got to toughen up mentally and then she can kick his..booty.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Well Edward has grown up. Who would have thunk it would take him a 100 years to do that.

LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

great story. thanks,

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh wow did not see this wreck coming. This is a big hurtle. Will she be able to have children?  They wanted them so bad.

 

I say move out of LA. Screw that scene. Those actors that put up with this daily, I feel sorry for. They do a job and the public will not let it end. I would not live there. I would move to Tin BUCK Two if it were me. Have a normal life, fly out do a job then go home.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

really well written story. Just enough suspense. Good Love story.

 

SO WRITE!

 

Mary

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Cliff hanger. Just cause they know they are married, no one dies. So!!

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Come on now, heal our Bella.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Yes she has had a big loss. It happens she is alive. Now she has to move forward. He has had a loss too. Her choice to go to that damn party. Life is all about choices then you have to suffer the consequences. 

 

Bella is smart, come on get her out of this damn dismal spot.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Get her to have sex and start therapy and move. She has to be healing, then end it.

 

Loved the story.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I am going to hate this to end. I do hope you will get Bella up and in better health before you end this.

 

Good story.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

thanks for writing a real story about people that have big problems and then work through them.

 

Everything is life is not always EASY.

 

Knights of Honor by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Knights of Honor

 

 Lord Edward is an Honorable Knight on a secret mission, Bella is offered to him as a gift from the Evil Duke Aro.

 “Age of Edward” contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14787 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Epilogue

Good story.

 

Aro should have heard the old saying "what goes around, comes around". In this case cold damp cell and bread and water.

 

thank you,



Author's Response:

Thanks, MaryMary...he really should have thought of that!!!

I'm guessing he won't survive long...

Kathie

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

So good! Sweet & so hot. sigh.. I need a shower LOL

 



Author's Response:

Haha so glad you liked it!  I'll have more for you very soon that will hopefully require another shower!  haha Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out

You do so good. I LOOOVE this story. I guess it is because no matter how important he is, he is decent and honest. Honest to Bella!

Our Bella here is the right balance, smart and sweet.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  He is definitely decent and honest and just too much in love with his girl to hide it!  So glad you like both him and Bella.  I really love writing them :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

Sweet. "home"

 

 



Author's Response:

:) Home indeed!!!  Love that!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive

Ahh Tanya in the bathroom.  Poor old Tanya no body loves her everybody screws her, oops perhaps not everbody!. LOL LOL

 



Author's Response:

Heheh Esme just had to be sure she wasn't going to interfere any further :)  Gotta love Mama Bear!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

Okay this is funny as usuall. Love this story. Love & humor!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you love it and it's still making you laugh :)   That's my goal!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

That would be hard. She does her job and he had a bad day. That was hard on both of them.

MAMA is okay all else can be repaired.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yep, it was a tough day for both of them.  Everything is just fine now though :)  Esme being healthy certainly puts things in perspective!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

I want to say this is a sweet story. Good to know some one in sports and that level can be so commited to a female. Usually they are committed to being laid and not much else.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I think there are several that are very good husbands, it's just the bad ones we hear about!  It's nice to know some don't give in to temptation though!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

Sweet



Author's Response:

I try ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

oh man.



Author's Response:

No worries ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68965
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

You left us on the cliff.. bad girl. Yes I will read the sequel.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Bella

Well Edward has arrived finally.  so much for vampire speed. LMAO

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Alice

Bella just cant win. Better change her or leave. This sucks.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Bella

I am glad she is not pregnant, that is just so weird.  Well, anyway think about it if they are permanently hardened then how does he get it up?  It should be one way or the other always. Either permanently up or permanently down,  just a thought. I think Edward straightlaced is so funny with the blow job. Another story I have read with his point of view and getting one is so darn funny. 

 

 

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

well so much for sweet virginal Bella.  Perhaps still sweet.

 

HMM

is Tommy Lee in the house ?? LOL

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Bella is not the sweet girl in this one. She stings of Lauren... grrr.

