Reviews by IThinkINeededThat
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028134
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

lol Love that Emmett immediately thinks the worst.

 

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

*snicker* Serves him right sending Bella to work like that.

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132

Oooh! Alice saw something. That should drive Eddie mad.

And leave it to a guy - he hates what her scent does to him and Emmett, and yet he is bummed when she cleans herself up.

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Okay so Emmett submitting to Alice... actually anyone submitting to Alice is a bit of an eww factor, even if she is a bossy know-it-all. She makes me think of Jane in Domme mode. 

 

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Oooh, is Eddie finally ready to come out in the open... err play room? I wonder how Bella will react knowing he was her Sir all this time.

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Yikes! She is actually going to allow a man she does not know into her apartment while she is blindfolded and naked. This is how women get raped and killed. Not in this fic, I assume.

As for differeing POV's - If you wish to do that, you might want to go to omnicient POV where the 3rd person is telling the story and can tell what they are thinking.

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

That better be a limits list... not that Bella would even know what most of it was.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

red door? Oh please tell me you did not make their play room a "red room of pain" because I will barf.

As for her panties *grins* I used the same idea in one of my stories. LOL Given the heightened sense of smell of vampires, it just seems natural.



Author's Response:

one, i have no idea what red room of pain is, so no.... though there will be some pain and punishment, but Edward isn't into that, and it isn't Bella's thing either. She is into exhibitionsim and submission. I used the panties idea in IR, though i haven't put out that chapter yet :)

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

And as vampire cum is probably delicious, not so bad for Bella. A human's cum however... I wish men didn't insist on eating so much red meat. Drink more pineapple juice! Just saying;)

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

*grins* yeah, in the drabble fic I wrote, I got a few of those. *shrugs* their loss! This is a great story... with a long burn. LOL

And a naked Edward? Damn - talk about taking all of Bella's self control not to remove the blindfold.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Okay, I gave in and created a reg account at f'book. I tried to look up Wreck Room and it came up with tons of results. What else am I looking for to find it?



Author's Response:

Nocturnal Emissions Wreck Room  or friend me nocurnalem@gmail.com  You will never find me without the gmail, cause there are hundreds of people named Noc. 

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Oh, I love these safe words. I agree red/green/yellow are nice it you play alot with many people and they are perfect for a club environment, but it is nice to have specific ones for a specific relationship. It gives them so much more power.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

Gah, i hate it when doms do that - ask you a question and expect you not to answer. 

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

"one thing I learned being a Dom that no matter how carefully you planned a scene, you had to be prepared to make adjustments"

LOL I think all doms would have to agree with that. 

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

ooh, the IR preview. I love the "Alice, it’s not what you think" Seriously, because he thought he could figure a way out of the image she saw and heard.

LOL

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

TWCS is all screwy again. You might want to make sure the chapter coincide with your work. For instance, on the page, it shows what must be 158, but if you pull up the chapter print version, it is 157. And 159 doesn't show at all. 

And yet, if you click on the print link that says "story" 159 shows up. Cue Twilight Zone music.

Boy are they having problems.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

I'm surprised he didn't make her repeat her safewords just to make sure she remembered... but maybe that is coming up. Gah! yes I am mixing reality with fiction...

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

oooh Bella is gonna be sore but very happy.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

obviously Bella doesn't slide into subspace easily.



Author's Response:

i cant write what i dont know, though i did for the first time two days ago :)

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

Geez, so never being able to look into the eyes of her master and melt has got to suck. 

Summary:

 

I was given 3.5 days to come up with a story for the Drabble War 'DYAC' prompt.

 

 

 

JA Mash and Texasbella said 'You have to use this one' and showed me the picture.

 

 

 

Of course, never one to turn down a challenge, I agreed.

 

 

 

They gave me a maximum word count of 9k and a couple of extra words to use, can you guess what they are?

