Reviews by twilightfan4ever09
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514876
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I love the chapter. u loved carlisle pov.  i cant wait to see whats going to happen next with the story.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

the chapter was awesome. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have it up soon.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

this is awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you have it up asap!!!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

you need to update very soon. i have to know what is going to happen.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

awesome chapter. it was short but i still liked it.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

i hate that you left it like that. i hope you update soon. i cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

im glad their safe and back together. i cant wait to see what happens to james now.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

i loved the chapter. the tourture on james sounds like what he diserves and more. :D:D im sad the story is about over.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

im sad the story is over. i wish it had continued.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625199
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

i just got in to the story and i finnished it in 3 days. i love it and i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you update soon.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

i hate the clifhanger. i hope the next chapter is up very soon or i will be upset.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

i loved the chapter. the end was suprising but not at the same time. i cant wait for the epilogue even though that will mean its over.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

i loved this story. im sad to see it end. you should do some outtakes of their future together.

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you update both stories soon. i cant wait or for the next chapter of the perfect wife.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story so far. I hope you continue it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 

I plan to post the next chapter in a few hours.

 

Chelle x

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this is great so far. i cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i love the chapter. i hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Updated just now.

 

 

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the chapter. i cant wait for tommorws update.



Author's Response:

Than you so much.

 

Updating shortly

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

this was awesome. i hope the next update is very soon.



Author's Response:

Next chapter will be up in a few hours, thanks for your review.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love the chapter!!! are you going to be updating on a daily basis?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

I have 20 chapters already written so I will be updating on a daily basis, I am constantly writing it so updates will be thick and fast.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

this was awesome. i cant wait for tommorw.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, update coming soon.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

this was awesome. cant wait for tommorw. i wish it was sooner.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, updating in a few hours.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

love the chatper. cant wait for tommorw.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thanks for your review. I have just updated

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

awesome chapter. i cant wait for tommorw.



Author's Response:

Thanks-glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

the past few chapters have been awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, updating tomorrow.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

awesome!!! i cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

AWESOME!!!!!! I cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, updating in a minute.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

this was awesome. i cant wait for tommorw.



Author's Response:

Thank you glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

love it!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you update sooner thatn tommorw.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Love the chapter. I can't wait forthe next

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Updating in a couple of days.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I hope to update later today.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

awesome chapter. it was perfect. i cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

It wont be long, an hour tops :)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i love the chapter. i just dont think this should be the end even if there is an epilogue. i can see more to the story than this.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

the epilogue was awesome. im sad that this is the end of the story. it woulde be awesome if you did future one-shots of it or did a sequel. i can see that this has more left to do.



Author's Response:

Future one shots are a definite possibility. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning

great story so far. i cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

i love the chapter. im looking forward to more of them.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon. im excited to see what is going to happen next.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Prove It

awesome. i cant wait for more.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Family Time Part I

love it. very good so far. i cant wait to see whats going to happen now.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Family Time Part II

love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have a chance to update sooner. i would love it if you were able to.

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161902
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i like this so far. i cant wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

it is tourture. you should make the chapters longer.



Author's Response:

They get longer as the stroy progresses. I promise:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

this is awesome but i wish it would pick up and have longer chapters already. im impaitient.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks. I know it's kind of slow right now but I promise that it will pick over the next couple chapters:)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks. I know it's kind of slow right now but I promise that it will pick over the next couple chapters:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have it up soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Should be up soon:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

this was awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Fall to Pieces

amazing chapter. cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

awesome chapter. i just wish it was longer and not just the 2povs. i cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

such an awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you have the next chapter up soon.



Author's Response:

thank you:) I will try to get eh next chapter up soon!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

loved the chapter. glad to see the story moving along.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. two updates in one day. im happy!



Author's Response:

lol, I'm glad you are happy:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

this was an awesome chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

awesome chapter. cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

awesome. i wish it didnt stop there.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

love the chapter. cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.



Author's Response:

Thank You:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up very soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

amazing chapter. i love that they are getting closer and closer.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

loved the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope they get together soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

awesome chapter. i wish you didnt leave it like that. i cant wait for the next chatper. i hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

I will, I promise!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

love the chapter. i wish you didnt stop there. i hope you update very soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

i loved it. i loved edwards last line about the art museum.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

this was awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter. im excited to see whats going to happen after this happening.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

AMAZING chapter. i cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

i loved the chapter. im excited to see where things go from here now that he is in jail.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

i loved the chapter. im excited to see where things go from here now that he is in jail.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

i loved the flashback. great chapter. i cant wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

awesome! i loved the prank. cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you have it up soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

i wish you didnt stop it like that. i hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

I will:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

i loved the ending of the chapter. i cant wait for the  next chapter. i hope its up soon and longer than the last couple,



Author's Response:

Thank:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

awesome! i loved th verbal beatdown. amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

loved the speach.



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

i wish you would have shown them at their wedding and not just stop there. i love what you had them doing with their lives. i wish you would have continued. its sad to see the story ended.



Author's Response:

I might still do their wedding:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i love your story so far. i cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i love the chapter, i loved how they said i love you. it was perfect for them.  i cant wait for the next chapter and hope its up soon.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i loved the chapter. i liked how you explained how much money he has. i cant wait for t the next chapter. i hope its up soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

the chapter is awesome. i have to agree it is one of my favorites so far.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

this was awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter. the ending was a suprise and i loved it. what was the phone call that she ignored?



Author's Response:

The ending surprised me as well! I'd love to fill you in about the phone call, but I can't give anything away!

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

i love the chapter. i think you should do an epilogue. i think it was mean to declare their love and walk away but i think it worked for the story.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom

love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope you update soon

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

wow! the ending was awesome. i loved it. i dont think it could have been any better.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later

i cant believe the story is over. i loved it. i loved how it ended even though i never wanted it to end.