Reviews by bb120
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Outtake Two ~ Wedding



Author's Response:

thank you

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bb120 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Diversion: Jacob's POV

WOW ! ... totally loved this storyyy ! ... IT'S AWSOMEEE !!! :D

Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89650
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! OH GOD! 

OMG! i just hope that she doesn't change! plz! I was going PERFECT between them!! PLZ! That nothing changes!!! GOD! plz! Let him get the venom out and don't let Emmet and Rose smell it!! PLZ!! GOD! It was going PERFECT!

 

btw: LOVE THIS STORYY!!! OMG! LOVED IT!!!!!

 



Author's Response: OMG *hugs* this has to be the most enthusiastic response I have ever gotten! *giggle* Thank you so much. I'm going to reward you with a couple more chapters! xoxoooxox M & J

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I FUCKING LOVED THIS STORY!

 

since i started reading this story i started to like Bella & Jasper stories and let me tell you those are some of the best stories i've ever read!!

 

 

FUCKING LOVED IT! and i really hope to see some outtakes! :D

 

 

 

 

 

LOVED IT! and i'm really sad that it ended but everything comes to an end even the greates things!!



Author's Response:

*giggles* I'm so glad you LOVED IT! Thank you for the wonderful review and if i can change someone over to Team Jasper *blows on nails and shines them on my shirt* my work here is done. But yep keep me on author alert and something may come up :)

 

Thanks for the review!

xoxooxoxoxo

Mynxi & Jasper

 

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

DAMN girl!

i was hoping that you would update soon!

 

i fucking loved it! and can't wait for next chap! maybe they don't have sex! that was why Peter told him to trust him! MAYBE! i wish she could get a little better!!



Author's Response:

LOL... I am sorry it's taken me so long to say Thanks for the review! I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I just updated so I hope you'll like the newest chapter ;)

And don't worry she's getting better :)

thanks again!

xoxoxoxo
M & J

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

why the hell did Peter punched Jasper? and what the hell is happening?! FUCK! i wanna knoww!!! :D

GREAT chap.... LOVED IT!



Author's Response:

*smiles* I'm glad you loved it and I hope all will be answered in future chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

xoxoxoxo
M & J

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! :D

really can't wait for next chapp!! :D



Author's Response:

It might be cheesey if I say...I love love love love that you loved it :) But it's true. Next chapter coming soon at the end of the week :)

 

Thanks for the review!

xoxoxoxo
M & J

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

  ********

  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

fd


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: The Final Epilogue

LOVED IT! I'm anout to cryy! It was perfect...LOVE IT!! ♥



Author's Response:

Oh...thank you!  That is such a lovely compliment...

Thanks for reading, bb120!

Kathie

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106330
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

omg ! ... i love tis storyy ! ... it's amazingg ! :D

Forgetting the Past by ECullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

Bella and Jasper lived in the same foster home until his father found him. Bella is sent into Witness Protection and meets back up with Jasper after seven years. Will she fall for him again? Future Lemons. Adult content.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54795 Read Count: 6105
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2010 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

oh my !! .... that was unexpected !! .... can't wait for the next chap !!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42786
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Regret

they're irina and tanya?!!! :o

never thought that they would be neurosurgeons!

 

GOD! what will happen next! CAN'T WAIT!!!



Author's Response:

yes!!!  we'll find out more drama and info next chapter!!  thanks for reading and reviewing!  ;)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Emotions

i hope that he doesn't have another seizure! ... i imagine them saying i love you right before he enters surgery!! ohhh... jamees! i almost forgot about hiim! :o .. what the hell he is up to?



Author's Response:

seizures are a possibility as long as the tumor remains intact.  and the ILYs are coming soon.  james is out there.  more on him next chapter.  thanks for the review!! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134479
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

oh fuck!!

i feel like something bad is going to happend!!

 

 

loved itt!!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

loved itt!!! :D

i would be AWSOME if Edward got overprotective of Bella and says a couple of things to the bitches!! I WOULD BE TOOOTAALLLYYY AWSOMEE!! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

ARGH!! i'm starting to hate nolan and corrine!! ARGH! :@

 

i just want some BIG drama between them and bella!!! now THAT would be awsome! but like some REALLY BIG drama! in which bella let it ALL out and say EVERYTHING she wants to tell them!! THAT would be cooll!!! :D



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

love it! FINALLY Bella let go of some of her anger or whatever!!

