Reviews by CrimsonRed-ink1792
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it.

I even got a little teary-eyed at the end of the epilogue. Happily ever after. *sigh*

I have read a few of your one-shots and plan on reading more. Happy Holidays. And happy typing!

CrimsonR

 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

And oh dear here I thought I was going to be upset that you were going to hold out on us and not have Edward wake up. Glad you didn't. ;)

On a funnier note, when Bella stood up to the nurse telling her "I am family. I am Mrs. Edward Cullen...." The only thing that was going through my mind was 'Stuff it bitch'. Please excuse my language, but I just had to. lol.

ANYWAY, can't wait for Domward to get back on his feet and behind the paddle. Happy typing!!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

You are so right - that's exactly what I was thinking!!! thanks so much for the review and he will get back on his feet soon, but not without some fun and games!!

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Wonderful! One of my favorite D/S stories. I can't wait to hear more from you. Your updates always leave a smile on my face when I see them in my inbox. I get excited and I have to remind myself to wait, so I have enough time to read the chapter in one sitting (and not in the morning when I check e-mail before class... lol)

 

Good luck and can't wait to read more!

 

Crimson

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123443
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later

Oh dear. I think I cried a little. lol.

 

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

I cried a lot - thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain

Such a wonderful cockblocking Christmas... :(

 

But it was still good nonetheless. You have promised there is some nice angry/wet making out in the near future, would there be any possiblity of some nice angry dry (or wet, since they are soaked) humping? As a special post Christmas present!?

Can't wait for the new chapter!! Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Amazing?

Welll I started reading your story today and I was hooked. Totally read all 7 chapters while burning an incedibly long list of CDs for my roommate. How I adore mulitasking. And being the fanfic addict that I am, reading is soooo much more amusing than watching the progress bar on iTunes.

And wow Edroar the lion. Love it. Hilarious. For some reason when ever Bella describes Edward, I think of the little orange cat, Toulouse, from the AristoCats when he's spitting and hissing at Tomas O'Malley. :D It makes me want to muss up is preeeety hair and say 'Who's a cu~te little kitty'. I'd probably get bitten for that... but it would be worth it!

Happy typing and looking forward to more!

CrimsonR

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389607
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I really love it so far! Keep going, keep going. You totally have me hooked! I would so love to see their reactions when their identities are revealed.

And as for this being your first BDSM story, there is only one word for Bella's dream: HOT!

CrimsonRed



Author's Response:

Wow... this type of encouragement means alot... I was really nervous about trying to write this type of story...Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it..


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Backstory, yay! It was very interesting to learn that Bella is very well off, because from the last chapter, Edward made it seem like he was the only one with something to lose. Now knowing that Bella is this kick-ass lawyer I just keep getting this sneaking suspicion that she is soo going to give Eddie a run for his money. Tee hee hee.

Looking forward to more!

CrimsonR

Oh and if Bella's dreams are this good can't wait for the real playtime. Happy writing!



Author's Response:

haha...glad you liked it... Dr. DomWard´s point of view is up next!!!! thanks for reviewing!!!


krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

If it was Edward who safe worded, good for him. I wouldnt want to hit that... lol.

So can we start a hug fund for Dr. Domward? The poor guy needs some lovin! His dream was awesomely naughty and sweet. Can't wait for them to meet already. Such cute star-crossed lovers... *Sigh*

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

haha... a hug fund... were do I donate... lmao.... he is a pretty sweet and spicy DomWard isn´t he..*winks*...Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

Alice is going to open a can of kinky dominant worms. lol. Wonderful chapter. Totally love the deviant Alice and the fact that Jakey got screwed over. How sad for him, but then again he doesn't deserve tears...

Soooo Dr. Domward next? :D

Happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

awwww domward loves his momma. too cu~te!! :D

and man that bitch... i can't believe he did anything with her. grosss. there's probably something alive up in there. nasty diseases and alll. i think i need the pepto now...

can't wait to see tanya get her comeuppance.

have a good holiday week and happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

*sighs dreamily while waving a very large fan* Alice... oh lovely Alice. Now we're getting some where. I do hope we'll get to visit Dr. Domward next chapter... I miss his... his... emo-ness. lol.

Well I can't wait til next time hopefully Alice will have all the stars aligned. She's not going to tell him its Bella though is she... Oh well all the more surprise for him. ;)

Two weeks and counting down... Happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

And so it begins.... Wonderful!

Bella and Rose, hot. Sneaky Alice, awesome. Depressed Domward, sad but I have the feeling that he'll be having nice play time after New Years.

I went to Spain my senior year in high school and was fun. It was only for like six days but still awesome. I soooo want to go back. For the food. ;D

Can't wait for more, happy typing and an early Merry Christmas!!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm gonna miss all the great food too!  It was truly and experience.  One I will always treasure.  Now I'm off to new California adventures!  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Well that was interesting. They definitly had some nice holiday fuckery on Christmas.