 

Summary:

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Sequel to Bella’s Revenge.  Bella has been abducted by Edward’s brother.  Edward wages war on anyone who stands in his way of finding his one true love.  Brother against brother.  Can he save her before she’s killed?  Before she’s turned?  Or before she falls in love?  How can Edward ever forgive his brother?  The one he trusts.  The one known as…Jasper.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81658 Read Count: 24568
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Nov 2010
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

THe story before this, I just got through reading. I read this story when it first came out and I missed the first one.. Well duh on me. So Now I am about to finish. I love the sexually liberated Edward. Pretty funny all in all.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary!  Thanks for reading and reviewing Bella's Revenge and My Heart's Desire.  I hope you enjoyed both of them. 

Happy New Year!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76134
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well it is either Jasper or Jenks.

 LOL

 

 

Prenuptual Posturing by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

There are 3 days remaining until the wedding, and houseguests are driving Edward and Bella mad. Fourth book in the Unforeseen Events Series.  Rated NC-17 for mature themes and lemons.  All our favourite canon characters, taken in a slightly AU direction.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62357 Read Count: 12033
[Report This] Published: 05 Oct 2019 Updated: 10 Nov 2009
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Calm Before the Storm

I am reading through these.. This is really funny



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mary. I'm so glad you're having fun reading this. :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Alaskan Houseguests

that whole chapter was funny..



Author's Response:

Thank you. xo

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56372
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 11: The Formal Dinner

Perfect. she should be delighted she wasn't shot.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Mole Extermination

I admit I just slipped most of this! No torture descriptions for me!



Author's Response:

sorry you couldnt read most of this chapter, but i am glad i put the warning up and you still took the time to read and write a review, so thank you!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Bringing down the Moles

Okay I do like most of your story not the BDSM part! I skip through that



Author's Response:

Sorry you didn't like that part, but its ok its not going to be a main thing in this story and i dont plan on having it again. Thank you for you review all the same!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 32: Business dinner’s and Unexpected results

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Working out the kinks

Ugh... No just no no no



Author's Response:

what do you mean?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Gift Revealed

THis is a good story.. flows nicely



Author's Response:

thank you very much.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 11: The Formal Dinner

Yep about time that happened. Pick a fight with someone that is called the Assain. Dumb



Author's Response:

i know right! but this is why she is so good, people just underestimate her

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Calm Before The Storm

I am still happy over a broken nose on the Rose. LOL with many thorns that Rose has. 



Author's Response:

thank you for you review. Bella really did get Rose good didnt she!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183993
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 1

ugh

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi

Oh my. I bet all those women would like a turn at beating them in their privates.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request

Biting Aro's PP wont be a good thing. I am suprised they haven't killed her already. I think I would seriously consider jumping to my death.. CRAPOLA



Author's Response:

I'm sure right now Aro wants to kill Isabella very badly. I really hope Edward will save the day...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell

they *cullens* need to grab the women and make a run for it or ... just poison Aro & his hentchmen.

 

Obviously no one will care if Aro and his brothers are dead.

 

YUCK



Author's Response: I'm pretty sure that's where we're headed... slowly but surely, lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: The last straw

UGH>>>

 

I still say they need to stage a mutiny. Kill three people then this will stop.



Author's Response:

They certainly do need to plot something. Seems Edward's got a plan with regard to that.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rescue

wonderful finally.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: There's something about Rosalie

Well I have to read back to get her the answer... Been a while.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Winds of change

alrighty now you have this going, please dont be a figment of my old memory.

 

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: The chips are down

I think they need to say adios~!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Three short stories

about time.



Author's Response:

Ha ha, a little incentive would help, lol. I'm getting fewer and fewer reviews every chapter I post. Not very good for the motivation... sorry. It's not me, it's human nature...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Interlude in the good doctor's apartment

ut oh.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2

Yep Tanya does not want to loose Edward.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Return to the harem

what a horrible place.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Freedom

I am still here. Angry on this chapter. I think we might get them away and Newton shows up.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

a long journey.  thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Being a Knight of the Round Table is a great honor.  But in this story, things are not always what they seem.  Join your favorite Twilight characters as they discover lies, truths, deception, betrayals and love all in the court of Camelot.  Canon and non-canon couples.  Humans and witches, wizards, dragons, immortals, etc.  Various POVs.    