 

 

 

This is an Edward and Bella story, with a sweet Esme thrown in :)

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4666 Read Count: 54765
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ROFL! Omg - can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*snicker* So, Bella hangs around with some people who need to learn what a condom is.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ROFL

OMG I can just imagine the man-child with his Mighty Mouse pillowcases

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ROFL! So Bella is from a classy family *snort*

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oooooooooooo sextward!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ah oh... lol something tells me this is about to get interesting!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ROFL! So you took that image for real. LOL So what does '8===D' stand for anyway?



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, cock babe, it's a picture of a cock. 2 balls, the long, thick shaft and then the head :D hehehe xx

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ROFLMAO!~

Yeah, I would so not want to be Bella right now. Well, I have been known to say things I probably shouldn't in front of people I should't - and I am always tweeting things I shouldn't, so who am I to talk?

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aack! I've caught up! Can't wait to read more:)

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oooh I do hope we get to hear about Edward's kinky fuckery

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ROFL Okay, now I have an intersting Edward Patrick impression in my head.

 

8===D~~ kinda squirts, oh I mean speaks, for itself;)

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

?3===D~~~ O:?

If the O wasn't completely circular, I would say BJ, but as it is closed...

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ooooooooooh nice kinky Edward!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hee heeh hee. I'm liking this Charlie even more.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG ROFL! Edward needs to get a lock on his phone. LOL

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

LOL OMG Edward needs to grow a pair. LOL

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

"the menopause" ROFLMAO

OMG No wonder! Esme is 65! ROFL OMG -

Though *cough* the older you get, the hornier you get... so who knows!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ewwwwwwwww! I think if I smelled soy beans with tomato sauce and tabasco, I would claim to be feeling ill.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

ROFL Carlisle and Old Spice?

Ewwww. I hate the stench of that stuff. It is definitely a LITTLE goes a LONG WAY

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

man flu. ROFLMAO Have you seen that video on youtube from Man Stroke Woman about a man cold? So funny!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OMG! YES! i can completely get the literal child's mind. I had the same mentality as a kid - though not about wanting to be a horse.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ROFLMAO!~

OMG! Funniest thing ever! And I think I would tell Edward that no matter what, I would never eat at his house again.

And I think i fucked up your rating for the last chapter. Didn't mean to. It allows of a voting of up to 10, but only five cups appear. I accidentally hit 5 so I think that is why chapter 24 now only has four cups. *blushes and hides behind her desk*

Please, I didn't mean it, don't make me eat the Clam burgers with head cheese and fish sauce. 

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

ROFL Uh, thanks Eddie! LOL

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG I am dying here! Laughing too much! It hurts! OMG! 

LOLOLOL Now I get the urban dictionary reference. *snickers* Poor Esme. LOL

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

And now I just went and looked up Head Cheese and Fish Sauce on the Urban Dictionary. I'm learning all sorts of things today. *shakes head*. 

Poor Esme. 

LOL THe Fish Sauce I can be down with. But head cheese? BARF!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

ROFL Edward is such a big help. LOL

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

LOL Esme is so old she wants the babies to come now before she kicks the bucket. Too many more urban dictionary checks and it could happen.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

"Esme was banned from the kitchen.

Carlisle also banned Esme from the urban dictionary on the computer so she didn’t get any more ideas.

He also enrolled her in Sue’s cooking classes that dad was going to."

ROFLMAO. I think he should have done that previously. LOL

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

ROFL! OMG! Now Bella is dealing with a mother-in-law who is somewhat catching on. LOL She might die before the wedding.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

hee hee hee. Emergency! Emergency! Esme is getting into sexting! Call the doctor. Oh, wait, you just did. Carlisle!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

ROFL Nice golf outfit Edward. OH, geez, The Carlton Banks reference gave me the perfect visual.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

"Carlisle banned Esme from going near any communication device when he got her home." LOL Somehow I don't think that is going to work.

And Edward... brain bleach doesn't work. Just sayin'

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

*snicker* Esme bought a phone because she is now addicted to sexting. Carlisle, just get your own phone and sext back! Course, then your son may never want to look at either of you again, but you will be so busy what will it matter?

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

ah oh. What did she get?

Danger will robinson, danger, danger!

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

oh damn, the being bent over the desk part? So worth the rant.

