Reviews by Louise Clark
Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89065
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh no! Rose left!? *gasp*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

*gasp* OMG!!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

What the bloody hell??!! God no!!! :'(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Can't believe they're alive! I doubt the cops will find Charlie and Esme...

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159783
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow, they sure have had a rocky relationship. Even from the start.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm really getting into this story. I like how you've written it too, with the chapter half present day/half eight years ago.

<3 it!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKK!!! What a cliffie!

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So sweet of Edward to help her unpack. And then later he falls asleep as he thinks of her chocolate brown eyes... *sigh*

Beautiful, bb.

And so funny when Edward said that nobody should use baby talk with their girlfriend!! ROFL!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cool flashback. I loved my freshman year of college, too, lol.

C'mon, Mr. Edward, come save the day! Cute nickname.  ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm just speechless...

in a good way.  ;)

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74918
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yep, another one of your stories has got me hooked! You better keep posting it! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't believe she told him before the date! And Edward was totally swoon-worthy when he dropped her off. ;)

Great update! Ready for more! :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Another great chapter! Just lovin' this story! :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131141
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: The Momversation

LOL

This just gets better and better! :D

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167502
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 41: 41 End of the Line

Beautifully done! Perfect for them!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 44: 44 In Tandem

Surely Bella's brilliant plan proves she deserves to be a part of the team once her internship is over! :D

So glad Alice is finally "getting it," too!



Author's Response:

We're pretty sure once they all hear Bella's plan, there will be no doubts about where her future should lie. :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: 31 Rewards of Trusting

Awww, yay! I'm so happy! The last paragraph. . . so beautiful.

 

Feels like the story is winding down to a close though? :'(



Author's Response:

Heck no! Bella is making progress but she is nowhere near down with the internship and all she needs to accomplish to truly get control of her fears. Plus, we have some changes that still need to happen for Edward and Alice.  I'd say we're half-way through at this point.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 42: 42 Got Lucky

Beautiful chapter, ladies!

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Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 32: 32 Right Thing Hurts

Really appreciate Edward's show of patience with Bella. He has really come around! :)

 

Now then, what a huge step for Alice and Jasper!

 

Great chapter! :D



Author's Response:

It's been a daily struggle but Edward is working hard to find that balance between patience and expectation with Bella. Lucky guy to have a whole team helping him with that :)


Alice and Jasper are definitely moving closer. What happens next is all on Alice at this point.

Summary:

 

Sequel to ‘Virgins & Villains’ and ‘Love Rescue Me’. Follow Edward, Bella and the rest of the family as they survive pregnancy, childbirth and anything else that life throws at them. Alternates between BPOV and EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52678 Read Count: 14112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2012 Updated: 23 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Christening Gowns & A Careful Man

The sequel's off to a great start, hun! *hugs*

Thanks for working so hard on it, but I gotta tease you about the next to last line. I know you meant "Mister Movie Star" ;) LOL :) 

So next up is Drunkward, huh? Bring it!

xoxo



Author's Response: thanks for the heads up...i fixed it. i think by that time, I was seeing double, I was so tired...lol. Drunkward and little Caveward, I think...that chapter is almost complete. soon...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He still watches her. She still plays the drums. They just do it together. Drummer Girl and Creeper learn to love, trust, and grow together.  Sequel/Continuation to "Watching Her". AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102600 Read Count: 17073
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake #2 Through His Mother's Eyes

Oh...that was really beautiful. 

I liked seeing Edward and Bella through Esme's eyes. 

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Rhythm of the Night

Amazing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

*wipes tears*

Poor Edward!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

*stands up in ovation*

Way to go, Bella! Sure she hurt Alice's feelings, but Alice shouldn't have left her there. Nice surprise that Rose took her. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Does Bella return to her own place?

Where's Edward?

Why is Alice and Edward's relationship like it is? What happened? 

Will Bella eventually return to the sticks with Edward?