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(Banner above by the amazing Mehek18 for thetwilightawards.com)

 

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stories/8916/images/The_Round_Table_Story_7.jpg esme    stories/8916/images/bannersketch[1].png

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Categories: King Arthur/Merlin, Twilight, Crossover, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC, King Arthur/Guinevere, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance, Love and Faith, Supernatural
Series: Finished, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155108 Read Count: 21896
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Well Mordred died and so did Jasper. Treason is costly.

 

 



Author's Response:

That it is!  I apologize for the delay in sending my preview.  I hope I will be forgiven after reading it and chapter 51 (up Wednesday):

 

“I was only made aware of the prophecy after my nephew was born.  He was around five at the time and still so innocent.  I saw what he was capable of once he reached adulthood and feared for my own children.  I promised my husband that I would do whatever it took to protect them.  And so began my lie.”

My eyes flew to Edward and I took a deep breath.  “My husband was Carlisle Cullen.”

As I suspected, Edward’s eyes narrowed.  “You lie.  He was married to Esme Cullen, my mother.”

I ran a hand over my face, casting my mask that I knew so well.  My eyes changed to blue and my hair instantly turned from blond to caramel brown.  I heard a sharp intake of breath from everyone.  “Hello, son.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Okay chickadee we are all out here on this cliff.  Please write like the dickens and get us home!

Oh & I still say that Jasper is a not too nice.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Well okay, I will buy Mordred has a motive for his actions. I doubt he is being honest.  I am still heartbroken for Isabella.  Edward we still miss you.

 

I still think that perhaps he is helping the king sort out what is going on in Camelot.

 



Author's Response:

That's not a bad assumption.  He could be lying in wait until the moment is right.

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I leaned against the wall of the building I was standing beside of and thought back to the Christmas party.  I hadn’t planned on kissing her, but the moment was right.  And God, did it feel so good!  It was like coming home.  Her lips were soft and plump and fit mine perfectly.  And the cute noises she made turned me to putty.  She could have asked me to do anything in that moment and I would have said yes. 

I chuckled to myself.  It was hard to believe that a woman like Alice could be interested in me.  Me, the one who killed his best friend in a jealous rage.  I will never forgive myself for that, but I am learning to make amends with it.  Alice taught me that.  She said that we will pay for our sins when we die and although we should be aware of them now, we can’t change what happens.  All we can do is accept it and move on.

She is so wise.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

:0( some of us still miss Edward. Isabella does too. I pray she is not pregnant.



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Bella is not pregnant in this story.  Don't worry, she's fine.  Here is your preview:

 

I looked down at the floor, suddenly embarrassed.  “What if I disappoint you?”

He sighed and extended his hand, placing it under my chin and lifting it so I was looking at him.  “I told you, you will not disappoint me.  I don’t care that you are inexperienced.  In fact, I find it a great honor that you would consider giving your virginity to me, to a man who doesn’t deserve it.”

“Don’t talk like that.”

His hand cupped the left side of my face.  “I’m serious, Rose.  I have done some horrible things but I like to think you are my reward.”  He was quiet for a moment.  “I don’t want to talk about that tonight.  I just want to know if you will do me the honor of making love to you.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Edward is dead... Well that is pretty final okay. Not Edward is injured. EDWARD IS DEAD. you wrote it so why hide???????

 

GRRRRRRRRRRRRR



Author's Response:

Lol.  All will be revealed in time.  Here is your preview:

 

I sighed and felt Riley smooth my hair.  Okay, so maybe I was a hypocrite.  The final night that Edward was alive, we made love.  And it was the best night of my life.  He was so sweet and gentle, so caring.  I felt like we really were sharing something sacred together, just the two of us.  It strengthened our bond and solidified that we were soulmates.  I believed that nothing on Earth would separate us.

