Reviews by Alecandra
Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80456
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Thanks for the update and a Merry Christmas to you, too!

Still love the story but I miss the dark side. Are you going to post something from the trial?

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

It was worth waiting for an update!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Hello! Its nice to have you back. Good story, thank you.

The trial: Hm. Major details would be fine, I guess. I love this story so I will read whaterever you come up with....

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

To cut a long story short: You are in my fav. author list and I will read whatever story you come up with unless its a very cheezy B/E love story. I love "Monster". I really enjoyed "February!!!" And I also like "Amazing Grace.... " If you are happy to end this one and write an alternative one..

You are an amazing writer and I spend quite a few evenings in bed reading your stories. Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Good chapter. So she is moving on. I am sure Matt will love it.

He deserves it. he is such a saint. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Thanks for this update. Loved it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135030
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sad and so emotional. Hope there is a light at the end of the tunel for her...

thank you for sharing this story. love it.



Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hope you don´t get the wrong idea when I say I liked the first chapter. hope it is imagination only.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG. What am I supposed to say about the flashback. Good writing but so intense!!

Hope the gang sticks together. Bella and parents need prof. help.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Heartbreaking.....



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How can Jessica and Lauren act like that, after all Bella has been through. they need some brain!

So, is Bella going to tell her friends some more details? I mean the granola bar made me shiver. But I guess good friends stick together, so Bella should open her heart.

Just let me know now so that I can prepare myself....



Author's Response:

Yes, eventually she will tell them all everything.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank god she was able to leave Phoenix! A mental hospital for a 18year old?

Nice to see that they all stick together. I wonder how she will be when school starts. She should get professional help soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Em, but that´s what big brothers do. I ´ve got one like him! Even we are much older now, he still is my best friend.



Author's Response:

I have two:) When we get together with my sister, it's crazy but the love between the four of us is there:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I don´t know what to say. It was so intense. She is not well enough to go back to school if she can´t really deal with people she knows and loves. Maybe they have to slip her some sort of pill in her food. I know thats bad but she is like a bomb.....

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well, Lauren and Jessica will get what they deserve.

Bella sounds like she is far away from being ready with school and her new life. Hopf the meeting will help her.

thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

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A Paul imprint story with my o/c. Different from twilight. Some characters won't be present, and some will be developed the way I see them, not as they were seen in the sage. Give it a shot! Read, review, and enjoy.


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61940 Read Count: 2245
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The First Time

Great. I love stories, too.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Believe

Love the story. Ripley.... hope he will find her.

Summary:

This is a short story about a vampire family. Being that this is a very short story there isn't much I can put in the summary without giving away the whole story.

A newly born vampire is acting like a normal human little sister pestering her big brother. The two siblings are about to get into altertation and are stopped mid-stream by their father.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Action, Drama
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1224 Read Count: 34
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 18 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hello, so yes, I would like to read the Addyson lesson/punishment. The story is short but nice as I said before.

Issac must be a quiet one and a bit frightend of his father if he accepts spanking as punishment with being16years old...(Ignore me, its your story and you are doing well..)

Forbidden by Jennmc75, TheSpoiltOne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 57]
Summary:

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Hate can be passionate and cloud your judgement. Hermione and Draco share a secret passion fueled by their mutual hatred of each other.

 

Can they keep their meetings a secret? Do their friends notice changes in their behaviour? Will the guilt eat at Hermione and cause her destruction?  Can she change their hatred into something more without losing their passion?


Categories: Harry Potter, Hogwarts, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6743 Read Count: 4391
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 -Disaster

You read Harry Potter and love all the crazy ideas. Someone can stick a head out of a fireplace for a nice chat. You could be attacked by a troll….. or Snape. And in the evenings, the students sit together in their common rooms and learn.



Until you turn up and turn everything upside down! HP will never be the same. LOL.


I am glad, my daughter can´t read. I would hate to explain some of your ideas….

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

This was well worth the wait! So many details and action........love Caius!

Please update sooner...



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

We'll post more soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Wow! Well, I guess just walking through a door isn´t good enough for the prince.


Too much energy. He got a lot more attention this way…


But he could not take Bella home and have her changed….?


He is a prince after all.


Great chapter! Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

LOL. Nah, Edward doesn't like doors. Walls are more his thing. lmao j/k  At the moment when he felt that "pull" to Bella, he went crazy. Nothing made sense,  all he knew was just that he had to get to her to claim her as his.

Unfortunately, even though he is a Prince, he is not allowed to have a human mate. Caius wouldn't hesistate to kill Bella if he ever found out. And changing Bella into a hybrid is also forbidden, even for Edward.

Thank you for reading and your review!

~Jells

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First chapter

Interesting.

Just update soon, please, or I will die from anticipation..... ;O)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Second chapter

The circumstances are a bid weird. How they came to the place and why, but the story is very well written and fun to read! I am looking forward to what the others have to say about their men.



Author's Response:

This fiction is utterly surrealistic, so I'd say the circumstances are more than just a bit weird...:-)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Fifth chapter

Great update! Can´t wait to see what´ll happen next....

they will work it out eventually....



Author's Response:

They sure have to work it out, and there is only 2 chapters left to make this happen.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Third chapter

So she lied! Because of ….?  Never mind. Well, I guess Edward does not want to lose. The next challenge is waiting –  he should make her come even more often….. Serves her right.  



Author's Response:

My characters have a will of their own. I sincerely have no idea why she decided to lie at the last minute. But yes, there will be consequences...

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Fourth chapter

Edward is falling in love with Bella. He must have spent quite some time working out what to do with her. 

I am looking forward to your next ....12 chapters. If Bella walks back 100miles to civilization it will take a while and you can just fill the chapters with lemons. Dark Edward was wonderful by the way!;O)



Author's Response:

I'm afraid we're already right in the middle of this little smut festival. It will only take three more chapters to wrap it... but I'm writing a sequel in French right now, so it may add up in English sometimes too.  

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Sixth chapter

That was funny. Bella should tell the truth to her friends.

And Edward - treat her like a lady tonight.

Mascara by Jay Gabriel Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

She's on the prowl, and she won't take no for an answer.


Categories: Horror, Supernatural, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 568 Read Count: 14
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2011 Updated: 09 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice! Shame she fell for a vampire! ;O)

Summary:

 

 

 

Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.

When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Wow. Exciting. I love your story. Cheers