There will be a HEA, right??!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

*gasp*

Would Alice dare to be at the door?

. . .

Starlet by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan: movie star, beloved icon, and little girl lost. Edward Masen: rising star, former bodyguard and afraid of losing everything all over again. She loves him and he loves her but will their love survive drugs, fame and jealousy? AU/AH ExB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 231110 Read Count: 71655
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Parents

I know you went through so much to get this chapter done. I'm so sorry about your friend's husband. There's no doubt in my mind you were there for her. That's what friends do. However, to help you through your own grieving process, you have us - your readers. You're such a talented person, I'm sure your music and writing has helped you bear through this difficult time. Especially during the holidays. I hope writing the cemetary scene at the end of chapter was somewhat therapeutic for you. Not everyone grieves the same way, and the length of time is different for each person. I just want you to know that tho we are miles away, I'm hugging you right now. :)  You have my support.

 

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 144378
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Mr. and Mrs.

*sobs happily*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

Aww!! *stands in ovation* 

Beautiful, hun! Just beautiful! *sniff*

Bar Room Angel by vodkavamp76 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A night out leaves Bella terrified at the hands of a predator. The devil will try to make her pay for daring to turn him down, while an angel will capture her heart in ways she never imagined. Bella finds her own piece of heaven with the man who saved her, but has she truly escaped the clutches of the man who preyed on her?

All Human, Bella & Edward.  Rated NC17 for language/lemons/some violence. Expansion of a one shot I posted on Fanfiction.net but then expanded due to reviewer request.

Reviews on Fanfiction - 138 so far!

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 168665 Read Count: 27965
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

What a swoony first date! Love the story so far! xo



Author's Response:

Hi there, 

Thanks for your comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed the first date.  I wanted to put things in there that would be my kind of thing and knowing that it worked for you as a reader really helps.  Just to let you know, there won't be much of a wait on Ch21 as I'm currently doing final edits so it should post really soon!

Much love,

Lou x

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow! That was some kiss! Great job! xo



Author's Response:

Thanks Louise, I'm really pleased you're enjoying the story so far.  I'm working on updating regularly so that readers aren't kept waiting too long between updates.

Lou xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Princess Isabella is almost sixteen years old and the heiress to the throne of Italy, Her father King Charles wants her to be married, but in the end the descision is entirely hers. With this in mind he invited Lord Edward Cullen and his family to stay at the castle. What will happen between them, will sparks fly? Will Isabella become the next Queen of Italy?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102043 Read Count: 29818
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Jan 2023
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Descision

Really like it so far! Nice introduction of the Swan family. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, keep reading! :-)

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 660778
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 11: Bella

I really really like this Bella! You guys are great! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 12: Edward

Awesome! And I'm really going to have to rent Pearl Harbor, lol. Haven't seen it since it came out, and I remember bawling like a baby.

Did you know you can add the pictures in the chapters here? But I'll definitely go to your blog! :) FFN has lost all my respect.



Author's Response:

I know! I (Jenny) bawled through it, too. lol Yeah, but it's just easier to keep them all centralized on Deb's blog & my site. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 22: Edward

This chapter was my favorite of the four posted today. There's just something about Edward's raw honesty...

Hopefully after his excursion to Kandahar, he and the guys will be offered some leave. 

Are there any outtakes planned? Maybe from another's POV? 



Author's Response:

Outtakes at the end, yes, but no other POV, sorry! :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26: Edward

Damn! This chapter calls for a tall glass of water! Whew! Nelly's song, "Hot In Herre" playing in the background...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GeZZr_p6vB8

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 27: Bella

tee hee hee

Love, love, love this Bella! Jenny, you're awesome! 

xoxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward

You know you like teasing us, Deb! Prob as much as Big Sarge likes teasing Bella! ;)

LOL! 

Another great chapter! Glad he still has his piano. 

