Reviews by Isabela
Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Reason Nine

I want to thank you for informing me that you posted on this site. I really missed your story and i've been wondering what could have happened to you. I'ts always enjoyable to read your story all over again, that's why I freaked out when you didn't update in a long time. Salamat kabayan. I'm proud of you, I think you're already good writing stories. Update again soon. I really want to know if Bella will miscarry or if the spotting she experienced was just a normal thing . Please, let her have a healthy pregnancy. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Don't worry about that, I've finished most of the chapters so I THINK that you won't experience anymore of the two-weeks pause or the five months scare.

jumarxie

Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Reason Twenty-four

Thanks so much for this chapter! I love it!! I'm glad that you made Bella go through her pregnancy without complications. More glad that she already knows who her secret admirer is. this is a happy chapter and Edward's so caring, one couldn't help but admire him, he just earned another pogi point.:) Just hope that she can deliver the baby safely. Update again soon please.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I actually had doubts with this one because I might have moved the time frame faster than usual. I may get to post the chapter within two days or three if I managed to submit it to rhapsody on time.

jumarxie

Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Reason Twenty-five

I love this chapter!! I'm so happy that Bella gave birth to twins and that she didn't suffer any complications. And Edward is a doting father and a caring husband. I wish you could write some Edward and Bella sweet moments. I just don't like the ending because there is danger looming. Please make the family safe .Is the caller Tanya ? You can name the twins Alexandria and Andre. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Reason Twenty-Six

Please, don't let that psycho hurt the babies and the rest of Edward and Bella's family.Selene seemed to love Bella like she's her real mom. I think it's Tanya and she might be in cahoots with James. Thanks for updating , love this so much.the twins names are appropriate for them . 



Author's Response:

I won't let the psycho hurt them... much. Well, I'll see what I can do.

Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Reason Twenty-seven

I really thought that Tanya is up to something bad. Why didn't the security see the altercation in their monitor? I hope Selene and Edward ,if they fall, will just fall in the pool. Bella should have said she still loves him when she had the chance.Just make them safe please and Tanya be caught and thrown to jail including her accomplice James. 

I hope that they get to have another baby .Thanks and I feel sad that the end of this story is coming.

Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Reason Twenty-eight

Thank you for making Edward and Selene safe. I'm happy that Bella finally told Edward that she still love him, her way of telling it was funny though. I hope you can prolong the story so that it won't have to end soon. Thanks and whatever happened to your other story where Bella is blind?



Author's Response:

I apologize for the prolonging part but I'm really running out of ideas for the ending part. Anyway, if you want to know what happened to the OTHER story, you can read my LONG AN for the epilogue...

 

Reviewer: Isabela Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

I'm quite sad that this story has to end. I love this story so much so please make an Edward POV. It would be nice to know what's been on his mind all through out their journey. 

I would love to read "No strings attached" but couldn't handle well that your Bella in this story is blind because of an accident. But I'll still read it because it's your story. Thanks .



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks. I was actually doubting myself whether I should make her blindness real or not (like she was pretending) but pretending makes it seem stupid (and the reason I thought of why she could be pretending seemed shallow as well. I mean, think about it. Why would she lie to the love of her life about being able to see?) and her disability would be an impact to the story- at least, that's what I think anyway. So I settled for it to be for real at the end.