Penname: Louise Clark [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 08 Jun 2010
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Bio:

collage of pics


Jan. 2, 2017:


Hi there! I am a married Twi-hard and mother of two. I love the whole vampire genre, really. Horror, paranormal, romance, you name it! I just love vampires!


I also love to laugh! I can be an annoying gigglebot like Alice Cullen at times. I am also a bit like Bella in that I am a bit aloof. I admit that I still have a crush on the intelligent, witty, gorgeous Kellan Lutz a.k.a. Emmett Cullen. 


Anyhoo, if you would like to get to know me, I would like to get to know you, too! I love being on the social networking sites in my spare time, so look me up! Thanks for taking the time to read my Emmett fic. Hope you left a review!


Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/LouiseClark75


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Reviews by Louise Clark
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 308904
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think

So angsty!! Loved it!

Glad she punched James, good for her!

I'm mad that she's all alone tho, I mean A & J should've had her back at the party since she was there alone.

And why go to Seattle now? I know she's been wanting to leave for years, but couldn't it wait til after graduation? And what kind of place in Seattle? There's hardly a description! Makes me think she's going to a psych treatment center or something! LOL

I hate that she and Edward are fucking each other over. Thought they'd learn by now to THINK before they say or do something. They're still flying around all emotionally charged up all the time! *sigh*

Loved this chapter, tho. Can't wait for the next! I hope Carlisle and Esme talk to Edward and he LISTENS, lol. Who knows, maybe Edward will go after Jacob because Edward was the last to know she was leaving, which really was a compliment if he would just realize it.

Hope you get better soon, too! IDK what kind of intestine thing you got, but I've had Irritable Bowel Syndrome before. Not fun. Take care, get well soon!

 

Summary:

Outtakes from Lustful Awakings. Find out what happened behind the closed doors between Peter, Charlotte, Charlie, and Renee,or William, Catherine, Carlisle, and Esme. Might even be some Emmett, Rose, Garrett, and Kate. Rated NC-17 for graphic lemons, slash, and language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26618 Read Count: 25039
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 09 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

They are so good for each other, they make such a great couple.

Loved the outtake! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 148089
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Hmmm, with Embry and Jared possibly adopting I wonder why Mike and Tyler haven't??

Lovely chapter. I was kinda hoping Bella would be having twins since she's so big, lol. ;) And I wonder if this one will be Edward's or Jasper's? Jasper was hurt Whitley wasn't his, but maybe Edward has SuperSperm! LOL

Well, they're bound to have a boy sometime, too! hee hee



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Awww!! Yay!!

Poor Claire. Nobody to talk to about hemorroids, lol.



Author's Response:

lol, hemorroids are embarrassing! Can you imagine being seventeen and needing to talk about them?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Oh boy!!! Or girl?? LOL!

I think it's a boy and it will be Garrett's! He and Rose were hot and heavy when they expanded their relationship. Emmett was married to Rose for how long and she never got knocked up?

Just hope Bella doesn't do anything stupid to jeopardize her pregnancy...

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Wonderful!! *happy tears* Cute name!

lol, Seth watch out! That poor granny! Wonder she didn"t have a heart attack!! ROFL

Can"t wait for Bella's and Claire's turns!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Ha ha, kicked out of ANOTHER bathroom! LOL! Totally great! And the couch scene was so hot-damn!

And definitely carry on with this! It'd be great to have a total of four, since there's four main characters. The third could be Nourish Awakings and the fourth Cherish Awakings for when they're all members of the AARP and stir up things in a living facility!! LOL! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Awww, it'll be okay, Bella. :)

Surprise baby shower? So nice!

Nice chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Poor Bella! It was a lovely shower...

and then what a cliffie! Claire's baby's on the way! Yay!

 

Um, wow...tough decision, they're all great titles. They're already parents, they were a family before they had Whitley so those two are out. Needs to go with Lustful and Strange...they have love that will last a lifetime, and I'm sure that kids will keep coming so that'll feel endless, they've always had a powerful connection between the four of them, and no doubt have been truthful all this time, but ...