I was wrong.

But still, nothing will ever top being with Edward that night.  Even after the mourning is done, even after I’ve moved on and married someone else, I will always remember.  Edward was my first love.

My ONLY love.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

You killed off E.. now don't sit there all smug and say I know what will happen.  That is no HEA.. for them..

Jasper is not good. I told you that way back there, like you didn't already know.

I am for Bella having her HEA.. she gets PG and no BABY DADDY... that is NOT GOOD.

SCREW JACOB. he was jealous.

 



Author's Response:

Ah, but the story isn't over yet.  There still could be a HEA, have faith.  :)

I seem to not be too popular right now, but I assure you everything will work out.  Thanks for reading and here is your preview:

 

 

Jasper stroked my hair.  “I love this,” he breathed.  “I love being with you.  I love being like this.  I wish it didn’t have to end.”

“Who says it has to?”

I felt his hands on my torso and he pulled me away gently.  He looked into my eyes.  “Everything ends, Rose.  At some point, so will this.  I have no plans to leave you alone, but sometimes death has other plans.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Jasper is hiding something I think is big. I do think he is off in his demeanor. Edward dear sweet dead Edward..



Author's Response:

Lol.  Yes, dear dead Edward indeed.  ;)

 

Here is your preview:

 

I knew it wasn’t his fault.  Someone had replaced the sword.  My vision was not strong enough to show me who it was, but I saw Jacob set it down and head off for a run.  Then a hand reached down and snatched the sword quickly, replacing it with an identical one.  One that did not retract.  One that was capable of killing someone.

Whoever did it knew that Jacob would take the blame and leave if he wasn’t found guilty of treason.  Whoever did it did it to get two of the best Knights away from the castle.  And that smells like Mordred.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I may have this Edward murder solved. If he has no grave then I think perhaps that death was staged to look real and is not. This was to flush out the people against the king.

I maybe still upset for poor Lady Isabella, but at least some where he might still BE. I keep thinking she is pregnant. You know consumated love, no condoms in those days. SO ..

 

thanks for the quick update.



Author's Response:

Lol.  I guarantee Bella is not pregnant in this.  That does not fit in this story.  Someone else, maybe....

Here is your preview:

 

Proving Jasper is not who he says he is has become his new obsession.

“I’ve seen her wearing it.  It’s beautiful.  The crystal is huge.  Must have cost Jasper a pretty penny.”

He is not happy, that much is true.

I shrugged.  “You gave up on her, what do you care?”

He looked at me.  “I don’t want that beautiful woman to be hurt by him.  I don’t trust him.”  He lowered his voice. 

“I’ve heard mumblings that he works for Mordred.”

I dropped the necklace as my head snapped to him.  “Where did you hear that?”

He shrugged.  “Around.  I can’t prove it, but some of the servants are convinced that when he says he’s going to London, he’s reporting back to his boss.  I think we might have found our mole.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

hmm, surprise later?  Hint in chapter 31?

 

Well perhaps Edward is not dead. Perhaps that was staged to draw out the mole? Perhaps



Author's Response:

Perhaps.  You'll have to wait and see.  As always, more questions than answers right now.  But you will get on in the next chapter.  You'll see it in the preview below:

 

He shook his head and pulled my torso a little closer.  My breasts pushed against his chest.  “Indeed I am not.  You are beautiful, your highness.  I’m sorry that I never paid attention to you before.  I could kick myself for that.”  His eyes were sincere.  I saw admiration, lust and something else I couldn’t identify in there.

I shrugged.  “You had other things on your mind.”  His grip on my waist tightened.

“Not anymore.”

We danced in silence for awhile, staring into each other’s eyes.  It felt right, so right, for the two of us to be here like this.  I didn’t want to hope for anything as I have been hurt so many times in the past, but I couldn’t help it.

Lady Rosalie ran up to us after awhile.  “Mordred has arrived!”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

hmm. Well we shall see.