He's such a lovely combination of sensitive and sexy. Love this Edward, Deb! 

xoxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 50: Edward

I'm bracing for the consequences, LOL!!

Holy hell!

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 52: Edward

Holy Mary, Mother of God!

I'm speechless.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 77: Bella

One of the best Bella chapters! :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 79: Bella

Totally agree with the A/N at the bottom. Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 81: Bella

OOPS!! The accidental free show was adorable! LOL!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

Gah! Totally swoonworthy!

This: 

You're every thought, fantasy, and heartbeat that I have, my beautiful girl.

*swoon*

What woman doesn't want to hear that from her man?!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 85: Bella

Aww, poor B! It'll be okay!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Here is my fluffly little twist on the whole electrical charge that Edward and Bella feel. What if it really meant something else, something deeper? Would Edward be able to do what he needs to make sure Bella stays his forever?

Contains explicit adult themes, languages and sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 To Read 2, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 188675 Read Count: 74790
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 13 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow! This is just...

I'm completely in awe. I love this so much, and it's only on the 8th chapter?!

This chapter especially, I'm so giddy, lol! I love their connection. So sooo much better than (you know) ;) 



Author's Response:

Aww... so glad that you are enjoying it so far.. there is so much of their story to tell!!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow! My heart is pounding like Bella's!! 

Loved this chapter! 



Author's Response:

Soo glad that you loved it!!!

makes me smile!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*fans self*

That has to be seven of the hottest paragraphs (at the end of the chapter) that I have ever read.

Whew!

 

Absolutely beautiful!



Author's Response:

HEHE.. I am glad that you loved it!!! It was a very sweet.. but sexy time!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

You had me at the Peter Gabriel song, "In Your Eyes"...*cue tears*



Author's Response:

yYea.. I love that song.. soo perfect!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yay! 

I like the ring, too. Very thoughtful.



Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the ring.. I thought it was something cool for her to give him!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

My poor Emmy Bear! :( 



Author's Response:

Yea.. I love me some tender Emmy!!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOL! Loved the banter. So happy Em's back! :)



Author's Response:

Yea.. I couldn't let Em be away for too long...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Holy!!

 



Author's Response:

A little hot for ya??

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake #1

So sad, yet so beautiful...



Author's Response:

yea... I wanted you to see charlie and know he will be ok

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Outtake #2

OME!! Hilarious!



Author's Response:

LOL.. glad ya liked it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Thank you to everyone that voted for my Jackson and my Emmett!!!! petersgirl loves ya!!!


THIS AWESOME BANNER WAS CREATED BY ELLIE WOLF. SHE IS SO TALENTED AND A SWEEHEART!!!! A HUGE THANK YOU TO YOU DOLL!!!


A really good friend of mine and a talented artist Megs (Mmismpy09) made this for me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Love ya Doll!!!!

 


 

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After Edward leaves Bella is sent to live with her Mom. Phil signed on to another baseball team and they end up in Charming, Ca. Bella learns that it's not only vampires that are dangerous when she meets Jackson Teller, Sons of Anarchy, SAMCRO. Jaxs teaches her a lot about real life. The Cullens want back in her life, but Jaxs is a part of that now and things get complicated. They will be in their true forms of bikers and vampires.

 

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Categories: Sons of Anarchy, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159233 Read Count: 29995
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 May 2018
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh sweet forest loving! Damn!

*fans self*

13's a good number! =D

So...Jax. To be a vampire or not. Hmmm...

I don't think he'd want to be turned. But hey, this is your story, sis! You go with your gut. I'll support ya no matter what. 

And yes, the way you marked the chapter name worked. :)



Author's Response:

Hey I sent you a email!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are no. 69 review for this story. It is just a fucken omen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

Love ya tooooooo sister!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jacob and the pack are involved now too? Holy cow, woman! LOL! No zombies, though, I hope. ;)

Can we have Charlotte kill that psycho hose beast Rosalie, and soon?! Thanks. That bitch makes me so angry, I swear I was reading cross-eyed! Grrr!