I think Beautiful Awakenings would depict the future of the series the best. :)



Author's Response:

See why I've had a hard time choosing! Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

So beautifully written...I'm sitting here in tears.

Clayton Isaac Call, great name. I'm glad that Claire shared the experience with her parents, Quil, Jared, & Embry.

It was so nice that the rest of the ever-expanding "family" is so supportive. Just needed Mike, Tyler, Seth, and Tanya to be there, too, lol!

And of course, what perfect comic relief while at a hospital - the 'skanky bitch' nurse!! Priceless!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Such a sweet chapter! So nice to have Bella home so that she can share those moments with Whitley and Edward that she otherwise wouldn't have.  :)

Amazing prego lemon, whew! HOT!! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Awesome, I can't wait!! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I just knew Faith would be in her name somehow, LOL! Adorable! Just awesome! :D

Maybe you should go ahead and explain the baby names anyway?? I suffer from CRS (Can't Remember Shit) and it's very annoying, LOL! They're great names, and I would like to TRY to remember how their names came about. :)

So...will there be like an epilogue and then the new story will go from there? Loved how this one progressed from the first. :)



Author's Response:

lol*snort* CRS, I like that:)

Ok, so here's the thing with the names. Whitley was named after Jasper's family name, Whitlock. Mackenzie was named after Alice's family name, McCarty. Make sense???

There are two more chapters before I start the third story.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

*Standing Ovation* ;)

Whew! Yay! Bravo!

Congrats to Jasper! And oh my gosh, you'd think Seth and Tanya would've learned their lesson the first time! LOL! Enjoyed their first outtake, so I can only imagine this one! *snicker*

Fabulous, butterflybetty!! :D



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, hon:) I apprecuite:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

LOL, yep that was definitely full of lemony goodness!! Thanks so much for writing such a loving story. I can't wait for the third installment in the series, I'm sure it'll be great! :D

Loved it! Bravo!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) The third one should be up very soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle and Esme are the foundation of the Cullen Coven.  However, this love story started as a tragedy for Esme -- a loveless marriage, the death of her baby and finally an attempt at suicide.  This story traces how Carlisle and Esme eventually find each other and fall in love.  It weaves together Carlisle's and Esme's bio facts provided to Twilight Lexicon by Stephenie Meyer with some original ideas. Canon! Rated R for later lemon content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Carlisle/Esme
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49807 Read Count: 3966
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Honeymoon, Part I

They are so adorable! So SWEEET....

This first half of the honeymoon was great! Can't wait for the update!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Father and Son

Loving the first two chapters! You're doing a great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  My goal is to update weekly.  Action will pick up very soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Resurrection

Very sweet and endearing. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for leaving a comment!  I am actually meeting some of my Twi-friends that I have met online this weekend, but I hope to get the next chapter up anyway!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Transformation

Wow!! This was very well done! Kudos!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Secrets

This was a great chapter! Very well written! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Chase

Great chapter, including the cliffie!! Had a feeling the bad abusing hubby would return! Bad thing is, Esme probably has no idea who he is given her lack of memory of her former human self. Carlisle needs to fess up his feelings and save her! (again, ;) )

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Decisions

Poor Esme, good thing Carlisle showed and calmed her down. I kept expecting Edward to be the one to help her. She is not a murderer and I'm glad Charles' death happened the way it did.

I hope she doesn't make it far before she realizes that she doesn't need to run in the first place...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the comments and rating!  I finally made it to that 5th cup (yeah!).  Esme is not gone for long, but I just couldn't help but think how confusing that first newborn year had to be with all those instincts colliding with logic. 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Homecoming

I love how she rained on that nurse's parade! LOL! Scared her to death I'm sure! ROFL!

And yes, Halo fits in quite nicely, I agree. Great chapter!

