Reviews by twilitghtforever
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Great Chapter

I am so scard for Bella.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

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I can’t believe this is happening again. I thought Bella was finally safe. He should tell her what is going on so she can put on an act in front of everyone.  I still really like the story but I just wish Edward would run away with Bella.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

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Excellent chapter

Oh my God my heart was pounding so hard when I was reading that chapter. I am so glad Edward did finally tell Bella what was going on.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh my God, I hope Edward finds her. Is that Carlisle at the door? 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

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I found this on FF and saw that the full version was here. I really enjoyed the first 24 chapters. It is very well written. I wonder if Bella is caring twins. Looking forward to more to come

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Great chapter

What is going to happen to Kate?

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

This was a great story. I liked the ending.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter

I wonder, if Emmett figured out that Bella was going to leave him?



Author's Response:

you'll find out next chapter

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Excellent chapter

Dam he is an evil son of a bitch.



Author's Response:

Yes he is...

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great to see you are still working on this story. Are you planning to update every few months? Just want to know. I wonder when Bella will learn all about Emmett. I love Charlotte.



Author's Response:

Updates will be sporadic until June (only a couple of months) while I finish my next novel. I'm going to try and write at least an update a month for LOMO and CAM after that.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter

Bella has a lot of heeling to do inside and outside



Author's Response:

Yes she does and a peaceful setting with a hawt cowboy may be just what the doctor ordered. After Jasper makes up for being an ass.

Barely Breathing by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A love taken for granted, we don't always realize what we have until it's gone. "They say bad things happen for a reason and I'd like to believe that's true." A story about realizing what's important. Edward & Bella AH


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7720 Read Count: 2620
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 09 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice little story very good job!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

glad you liked it!

xo
Jaime

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty One

Great chapter

I am so happy that they finally got "together."

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter Thirty Eight

Very sweert!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.  I'm almost done with the next chapter :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Hi,

I just found your story and I love it. Right now I am a Carlisle and Bella fan. Normally, I am E and B all the way.  But I just love Carlisle in this story and really feel like I know him.



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for reading!  I'm usualy a E and B fan too, but for whatever reason sometimes I like a little C and A too (Carlisle is my favorite character from Twilight.  Not saying that this story is going to be C/B, but still).  I hope you stick around and like what I have coming!

Thanks for reading,

Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Great chapter

I think Carlisle did the right thing. He does not want anyone to get hurt. It seems to be Bella has to pick on to try and have a relationship with she can't have one with both of them. I will say this there is a big age difference between my husband and my self (not 20 years). He was 48 when our third child was born. Age doesn’t matter; it is the connection that you feel with someone. Bella has a lot to think about. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read my story and then leave feedback for it.

Carlisle is a good guy, that's why he did what he did.  He doens't want to see anyone hurt, mostly not his son.  He likes Bella but feels that she has to make soem decisions.

I'm glad you brought up the whole age thing.  The first story I wrote for this site was a Carlisle and Bella story.  I had orginally wrote it a few years ago and it was non twilight, however I changed it a little bit and rewrote it and posted it.  i actually got a few emails from people saying it was gross that I would even think of putting those two characters together and they went on and on.  I'm so glad that you understand what i was trying to convey in the other story.  Age is just a number.  The connection and love that you share with some one is what matters.  As I get older (I'm 30) I'm learning that this is true.

Anyway, getting back to the story, the next update might not be until next weekend.  I have a very busy week a head of me.  Thanks for reading and i hope you like what's up next!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

I really liked the chapter. However, I did not get the beginning were Bella was upset with Carlisle. He did not do anything wrong. He wanted to make sure no one got hurt including Bella. I think Bella made the correct decision after Edward was so rude to her.



Author's Response:

Hi and thank you for leaving a comment and reading the story!

 

I'm glad you liked it.  Bella wasn't so much angry with Carlisle as she was frustrated with their situation.  She went from having zero interest in any guy in five years to having two men being intersted in her (and she in them).  She understands that it is complicated at best.  She doesn't know what to do and she is just confused.  Edward wasn't very nice to her, was he?

I am almost done with the next chapter and hope to have it up before I leave for work.

Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Excellent chapter

I would not be happy with my friend. Even though he was looking out for her. She is grown women with a child, she can take care of her self.



Author's Response:

She knows this, but the people around her feel the need to protect her.  As you pointed out, she is a single mother who seems to be doing  afairly good job of raising her daughter so yes, she can take care of herself!

Thank you for reading and commetning.  the next chapter should be up soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Out Take One

Loved this out take really got to see the relationship that the two of them have.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

Excellent chapter!!

Boy, was Esme a bitch she really has a lot of issues. 

I like that Carlisle and Bella are growing closes they both deserve some happiness.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and comments.

Esme is fun to write because she is so different from the character from the series.  She is mean.  I was working on the outline and there are some things coming up that will make you shake your head.