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary!  Jasper is a bad guy, but he's still human.  If only those human emotions didn't get in the way, right?  Thanks for r & r!  Your preview is below:

 

I sat back from the pool for a moment and closed my eyes, allowing the last five months to assault me.  I tried desperately not to think of my son and what happened to him.  I’ve been focusing on Alice for most of that time, hoping she finally found the love she deserves.    She never knew that Edward was her brother, and unless things change, she never will know.  I plan to keep that secret until the end of my days.

Unless of course, Mordred foils the plan.

I sighed.  My nephew was going to be the death of me…and I’m an immortal.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Esme is immortal. HMM Bella has a special friend to visit??

 

 



Author's Response:

More like a special friend visits her. Thanks for reading! Here is the preview:

 

“Yes,” he said.  His golden eyes bore into mine.  Before I could ask another question, he spoke.  “Where’s Edward?”

That caught me off guard.  I dropped my hand as though it was on fire.  “What?”

“Edward,” he stated.  He looked down at the flower again.  “Where is he?”

The poor boy.  He doesn’t know.

“I’m sorry,” I said, placing my hand over his.  “Edward’s gone.”

He looked up at me.  “Edward’s….Edward’s….” he shook his head.

I gave him a tiny smile.  “Edward’s dead.  He was killed six months ago.”

The boy shook his head again.  My heart ached at his innocence. 

He’s in denial.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Thankfully he is okay. Edward was hidden for a reason. I guess to find out who was trying to do this.

 



Author's Response:

In a way, yes.  You'll find out a bit in the next chapter as Edward explains what happens.  How do you think Isabella will react?

Here is your preview:

 

My mind wandered back to how I got here.  I remember standing in the field, my arms around Isabella, after the duel.  It was amiable and that was how I liked it.  Suddenly I felt something cold and sharp pierce my flesh.  The pain was excruciating, but then it went numb.  I couldn’t breathe and I could feel myself weakening.  I heard Isabella screaming but I couldn’t do anything to help her.  I turned around to see my best friend, Jacob, pull his sword away with wide eyes.  I knew instantly what happened.  The swords had been switched.  And from the look in his eyes, he was as unaware as I.  I saw the ground rising to meet me as I fell in a heap.  Chaos was everywhere.  Women were screaming and crying, men were shouting and there were hands on my back.  I was losing consciousness quickly, but two words registered before blackness came.

“Edward’s dead.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I love this story. I reread it every few years.  Wonderful work. I like Twilight and I do like the characters switched around. Although I am partial to Edward and Bella eventually.



Author's Response:

Oh hi MaryMary.  Thanks for re-reading.  I myself have been re-reading my old fics as well.  I am glad you're still enjoying it.  :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

somehow I did not understand Jacob. Was he trying to split up Isabella and Edward and put Edward with Rose?

 

Jacob pisses me off.  He is never content to leave others to their lives.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

It will be fine. Life without him was awful. She will love him in any state.



Author's Response:

You are correct, MaryMary.  She takes it well, very well.  Thanks, as always, for reading.  Here is your preview:

 

I closed my eyes to clear my head.  Edward had just unloaded a lot of information on me and I needed to process it.  I wasn’t sure if I completely believed him either.

He tilted his head to the side.  “I can see you don’t believe me.  How about a test to prove I’m not lying?”

“Test?” I said, my brow furrowing.

He nodded and released my hands.  He stood up quickly and removed his sword from his belt.  Then he handed the butt of it to me.

“I want you to stab me,” he said.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Let me see Jacob and Edward views huh. Well then who will you kill off?  Alice? Jacob? Edward can not be killed. Perhaps Isabella.  Rosalie? hmm Riley?

 

I just don't know.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Well Alice & Jacob Princess & night.