 

LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

FUCK! i've waited a lot for this chapter! GOD!

loved it! I really hope they didn't! and god can't Edward and Bella ever get a chance?! DAMN! i was a reaaly good prank if you ask mee!

 

but i loved it anyways!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79426
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15


I LOVED IIITTTT !!! :DD

An Eternity to Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Best friends at 5, in love at 15, ready to marry at 17. Edward and Bella were destined for forever. In 1918, tragedy fell upon the couple, ripping them apart. A very different Edward and Bella meet again years later and this time…eternity can be theirs.

This is an AU fic, loosely following the book with my own personal flair.

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This awesome banner made by the awesome DivineInspiration


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 150252 Read Count: 45787
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2014
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

love it! ... can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Much love - D

Until next time...here's a peek at the next chapter to be posted later today:

In the six years we'd been together, I'd never seen Carlisle so happy. Finally finding love had changed him completely and he was a whole new man. He actually reminded me of myself years ago when I was with Bella. She simply brought out the best in me and it was exactly what Esme did for Carlisle.

They could barely contain their love for each other so, after years of posing as husband and wife, they made the decision to make their relationship official. As they readied themselves to take this step together, Esme pulled me aside for a quick word.

"My dear Edward, for years you've played the role of brother to us and I have been proud to accept you in that role, but I want something more." She gripped my hand tightly as she spoke.

"Esme, you've brought so much happiness to Carlisle's life and I am grateful to you for making him the man he is today. So please, ask for anything you wish."

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh my goood ! ... really can't wait to see what happens nextt ! :P



Author's Response:

It always makes me happy to hear that you like where I'm taking these two. Their story is definitely just beginning. So I hope you continue to like the paths they take to get back to each other. Thanks for the review, darlin. I really appreciate it. Much love to you - D

Until next time...let's sneak a peek at Bella's life:

"Bella." Lizzy's voice and touch startled me.

I lifted my head to see her kneeling in front of me. She handed me the handkerchief I always kept in my bag. Edward's handkerchief. It added further guilt to rest upon my heart.

"Are you okay?" she whispered.

I shook my head. "I can't stop thinking about him."

"Me either." She hugged me. "It's hard enough for me to handle. I can't imagine what you must be going through. You two cared about each other so much."

I pulled away. "What?"

"The two of you really had something good, but me and Johnny will make sure to get you through this."

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56323
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: Forever Young

OMG ! ... i totally loveed it ! ... this chap and the whole story !! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you liked the story. :) 

Sandra

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Regrets & Decisions

omgg! ... i seriously can not wait for thre next chapter! if you can update soon i might owe you my life :)



Author's Response:

OOH will have to see what I can do then! I am beta dependant the coming weeks chapter has not been done yet. Hope you survive the week!

Summary:

A drabble fic. Remember when life was simple. Just you and me, a smile and a laugh. Back before life went to hell, and my heart shriveled up, dying a slow painful death. The story of Edward and Bella.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13649 Read Count: 18451
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

oh my ! .. it's heartbreaking !! :(

 

i feel for him ! ... it's tough the first everything without a loved one ! :(

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

omg ! .... what does that mean ?! ... OMG! .... can't wait for the next chap ! ... :D

Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OMG ! ... that's tough ! ... can't wait for the next chapter ! :D

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

Oh my! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! 

Love where this is going and hope you can update soon!

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: You Own Me

Good chapter ... I just wish I could see inside Marcus head and know what is he thinking believing Alec like that when he knew that Aro planed leaving everything to Edward! It just doesn't add up.

Summary:

Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

When the worst thing imaginable happens, every little girl just wants her daddy and Jade was no different. The difference between Jade and other little girls is that her daddy won’t just make everything all better, but will paint the world in blood while he’s at it. 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/OC
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Family, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6034 Read Count: 2721
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2013
Reviewer: bb120 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't wait to see more of this particular story!!!