Reviews by djuvinity
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

So when are yhu giong to update again? Because i thought yhu abandoned this story. Is it going to be several months before yhu update again. I want to know so i wont be getting my hopes up,

Author's Response:

When I updated this story the end of Nov I told everyone I wouldn't update in Dec. I've updated this, the outtakes and Legends (Renee's backstory) this month. I update CAM and LOMO once a month or more if real life allows.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A young female petty officer in the US Navy meets a man who claims to be an incubus while on shore leave in the Seychelle Islands.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4998 Read Count: 202
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Feb 2010
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: An Atypical Port Visit

hey hey make a full length story out of this please.

Dreaming of Edward by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

 

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Ever wonder what Bella dreams about when she calls out his name? Not my usual type of story was written by request. It was written for a fan for Christmas and we decided to share it with everyone who like this sort of story. Rated NC-17 for major mature and major sex ooc au/reg pairs EXB this story is not light and fluffy so readers beware. NO INCEST, RAPE or MULTIPLE ENCOUNTERS. Vulgar language please dont read if you dont like swearing.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36388 Read Count: 17524
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Jan 2011
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

 

i want to get to know masen! (screams) how does his power work. whats he like as a baby? i want more bonding time with masen and when are you going to update again?

Lost and Found by nitareality Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Frustrated student Bella has a big problem. She lost BOB and he's being held in the lost and found, in RA Edward's room. Can Allice and Rose help Bella recover her BOB without sacrificing her dignity?

Comic Smut

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6775 Read Count: 1681
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

loved this story! expect you should of finished the sex scene. . . now i have to go take a cold shower

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

so wats going to happen nxt? ur r a wonderful writer! cant wait for the nxt update. hope its soon

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YYYYEEEEEAAAAAAAAAH (SCREAMING N CLAPING)! I LOVED IT! GO GURL! IT WAS SOOOO WORTH THE WAIT! BEST STORY EVER. N IT WAS DEEP. NOT TO MUCH ANGST WHERE I DONT WANT TO READ THE STORY ANYMORE. IT HAD JUST ENOUGH OF ANGST. IT STARTED OFF SLOW BUT WHEN BELLA MET EDWARD. LIKE THEY SAY THE REST WAS HISTORY. I JUST COULDNT GET ENOUGH. THIS LOVE STORY HAD GOOD TIMES N BAD TIMES LIKE ALL RELATIONSHIPS SO IT WAS BELIEVABLE. WASNT TO SAPPY EITHER. AND THE DRAMA HAD ME LAUGHING ROLLING AND WORRIED. I ONLY GOT GOOD THINGS TO SAY ABOUT THIS STORY. IT DESERVINGLY DESERVES A 11. (FOR FANFICTION)

Summary:

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In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238916
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

IT TOOK ME 3 DAYS TO FINISH THIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!! im sorry but THIS BITCH IS A MONSTER!!!! It was like work trying to finish it. but the story was great the chapter great. sorry im kinda tired. yhu left us with a cliff hanger which is leaving me with mixed emotions. Normally Im like MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE then after I get that I want MORE MORE MORE MORE. but now I kinda want that but I want MORE MORE but at a much later date... MUCH MUCH later date. LOL so tired



Author's Response:

LOL!!!

 

You sound exhausted LOL but I enjoyed your comment *giggles* Next chapter is quite small compared to this. =)

 

Thanks for reading! 

 

~Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129728
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A bit of a tease

I cant wait for more! you are great author!

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Im sure you know where you are going with this. ima just sit back & enjoy the ride!

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

I'm confused who called & told edward about emmett? Was it during while edward & bella was in classroom with? why did edward ask bella to go be with him when he could have a pulled a caveward move & just put her over his shoulder? Well if they were in the same room

Author's Response:

1).  Go back and read the chappy where Edward was on the phone when Emmet Spazzed. He put two and two together with Carlisle on his ass. Bella was promised to Emmet so with Emmet spazzing out Edward overheard and didn't take any chances which would've been explained over the next two chapters. He sensed something off happening also I remember writing that I believe.

 

2). Because in one of the previous chapters, he was simply just tired of fucking fighting with her. It happens. 

 

3). They were in the same room dollface *grins*

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

okay that was a total cracksfic

Author's Response:

Yuppers, it was.

 

Real chapter will be posted this week. We decided to write much more to... ya know, kinda make up for the April Fool's prank lol 

 

Thanks for reading 

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

What was that!??!?!? Sadly I am one of those people that is confused beyond beilef. I think I like it though... No wait I love it!!! I read a lot of fanfiction so when I come across something that's supernatural and it has an orginal plot it's like I struck GOLD. Thank yhu for your orginal genius ideas and beautifully messed up brains. That goes for yhu too Jells. Now I have a question that's off topic about what yhu said earlier about yhu editing manuscripts. Do yhu do that for a publisher or just for fanfics?



Author's Response:

Awww Thank you so much!!! We're so happy that you're enjoying this story. =)

 

We want a serious beta for our originals =D But of course they have to not mind horror. lol

 

Thanks again,

Jells

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

I love this story! I dont think that there is anyway possible that yhu can possibly make a wrong turn in this story. ( sniff sniff ) EVERYTIME! Everytime I read the last word I get sad. It ends all to soon, & updates are months away. Don't get me wrong 4 thousand words is not a short chapter but WE (your crazy, psychotic, messed up in the head, begging for more fans) know that the excitement for LAH is over faster than it can began. IS TANYA GOING TO HELP E&B SNEAK AROUND NOW OR IS SHE GOING TO DISAPPROVE? STILL EXCITED CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER :)



Author's Response:

Awww thank you so much! Your comments made our day!!! Srsly, one of the best. We're flattered that you enjoy LAH. We're working on the next chapter and hopefully we'll have it up soon.

