Reviews by Maria11
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

okay interesting wolves... leah a slut wow!! never really liked jacob really don't like him here.



Author's Response:

Yup I hate Jacob, does it show? haha xx

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

strange... ed is strange...



Author's Response:

Yeah he can be a little wierd hehe But I do love him! xx

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control

Ed is hot hot hot!!!!  poor bells always in danger...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

safe is relative bella it's all relative... hum can't wait to see where this is going.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

yeah bite me please!!!! just like bella but she is always right and there wouldn't be the drama if they would just change her the dumb asses!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh boy,... not sure i am staying with you

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

intresting.. lets see what happens

Seducing Revenge by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 10912
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh you are a bad ass bella!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

woah... this is good really good can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh boy ed is already on to her... humm interesting.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh boy.. be careful he is smarter than you think dear bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh boy... does ed have clue? or is he playing dumb? hummmm

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

what a way to go... sex and a knock out....for an FBI agend Ed you sure are dense!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i thought he was awake.. why do i think he is?  poor tortured bella.. it's really james you should be after.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow lots of hatred running here... ed man you got outsmarted by a girl and your dick! dumb ass!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh i feel the love between the two...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

interesting.. poor bella..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

interesting dream... a foreshadowing?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

interesting foreplay!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

quick turn around in thoughts.... hummm

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh yeah can't wait to meet renee!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh boy thank god caffine doesn't do that to the average person... poor ed he is going to be worn out!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh my....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

how sad.. i am sure they will get back together though...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

oh you are making me want to cry,....:(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

what a sick ass!!! i hope he gets whats coming to him

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh boy... what is going to happen?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oh ed did you save her?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

okay interesting ending... that was quick....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 22 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

liked it!! thanks :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 33362
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 17 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hum what does he have in store for her?  i don't think a maid dresses up and goes to a party especially with the master's mother's jewels?  hammmm

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ioh bella you lucky girl... what does ed have in store for you... no bc so you might be pregers... hummmm where is this all going?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

not good .... poor bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh bella don't listen to her..rose you are a bitch and when ed finds out what you did you are in for it big time

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

not good ed is going to think you betrayed him... not good at all..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

thanks for the great story i love it!!

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161940
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

looks like this is going to be good the odd cullens and hales....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ok they are really really strange!!! we won't hurt you your safe with us and they all say it?  strange!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok you have a bunch of riddles i hope you fill in the blanks!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ok i have some problems  a complete stranger and you just give up your daughter to them... i know it's fiction but still alittle far fetched..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

still this is way out there but i really want to read it! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ok you are filling in the blanks i will trust i promise

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

tough tough tough... makes me want to cry

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ok it was far fetched before but it is more now.  that was a quick turn around..... i really like the story i do.  don't take it the wrong way.  i am not being mean... i do like the story.  i know you can't waste ten or more chapters on the not talking etc you need to get on with the show.. i agree.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

makes me want to cry people can be soooo sick!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

leave it to lauren to be a bitch... well i wold like to use a totally different word... i hope rose or someone kicks the crap out of her!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

its my boy i know it.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ok i was wrong but charlie is good too...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

boy can bella have anymore stupid realizations going on in her head.. it's all my fault and he cant love me.... bella bella bella you are soooo slow!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

here comes my 2nd favorite.. i love me some jasper he takes a real close secong to ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i hate when the love word comes out so quick that means something bad is going to happen....



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews. Sorry I havnen't responded to them all. If I was writing this now, I would have changed alot.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

poor bella.... i just want to cry

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

wow!  thanks for the strong bella i like it!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

looks like things are evening out  but i am sure there is lot's more bumps to go....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

tissues i need lots of tissues!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

that's so funny i named my first car betsy!!! sweet!!!



Author's Response:

lol, so was mine. She was hunk of junk!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

ok how much crap are we going to throw at the poor girl?  i knew something was gong to happen you wrapped it up too quick!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

yuk that sucks ass!!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

WOW!!  didn't see that coming... WOW!!  so much pain i can't understand how so much pain to lead you to kill yourself.... it is so painful and horrible....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

good get that bitch gone..... agh!!  i love charlie!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

tissues you should get stock in tissues because you sure are making me use a lot of them!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

i love me some edward... you just haven't let us see how he feels!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

again you need stock in tissues i think i have used a whole box!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

thanks for the great story!! you are a wonderful writer!  thanks for the happy ending.

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55122
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Research

sounds like it is going to be good

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster

okay that was quick

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: An Officer and a Gentleman

oh i wonder who broke in... interesting.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 29121
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well i was reading this on twiwrite and then i found her finished so i am finishing up here!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

poor ang!!! i hope they get to her

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

It's bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

i am sure bella did it to save ang and ed.. i know she doesn't mean it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

i knew it... she lied.. it's jacob i hope he doesn't kill bells

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

yeah!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

i am glad she called him on it.  she forgives sometimes so easily

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

thanks for the story i enjoyed it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373294
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

okay let me guess "Tony" is edward!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

dilf!!! damn bella just go for it.. i really couldn't sleep with someone my dad's age but wtf!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

ohhhhh!! rejection..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Coming Home

hope this is going to be good after ed and jas carlisle would be next.  he is everyones dilf

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

thanks for the story.. and the HEA.  i was a nice little read!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Revelations

this is getting complicated

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies

complicated.... ed doesn't like the word but that is what it is

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

damn that was HOT!!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Forever

thanks for the story loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thanks to Jadiona for the banner!

It's been years since the Cullens left.  There's been tragedy in Bella's life; she will find love where she least expects it.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139798 Read Count: 20503
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

thanks for the story!  thanks for not having bella forgive everyone and play all nice!  i really hate it when she just forgives and everyone is sooo happy!  thanks again!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: BACKSTORY

you betcha it's the sexiest thing you ever saw because it is jasper!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: GETTING ACQUAINTED

like it so far....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: ROAD TRIP

cool i wondered why she kept the bracelet too... that is a cool thing and to top it off it works!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

okay wow... i am glad edward got his head out of his ass!!!  and then got bella out of hers!!!!  i thought she didn't bond with the baby because the baby was the reason ed left her...but now that he wants her back she is starting to feel for him....

anyway thanks for the update can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

You are welcome. The next update..... Heck i dont know when but you will get it. :-)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

ok it's going to be interesting.  i don't think aro is going to stay peaceful!!  they better have killed jacob because he will come back to get them i am sure.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

cool hate to say it but he deserved it!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

damn girl you better tell all!!!  this is not good

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

ok esme and james... wow that could blow up bad and i have  feeling it is going too... not good not good  alice is goint to freak out and be mad at ed for not telling her!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

knew it!  i knew she would be pissed at him!!!  i thought it was going to get out but i thought it would be awhile.  that was fast.  ed is going to be devestated in alice won't forgive him

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

damn ed you need some serious help!! you are f-ing CRAZY!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

what does he want to do with her?  cut her open and crap whil he f-s her?  i am confused is he that much of a sexual deviant?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

WTF where is jasper he would NEVER leave her he better be OK!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

it's too bad bella had to find out the hard way to listen to edward... stupid.. jasper man what up with that!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

ok that was really really bad please tell me they don't get bella and please tell me edward gives them the death the deserve....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

you better let edward get them quick because they don't deserve to live.