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OMG! ROFL I think I would die with a mother-in-law like that... NO, wait, I would probably have a fantastic time with a mol like that. We would become besties. I would help her drive Carlisle c`razy.

Summary:

 

"It takes a village to raise a child" and apparently, sometimes a man.

 

Jasper wants to do right by everyone around him which results in him avoiding living, until an outsider comes in and shows him how to live again.

 

A special Birthday One Shot for my dear and loving friend, Jess (JA Mash)

 

Have a great one babe!

 

Beta'd by the totally amazing and talented lady, TexasBella

 

Banner made by the beautiful and amazing lady, Arc Morpheus

 

This is slash, of course, so please don't read if it's not your thing :)


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8188 Read Count: 1431
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Turn the Tide

Ahhh. I'm glad that even though it was a b-day gift for her that you shared it with all of us. It was sweet.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248330
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

First of all - thank you for not having him be married to Tanya. I wonder why he was in an arranged marriage when his father had not been.

Oh, what is a tear away child?

While I feel for Jasper, Edward does have a point. The eldest were the ones all the responsibility were thrust upon while the younger sons did not not have nearly as much. 

And you mentioned Princess Alice Maud Mary as being new... new how? I mean she can't be a babe if she is meant for Jasper. Is she a distant relative that has come to live with the Queen and her prince? Maybe from the continent?

And Esme is right about Isabella. She is a hard-headed brat. LOL

 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Gah, guess I missed the hint:( Well, I'm sure you won't be cruel and make them wait 12 months. Or, err, at least you won't be that cruel to us. LOL

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: October 7th 1843

I do wonder though - Especially with Edward being the next Lord Cullen, his asignation with a girl of her status would not be born by the queen. 

Can't wait to see how you deal with that one.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Woo hoo! So her mourning will be over soon and Edward and She can officially court!

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Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Leaves and skin? *shudders* Pads are bad enough.

Love the chocolate thing. hee hee. Every woman needs chocolate.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Ah yes, the whole "Look, I broke her virginity" preen. *snicker* Men!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

Oh, once again I am hooked from chapter 1... a slow burn? How slow? LOL I might have to wait every few chapters to read so that I don't drive you crazy with my questions.

Q1 - how old is Bella?



Author's Response:

You're more than welcome to ask questions anytime, I don't mind :) In chapter 1, Bella is just a couple of weeks shy of her 16th birthday.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

So Michaelmas is the beginning of October? For some reason I always assumed it was just their Christmas celebration. Hey look - learned my new thing for the day.

I had heard of gooseberries, but I had no idea what they were. 

Love Lady Cullen. SHe is going to get her way even if she has to drag Isabella screaming. lol

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

Okay, so what is happening with the Cullens that they need to be fixed?

Also, it says she has grandchildren, but from whom? Was Edward married before? Is Emmett married?

And Bella definitely needs a lesson in humility. I think Lady Cullen needs to have a talk with Renee. Renee needs to make sure Bella meets eligable young men... though from the sounds of it, there is only one man Lady Cullen wants her to meet.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

Ahhh, so Emmett is not a Cullen, and yet she has called him Master Emmett. 

And Edward & Jasper are the Cullen sons. I have the feeling Edward will be his upturned-nose self - at least on the outside, as that is how he keeps society at bay.

I wonder, though. Is Jasper married? I assume Edward has children from his dead wife - ugh, Bella will have to go from being a poor caretaker to a rich, society caretaker. I don't know that that is better than her current position.

 

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: September 24th 1843

oh Esme is most definitely up to something. 

Isabella needs to stuff her stinking pride! I think the plans for her are good... but I don't know that they go along with Esme's plan on making her her daughter-in-law. Society would really bust a gut if a girl who made and sold preserves married the next Lord Cullen. She would be shunned for the rest of her existence.

I know you said this would be a slow burn, but GAH! I need more:) I want to hear what is happening with Jasper.

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: September 29th 1843

Oh looking forward to the ball. I have the feeling poor Isabella will be very overwhelmed. I hope Jasper shows her interest. That should bother Edward who I am sure will try to ignore her. lol

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: September 28th 1843

hee hee, and who has captured Jasper's attention... hmmmm? *grins*

The line:"An educated woman could be a dangerous woman if you gave her the leeway to do as she liked" made me laugh. Times haven't changed that much, have they?

