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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311118
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
That is SCARY! Poor Bella. What a mind-f. She didn't seem to catch that "tool of procreation" but I did - chilling.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
I got my post!
Also, I got thoroughly squicked out reading Aro's POV. Sooooo creepy! Majorly creepy. And I'm completely hooked on this story.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Oh, Aro is seriously sick!!! Poor Rebecca - that's a very severe punishment for her "crime." Aro has everyone so thoroughly brainwashed. I must say I'm really looking forward to the day Sheriff Swan finally rides into town. :)
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
OMG!! First, Charlie is awesome. I always love a good Charlie, and just from this one chapter you can see he's one of the best. But the Felix bombshell you so casually drop there at the end? WOW!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Whew! Felix finally sees the light and decides to help Charlie. And poor Charlie - he's been through so much already only to learn that his daughter's been brainwashed.
Happy New Year to you, too!
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515184
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Just when I think they're about to get away safely I remember that chip in Victoria's shoulder. Hopefully James will show up while everyone is still at the cabin. Maybe Jacob can get him alone in an interrogation room. (Yeah, even after that extremely satisfying revenge treatment of James, I still entertain fantasies. He needs a bigger attitude adjustment.)
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
Thank goodness Aro finally called Carlisle back! Can't wait to hear that conversation.
I feel so bad for Carlisle - he's obviously very attached to the school, and it must hurt a lot to have to close it down.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625334
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
Aaah! Cliffie! This means the evil Alaskans are coming next and who knows how bad it'll get.
Great chapter. Esme, Rose and Alice were perfect in comforting and reassuring Bella.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
Oh, holy sh!t. I've never read a more gasp-inducing, tension-filled chapter of anything. Ever.
Seriously, my heart is racing! I thought things were bad before but this - this is epic.
I hope that Edward trusts Bella enough to give her some sort of warning of what he's about to do. And there just aren't enough nasty ways in the universe to kill Carlisle, Marcus and Demetri.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
Oh, man. What a rough chapter! Thanks for updating so quickly!
I understand why Edward did what he did, and I'm glad he told Bella so quickly once they were in the basement. And I'm doubly glad Bella finally told Edward about Carlisle!
I'm hoping that part of the answer to Esme's garden is a headstone engraved "Here lies Carlisle. I doubt he'll be missed." :)
Can Edward call Jasper and Emmett on his cell phone instead of waiting for Marcus and Demetri to leave?
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife
I am so thankful you skipped over the rest of Marcus and Demetri's visit. I don't think I could've handled the stress. :)
There is something very therapeutic about working the earth, placing something in it and watching it grow. Esme's garden is much larger than I expected and it sounds so beautiful.
In a world where vampires rule, there are those who choose not to be ruled. Humans are running for their lives and trying not to get caught. Alice Brandon was one of them. Was. Finally caught, she is made a slave to serve a powerful owner. AU/OOC AxJ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90973 Read Count: 14237
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I feel bad for Alice - she's drugged, injected, then Jasper does his voodoo on her. I hope it gets better for her soon!
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83467
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Such a tense chapter! I love it!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I liked it! Especially the tension as Bella tried to escape James in the factory. So happy Edward finally found her - I hope they can get away.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
So glad Bella has been rescued!
Hang in there - writing isn't always easy but it is always worth it.
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception
Yes, still interested!
Wow, I thought Rosalie's story in the book was rough - this was really dark. I love seeing how twisted Aro can get in fanfic, and this is definitely in the top 5.
Do you plan to include the story that Bella is writing? I'd like to see what she'll do with all this information, if what she presents to the outside world will be any different (or less) than what she thinks and experiences herself.
All the best to you and your new (or soon to be new) little one!
Author's Response:
The worst part about Rosalie's story is that these things really happened. It is a combination of three women's story. And because I combined three stories I actually made the abuse a little lighter if you can believe that.
I have toyed with the idea of making the article the last chapter but I am no where near ready for that yet so we will have to wait and see.
Thanks the little one should be here soon. At least my cousin is praying that it will get out soon. My daughter is sick of waiting she wants the baby out now.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback
Very sad flashback - Bella's been through a very traumatic experience.
I'd like to see weekly updates (call me greedy!) even if it means shorter chapters. :)
Author's Response:
Edward just keeps collecting wounded birds. Hopefully they will all be able to heal each other.
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373445
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful
Oh, Bella! Edward would never! Hang in there!
Okay, I have to go there because I love to jump to conclusions. She's been feeling nauseated for a week? Could there be a little prince or princess on the way?
I think I am going to like Rosalie. I bet Emmett will, too. =D
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment
I hope Emmett gets the Gloucester estate. He's been so protective and patient; he's earned it!
I can't help but feel a little sad for Tanya. (Just a little.) Falling from an easy life to such a hard existence is going to be very difficult for her.
Loved the bit a the beginning where Bella and Edward spent their sleepless night wrapped up in each other. Such a sweet picture of their devotion.
I followed MOTU, too, and was sad to see it wrap up. SF still has a long, long way to go, right? (Please?) :)
Author's Response:
I was wondering if there is going to be a sequel or something or if she's just going to leave us hanging with James out there trying to sabotage them all the time. I was sad there wasn't more and I wasn't following for eight months like the rest of you guys.
In the way of sad news, there isn't too much of SF left. There's going to be a lot of fast forwards in the timeline. The chapter I wrote last night tied up some ends, flashed forward two months and then ended with a cliffie. I'm not sure how many more chapters we have left, but I'm guessing not more than five or so...
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211570
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
The time passage went smoothly (thanks for the dates, too!). Disappointing, to an extent, that Jake is not that into Jack, and really disappointing that he wasn't man enough to end it with Bella before starting up with Leah. But then again, that leaves Bella free and clear for...future opportunities. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^
Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work.
Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.
Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.
"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.
"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her.
Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays!
There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/
Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance! <3
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Awww, Jack was so sweet to choose a black cast for Alice's wedding!
I like how grounded Bella is - she's a successful writer but doesn't go overboard with material possessions.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!
Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!
<3
Shel
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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.
"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."
Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.
"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.
"Will she what?"
"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"
When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.
"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."
Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.
"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.
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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Ahhhh! You can't just leave it there! Evil cliffie! :)
Great reunion - loved Esme fainting and Emmett's pool full of chocolate pudding. Jack and Bella's relationship continues to be awesome. Esme's defense of Bella was a delightful surprise.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!
<3 Shel
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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.