And I like how Edward told Carlisle that his feelings for Esme was love, and that he'd rather stay a bachelor! LOL! He certainly didn't realize what he was saying or how long he would be single.

Funny Carlisle thought Esme could have been an uncontrollable murderer roaming free, I'd like to read what he thought of Rosalie's rampage after she turned!! LOL!!



Author's Response:

I have to laugh -- you liked the chapter for all the reasons I liked it.  I just can't listen to Halo and not think of them!  Sad, I know.  I think you will like Edward in this story.  He's adorable.

Also, you blew me away with this comment:  I'd like to read what he thought of Rosalie's rampage after she turned!!  Another Twi author and I are writing the story of Rose's rampage -- with all the murderous details. 

I really am excited about the next chapter.  I hope you enjoy it too.  Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Leap of Faith

What a beautiful chapter. So touching he did that for Benjamin. For Esme.

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your continued reading and reviewing of this story!  We see the Carlisle we love in this chapter -- but the flaws we don't often see are there too.  Again, thank you!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Plans, Prayers and Promises

Wow, that was amazing!! Bravo! Great wedding! I loved the vows, they were so perfect!

Esme and Edward sharing that moment together at the piano was cute, too. :)

What's Edward going to do while they're on their honeymoon? Can't wait to find out where they're going, too!



Author's Response:

Thank you for being such a kind and consistent reviewer.  I just loved this chapter.  Edward has been so fun to write without all his angst!!  Hope you enjoy the honeymoon -- it's got a bit of lemon zest.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Honeymoon, Part II

Wow, that was really amazing!! Great job!

I loved reading about the animalistic, needy side of Carlisle that Esme experienced in the tub. So sexy! ;) I loved reading her description of the night and then the next morning. Great writing! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Journey

Bravo, I loved it!! Way to go! Really creative with the way that Carlisle got the island, too. And also that Esme is the one who come up with the Cullen Coat of Arms.

Congratulations on a great story!! Thank you for sharing it, it was a pleasure to read. :)  I'll definitely check out the 'Through Their Eyes' series! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  You have been a wonderful reviewer and supporter of this story and I deeply appreciate that.  Through Their Eyes is very emotional -- but all end happy -- except Esme's New Moon.

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 572]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 132494
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yay!! So glad they survived, now I have to wait to hear of their recovery. Rosalie's pov was nice, thanks for writing it. Can't wait to read Alice's next!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OME!!!!

NO!!!! That can't be the end!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

*sniff*

Thanks for Alice's pov. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awww!!! This was so sweet!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww!!! Super, super, super!!! So sweet! :D Loved the flashbacks!! Such a nice touch!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Whoa!! OME!! Dang cliffie!! LOL ;)

Loved the flashbacks, they were so endearing to each other from the beginning. <3



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awesome!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Bella, the nightmares are so scary!! And poor Edward feeling so helpless.

Love Emmett!! :D



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awww, I liked the little 'Welcome Home' party!

Hee hee, Emmett love...sigh...

 

Hopefully Bella sleeps soundly in Edward's arms her first night home. What was that in a previous chapter that Jake wasn't the first one to stalk her? Will this part of the story be revealed at a later time then, like Jake's trial? It'd be funny if Jake was made someone's bitch in prison! LMAO ;)

 

Keep up the great work, hun! Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Jake is the only peson to have stalked her, but this wasn't the first time he attacked her.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Three cheers for Sir Edward!! LOL

So glad they had a heart to heart. It can make all the difference if people just talk to each other! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awww...

Emmett would never have acted like that on purpose, particularly if the behavior reminded Bella of Jacob. Emmett should have had more tact. I know he loves to have fun, but he took it too far this time. :(

I was kinda hoping that Edward would've proposed to Bella since it was New Year's Eve...too cliche I guess. LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great job I think with no courtroom experience. :)

And I do LOVE that sexy banner by mkystich!! Kellan looks mighty fine!!

