Reviews by fallanydeeper
Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195462
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Oh my freaking God! How much do I love you right now? That's right, oddles and bundles. That. Is. How. Much!!

I have to say I guessed that Ms Swan (soon I hope to be Cullen) was up the duff from your A/N but oh how I loved her finding out for herself. I do love a preggers Bella for some reason (Even though I hate Bella). I especially like DaddyMobward that's always a great combination.

A little disappointed that there wasn't more gore in this chapter hehe but it was still amazing, less about the blood and guts and more about the mind games which can still be pretty freaking scary, I tell ya!

I'm hoping the next update will be like... tomorrow? Too soon? Ok, well I hope it's soon :D Cos I can't WAIT for Esme to spill the beans and for Edward to go all macho, psycho I-want-my-fiancee-back-you-sick-mother-fuckers on us!

Esme better not be informing Edward of the bun he has cooking in Bella's oven though lol I can totally picture his face if he just walked in on her during his gallant rescue, jaw dropping open as he sees his bubba for the first time. Anyway, enough of what I want. It's your story hehe and I know that I'll love it any which way but loose!

Kate, freaking awesome. I'm so pleased Bella has a bud on the inside and that she risked herself time and again to help Bella.

Esme, you gotta hate her really but also just love the crazy woman, just a little bit mind :D I'm glad she's pulled her head out of her ass and is realising that she never really lost her son but she may well do when he finds out the extent of her treachery.

Aro is a psychopath but then that's pretty canon really isn't it? LOL

And Demetri... I could just eat him up. Seriously, I LOVE that little maniac. I'd marry him in a heartbeat. It would probably be the last time my heart beat but I'd still do it. You gotta love the dark, dangerous guy who hears the voice of his 'brother' in his head. I hope we get to hear from Demetri and Felix again uber soon.

And I'm also hoping that Edward has to shed a little blood during his rescue. What can I say? I'm a drama slut and I love the mini heart fail that comes with the sexy boy being injured (just so long as it's not gravely)

Anywho, I'm gonna shut up now cos I could seriously talk the hind legs off of a donkey. Probably the longest review in the history of.. Well, long reviews!

Love ya, love 'Edward's Clan', love Demetri, loving this chapter.

Awesome

Keep it up

Oh and I really am shutting up now...

But first, I don't mind too much if Bella doesn't happen to make it to the end of this story, that what totally not upset me, not in the least.

Team Tyler's Van!!

Woo!

Ok, I'm going.

Love fallanydeeper



Author's Response:

LOL Dont you DARE shut up!!! I love your reviews and hearing your thoughts. LOL. You and Cinnamontwist (my bestie and lifepartner. lol) are such strange little lovlies for digging Demetri like you guys do, but don't doubt for a second that he doesnt love the attention. LOL I was amused to hear the term 'Team Tyler's Van' that one had me bloody laughing. Poor Bells, no one likes her much anymore.

Thanks so much for the review and I hope to have the next chappie out this time next week. Take care my lovely. :-)

Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Yay! You're back *dances* I missd you and because I'm silly, I couldn't find your twitter *facepalm* I know I had it...

Anyway, the long awaited penultimate chapter! YESSSSSSSSSSSSS. So amazing!

There was a little bit of everything, some of the Monster, some Edward, some Carlisle but do you know the best bit??

MY CRAZY DEMETRI!!!!

You have to love that kid. I cracked up laughing when Alec said "he's doing it again" hehe.

Holy fudge sticks on waffles, it was awesome and I'm looking forward to the last chapter, even though I want it to last for ever!

Well done babe x

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143641
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OMG! Firstly, I have just spent the last few days reading nothing but this story. I have shirked all other responsibilities! My inbox is over-crowded with updates to other stories. I haven't even entertained the idea of reading any of them until I was up to date with this.

Secondly, you had me at the first chapter. This is literary genius and I'm gunna pimp you out to all my friends like you've never been pimped before. I'm not a Bella fan at all but your Bella, your Bella I like. She's not the annoying damsel in distress, calling Edward to rescue her all the time. She's a strong, independent woman. Also you haven't written her as a fool like others do, running off to be brave and courageous, when in actuality, she's being a prat and putting herself at risk.

I adore your Edward. Sexy movie star, older, good looking, fuck hot in bed... Yeah, he's my perfect guy.

I love your chapter lengths too and bow down to your greatness. Each of your chapters must take a lot of time, energy, effort and patience. So thank you for any struggles you have with it to bring is this fantastic story.

I'm incredibly sorry that you didn't win any awards. If I had found this a little sooner I would have voted for you in a heartbeat. I hope you do better in the next one (there's always a next one).

Much love xx

@fallanydeeper

Summary:

Sequel to Here We Go Again. Bella, Edward, Carlisle, and the others are all back for a new case with the FBI. Will this be the case that breaks them all for good? AH, NC-17 for launguage, lemons, and violence.

BANNER


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95951 Read Count: 79390
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Firstly I would like to apologise for not reviewing sooner. I mostly read fiction on my iPhone and it doesn't like to review. (Trust me when I say that my phone and I have had several fights concerning this matter).

I first came across you when I read 'Here we go again' and I fell in love immediately. Such a perfect story and wonderously written. I love 'strong Bella' it is so nice to see her portrayed in this way, not having to be picked up off of the ground by Edward in every other paragraph.

I also really enjoy that they are all FBI agents and that it's not just about meeting and falling in love (and having lots of hot, steamy sex - which I love) I adore the fact that there is a story, there is a point to everything.

Your prologue has me intrigued and I'm being incredibly sick in hoping that it is Bella who is tied up (hehe - she's definately not my favourite character) I'm guessing that this scene is actually a snippet from later on during the story?

I am pleased to say that since favouriting you and your stories I now get an email alert every morning as soon as I wake up and my routine is to now wake up, read your update, smile and then go back to sleep for an hour and dream of an FBI Edward (Mmmmm)

Anyway, kudos... You are awesome... I look forward to my email tomorrow :P And I really hope you turn this into a trilogy... Or more?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the awesome review!!!! I loved it. I am so glad you enjoyed Here We Go Again. It is one of my favs just because Bella has a backbone in it. If you ever read any of my other stuff, you will see that Bella is usually stronger than she is in most stories.  As for the Proglogue, it was Bella tied up. It is roughly three months down the road.

Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

YES! Bella's been taken -does happy dance-

Absolutely awesome update once again. I'm liking the dodgy cops. I had a feeling in your prologue that the guys who had Bella were Feds and I'm hoping I'm not wrong. It seems that much more dangerous when the bad guys are law enforcement officers.

Can't wait for the next update but until then I'll be found packing a bag for Bella so she can enjoy her stay a little more.

-turns the music up and hands out the party poppers-

Bye bye Bella!!



Author's Response:

lol, not a Bella fan, huh?

Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Ok, I am officially pouting. See... -pouts-

Damn Sam for not wanting to harm Bella lol I guess I'll have to save the party for later on?

I like that Sam is in love with Natalie and I hope she is found alive so that the young lovers can be reunited.

Awesome update as always. I'm looking forward to tomorrow's. I can't wait for Edward's reaction.



Author's Response:

I promise you plenty of torture later.

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389383
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: fallanydeeper Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I actually quite enjoyed this and would love for you to continue. I can only imagine how hard it is to write something you have no knowledge of and have to continually research. So good work hun.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it..


Krazi

xoxo