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Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211604
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Ive see this story a couple of times but never stopped to read it. I finally game it a shot yesturday and I totally fell in luv w it. It's make me laught, mad, cry, and very happy I times. Great story can't wait to read more :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

I luv the idea of e moving to Seattle I stead of b & j to Chicago more... Can't wait to read more :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Loved it it's a really cute story Swan-Cullen sound good for the last name. Cant wait to read more :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

So sad to know it's over but it was a great story can't wait to read your next project

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

Loved had a good laught

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

God love how u guys keep me all exited after every chapter just started reading this story today. Love it ... Now all I need is for ang to disappear n for E n B to be together :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for reviewing...xoxoox we love u too....Ari chapter should be done in the next couple of days...hope u like the rest <3 DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

OMG this is getting good.... Idea can ang have a car accident or something n just be gone from the story...lol or maybe I'll just leave the thinking to u

Author's Response:

LOL good idea! :) Ah yes it's just beginning. Lots more crazt stuff coming up! Thank you so much for you review! We appreciate your support.

 

 

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Ari & DLIR <3

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

LovEd it she sure needs to move out n have some b n e loving again

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268927
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great story so far :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Can't wait to read more...hope she can find a balance to have both families part of her life

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62156
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

  • Lol great chapter can't wait n see what Bella will do nxt to get back @ Edward 
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Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Chapter makes me nervous to think of what crazy James is capable of doing. Good way of keeping us in suspense I luv it. Can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG such a cute story I'm hooked.... Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Yay thank you for some great chapters. Love this story :-)

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

OMG classic that will teach him to keep Mona bear miserable. She will just take matters into her own hands. Loved it can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Awsome thanks for always making my day even better. The whole pregnancy hormonal side of her is great n funny. Can't wait to read more <3 it 

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

OMG this just keeps getting better by the chapter. Love it can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Got me there for a minute. Sad to see it almost finishe love every minute of it.

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 63: 63: Epilogue Pt. 1

Sniff sniff but luv it

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 64: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

Live every bit of this store. Sad to see it finished but happy for the great HEA. Would live to read more of you story's. Thanks for the great ride :-)