 



Author's Response:

Doesn't he? Nothing sexier than a man dressed like that!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow, I need to take a deep breath now.

Damn that was intense!!

Bravo!

 

(loved having it in Em's pov, btw. ;) )



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I thought it would be nice to tell it from a different POV

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow!! You really killed him! And Billy too! OMFG!!

 

Awesome!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, amazing!! And yes, I did enjoy Charlie's pov. Thanks for that. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

OHHHH hooo OOOOHHHH haaaaa, boy oh boy...Jessica!! Geez!! First Jacob, and now Jessica?? I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope Bella doesn't cause too big of a scene, LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

How fun! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Good for Bella!! Nice chappie!

Um...it's almost V-Day. Any chance of Edward proposing?? Hmm?

;)



Author's Response:

lol, Thank you:) The next chapter is about V-day....

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

So so beautiful! I loved the interaction with the little girl and the widowed woman while they were on their date. Very nice touch.

I was hoping for a proposal on top of the Empire State Building but it didn't happen. When they got to Rockefeller Center I thought, 'This is it!' And it didn't happen. And then the romantic ambiance of the hotel room...and again NO. AARGH!! LOL ;)

Just love this story too much!! *sigh*



Author's Response:

lol, sorry to keep teasing:) I promise you will love the real propasal so much more!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OH SHIT!! Geeez, poor Rose!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

How I love Emmett!!!! *swoon*

Totally surprised that B&E aren't first, but oh well!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks:) I think you are going to enjoy the rest of this story:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

LMAO!!!!

Perfect!!

No wonder Renee was giddy, ROFL!!

Totally loved Em's POV again, too! Awesome!



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

That makes perfect sense why now! Poor Alice.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Awww! Loved it! I'm speechless!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

YAY!!!! That was great!!!

Go Charlie and Renee gettin it on in the kitchen! LOL!



Author's Response:

lol, THanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!!

YEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! I was waiting for a long time for the proposal!!!!! Sneaky Edward!! Loved it!! Hope those people weren't home, LOL!

And I loved the part with Sam and Emily, and then with Mr. Greene! LOL! That was cute!

 

Hold on...with all three couples proposing at the same time(?), will there be a triple wedding??? LOL, getting ahead of myself!

 

 



Author's Response:

Perhaps ;) Guess you'll just have to wait and see ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

*jumps up and down like Tigger*

Emmett is sooooo adorable all nervous!!! LOL!

*sigh*

This was a most excellent proposal. Better than having a camera on them in their seats while he proposed--to actually go out on the field???!!! WOW!!

So they could prob get married there, too. That'd be neat! I've seen couples get married at ballparks, but don't know if the Yanks do it.

So awesome!!! I love it!! I bow to you, oh great one. LOL ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow, what a cute little magical place that must've been! Jasper did great! Just what Alice needed!

So cute!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

YAY!!!! What a great finale!! The lemons were so hott! Damn, I wish I was Rosie, LOL! ;)

Heck yeah, can't wait to begin reading the sequel!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Fracture by KatieJane4815 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27489
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Sign

Ha ha, I like the story so far! Jasper was funny at the party, and then when she ran into Rose in the kitchen the morning after...funny!! Totally missed out on Emmett though.

Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

I never realized it, but you're right! Emmett isn't a huge part of this story right now, but he gets a bit more involved in the later chapters :)

 

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: We all Learn to Make Mistakes

Now that I'm all caught up, quite a bit has happened since my last review! Whew!

So glad that he didn't do anything with Jessica! But he could've handled the oogling over Tanya better, lol! Anyway, back to this chapter, I'm glad she's not regretting anything. :)  Funny that the gang came to check on them! LOL!

Please continue the story, I for one, think you're doing great!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Under My Skin

That's it?! That's ALL they had to say to each other after all that time???!!!

