Ok, I haven't reviewed until now because I haven't wanted to take the time before going on to the next chapter.  This story is freaking awesome!  This is my favorite chapter so far.  Edward was so sweet to her, that I cried.  When are they going to figure out that she didn't consent to this.  James is a giant asshole.  I think that Edward is going to figure it out.  I'm surprised Carlisle hasn't yet.  Great job.  Can't wait to read on.  I am so glad the story is already complete so I don't have to wait for updates.  Lucky me. 

This is a great story and turned out to be a nice surprise for me. I kept skipping over it in my faces because I wasn't sure it sounded all that exciting, and I was blown away. I loved your characters, especially the way you used Emmett to facilitate the break up. I also like that it was so long, but I am glad that I found it after it was complete. Thanks for a great read.

No! Keep Jasper as a lover.  He is a big boy and knows exactly what he is getting into. He can be there for her and give her the TLC and hot monkey sex that she needs right now. 

Awesome chapter!  Thank you for making them so long.  I love to take the time to really get back into the story.  I really enjoyed the look into Charlie's new life with Sue and Seth.  I think that knowing that he is doing so well will help Bella to be able to move forward with her new life as well.  Yes, it is about time for him to propose, I can't wait to see what he come up with (no pressure).    Happy New Year!

I really got nervous when I saw that this story had been marked complete. I have enjoyed this story so much. The fact that it is so long really gave us a chance to learn to know and love your characters. You do a great job with your chapters and I lose myself in your updates every time. I also want to thank you for posting regularly. I have almost stopped reading stories that are not complete because I get involved in them and they don't update for months sometimes or not at all. I can't wait for the sequel and I will also be following you to your new story. Thank you foe your dedication and talent.

Did you change Emma's middle name?  I thought it was Emma Grace and now you have mentioned Emma Antonia twice.  Help a girl out here.

I love Daddyward stories and this one is very promising.  Great start. 

Please let little Mason be ok so Bella doesn't think she is being punished.  I'm also hoping that Emma loves her little brother and this experience will bring her all the way back to Bella.  Can't wait for the next update.

I really love that Edward is being so patient with her.  All of this build up is awesome and will lead to a very great 1st time for her.  i also like that your chapters are longer.

This quote was from "Top Gun".  I finally got one!  By the way, this was a very sexy lemon.  It is so touching that they are so patient with each other.

Ok, I wasn't sure about the story at the beginning.  I have to say that I am really enjoying it.  It is very funny and I love that everyone in the family is helping plot to get Bella back (even Tanya).  I think that it is great that they are getting down to business helping Edward with the sex thing.  

This was the best chapter!  You worked it all out so well.  I love that Esme stood up for Bella and I love how fiercely protective Emmett was of Jack.  It gives us hope that it can all be worked out without everyone yelling and the cops being called to scare Jack.  I also love the Esme has been working with Bella's foundation.  It sounds just like something that she would do and helped her to already know that type of person Bella was so that she knew she wasn't just after money or anything.  Great Job!  Gonna have to spend the day reading the rest know.  Oh well, the laundry can wait, I'll just wear my pjs.

Very interesting start.  Lots of little mysteries to unravel and some great sparks.  I really like your Aro character.  I loved him in the movies.

Don't we get to know what he is making her write?  I bet it says that she has to verify that his dick is bigger than Emmetts? I love Emmett too, hope we get more of him.  He cracks me up.  Lemons were great.

Oh no, I'm all caught up.  Now I have to wait like everyone else.  I have faith that  you will update often.  I loved the deep throat lesson, that was priceless.  

I thought it very fitting that Edward and Jake had the run in with James first.  He needs to see that she has support completely surrounding her. I love that way that Edward loves her.  The way you right them together is very touching.  He really does understand what she needs and she is a very broken person.  Also, thanks for updating regularly.  There is nothing worse than falling in love with story that the author drops for months at a time or all together.  Your doing a great job with this one.  Thanks.

I can't imagine that people would stop reading this because of the length. Each new chapter is exciting and funny, I am never disappointed. Since this will be wrapping up in the near future, any plans for a new story. I would follow you anywhere. I love that Bella keeps getting caught in bad situations. At least Edwards brothers see what keeps him in for breakfast every morning.

I loved the first story and I am really lovin the sequel.  I really like looking into the lives of Bella and Edward's kids.  You are doing a great job by the way.  I love the characters and families that you created.  Especially your Edward.  His devotion to Bella is awesome.  I love to see that they still have it for each other after 4 kids and all this time.   Excited to continue reading.

I really see both sides.  My heart breaks for CC.  Things just multiply and seem to just get worse.  Edward is being a brat, but you get tired sometimes and he is under a lot of stress.  Sometimes you just want to give up.  I admire that Bella wants to stick by CC.  I hope she doesn't give up on him.  Michael cracks me up.  The lotion is classic.

Awesome that she got to shoot him between the eyes.  Sweet justice for the sick pervert.  At least Edward got to see the babies born before he passed out.  I'm sad that this story is coming to an end.

I was skeptical when I saw that this was a one shot.  I couldn't imagine how you would fit all of the that into one chapter, but you did a great job.  I like that Jacob is getting a little happiness for a change. 

Ok, so I stopped reading the story that I was half way through, because this one kept updating and I was intrigued.  It is awesome?  I can't stop.  I even tried to steal time at work today without my boss catching me.  So far I really like the mystery of it, and the hotness factor.  Then in this chapter Emmett made me laugh so hard with the intercom ABORT!  You girls are going a fantastic job.  Please don't abandon this story. It's to good.  Can't wait to catch up.  I might have to stay up all night.  I can sleep when I'm dead right?

