Reviews by kawaiiloonie
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515261
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I loved this story. It made me cried, laugh and go all goey with love for our Bella & our Edwardone of my fav D/s stories i have ever read. Keep up your wonderful work!!!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995765
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Great story i live for your updates. This story has everything and very well written i like what you wirte about relationships how they their ups and downs but in the end it all breaks down on communication it's really important that they talk to each other.

You are a wonderful writter and this story is so very well written. So keep up you wonderful an exciting work

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner for Book 4

Breaking Dawn from Renesmee's Point of View. Starting just before Edward 'hears' her for the first time.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63938 Read Count: 3962
[Report This] Published: 10 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2010
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Dawn

Love the story. And very interesting since it is written from Nessie's point of view, but i do wish she would call Edward Daddy, i think it fits, but that's my oponion. I can't wait for your next story!!!

Keep writting these beautiful stories

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255165
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I loved this chapter, and can't wait to read more of this story. Anyway the develoment of bella's and edward's relationship so far is so amazing although sometimes it seem that they are going slowly actually she has made a great deal of progress specially with some of her fears. This story is so close to my heart. I always await your updates.

 

And finally i hope we get to read Bella's June Limits. So see you next update!!

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Beautiful chapter. And overall a beautiful story. I specially liked how the relationship of Edward and Bella is developing as far as it has.

She has florished in so many ways with him. I just hope their trip to Forks goes without a hitch, but i would like for Edward to meet the douche and kick his ass, but at the same time he isn't worth Edward's time.

Anyway I just wanted to say to you that I love this story so much that i have re-read it like 6 times allready.

I can't wait for you to post the next chapter.



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

This is one of the most amazing stories i have read. It has a little bit of everything. And i can't wait to see what's next... I hope you finish this story. Keep on writing =)



Author's Response:

Pinky swear, if you keep reading .. I will finish the story .... :)

Thank you for reading, here is your teaser.

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Sorry to write again my review but somehow i got logged out:

The plot thickens... We probably will read more about Heather in upcoming chapters or at least that's what my imagination is telling me. And the suspense is killing me to find out who was the intruder. I have to say this is one of my all time fanfic favs. So thanks for updating and keeping up and running. Can't wait to read more.

 

And i want to add that I hope that with our reviews you keep giving us your wonderful story. So keep true to your self.



Author's Response:

No worries ....thanks again for reading ....

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

I can't believe we are allready reading chapter 60. I really enjoy your story. I keep re-reading it. I can't believe Edward didn't punched the asshole but i guess all in due time and they are far better ways of getting justice after the hell he put Bella through.

Well i hope you keep dazzling aand charming us with your beautiful story.

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Amazing Chapter. And don't worry of how long is the trip to Forks, it gives an insight to Bella's mind in those dark days of abuse and Edward has a little bit of more information on the person that Bella was and somehow still is.

Anyhow loved this chappy and well i really love the story.

Greetings

kawaiiloonie

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I can trully say this chapter was worth the wait, i almost wish Bella would of done more damage, but well life is like a merrygoround, eventually he will get his just desserts. It's wonderful to see how much their relationship has grown, and how well Edward knows how Bella's mind works. I'm so waiting for Bella to answer the question Edward asked.

So wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ...

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Great Chapter, I specialy liked that Edward and Leah got to talk, maybe now Leah understands a little bit more about the relationship btw her sister Bella and Edward. Lol and Leah is about to pop.

I did catch that Edward didn't stop when Bella begged him to stop, but i did understand that she didn't 'Red'. Anyway for those who like me don't know alot of the BDSM lifestyle we learn a little more with this story.

Well the wait for this chapter was so worth it; and as someone said "Good things are worth waiting for" , i can't wait for what's next in the Forks Interlude, lol, my own nickname for the chapters that take place in Forks. And as for the movie can't wait to see it, as soon as it hit theaters around where i live i'll probably be among the first to go see it. And the book well is on my to read list. Catch you hopefully soon.

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Well i certainly can say i'm not an Edward hater. I'm a firm believer that everything happens for a reason, and besides our little Bells is growing both mentally, as well as her relationship with Edward. The good thing is that Edward knows how her mind works thus this hard lesson. But we must despair after our Bella deals with this new development they will grow even more as a couple and their relationship will only get stronger. So amazing chapter, amazing story, amazing character & amazing author. What more can i say, except can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and i wanter to thank you for this wonderful story that you are sharing with us.

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

I'm betting on B... lol anyway excellent chapter and the OT a great complement to this chappy. And Esme altough she comes a little snobby she absolutely gets Bella and all of her good traits. And thanks for the new chapter. 

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

louise. Glad to hear from you and sorry you had to go trough a difficult time for you and all those people who suffered because of hurricane Sandy. I know for most people it will be a long and ardorous reconstruction phase. the good thing is you are still here as do hope each and everyone of your loved ones are ok. See you next update!

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Excelent Chapter. Of those who think is a little long well, I can get that but still is so wonderfull to read and imagine  how the relationship between Edward and Bella develop I haven enjoyed every one of the chapters and I wait impetiently for the next update. So thank you so much for updating! See you next update

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Wonderful story. It has made me laugh and cry and well is very romantic.

So excelent job and hope you keep gifting us with your beatiful work.



Author's Response:

absolutely..next chap is almost finished.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Time Warps & Slow Motion

Love this story. I'm sad that is almost finishedm, but at the same time i can't wait to read the ending, is good to know there will be a sequal. catch you next time.



Author's Response:

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59281
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well, excelent chapter, thank you for updating and well hope that everything turns well with your mum and dad, an for you too. Keep the faith and see you next update :)

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OMG!!! once i found this story couldn't put it down until I read the last chapter. Wonderful story you are such a wonerful author thank you so much for sharing this story with us. Can't wai or the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for such a sweet review! I hope to be updating every Thursday as long as my schedule allows. :)

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I cried with the last two chapters...It's sad but true what Edward said you don't really know what kind of depravities hide the people that live around us. Enough with the heavy stuff. I do hope the villians of your story pay very dearly for what they did to Wisp... anyway great chapter loved it can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This one tender chapter in it's one way I wish we could know what is going on inside Wisp's head I can only imagine. Thank you so much for updating. I love your story so much that this update made my day. Again thank you so much and can't wait for what happens next.

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank you so much for updating. Ireally apreciate it that you updated today. It gave us another piece of the puzzle and another duche that hurt our little Wisp. Anyway great chapter it made me wanna cry when she said ""Bad doctor Gerandy"