I cannot wait to collab with you on you know what! ;) Should it be in the forest, on the beach, or in a bedroom (any other ideas?)?? ;) Kitchen...Clubhouse... I feel like it's going to be an impromptu thing. Maybe two of them are already kissing and the third walks in and gets invited to join them?? Let me know! :)

Summary:

THIS AWESOME BANNER WAS MADE BY MIST.  SHE IS SOOOOO COOL!!!


After the wolves kill Laurent to save Bella they start to encounter more vampires that are coming to Forks for her. There is not enough of the pack to fight them all. Bella goes on the lam with the last wolf that she would ever expect to protect her. On the run together they find a world of adventure, danger and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Wolf Girl
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64687 Read Count: 6796
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, a Paul/Bella fic?! LOL Surely Peter's going to come in to this story at some point, right? ;) LOL

Pretty steamy so far, sis! Can't imagine what's next. Hurry up and update, will ya? ;)

 



Author's Response:

Hey girl!!!

Well I am petersgirl LOL!!! I am not sure if he will be making a guest appreance yet or not LOL!!!!! Because he is my star boy!!!

I appreciate your reading me. I am still learning how to use this site and have not gotten a chance to read yet but I will!!!

I believe that ones that are both of our fans are coming over her now and that is cool!!!

Love ya sister !!!!!!! Thank you for my coffee cups!!!!! Once I understood what they meant being sent by readers I was thrilled!!!!!!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

MADE BY: LUNARECLIPSE1

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MADE BY: MINA R.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Really got a kick out of it! Thanks for sharing. Bring on the alternate ending! :)

Summary:

Bella Swan is a simple girl who never takes risks. But when bad boy Edward Cullen becomes her biology lab partner... well what happens in biology, stays in biology. Right? o/s, AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9338 Read Count: 994
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this, and I think you could expand it later if you wanted. 

Don't we all wish our Biology class was this hot! ;)

Thank goodness she didn't let him get away at the end!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419041
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hmmm... has Jasper really turned over a new leaf?

I'll be honest, I'm not happy about the angst warning issued this and last chapter. Does that mean we're not done with Jacob/Charlie fiasco? Or is Jasper going to fight for Alice? 

I absolutely adore Garrett! Great addition to the story there. :)

Ang sure wobbles around alot already. How far along is she? LOL

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving this story, hun! 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Did i like it, you ask? Yes, yes I did! Very much so! =D

I like the idea of their relationship going slow, much more realistic given the circumstances. 

Bella, and you for that matter, are built much like myself. My wedding dress is a size 18, (got married in 1998), and after my second baby, I was a size 24/26. The largest I have ever been in my life! It doesn't help that I have a thyroid disease, and I like my sweet tea, lol, but I'm currently down to a size 18/20. Granted, size 18 is bigger now than it was back in the late nineties, but I'm trying to lose weight for me. Me. 

I never do anything for myself, and it's high time I did.

Love this story, Tufano! xoxo



Author's Response:

You and I are very much alike, Louise. When i got married, I also wore an 18 dress (though I had to have altered big time because I lost a shit-ton of weight). The largest I ever was twenty and that was right before I made the decision to get divorced. I have thyroid disease, I love carbs, and cannot live without my pop. However, no matter what, we are beautiful despite our weight. 

I wish you the best of luck if you do decide to lose weight and i'm positive you will be successful! 

Hugs,

 

Josie

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Such a wonderful chapter, hun! Loved it!

From the little boy to Victoria...Edward was right there to stop the harrassment, and he did so rather eloquently each time. And at the end of the "date", I love how he reiterates that he's her friend. The journals and pens were a very nice touch! 

