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Dying To Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

FBI coroner Masen, tries to find evidence to stop the Necromance Killer. With the newest ‘victim’ really alive, will her information help him catch the killer? One-shot for Halloween. Joint collaboration of: Weekitty and TeamAllTwilight.

The wonderful banner is SoapyMayhem Fanfiction.  You can find her on facebook under that name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16554 Read Count: 3369
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot For Halloween: Dying To Love

I really enjoyed your story.  Thank you so much for sharing this with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and I are very proud of this oneshot and how it turned out.  Watch for our up coming multi chapter story that will start within the next couple of months.  We just started out outline for it and it should be ready to roll by the first of the year.  we will also be posting a revised and beta'd copy of Nikkys story I am helping her with called Year of Hell.  I have written two stories for the fan fiction called My Sisters 3 and A Sub Search both are completed and on here as well under the author name of TeamAllTwilight.  I am also co-writing another story with another author called Lipstick Kisses and Inked Virtuoso, the author name for that story is JessAndTAT.  Thank you from the bottom of our hearts, Kasi (& Nikky).

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Recovery

Thanks for the update!  Have fun on your trip!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

MADE BY: LUNARECLIPSE1

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MADE BY: MINA R.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Bella.  That has got to be the worst part of it all.  All of these people need to have therapy and find people outside of their little circle.  Whoa!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I really enjoyed your story and all the humor!  It was a very creative story line and I could totally picture a television show about all of them!  Thank you for sharing this with us.  I would love the alternate ending!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Too cute.  I love that last line!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh shit.  This is bad.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

The sister not telling her is really bad, but Edward should have told her before now.  This is bad!  I can't wait to see what happens next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145696
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am sorry that this is my first review, but I have just read all 13 chapters and am depressed that I can't hit next after this big bomb that you dropped.  I was thinking it might be a plane crash or problem but it sounds like something else. 

I am enjoying your story even though I haven't read the books.  I only read the ff version of this so I am trying to get used to all of their names.  Thank you for sharing this with us and please don't keep us hanging for too long!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

If you still have not read Fifty Shades of Grey, go directly to your book store, library or online seller and get a copy. You might as well get all 3 books, because  you will kick yourself at the end of book I if you don't have book II in hand. E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh gosh...how scary!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad that things are better and I can't wait to see what you have planned for us next.  Thanks!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I really enjoyed it.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Oh, no. I thank you. 

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Very nice!



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Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I enjoyed it!



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Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh, those little ears!  I enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving the review. Amazing what they hear, isn't it.

Glimpses by Shahula Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
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Glimpse- noun: A very brief, passing look, sight, or view. "These are the snapshots of marriage, stopped in places."-Anne Sexton


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9448 Read Count: 4398
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- High

I am just starting your story and am enjoying it.  You wrote so many incredible lines that I could definitely picture them on this date!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Forever

So beautiful!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Secrets

So sweet!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Airwaves

Big old tears streaming down my face!  So good.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Time

I am a crying mess.  Thank you for sharing this with us.  I was truly moved by your beautiful words.  You are very talented!



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Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138685
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

It said that I could hit next but there isn't anything there.  

I was a little worried that Ana seemed to be holding her emotions in and I was getting a little concerned.  I guess that she doesn't feel like she can totally lose it like she needs to because of concern about how Christian would handle it.  I just can't imagine the pain and heartache that they are both experiencing.  

I have a question - maybe I read it wrong, but was Ana stuck with a needle before she was pushed.   I will go back and read it after my tears stop but that keeps lingering in my mind.  

Thanks for the update.  I am surprised people were so hard on you.  You just never know around this fandom.  Hang in there!

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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591748
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I am glad that Ana told Christian.  These two are learning!  I am so glad that Ana is going to check on the little boy.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh no...don't stop there.  I can't wait to see what happens with this conversation.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Written and on it's way Fri or Sat.

thanks

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Poor little Tommy.  I feel so bad for both of them.  I hope that Lorna takes them up on their offer but I have a bad feeling about what might come.  