Bella and carlisle will continue to get closer.  Coming up soon....the meeting with Jacob!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

Excellent chapter

I am glad that she stood up for herself.



Author's Response:

She did, but things are just getting started! Thanks for reading/commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen

Great chapter

I loved Molly she was very funny. Esme was a class a B--ch. Carlise is so sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

I"m trying to mold Molly after my five (almost six) year old niece.  Esme isn't a nice person.  Wait until you read the out takes (both of them).  I've said this before but I will say it again, Carlisle is my fav from the Twilight world.  I feel his character was totally robed in the movies.

I will update soon!

-Lisa

 

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Out Take Two

Good for Edward telling her off. Edward is going to feel bad when hears about what Esme did to Bella.



Author's Response:

Edward has a lot of built up anger towards his mother.  His absense from class will be explained in the next out take.  You better hold on to your seat for the next installment!

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Nineteen

Great chapter



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it....more to come soon!

Thanks for commenting and reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty

Excellent chapter

I am glad that they admitted how they feel for each other. I wonder if it is Jacob’s doing that Edward can't move on. He planted a seed in Edward's head.

 

FYI I meet my husband in June, we were engaged in September and got married the fallowing June. We have been married for twelve years and have two cats and three kids.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

We'll get some insite into Edward's head in an upcoming chapter. 

Congrat to you adn your hubby (and cats and kids!).  I think you know if something is there when it comes to love.  It either is or isn't. 

Thank you for reading.  There will be an update soon!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty Three

I loved seth and glad to see Renee is going to have an open mind.



Author's Response:

Renee just wants to see her daughter happy.  She's not crazy with the idea of Carlisle being so much older, but he brings Bella such joy, which is why she is torn.  Seth is a love.  I love  him.  he too just wants to see his sister happy.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Four

Great chapter

Very emotional



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment and for reading!  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I'm working on chapter twenty six as we speak :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Five

OMG what a chapter!

I can't belive that Edward tried to kiss her again. Oh I had a feeling something bad was going to happen to Molly or Jake. I am dieing for the next one.



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoyed the chapter.  More will be revieled in the next one.  I'm working towards a moment when your mouth hangs open.  Don't know if I can pull it off but we'll see.  You'll get your answers to what happened to Jake and Molly too.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty Six

First off I know he did not cheat. Why, it was done to him and he would never do it to someone. Second Tayna is lying she wants to break them up. I hope Bella never belives her. He is just not that type of guy. Even if Bella and Carlisle broke up I could never see her with this Edward. His actions last chapter speak so much louder then his words. I hope you don't do the break up get back together thing. One can have drama and still be a sold couple. Until next time

 



Author's Response:

We'll find out what happens later down the road.  tanya isn't going to be brought up for a few more chapters.  You'll just have to sit tight and wait to see what happens :)

Thank you so much for reading/reviewing.  It really does mean so much to me!!  I promise the next chapter will be posted sooner than later :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Seven

Because of what Esme did to him he would never cheat. That would be so far out of left field. Also, Tanya said a lot of BS how Bella having a kid was a turn off for him. He loves Molly and Bella. It would be a real twist if Molly was not OK. Life is not a story book with happy endings all the time. Bad things happen all the time.

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting.

We'll get back to tanya in a little bit.  Also, we find out what happens to Molly in the beigning of the next chapter, which I am hoping to post...now (or close to nowish!).

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Twenty Eight

Great chapter

Glad Molly is OK. Can't wait to see what her test says.



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting and reviewing.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  I'm about to post the next one now!

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty

Great chapter

all we now is a nice girl for Edward



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you liked the chapter!

Next update will hopefully be this weekend.  Please stick with me!  Life has been busy.

-Lisa

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter Forty Two

Very nice chapter

 



Author's Response:

thank you for reviewing and reading...I'm glad you enjoyed it.  The next update should be tonight or tomorrow.

-Lisa

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Moving on

Excellent as always

Can’t wait to see what has Bella so upset but I bet it has something to do with Mark and her past.

I put you on favorite over here at TWCS, because I have been reading over at FFN.I don’t why they just don’t put up MA rating that one has to sign into like every other site. Well I am glad that your story is over her too!

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

Excellent chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33296
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent Chapter

Loved the ending. Did not know that you stopped posting on FFN. You might want to send out AN to let others know.



Author's Response:

Its only temporary. I'll resume posting at FFN as soon as the deletions die down. I don't want to pust an A/N because it weould 1) put my story on the updated list, where they look for new targets and 2) it would give them as REASON to hit me becaus chapters that are just A/Ns are a violation of the rules.

I put a note on my profile and I've been trying to keep info on Twitter, Facebook and my blog page.


This too, shall pass. Soon, I'll be able to go back to posting as normal.

Reviewer: twilitghtforever Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

The ending has me on the edge of my seat.

Thanks for explaining how FFn works. I had no clue you were not allowed to send just AN.