And Leah... Ewwww. LOL. But oh Seth, such a cu~tie!

All I have to say is that I am slightly upset that I did not get a disposable phone from Santa so I can talk to Sir... *sigh* Such a shame.

Hope you had a happy holiday and can't wait for more! Happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Lol!  Yeah Leah is a piece of work, and I've seen people like her many times over in life.  They always want something better, never being satisfied with what they have, but in the end only learn they had it all the time.  Let's hope that this baby will be her redeeming quality, and open her eyes to wonderful family she already has.  Yeah, Seth is just a sweetie, can't wait to see have a special outing with Bella and Edward.  I am sorry the phonecall didn't get in the chapter, but I'm not sorry for how the story is going.  The chapter would have gotten ridiculously long and I  wanted to really do it justice.  I do thank you for letting me know you were disappointed subtly!  Lol!  I promise as soon as I finish responding to reviews, the next chapter will be typed up; I'm going to do my best to get it to you no later than Sunday!  So I hope that earns me a little reprieve!  Lol!  Thanks for sticking with the story and taking the time to review!

Happy New Year!

Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

Well, I can't wait for Sir's next call either... *sigh* They are  so bad. Very bad. I have this sneaking feeling that the test scene is going to be fun... Tee hee hee.

And as for the cliffy with Tanya. EVIL. But I'll get over it I promise. I don't particularly like her that much, so I can wait for that. But Dr. Domward needs to hurry up and get his horny ass on a plane and back to WA.

I'll be waiting for more! Happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

Oh, why can't they just get it over with it already. They both like each other... *rolls eyes* Seriously. Both totally over dramatic.

Okay, all done with that now. Sorry. Had to rant. Can't wait til next time!

Happy typing!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Please pardon my French but, that shit was intense! Seriously.

I was eyeing the box of tissues on my desk near the end there. Poor Domward. Can I give him a hug? Better yet can he give me a hug? *wiggles eyebrows*

Haha. Well I hope you make it in one week for sure. I can't wait to see the happy couple get united... *sigh*

See ya next time. Happy typing!

CrimsonR

P.S. Totally share your sentiments on football. I had the game on to watch the commercials, but totally read fan fiction instead. Sooo much more entertaining!! 

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

It ended??? Sadface... LOL.

Wonderful. The world's two most subborn people are finally together. And leaving together too! Happyface!!! 

Can't to see the discussion that follows! Keep up the awesomeness.

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Wow the star crossed lovers finally get together and just about to get their rocks off when the bomb drops. Such a cruel way to end the chapter! *Wails loudly*

 

Great chapter in spite of the evil cliffy tho! Gotta love Domward and Little Eddie's conversations... Everybody needs a friend like that eh...? Haha.

See ya next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Lol! Glad you enjoyed it!  And of course, everybody needs a GOOD friend! *winks* Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Dun, dun,dun!

The nice, generous Dr. Domward grew some balls! Can't wait to see what little B has to say to that!

I totally would still be drooling after all that lovin. *shakes head* Such a silly couple.

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Closet by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

What happens when Edward and his date are caught at Make Out Point by Chief Swan? How will Chief Swan feel when it's his child in the car with Edward? Read and find out.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Emmett (slash)
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2926 Read Count: 1629
[Report This] Published: 09 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WELL, I thought it was funny because of course it sucks if the Chief of Police (aka your Dad) catches you in an intimate moment but wow. I was confused there for a moment at the "coming out of the closet" comment but the last sentence. THAT made me do a double take. And I'm still snickering as I type this review.

CrimsonR

Midnight Carnival by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2011
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderfully interesting. It reminded me just a little of the Cirque du Freak: The Vampire's Assistant. At least the part of having a circus full of the wierd and strange. ;)

Can wait to see how it all wraps up! Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I haven't read the book you mentioned, but I will reiterate that the Midnight Carnival came from Peter S. Beagle's The Last Unicorn.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Pleasure

Oooh how horrible to end it there after it got SOOOO good... :(

Can't wait to see what happens with Ms. Swan and Mr. Cullen!

Laters!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - The Parting

A little heartwrenching (maybe a tissue moment there for a second), but sooo sweet. I'm glad that she realized what she always wanted.

 

Merry Christmas and looking forward to a little bad boy. Or a big bad boy in Edward's case. ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

BS Banner

 

Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting so far can't wait to see how Edward plays into this.

 

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

Edward will fit in soon. Promise.

Thank you so much for reviewing. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

The ground around her was soft, softer than she remembered when she fell. Bella kept her eyes closed; if the animals that attacked were still around, she thought it was best if she played dead. After all, she had been passed out for who knows how long and she was still alive, lying still was her best bet.

She strained to listen, and when she didn't hear any noises, she opened her eyes. Bella gasped when it wasn't the open sky she saw but what appeared to be a roof of rock. Her surroundings were dark but not pitch black. It had been dusk when she ran from Ben, and the fact that it still was told her she hadn't been out long, or else it was days.  It hadn't felt like days.

