Reviews by cassie634
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 753010
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts

I love the building tension...it's gonna be good.

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

Oh God. Are they gonna be stupid and pretend that there is nothing there between them? Everyone else sees it but them!

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

Ok this is such torture. My friend is reading and is 10 chapters ahead of me and she said it's still torture with E&B. I like that you are developing the characters though and not having them just jump into bed (but a hot sex dream to get us by would be ok).



Author's Response:

lol...sorry.  Does it help to know that once they get started, they're pretty 'busy' the rest of the story except when they can't?  I make up for the lost time, trust me ;)  LOL

 

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

The action sequence was great!  I loved Edward's admission to the guys that he loves Bella. And I liked his side of the whole evening. Seeing him vulnerable is a good thing!

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

I can see how Bella would be pissed. Kind of like a guy yelling out they love you during sex. It just doesn't have the same impact in that setting.

Oh they need to get their shit together.

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames

As soon as I read about the Ipod, I had a feelng Edward willl be using those songs to set a romantic mood with Bella later, for some citrus time.

I hope i am right...

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings

I didn't think Edward was a screw up. I knew it was a mis understanding...

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

I loved the play list. Still listening to it. I loved how Bella makes a comment about Edward's romantic side and he says "never had a reason before".

Sweet.

 

 

Reviewer: cassie634 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

OMG. I hardly ever cry when I read ffn. I think 3 stories have gotten tears out of me. The fact Bella could identify Edward just by his body and birthmark and didn't even need to see his face. Gah!