Loved the pics on your blog, too. So sad that Bella hasn't celebrated Christmas in so long, but hopefully, for a short time while she was in Edward's company at Butch McGuire's, she was able to. Like she said, it was the first Christmas in a long time. I hope we get a bit of the "date" in her POV. :D

Didn't like the uneasy feeling Edward had as he drove away. :( He better pay more attention to his gut in the future! 

Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my goodness! So much going on this chapter, where do I begin? ;)

From the top:

  • I love that she used her journal and first entry was her list. Some do that for New Years, but hey, I like it anyway. She needed to write it when she was in that mindset. 

  • The green iPod Nano was an awesome gift from Angela. Bella's fave color? ;)

  • The lost patient. Not gonna lie, I cried. Your writing brought out Edward's emotions and I was right along with him and Bella in that scene. Beautiful. Well done.

  • Bella being honest and direct with him during lunch in the cafeteria. Thank you. 

  • Charlie - inexcusable. Thank God she had her journals with her and whatever else what mostly meant something to her in her messenger bag. He's going to be pissed when he gets the first hospital bill addressed to him. Don't know how Paul (isn't that the slumlord's name?) allow Charlie to change the locks? Paul knew she was going to move out and everything, right?
  • Did she not go to the hospital because she didn't want to be embarrassed? I mean, there's always a room for staff to sleep in right? 
  • As for Edward saving her, oh my! It was like how I wish the tent scene in Eclipse really happened, LOL. He is so damn charming. Loved it, and the following morning... oh my! His words were just what she needed. My hubby's had to do that in the mirror with me before. Then they have breakfast and she talks about how Jake ruined her. Grr. Get him, Edward! ;) And she added one more thing to her list, tee hee. Loved it. Totally swoonworthy moment between them. 
  • And then shopping! I love how he kept on encouraging her and bought her a dress to take her out NYE!! Of course his family pitched in with the furniture. ;) It wouldn't surprise me if Esme does her room at Angela's as well. Just because they're nice like that. :)
  • *gasp* He spent the night cuddled with her, AGAIN, and this time had no excuse about hypothermia. Hmmm... ;) And she didn't even mention it in her journal? She must've been really okay with it. I mean the first time, she wasn't. She didn't want to get back in bed after she tinkled. But the last line of her entry is so very important. She needs to say as her mantra every time they're together.
And yes, I'm raising my hand, lol. Pummelling Charlie just wouldn't be enough. I'd like to sit him outside and let him freeze to death. Grr.
Great chapter, hun! Hope you don't mind the long review, but with such a long chapter, I couldn't help it. ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Totally worth the wait, thank you for such a beautiful chapter! Yay, the ILY's have been said, well, I bet he wasn't supposed to hear her say it, lol. ;)

Can't wait for the ball! :)

Kudos to Angela for being such a great friend and roommate!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved this chapter! Possibly the best yet of this story. I say that with all sincerity I have, as I love being able to feel what the character is feeling, and this chapter did that. I love reading stories that are so well written, that I can imagine myself as the character and therefore feel what's going on. Yes, Bella did go thru quite the gamut of emotions this chapter, but I wouldn't have it any other way. As anyone who knows what she's going through, she's finding her way thanks to her friends, boyfriend, and therapist. I'm looking forward to the day when she looks herself in the mirror and says, "I'm beautiful." 

Love this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!

xoxo

Inevitable by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

I wanna be your last, first love that you'll ever have … Till you're lying here beside me with arms and eyes open wide… I wanna be your last, first kiss… AH, Fluff, ExB

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6909 Read Count: 17257
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Beautiful! 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awesome story, loved it! 

On Syrup Mornings by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Edward and Bella share a sticky, sweet morning together in the kitchen. 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4215 Read Count: 960
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Delicious! ;)

Outside In by MrsR2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 59]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella had grown up watching the English upper-classes enjoy themselves.  She knew she didn’t belong in their world but then she didn’t seem to belong anywhere.  That is, until she met posh, handsome Edward Cullen.  But had her need to fit in led to a night she might regret for the rest of her life?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101451 Read Count: 24609
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2012 Updated: 23 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perhaps I should leave an official review here, rather than comment on facebook? ;)

Loved Bella's definition of her friendship with Jacob. LOL

And I really like this Bella. She reminds me of myself when I was a teen. Bookworm, and not experienced with boys or parties. Totally been in her shoes.