She didn't have time to notice the small hole that was the only way in or out of the spacious cave or the fact that she was laying on a bed of moss, because a large snout came over her face and sniffed.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting. Not exactly what I was expecting, Edward associated with wolves, that is. I was justing thinking of a wild man. Is there a supernatural element in the story at all or are the Edward's pack just human like because that is the way that Bella perceives them?

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

There is no supernatural here, the pack has personality because Bella see's it that way.

 

 Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

This time he woke from her voice. He loosened the slack of his arm but didn’t let her go. Instead, he nuzzled her neck with his chin. His breathing became very heavy very fast, and before she knew it, Bella was flat on her back and Edward was on all fours above her.

He looked down at her with a dark lust in his eyes. His chest rose and fell with his breath and Bella found herself between a rock and a hard place, literally. She dug out the painful pebble from behind her back and tossed it off to the side.

She looked up to the man hovering over her and acknowledged to herself that he was a good looking man. She waited to see what he might do, and when he did nothing, she decided to try and get out from underneath him. She could tell from the look in his eyes what he wanted, but he seemed unsure about how to get it.

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awwww. Puppyward how cute. Can I have my own Edward puppy? Puppies are so sweet, I miss mine so much! My residence hall doesn't allow furry animals and petting my fish is out of the question...

All that aside, the chapter was great! So Bella's been missing for two days as the end of the chapter right? Because a confrontation between Ben and Edward would be VERY interesting. And I just have this sneaking suspicion that Edward's gonna get jealous at some of his pack because they'll be fighting over Bella's affection and attention... ;D

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

LOL, I know, I always think about girls who say...if only my dog were a man.

 

Thank you so much for your review, I appreciate every one. Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

“I won’t ever forget you,” she said to him, her eyes filling with tears. The words were strong and true, she knew that no matter where her life took her, there would never be anyone like Edward.

She turned to leave and felt him close behind. Wordlessly, she faced him and held up her hand. She took a few steps backwards, and once she was sure he would stay, she spun and walked into the woods. Needing to put a little distance between them, she broke into a light jog, and followed the path she knew led to the water.

Once she hit the bank, she slowed down, tears falling from her eyes. She reached up and smeared the wetness, and when she caught a movement out of the corner of her eye, she startled. The russet wolf walked up and sat down in front of her, looking at her sadly.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*huffs* Not cool. The cliffie. Michael... (No words for him 'cept Jerkward)

But they find each other again! Yay. Now all Bella needs is to go buy cabin in the woods and they'll all live happily ever after! (hope its not that simple)

Happy typing!

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

LOL, sorry about the cliffie, I can't help myself sometimes.

 

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter.

 

Here is a teaser.

Bella sat in a tiny room with what she assumed was a two way mirror on one wall, and a coffee machine on the other. The table was wide enough that when the police officers sat down on the other side one wouldn’t be able to reach them unless they stood up and leaned over.

She hadn’t seen Edward since they had carted him away. He had shouted and struggled, and if there hadn’t have been three cops there to hold him down, he would have easily made his way over to the panicked girl.  Bella held the Styrofoam cup of water in her hands, making indents on it with her fingernails.

“We need you to fill out some paperwork,” Detective Banner said.

“Uh, what kind of paperwork?” she asked.

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Teaser Forum

 

 

 

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Well that was sure a twist. I had the feeling that Roughie here might have been jaded by a woman but never would I have thought that there was a baby involved. Wow. Anywho, would it be incorrect of me to assume that there might be a little happy in store for us? Not that I don't like all the angst but happy is nice too... lol.

Looking forward to see Edward's reaction to 1) Bella's presence at the wedding and 2) his night in jail (he does have to spend the night right?).

CrimsonR

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm here! :)

Your story was in my to read list on FFn and when I came across it this morning in the most recent list on TWCS, I went over to FFn to see if this was the story was thinking of and low and behold it isn't on FFn anymore... So sad. But it's here so it's all good. ;)

Can't wait to find out how B got herself in this freaking rough relationship. Till next time and hopefully you'll have more luck over here. FFn has been horrible with deleting things lately. Just found out they suspended savage7289's account and I was so waiting to read her newest chapter of Unexpected Circumstances...

Happy typing!

CrimsonR

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Awww, nervous roughie? That's new... lol. And ooooh the evil cliffie... Not nice. Can't wait to see how this is going to play out.

 

Happy typing!

CrimsonR

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

I story like Gilmore Girls. Yay. That was my all time favorite show too! I was sad when they ended it after the 8th season. They totally could have done more...

 

I like so far, and I am interested how you fit all the characters into the town and how they all affect Bella's life. The next chapter will be a wonderful x-mas gift!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I bought all of the seasons of Gilmore Girls and I love them. There will be lots of funny, quirky characters and of course The Culllens.  Next chapter up soon (before Christmas!)