Summary:

Bella reflects on her life with Jasper. AH & NC-17.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3202 Read Count: 1001
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2010 Updated: 28 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OHHHHH!!

Oh my gosh!! I can't stop the tears as I'm trying to type!

This one-shot was beautiful! I didn't expect the turn of events there at the end. So sad!

 

Thank you for sharing it. :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Bella, Alice, and Rosalie Swan are looking for the person who shot their father, Charlie, and left him for dead. The Cullen boys, Edward, Emmett, and Jasper, help them but will the person they're after get to them first? AH&MA E/B,J/A,EM/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102591 Read Count: 39127
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ohhhh, poor Bella. It's not her fault. Even if she did have the phone charged up it still would've been in the dressing room!

Hey, the "wolf"'s hair was with the note?! Maybe they can get DNA off it!!

 



Author's Response:

The hair in the note wasn't from the wolf, it was Bella's. That is why Charlie assumed he had her :) Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool start, I look forward to reading more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, poor Bella!!!

That was such a sad but beautiful goodbye (Charlie and her in the meadow)...



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Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay, reunited! :) Too bad it's under such bad circumstances, though. Neat that Charlie appeared in Edward's dream too. Sounds like Ben will help Bella too!

Great chapter! :D



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Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay, Ben! LOL ;)

Love the lemon! Fast and hard, LOL!



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Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy shit!! What a cliffie!!!

Charlie's funeral service was nice. Thank you for so many details about it. :)

 



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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sweet lemons, and so hot!! ;)



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Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

HOT! ;)



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Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Woo hoo, I sense alot of action coming!!

It was almost too easy figuring out that it was Jacob, though. Maybe it still isn't! This is all an elaborate hoax into thinking that it's Jacob??

 

Seriously, the last three chapters were great. I love your work!



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Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Just keeps getting better!! Loved the lemon at the end, so beautifully written.



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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yay!! Awesomeness!

Great distraction, lol!

 

And yeah, Bella's last thought came to my mind immediately!



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Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Woo hoo!! Hey, baby, let's go to Vegas!! LOL

 

Poor Bella and those nightmares!! Geez!



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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Whoa!!!!!! Nooooo waaaaaay!!!!

*gotta breathe, hold on!*

 

WTF???? How in the hell did he know where they were?!? URGH!!! I hope Elvis is armed! LOL

Loved the wedding, that was cool! Damn, you're good at cliffies!! Of course it's a 10!!



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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WOWWW!!!

LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUV LUVED it!!!!

 

Totally took me by surprise, LOL! Jacob gay, too! Woot woot!

 

Okay, so the real killer and stalker is maybe BOTH new suspect instead of just one?!? ha ha



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lol, I love twists like this!!!!

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Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Awww, that was a sweet flashback!

Great chapter! Fast and hard, baby! ;)

Texas, huh? It's like a whole other country. LOL! :) What happend with Garrett??????

And um, with Jacob going with don't you think Billy and the rest of Forks would be suspecting him and probably be trying to find him?? Oh boy...

 



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Oh, I am from Texas!! I know it very well!!

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Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Alright!!! Awesome!!

Poor Jacob. Something's still up with Billy though. I mean, he was awful quick to turn his suspicions in to Bella. ???

Love how Garrett decided to go ahead and help! And bringing in his team to help? Sounds hott! ;)

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Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So maybe it's someone at the record company, I'll even suggest James as a suspect! LOL!

Love the chat Garrett and Bella had, she needed that. Sounds like she's burned out? I'd be sick of not seeing my man, too!

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

WHOA!!!!!!!!

Hello!!!! Baddie Uncle Phil, huh? What was so important about the date tho?

I loved her dream with her mom! :)



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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awwww, that was so touching. They love each other so much.

Bella needs to give Garrett and his team some kudos. So what if Phil is Special Forces? He's also psycho!! Doesn't mix well, and he'll slip up and they'll get him and Sam!



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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

:O

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Ohhhhh myyyyyy gaaaaaaaawd!!!!