Great first chapter. Glad this was mentioned on facebook and that I found it here on TWCS.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

*gasp*

Oh my! No, no, no! Poor Bella!

Was she given something in her drink at the party, then? 



Author's Response:

Fraid so...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aww, Jacob's such a good friend. :)

Loved Bella and Edward's interaction in the kitchen, LOL. Cute!



Author's Response:

You gotta feel a little bit sorry for Jake - he is a good friend but wishes he were more.  I like the fact that Edward is a little bit naughty.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

*swoon*



Author's Response:

lol!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my, that kiss...



Author's Response:

Did you like that?  I enjoyed imagining it.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What's up with the yucky messes while she's gone on her walks? Seems someone's up to no good... :(

And as for Edward's about-face, I'm stumped there, too. Certainly he can talk to his parents about how he feels for Bella?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*sniff*



Author's Response:

Bella's so inexperienced, she's making this up as she goes along but isn't always sure she's doing the right thing.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yay! She's okay!



Author's Response:

Close call though, wasn't it?  Hope that wasn't too dark for you.

Thanks for the review

Summary:

 

"It takes a village to raise a child" and apparently, sometimes a man.

 

Jasper wants to do right by everyone around him which results in him avoiding living, until an outsider comes in and shows him how to live again.

 

A special Birthday One Shot for my dear and loving friend, Jess (JA Mash)

 

Have a great one babe!

 

Beta'd by the totally amazing and talented lady, TexasBella

 

Banner made by the beautiful and amazing lady, Arc Morpheus

 

This is slash, of course, so please don't read if it's not your thing :)


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8188 Read Count: 1431
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Turn the Tide

Super sweet and such a great story! Happy Birthday to J.A. Mash! Glad you shared this story with everyone!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thanks for the update! Loved Esme telling Bella she better get used to corsts, LOL!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Awww! Loved this story so much! So romantic! 

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Moving on Up

I know you're busy, so I'll just say that this was a fantastic chapter, Josie! :D Loved it! Especially the consummation of her life at the end.

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Fairy Tale

Great first chapter, sweetie! 

I wish Emmett was available ;) LOL

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Head over Heels

Great chapter, hun. No, I didn't think his pov was totally obnoxious. I found it rather insightful. I wish Esme had spoken to him years sooner about his wild ways. So sad. Glad he's turned a new leaf.

I'm very excited for the next chapter! The 'getting to know you' will be cute, I'm sure!

:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man

What a rousing chapter, LOL! And of course, the sweet moments... just... awwww ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Isle of Craziness

Whew! 

So much going on!

So happy he's going to Bella's Award dinner! :D

And though it was a quick convo, at least Carlisle said what Edward needed to hear!

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well worth the wait! And very hot! Well done!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63249
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

Gah, James or Bree? The million dollar question! Or will you throw us something from left field and name a third suspect? LOL 



Author's Response:

I love keeping you guys on your toes.  And I have such fun hearing all of the possible theories. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

That was probably the hottest chapter about appetizers and drinks I've ever read!

 



Author's Response:

LOL, well I hope it was about a bit more the appetizers and drinks!  Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Finally

All I say is, "Incredible!"



Author's Response:

Sorry I am a bit behind on review replies. I am doing my best to catch up.  So glad to hear you really liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

Yes, he is very adorable! Love this couple!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you're enjoying them.  I've had a lot of fun writing them, especially Edward.  Thanks for the nice review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk

Now that's how you celebrate a birthday! *giggles*



Author's Response:

No kidding!  Glad you enjoyed it! :)

Summary:

time

 

Banner Made By Ellie Wolf

 

Tragedy introduced them, common ground brought them closer and heartbreaking circumstances will tie them together. A/U A/H OOC and all that fun stuff. Normal disclaimers apply


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60609 Read Count: 11220
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2012 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww! Yay! 