Rosalie and Riley

King Edward & Queen Isabella

I hope i have this right.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary!  Yes, you are correct on that order.  Thanks for reading, the next chapter should be up Wednesday:

 

Edward has also promised to knight Riley.  He said that his actions during the last attack were risky, but saved the lives of other Knights.  For that, he was to be commended.  Everyone was so impressed by Riley’s swordsmanship that a unanimous decision was made to knight him.  Again, I couldn’t help it.  I threw myself at Riley; hugging him and wishing heartfelt congratulations.  He kissed me passionately then and said that night would be a special night.

I shudder to think what he meant of that.

Don’t get me wrong; I do want to give myself to Riley in every way, just not yet.  We have only been seeing each other for a short time.  After Mordred, I am not ready to give neither my heart nor my body to just anyone.  I also don’t want to cloud my judgment now that I know how amazing lovemaking between two people can be.

Well, two people who are in love.  You aren’t in love with Riley.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, MaryMary!  Do you think Rosalie will have a boy or girl?

The next chappie should be up Monday.  Here is your preview:

 

“NO!” he yelled.  I looked at him in surprise.  His golden eyes had darkened to an amber color.  I could tell he was upset.  “I refuse to have you go through what I went through.”

I raised an eyebrow at him.  “Shouldn’t it be my decision?  You just talked about not getting the choice; shouldn’t I?”

He stared at me.  “You’d want to?”

I nodded.  “Edward, you were on the brink of death; that’s why everything was so bad.  Morgan has already promised me that it can be done easily.  ‘You would be the first one not mortally wounded that we would change,’ she told me.  ‘But we can do it.’”

Edward ran a hand through his hair.  “As your King, I can order you to not.”

I narrowed my eyes.  “And as your girlfriend, I can make life in the bedroom for you very difficult.”

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Pimping yourself out!  Toot your horn!  Good chapter. I hope I don't have to start worrying about them not accepting Isabella as queen.  Sigh,

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi MaryMary!  No, Isabella will be accepted.  Edward won't give them a choice.  :)

Thanks as always for reading.  The next chapter will be up by the weekend.  Here is your preview:

 

“Riley Swan, you are here today for valiant conduct against an enemy when Camelot was under attack.  The Knights of the Round Table have unanimously decided that your efforts have earned you the title.  Are you willing to accept knighthood and exercise it to the best of your abilities?”

“Yes, your highness,” he said and looked up at me.  His brown eyes threw me for a second as Isabella flitted into my head.  But I had to keep focus; I couldn’t mess up on my first day.

“Very well then.”  I lifted the sword from his right shoulder and raised it above his head, letting it rest briefly on his left shoulder before moving it back to the right.”  “Arise, Sir Riley Swan of Camlann.”

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297697
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

Pregnant...

 



Author's Response:

I'm just going to tell you to read the next chapter! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

This is a really good story. You are doing well.  Let Bella heal please. I hate messed up Bella. She is smart, pretty and a survivor. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

She's getting there.

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home

when babies arrive then angst needs to die down.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

Been a good story. Thank you,

Only hope by militato123 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

edward bella

After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha ha!  TWINS..



Author's Response:


sneak peek


" what do you mean your moving out?!" Edward yelled at me.

" She means what she just said, she's bored and lonely and wants to move out, her contract clearly saying she can leave if she wants to.

" Emmett do something! she can't leave! she's caring my baby! she can't leave me!" Edward order to my surprise, but i kept a poker face like Rosalie said.

" I can't Edward, you must've really ** her off." Emmett said.

" Why would you leave Bella? i gave you everything i thought i could i'll change please, i'll go home every night, but don't leave." Edward begged

i looked over at Rosalie saw her glared i can't let him win to easily.

" i'm sorry Edward, but did you really think i would be ok staying in that house all by myself with no one to talk to at all?" i said softly"

"Bella babe there you are! come on let get this show on the road" i turn to see my best friend Jacob Black

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aro, old unhappy mean Aro will help her. That is a switch.



Author's Response:

oh shit i just noticed i reponded to the wrong story lol sorry thanks for the review

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

IT is tollerate not toilette. FYI..

