Reviews by frostbitten
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311120
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

oh man...poor bella. is edward going to make an appearance and fix the broken girl??

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Okay....it's been almost a year since this updated. I can only read 10 chapters over so many times!! Please update!! I would love to see what this develops into!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i like me some possessive edward!! he can dominate me anytime =)

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40839
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation

I'm  just finding this little fic now. Nice first chapter. I can't wait to see what else you have in store. =)

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: At the club

=) nice!!

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chocolate coloured fantasy

i like EPOV =)

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45289
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

I don't usually read Subward and Domella fics, but your's caught my eye. So far, my curiosity is piqued =)

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

mmmmmm.....Edward pierced.....drool....

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255159
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I laughed when Leah was explaining why she didn't feel sexy...too funny. I can laugh, been there...done that =)

I cringed when everytime James came up in conversation or innuendo....bastard!!!

My jaw dropped to the floor when I realized that these two have only been together for a month!!! So feels like much longer!! I can see her friend's concern for thinking she's moving too fast.

Can this story just go on for ever?? It's what I look forward to waking up to on Thursdays =) don't tell my husband that. That's just between you and me ;)

Again, because I can't tell you enough, I fucking love this story. Could use more smut though. Let's get these two back into the playroom and the club!!! ;)

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

oh so fucking close!!!! i love the level of plot/story/intrique mixed with delicious lemony smutty lemons =) I don't want to guess, I just want to read the next chapter...and the next...oh god and the next...

And I don't think Edward is mean for any of his punishments. He said in the begining that he wouldn't use physical violence as punishment because of Bella's history. That's got to get him inventive. Like the name on the foot and the eating of nasty pate, and the withholding of orgasms. I get it. I love it. I can't wait for more of it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I was going to comment on each chapter, but they would all sound the same and I would embarass myself ;-) Holy Hell this is one hot story!!!!! Except you really should add a warning to each chapter....Do not read at work or with children in the room!! I spent every possible waking minute reading all the current chapters, I dropped everything when I saw that you updated, and I can't wait for the next one!!! You are my new favorite drug ;-) Keep it up!!! <3



Author's Response:

lol ... you are not the first one to say that ...about the warning for reading at work ,,,, I'm glad you like the story...lml

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Too much smut?!?!? Pffft!!! Crazy assed bitches who think that!!! LOL!! I absofuckinglutely love your plot to smut ratio!! I don't want to know how many chapters you're planning either...because that means there's an end, and I don't want this to end. This story has owned me since I found it. I ignored my kids and my husband for days while I read chapter after chapter. It's okay, they understand ;-) Keep up the wonderful work, I'll be waiting for you, hands behind my back, eyes down, thighs shoulder width apart.....



Author's Response:

My husband doesn't understand...lol....in fact he gets down right angry...lol...but life goes on ....thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Thursdays are fast becoming my favorite days =) I have to learn to not read this at work though...LOL!!!!



Author's Response:

lol... several people say that ...lol...(((shhh don't tell anyone,)) but I write at work ...lol...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I can't wait to read Edward's POV on this!!!! Absofuckinglutely love this story!!! Miss the 2X a week updates, but am making it through the once a week hits of my drug =)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have your teaser for you....lml

“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I was your 2000th review!!! yay me!!! Thank you so much! I love your story. Now on to discuss this chapter....

...ohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!! I knew you were going to leave it there you bi.... (inhale, exhale, compose) Next week can't come soon enough!!!!

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I totally failed to reply the last chapter...sorry. I wake up early every Thursday to read your update, but I do it on my iPhone and I can't leave a review on it :( mer!! I love this story. You should have so many more reviews per chapter! I mean...I wake up early to read it...I don't wake up early for anything!!! Anyways....3 more sleeps and I get another fix of my favorite drug =)



Author's Response:

Thanks and I understand about the phone, mine does the same thing sometimes it will let me click on the box for reviews and sometimes it wont, anyway thanks for the comments and i have this weeks teaser for you....OH...BTW....did you know you were my 2000th review ?...Thank you ....

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

 

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I say this every fucking time but....I love this story!!! I love the amount of plot, the amount of loving, the amount of smut, the amount of mystery, the amount EVERYTHING!!!! Kinda hate you for the cliffy, but still love you too =) Can't wait for next week!!!! OMG!!!!!



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Have I told you how much I fucking love this story??!!! God, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

You have told me...but I love hearing it ,,,((i know,,I'm a whore ))...lol....

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40320
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Janes OT

I was your 2000th review for Diamond in the Rough =) I got to read this early =) Thank you =) I loved the peek into Jane's mind =) I'm happy and smiling in case you couldn't tell =)

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Speachless....and wet. Waiting not so patiently for more =)



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

nice =)



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Holy Hell! What a monster of a chapter. I don't think you left an emotion unturned! I can not wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

oh my god...oh my god...oh my god!! can't wait for the next update. i really hope he doesn't push her away or do something stupidly male ;) let's get on with the kinky :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  You guys are the best!  

Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog!  Squeeee!  Run on over and check em' out!


Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: frostbitten Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm dripping with...anticipation ;) Can't wait to read the next chapter. Kinda glad I don't have to wait :)

Author's Response:

Yup you have a good amount of chapters to catch up on.....Hope you Spartan can help with ur wet situation.....xoxo