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*squee*

Take THAT, HeidiHo! :D

Loved this chapter, thanks for the present! ;) Merry Christmas!

Watching You by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Edward's been watching Bella for three years during college and now graduation is only one week away! Will he finally man up and ask her out, or will he be too late?

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1971 Read Count: 1999
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Watching You

Aww! Really enjoyed this. It flows so easily, like a poem. 

Summary:

Bella Swan, a quiet librarian who always has nose buried in a book and a knitting fanatic, is addicted to anything that is related to Christmas. She’s a walking encyclopedia of useless Christmas facts. Edward Cullen hates Christmas. Every Christmas, he’s had something terrible happen to him. So, he treats like a regular day, ignoring the festivities. Bella is determined to get Edward to love Christmas. Will Bella’s over-zealousness drive Edward away or make him begin to enjoy the Christmas holiday again after many years of tragedy and sadness?

 

 

SARRAC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11194 Read Count: 2974
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2013 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Save a Reindeer, Ride a Cullen

Ha ha! Very cute! 

Summary:

WWII

Contest submission for the Fan Fic Flash Fic week 6 challenge.

Based on the picture above.

 


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206 Read Count: 148
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2013 Updated: 08 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*claps giddily*

I can't believe you wrote all that just from a picture! Beautiful! 

My favorite line: "I'm home," the voice says; it's closer this time. I close my eyes tightly, not wanting to see the smoke of the ghost when it drifts past me." Just...gah! 

 

(Shame on me for not giving you a review here! Texts don't count! :( )

Love you!



Author's Response:

You're a sweetheart. Thank you, love! 

That was my favorite part too! 

Love you always!!

 

The Fight by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

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Emmett is done watching Bella with all the wrong guys.  Can he make her see that he loves her?  Can Bella stop fighting him and finally let him love her?

This is a one shot, although it is quite long.  I have no plans to expand it.  It was a dream that woke me up and I had to write it.

 

Banner by Ellie Wolf


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7861 Read Count: 1420
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2013 Updated: 12 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gah! So hot! Loved it! And talk about worth the wait for them!

 

Summary:

Edward finds what he needs most in an unexpected place. After finding her ... he needs her, craves her ... because she is the light of his life.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34269 Read Count: 4608
[Report This] Published: 04 May 2013 Updated: 16 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Light

I really like the professional photographer career aspect of this story.

However, I thought she moved fairly quickly along in the BDSM community, like her quick training to be a dom, which led her to training Emmett. I just thought it was a little fast, but what do I know? Anyway, I enjoyed reading about her using her playroom. Funny stuff with Mike. ;)

Can't wait to meet Carlisle's nephew! ;)

All in all, a great two chapters, hun! :)

"Good Girl" O/S by QuinnLark Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

 

 

Sinful Sunday week 29 contest entry.

va


Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 199 Read Count: 1243
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2013 Updated: 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quinn,

Gah! With 200 words, I'm left wanting more! 

This was incredibly hot, bb! 

~ Louise <3



Author's Response:

Thank you, love!!!

It was a lot of fun. :)

LOVE YOU!

Quinn

"Exams" O/S by QuinnLark Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

 

Sinful Sunday flashfic week 31 entry. 

hm


Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200 Read Count: 1359
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2013 Updated: 05 May 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, my Quinn!

Wow! This was ...

hot! incredible! amazing! fantastic!

So hot for teacher! ;) 

Loved this! 

Love you!

XOXO, 

Louise



Author's Response:

;-P 

Thanks!

Glad you liked it. This one was a LOT of fun to write. ;)

You better join us on the flash fic this Sunday!!!!!!!

LOVE YOU!

Q