 

 

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

oooh! Edward has just fallen in like. LOL And so has Jasper. I love Bella's comment when they were talking about her as though she wasn't there.

And Lady Cullen is thrilled because her son is smitten.

Can't wait to find out what she thinks about Jasper and Alice.

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: September 30th 1843

Poor Bella, but we knew it was coming. I don't see Edward backing off, for he knows what loss is and how it feels.

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward is a good one. Can't wait for the next chapter:) He will win her whether she wants it or not.

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Thanks for the answer to the Queen Q:)

Oh man! LOL Lady Cullen, how rude! You dangle the apple in front of Edward and then tell him he can't court her for a year? rofl Cruel, cruel woman. *snicker*

Here's an odd question - if a couple were betrothed and a month before their nuptials one of their parents died. Would they have to wait the requisite year to marry? Or would they just marry quietly?

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

The 1823 law does not shock me. It actually makes sense. We see 14 and 12 year olds as children. They had severe responsibilities back then, even the gentry, though their responsibilities tended more toward school while the lower classes worked their tails off.

I have to laugh at Carlisle and Esme being so amused at Edward's predicament.

Don't you wish you could meet someone and just know they were the one for you? *sigh*

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

lol poor Isabella. She might not want to go to town, but she is going to end up there sooner or later.

I bet Edward is going to get her a doll!

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

You need a glossary LOL I think you told us, but what is a a tear away child again?

Oh boy. Poor Bella and Edward

 

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am so glad that we do not have the same annoying mourning issues. Seriously - mourn someone for a year? Talk about a depressing 12 months.

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh dear, Charles is ill and Isabella has worked herself into a fine state. Lady Cullen had better find a polite way to ask Edward to come home without telling him why. The poor man will rush to be at Isabella's side.

btw - I am glad you couldn't wait to post. *grins*

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ahh, I knew he would buy her a doll! *claps happily*

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I haven't seen BD 2 yet either! I will be going sometime next weekend. Maybe I will on Turkey day.

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Law stated that they had to marry in the morning? Man - wouldn't that be  nice if it was the same now?

Then all those brides wouldn't have to wait through an interminable day until they could finally go through their wedding.

Of course, I'm a big proponent of the Las Vegas style wedding. Drive thru if possible. LOL

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

LOL Poor Edward! Having to undress his bride. I doubt most men of his time knew how to do that... let alone such a huge gown. 

Esme should have helped with that before she left.

And now, he knows he doesn't have the strength to consumate their marriage, but I bet once she is nude he will have a hard time remembering that.

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

LOL Okay, so where is my Edward? Ten pounds back then would be what... $1000 today? DAMN! I'd have just as much trouble as Bella unless.. Oh, I could buy some electronics. I do need a new computer.

SUGAR DADDY EDWARD!

Summary:

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After eleven complete stories for Twilight, this is my final one, as well as the last of my rewrite of the saga. It has been an incredible, roller coaster, blessing of a time, and this fan fiction is for every reader, from I'm His Lobster to now, who has ever clicked on my stories. Thank you for the amazing support. Now go read, review, and enjoy.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Rewrite of the Saga
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81431 Read Count: 10643
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- I Wonder What The Poor People Are Doing

Either Jane is a total idiot, which I doubt - or she was deliberately goading her.

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Blind Spot

I've just started reading your saga, but thought I would skip ahead and see how you are dealing with Breaking Dawn. I just read this chapter, but I must say.

BRAVO! I never could understand how Bella refused in the books to look at how her decision affected everyone. She was so incredibly selfish. I look forward to seeing how they deal with this.

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119765
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
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Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG You are killing me! ROFL

I think I'm gonna like this Bella. LOL

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Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ROFL! OMG! Yes, getting out of IKEA is horrendous. They created the ultimate maze in there and if you don't buy, they don't let you out!

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Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ROFL OMG, revisiting 'like' Maggie "like' LOL