You did a great job with this story. I really liked that Tanya was nice and she and Edward were happy. Your first story was definitely a success. I also loved all of the kids.

I love that he can't stay mad at her! Even after falling asleep. I also like seeing Carlisle as daddy. It suits him.

I am so excited about the sequel. I am sad that Jacob is dead now, Bella will be to when she figures it out. I hope that she doesn't blame E. He really tried to do right. I just want you to know that I don't feel like you are dragging this story out at all. I look forward to the updates and love the long chapters. I never get bored. I can't wait for the baby to come so you can get back to the kinky sexing again. Thanks for this story. It makes my day. Loved that E had Carlisle forge more bj coupons. That was awesome.

I wasn't sure that I was going to like that you flashed so far forward, but I think that the really long chapter really helped in this case. It gave us a chance to get invested again with the new characters. I love Sonny, he is just like his dad. I also love that tough guy Aro has a very non aggressive cute kid with glasses. I can just see him! Can't wait for the sequel, thanks for continuing the story for all of us.

Excellent chapter. It was fun to see Aro cutting loose and getting sweet with Alex. I would be happy if either one of them ended up with her. I also like to see Skip from other people's pov. Mauro is a real douche-nozzle. I hope Aro or Carlisle kick his ass.

I love Aro he is my favorite all time character. I hope that you don't let those complainey reviewers get ot you. Your writing is great and you are able to make me feel like I am there and know what it is like to be Italian in that area in that life. I also loved the part of Sonny rocking Kylie. He is such a tough guy, but he really is a sweet kid. Poor Bella. Edward has to find this guy that might be her dad.

I think the sequel is great. Ni always look forward to the update. Sorry your rl is sucking right now. Hopefully you cans escape with the Cullen family every once in a while. Sonny is starting to catch on and that is going to make things more interesting.

Don't let those complainers hate on you. Your story is amazing, and it is just that YOURS! Which means it can go any way your little heart desires. I love your Bella and Edward and the way that they interact with each other. Your Edward is so unique. His tough exterior with a little sweetness that you don't get to experience very often. I also really enjoy their interactions with the kids. Having Damion catch tem having sex was awesome! I was just saying the other day that very rarely happens in stories and I think it is hilarious. I really am looking forward to Aro's pov next time. I love his character and his interactions with Bella. If I didn't truly believe that E would kill him, I would say they should have an affair. Keep up the fuckawesome writing, because I am always waiting anxiously for you next update. Thanks, RaLynn

I really am enjoying the time that they are spending at the beach. I would like to see either a Carlisle pov or Aro. Aro is so sexy and I like to see him getting his groove back on since he is ditching Lauren. He need to find a nice and naughty girl. I know it must be hard to stick with the same characters for so long, but I really still love this story.

I just want you to know I love your long chapters. They allow the reader to really become invested in your characters and what is happening to them. It also helps ease the sting of the cliffies. I am excited that it looks like Edward is going to find out about the baby, I hope she doesn't lose it. Alice is a sneaky one and I love that she changed the prices on the clothes so that Bella wouldn't feel like it was charity. I can only imagine how it broke Emmett's heart to find out about how Bella lived. I have a feeling that they will be good friends. I did miss Brady proclaiming his devotion to his Belle this chapter.

Look at you. Painting the all American family and then out come the cock piercings and tattoos. It adds a little something extra to the story. Love the much younger little sister too.

It made me laugh that Esme threatened her 28 yr old son that she would wash his mouth out. Roscoe is awesome, of course he would wait patiently for Bella to let him in, and at the same time be watching out for her. Isn't it a little to soon to for him to be calling her love though? I want you to know that this is my favorite story right now and the one that eagerly wait for updates on. You really know how to tell a story and hook a reader in. These are my favorite kind of stories too. All about family, with some lovin thrown in.

Ok. Let me just say that when the last story was drawing to a close I was sad to leave beloved characters behind, but I felt like you were going to end it well and I would be satisfied. Well I have to say now that I am so excited about this new story. These are new exciting elements to these guys that you are developing in an awesome manner! Damion is so complicated. This chapter was HOT! He got s little somethin

Girl, I am ate up with this story. That virgin scene was hot, and realistic. I love how you take things that are usually taboo and you run with them. I love that you update often, and I know that is hard. Please know that it is appreciated. It doesn't even matter whose pov, I am loving them all. Can't wait to see what happens with Maggie. Aro is kind of right. It looks like Sonny is doing Katie dirty even though how really isn't. I also want more do Damion and Amelia. I think they are quite the dirty pair. We need some more of their smexin. Also more Kylie, hell, more everyone. I love them all. Thanks for your hard work and dedication to us.

First of all I hope you feel better soon. Screw those people who don't like Sonny and Maggie. It's your story! I think it is sweet how he is with her and every man needs a good woman. He will take good care of her. He is just like Edward. I am sad about Damion. I hope he doesn't lose Amelia. She was good for him. I also would like to see Lauren get hers. Patiently waiting for 27.

Very interesting start. It's different, and I like it. Can't wait to see a little more of this Bella. She seems interesting.

Excited to get all the kids straight. Thanks for the kid key at the beginning. Sad to see Edward and Bella struggling. Ready for the journey girl. Write away.

I am loving this story. There are so many dynamics to cover with all of the kids. How do you keep it straight. I keep the 1st chapter in another window to refer back to. It's scary that there is some strange guy wondering around their house. It's very cool that Alexis put Jack at ease. I'm excited to see where his research leads him.