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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
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Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238945
Date: 15 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
So just a continuity issue. In the woods Bella was in a dress and back in the house Edward is putting his had up her shirt to touch her stomach.
Around the same spot in the first scene is what looks to be a garbled line it doesn't make any sense
Author's Response:
Thank you for pointing that out. It totally slipped my mind. Yes, she's still wearing her blk dress. I will change it as soon as I can.
Thank you!