Thanks again!!!

XOX

Jells

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Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

I love thisss chapter! I love that yhu up dated so fast, i didnt expect it till at least another 2 months! Love me some edward badazz! "Yhu female shut up & we will get along better that way" lmao

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Date: 04 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Wow thanks for the update! it was really great. I can't think of anything besides that because im beat. im nodding off typing this! But are updates going to come more quickly now? because if this is a new pattern im ecstatic!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* Thank you! =)

 

We are hoping to do some mini chapters. I know with school starting it'll be more difficult but we will do our very best!

 

Thanks so much for reading. We appreciate it!

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Ima be honest! Only 1 word describes this chapter... DISTURBING !! Then there was way to many adjectives and not enough content. More action & less describing unimportant things

Author's Response:

Thanks for your opinion! I hope that you'll like the next chapter.

 

~Jells

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77438
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

FUCK! Yhu were got damn serious when yhu categorized it as an erotica! lol

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Consumed

that was great! building up the suspense! Whats going to actually happen when he meets her. is she going to be a snuck up snob?

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Feelings

OMG that  was HOT! So i guess no one in your story is going to be a prude thats good!

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Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Curiosity

Bella is a Nympho! like always! Are they going to meet soon! and  what about Jacob? he's going to be a big problem! love this story hope your going to finish it & not leave it uncompleted for 4ever



Author's Response:

Jacob will be returning soon...that's all I can say, wink, wink

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Decieved

:D this is going to be so much fun! when are yhu going to update & do yhu update regularly?



Author's Response:

I will up date at LEAST once a week, it will be done regularly...unless unforseen circumstances dictate otherwise and it will finish. I have it mapped out and 4 chapters in various states of completion. Thanks for your support. ;0)

MALEVOLENT by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

He manipulated and tainted everything he touched and I wouldn't allow him to touch me so I ran. "You can run Isabella but you can't hide, do you hear me? You're mine Isabella, you're mine!" He's found me... Warning: extreme Darkward. Read at your own risk.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42123 Read Count: 61612
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2011 Updated: 16 Jun 2015
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Lying

I don't even know why i keep reading this. I guess its because I want to always finish things. When i thought i was readin this i kept thinking that Edward & Bella will work things out. Yhu know, either he turns good or Bella turns dark. But I guess that's not happening. yhu cant really turn back from rape. I'm goingto have to stop reading but I have a question. Where is this story leading? Is it just a horror story? And this story needs more Warning then " read at your own risk". It needs in capital bold letters "Rape". Yhu might accidentally cause a rape victim to have a set back. Which is good for therapists pocket but not for them. Please add a little more warning. And please tell me where this story is leading!!!!!



Author's Response:

Actuallyyyyy, there will be a sequel and it ends perfectly and romantically. Everyone else thought the same thing as u and I did my job...I put up a warning. I didn't put rape in the summary because I didn't want to give anything away like how you're doing in your review. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hi, this is my first time reviewing.
I jusy want to say I love this story!
The plot is original... that is so refreshing after so many redo's of the same story. I also love that there is vampires in this story. I love the supernatural. A all human story is ok but not as good as a supernatural. Well your story is great and well thought out. Excellent writing! I kinda crave your stories sense their are only about 1 other story I'm reading right now. I can't wait for you to update. Also don't listen to the negative reviews. Just let it roll off your back like water. Have a great day!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for choosing this story to break your review virginity on! I must admit I also prefer vampire stories to AH, if you change the circumstances too much it isn't really FF, it's just a plot borrowing some names. Thank you for your kind words and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Aysy (Bella) and The Moon    

While sulking in his "woe is me" attitude concerning his lack of a love life, Edward ends up waking a centuries old wolf (Bella) from slumber who has no memory of her past life; the only thing she knows is Edward is hers. Looks like some legends are more than what they seem.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101749 Read Count: 20286
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Nov 2015
Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-What did you all do?

Great story so far! Well thought out. I'm having a blast reading it. Short chapters but yhu update frequently though!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I know it is short but I try to update frequently with all of the real life work keeping me busy I hope you will forgive me for the length of the chapter.

Aria.

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Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17-Secrets

I am so wrapped up in this story! This story takes me on a journey. I love the fact that yhu update everyday. I like the fact that they are not falling in lobe right away. Gives them time for friendship. So unlike the rest of the imprint story. Other imprint stories if it's not love at first sight then it's infactuation to the of obsession. Love the little twist with the scientific reason behind finding the imprint. It makes sense plus it originated from SM, so it tied everything together. Great story and chapter. Yhu Did awesome reaching 2k words! a86;😉

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope to update every few days.

Aria.

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28-Sadie Hawkins.

OMG!😀😃😍😍😂 BELLA just went off like that. I love the way she innocently speaks her mind. Not trying to hurt anybody but still speaking the truth. & when Edward got embarrassed! 😍😍

Author's Response:

Lol, I'm glad you like it. I'm writing the next chapter so hope I can post it soon.

Aria.