 

Well she needs potty, food and bed. New clothes as she expands and DOCTORS there all the time.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Demitri and Caius are connected to Bella in some way. Good she has allies now that will love her since Edward does not.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yes I like it. You must be foreign, I think you need a beta. Other wise your story is coming along.  I only thought it odd that in a foreign country Jacob could find Bella without a phone or address.



Author's Response:

no i not foreign.... i wont be finishing this story, im actually trying to find someone to take over the story

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That imprinting on babies, is WRONG.



Author's Response:

their not going have a realtion until thei 18 atleast

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Daddy!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Okay well, I am gonna just jump in and say. The things Edward said to "Bella" were MEAN especially like she said the day after having their first and only sexual encounter. So no. Forgive him, no.  If the children want to see their father then I would allow that. For myself, I would say never again buster!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Interesting you are writing on the fly.  If you want this to flow then make an out line and build within it.

You need to make sure when you are saying "him" we know who "HIM" is.

What we have so far is Edward left Bella told her the regular stuff, I don't love you or want you and neither does my family. Then she is pregnant Aro finds this out when he goes to visit Carlisle and follows the sent of Edward and the human. Next we have the babies born in Volterra and the Cullens came to see what has happened to Bella. Caius has adopted Bella "mentally" he is not allowing anyone to hurt her or the babies. Seems Aro is now being protective as well. Babies are very smart and mature. Of course vamp/human babies.

Edward now wants to win her back. And his children are mad at him.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Honey you have to quit repeating it all. Now we have to move on.

1. will Bella forgive them?

2. will Bella stay in Volterra?

3. Will Caius allow her to leave if she wants to?

4. What punishment will Edward and the Cullens receive for leaving her ALIVE and not changed?

5. Bella has to sit down and go through all this with her children. Then need to love their family. It is not good to grow up with hate in your heart, vampire or not.

I hope that gets you going.



Author's Response:

i wont be finishing this story sry

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am glad you finished this. Even if it was short it covered the story. Thank you



Author's Response:

thank u and ur welcome, check out my other stories too

Toasty Warm by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ty

Banner by EternallyCullen

B and E wed.  There's some romancing going on behind the scenes, some teasing at the reception, and some trouble from Jacob.

Sequel to Prenuptual Posturing, in the Unforeseen Events Series. Rated M for later chapters. All belongs to Stephenie Meyer. Romance, humour, hurt and comfort. The Cullens and Hales, The Denalis, Charlie, The Dwyers, The Clearwaters, Jacob, Sam, Ang and Ben, the Forks High acquaintances.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65913 Read Count: 12645
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2009 Updated: 23 Dec 2009
Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Make Someone Happy

You must know dance or somewhere on this lovely internet there is instructions on Ballroom.  My daughter used to teach it. When she was a teenager she taught Cotillion classes with her own teacher.  Big classes take two instructors.



Author's Response:

LOL Let's just say I spent years in ballet as a kid and our family liked to dance so I learned to foxtrot, etc. And now, I've spent hours and hours researching ballroom, jive, jitterbugging, tap and salsa for this series. Your daughter's lucky to know dance. I'd have loved to have lessons. Hubbs has promised me that someday we'll take some ballroom. I'd love that. :) I'm past being able to ever do aerials, though. Would have loved to be able to do that. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: It Started with the Shoes

very cute..



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Witnesses

Honestly. I gotta say you could loose Jacob and I would be so thankful. I never read the stories of Bella and Jacob. I just don't like the character.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Wolf in Sheep's Clothing

See like I said, I don't like Jacob.  Say he got Bella to pick him. Two years and a down the road they have a kid. Then out of the blue he imprints on some gal that came into the garage to get her car fixed and Bella is history. Oh the kid stays with him because it is Tribal law.. See so much hurt and damage.. No he was not a good choice.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Electric Horse

I gotta say I hate to read stories without double spacing.  lol



Author's Response:

I write them double-spaced. When they're uploaded, they change spacing all on their own. I much prefer double spacing, too. :D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: A Fine Mess

Way too funny.



Author's Response:

Glad I made you laugh. xo j