Reviews by atomicflamingo
First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: atomicflamingo Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

I haven't reviewed before, but please know that this was an amazing story. It has sweet moments as well as ones that made me laugh out loud. I'm so sad to see it done. I am glad, though, that you will be writing outtakes. :) I can't wait to see more from you. You are very talented.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you've enjoyed it!  There's definitely more to come and I thank you so much for saying hi now!  I've got a lot more ahead!  Thanks again :)

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: atomicflamingo Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

In looking at some of the reviews that included comments about how Edward forgave Bella too easily, I can't help but shake my head.  I thought love was supposed to be about forgiveness rather than retribution. Certainly, Edward was hurt but I don't believe trying to make Bella feel worse than she already did would have made Edward feel better. Maybe if we were more concerned with love and forgiveness then this would translate to healthier relationships in real life. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I agree with you. I believe in forgiveness and don't think it's necessary to dig, berate, yell, fight and rehash a mistake that is easily forgiven. That's why I didn't drag it out. Thanks for seeing through all that, and thanks for reading the reviews.

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661137
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: atomicflamingo Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

I have left four reviews total since I started reading fanfiction years ago. Since you are winding this story up, I felt that I should leave feedback for the fifth time.  This has been a remarkable story that I have enjoyed reading every day.  I have looked forward to my lunch break each day so I could grab my iPad and go read the latest chapters. Thank you for this wonderful story and the hours of entertainment. I hope you will be posting new stories in the future. Excellent work!