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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh no, she's going after them on her own!!! NOOOOOOOO!!

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Whew!

But I think I would have called Gar and high-tailed it out of there!

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Okay, this could be a good thing...right? (them going to the funeral)

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Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

HOLY SH*T!!!!!!!!! Damn, what a cliffie!!

 



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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Poor Rosie and Emmett!! I wonder if she knew she was pregnant and just hadn't found the time to tell Em? If they did a full hysterectomy, then she def can't have kids in the future?? :'(

Kudos to E (& Gar) for beating the shit out of Alec!

Makes me wonder if Alec was somehow involved tho since he was a big enough of a distraction that a whole security team & a protective family dropped their guard long enough for Rose and Alice to get hurt and Bella abducted! I mean, they weren't that far away from the scuffle! WTF??

Hope this doesn't get darker...

 

 

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Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

SHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 



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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*tears*

Poor Bella!!! I was so hoping they would get to her in time!

*uncontrollable sobbing*

 

So awful...I hope he didn't tear her too bad...

and at least Sam was stupid enough to record it, priceless evidence right there

*sniff*

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ugh!!! The video recorder!!!! Hellooooooooo!!!

Geez, I hope somebody picked it up or something...

I hope nothing else was left behind and that Sam truly is dead. I hope they don't get into trouble for not waiting for the cops, cuz they did go in like vigilantes, lol!



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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Yeah, I figured Bella would try to take the blame for Sam's death if needed to protect Gar and his team. She doesn't want to let them down again.

So glad the girls are recovering together. They're strong together.



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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I can't imagine having to write this, but reading it is not easy either. I've never been abducted or tortured like Bella was...

So I understand the struggle, I don't want to reveal anything personally, but I get it. I get the dark side. Been there. And I got through it with help and love.

To this day, I visit that dark place in my mind from time to time. It has been fifteen years since it happened to me. I don't think it will ever completely go away.

 

 



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It's been twenty-two years for me andI still think about it nearly everyday. It does't get easier at all.

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Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

*deep breath*

Well, negotiations were short. ;)

Go Bella! LOL!

I hope Carlisle has a lawyer ready for them. I have a feeling they're not done fighting for some time off yet.



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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Awww, what a nice surprise!!

I hope she talks to them. :)

 

Good thing that's all Edward got out of that, LOL! She might be dainty, but she's got spunk! Glad it wasn't broken :)

 

I think the trip to Italy and Scotland would do them a world of good!! :D



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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'm so glad she got to talk to them a little while before all those tears, but it had to be of some comfort to know that they do not blame her. No one should.

That was a nice touch at the end, with Jacob.

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Whew, what a whirlwind this chapter was! But so full of hope and coping at the end.

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

That was so goood...About time Kate released some words of wisdom, lol.

The last sentence says it all...

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

*deep breath, sigh*

They did it!! They're actually on their way to Italy!!

I'm so happy for the girls, it was indeed a huge step for them as well.

 

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

timidvampire was right!! The journal was great! Sounds like the trip was way too short, though.

I really love this story and no matter how it ends, I'm just thankful to have read it and share my feelings about it. I know it has been hard to write at times, but from the bottom of my heart, butterflybetty, THANK YOU.

 

(That being said, I'd love for E&B to buy that vineyard in Italy if they don't end up forming their own record label, RevCheney Records, lol! Italy is their place of zen, so they def need to move there. ;) Just my 2 cents. ;) ) LOL!

hee hee

 



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Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

YAY!!! *clapping*

How awesome!! =D  So glad they're getting married again, thank you, thank you very much ;)  LOL!!

Wait...that wasn't THE END yet, right??



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Thanks! And no, there are two more chapters and an epi  ;)

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Wow, just amazing!!

Congratulations to Seth and Jacob! Woot Woot!!

And HUGE CONGRATS to B & E, ;)

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

*Happy tears*

So beautiful!! I'm at a loss for words. Truly.