Thanks for the update.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Ana.  It is all becoming too much.  That headstone was so sweet.  

I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

A lot on the way.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Enjoyed it.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

No, thank you for reading and leaving a comment.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I enjoyed it.  Someone needs to sit Christian down & explain Ana's side of this really slowly so that he gets it.  I understand his sadness about it, but he didn't even think about how Ana would feel.  That is not good.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment. Poor Christian. To be so smart he really can be dimwitted. He tries though.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I have enjoyed their time in Houston.  I live in Houston and have been in that Hotel and love a lot of the furnishings.  Thanks for the update and I look forward to more.  



Author's Response:

There is always more.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I feel really bad for Ana.  His intentions were good, but he should have thought about what he was doing.  He deserves the cold shoulder on this one.  

I can't wait to find out what happened to her ring.  

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

He had his reasons, but not really a good excuse for doing it. Answers on the way.

Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I enjoyed it.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking time to read and then leave a review.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  I love that Christian taught Teddy to dance.  He is adorable.

I can't wait to find out what is going on with Elliott. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

E

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

What a whopper of a cliff hanger!  I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.  Please let Ana get out of those cuffs!  

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thanks for the update.  I can't wait for more!  



Author's Response:

Thank you.

E

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I enjoyed it.  I was nervous about Ana meeting up with Virginia and I am glad that she wasn't taken off in a car against her will!  I have to admit that I was a little worried about it.  I feel so sorry for everyone - Christian, his mother, grandmother and father.  It is truly so tragic.

Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh my gosh.  I have so many questions running through my head like I want to know if Paul is in on this.  This is not good!

I hate that you are having so many problems.  Are you posting anywhere else?  I will be glad to switch over if that helps.  Let me know.

Thanks and update soon!



Author's Response:

I think poor Paul is an innocent bystander. I just started having issues when I upgraded Norton. I am trying to get it worked out. Sometimes I can get in and sometimes I can't. I will keep posting here until the end and I appreciate that you are following this. Thank you.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I enjoyed it.  Thank you for the update.  I wish I had my own plane.  Oh well.  I will keep dreaming.

Have a wonderful holiday!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Well, I wish I was surprised by his reaction but I am not.  After all, he is a big hypocrite.  I understand that he feels that she betrayed his trust, but to throw out to her that he might leave and to treat her so coldly is just all kinds of screwed up. I hope that he takes some time to think about what Ana told him and that she did it because she loves him.  

I like that you had her stand up to him by calling out his stubborness and his refusal to accept that he might be wrong about his grandmother and mother. That would have to be a hard to accept for someone like him but I would be relieved to learn that my grandfather and father are two different people. 

One final thing, I hope Ana has finally realized that Christian sees and hears about everything so don't try and keep secrets from him.  He needs to learn to do the same.

Thanks for the fast update.  Please don't leave us hanging for too long.  

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Ana needed to understand that she crossed a line, but she sure didn't deserve this horrible treatment.  Christian is a shit.  I hope Ana gets sick on him too.  Just kidding.  

Thank you for the two chapters.  I am totally addicted and always want more!  

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

It was great hearing Christian talk so excitedly about his mother and father.  I loved it.  Thank goodness he made it home because I was just a little bit worried.  Thank you for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

E.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Teddy is adorable.  He notices everything about his dad so Christian needs to remember that.  Goodness.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I was wondering when Tommy was going to come back.  I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cahtexas Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

The good news for me is that I can see Ana & Christian getting custody of Tommy regardless of Lorna's decision.  I truly hope that Lorna will see this opportunity that Ana is offering as a blessing but I suspect that the drugs have too much of a hold on her.  I can't help thinking that if anyone could get through to Lorna it would be Christian.  He has lived that life and Lorna needs to see it from his and her son's point of view.  Christian would be very convincing.

I can't wait to see where you take us.  I am nervous that Lorna is going to bring someone horrible into their lives so that he can try and get money out of The Grey's.   I hope that is just my overactive imagination.  No matter what, I am so glad that little Tommy has them to look out for him.  Thanks!