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Bio:
How would things be if Carlisle turned Bella first 100 years after he was turned? what if Esme was Emmett and Edward's real mother and they were all human and Jasper found Alice whlie Alice was a newborn and they found Bella and Carlisle then Rosalie joins???
follow from Carlisle's POV first then goes to Bella's, possibly other to come, as we see how things would be like if there were different beginnings for all of our favourite charactors.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51670 Read Count: 7151
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: How It All Starts
i think you have done an excellent job so far. you have lured me in and i can not wait to read more.
Author's Response:
well i am glad you like it and I am currently writing the next chapter now!
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
ok , my dear friend. It is CONFESSION TIME!!!! Ok, a few things i feel i must say. First thing is HOLLY SHIT! This story is very good and i am an addict because of it. i check several timed a day to see if updated.
Author's Response:
YAY!!!!!!! So happy to force you to the dark side..... hehehe... I am very humbled and doing a major happy dance right now.. so thank you very much...
Thanks a bunch for pushing that little button.. Your confession has made my day.... Keep checking for updates... I won't make you wait long
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
please please please, for th love that is all holy please update. i wanted to let you know something real quick. the email linked with this penname is one i no longer use. i have 2 accounts here (long story. im an idiot. a proud idiot, but one all the same) and the proper email is oe linked to other account, so i wanted to inform you in case of you responding, i want u to have my good one. I plan on reviewing very very frequently from here on out.
im sorry this is long and about me.....but i love this story. It is refreshing to me that although bella human, she can hold her own and save the vampires.
Author's Response:
Hehehehehe… you are extremely amusing!!!!!
You evil girl, I am at work reading your review and the whole office turned to gawk at me when I couldn’t stop my very loud laugh at your rambling… I work as a temp so thankfully I will only have to put up with these people now thinking I’m quite strange for a few more weeks…. hehehehe
It makes me soooo happy that you are enjoying my story and I will update very soon, either tonight or tomorrow….
Thanks sooooo much for your review and keep them coming because they really do inspire me to write faster!!!!
My normal email is wombat37@hotmail.com hehehehe
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
ok i can meet our chalenge.......
1. you would say in your author notes that if you received so many reviews you would post earlier. Well what if I make it a point to make a review every 5 minutes. I am sure with my talent for rambling on I could find things to sa in each one. If i were to do that I know offhand I could do 10 within 5 minutes.
2. This Edward in your story sounds so yummy, mmm,mmm,good. If it were possible that i could be in the same room as him , I would happily offer colladeral. And that would be my husband.
3. I can not wait until this Bella gets Edward "rocket" in her "pocket". Shit if they could come out with a twilight Naughty store I would "not only be the president but a client" as well.
Please tell me you got tleast one laugh out of this because i needs me some more story woman! haha love ya
Author's Response:
1) meh
2)hehehehe totally agree by the way!!!!!
3) LMAO!!!!!!! HAHAHAHHAHAhAhAhAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
OK you win I actually cracked up at all 3 hehehehehe
YAY!!!!!! MWAH quick go read its posted!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
And you said i was evil? You my friend are teasing me. But i must say thatthe waiting does heighten the experience when you do upgrade , weither i like it or not.
Author's Response: hehehehehe.... I have to be cruel to be kind.... I love that you're hanging for more, I just hope I can live up tp the tension MWAH for your reviews
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never
well well well m friend. Let me start out by saying FFFFFFuuuuuuuuuuccckkkk as well. WHEW DAMN! that was hot. And to think I even wore my big girl panties today. They did nothing...nodda, for me. Have you ever seen some one who was so shocked about something that their mouths were stuck open? and you would swear their jaw was on the ground? again that was me. But to add to that i was laughing with tears and all with my jaw on the floor. yoe little minx you. im on to you.......(j.k.)
Author's Response:
sQuEaL!!!!!! OMG..... I LOvE yOu!!!!!!! hehehehehe LMAO hehehehe big girls panties you crack me up.... I will post nect ch asap I wouldn't want to torture you for too long hehehehehe I am glad you enjoyed that ch but trust me the next one is soooo much better!!!!
MWAH!!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
There are two little phrases I have about the chapter I just read before I move onto you my dear.
#1. Bow, chicka, wow, wow .
#2. I am proud to say that this posting has saved me from returning to rehab.... rehab for fanfiction story obsessers.
I have to admit it to you, the queenof fanfiction, that I , kolgirl, am an addict. My drug of choice is WOMBATS storyline, teasing and perfect use of Edward mouth and tongue. I haven't reviewed in a while and I missed your reactions to my post. hehehe, im also a post-a-holic as well. I talk too damn much so i tried too ease back but I DONT WANNA *pouting, with my arms folded on chest, and stomping like the immature whiny baby tht i am*
So please please update soon. LOVE YA ! (hopefully i just buttered you up so u will take pity on me and post sooo.
Author's Response:
SqUeAl!!!!!! OMG!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! LMAO!!!! You my dear lady have #1 Buttered me up perfectly and # 2 I can't believe that you would say that may little story is your drug of choice.... with all the fantastic stories posted on this site for you to say that, WOW holy shit I feel like Alice right now and I am bouncing up and down while my hubby is loooking at me like I have grown a third head... hehehehe oh who cares what he thinks he just sooooooo doesn't get it.... Thank you froom the very deepest part of my soul for sending me this review you have really brought a huge smile to my face.... MWAH!!!!! I won't keep you waiting to long I have almost finished the next ch....
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never
I was just wondering if this is going to factor into the story as far as Tanya is concerned. I remember reading about Edward's mother Elizabeth came to Bella abd taught her how to use her gifts. She said that they were soulmates and how she has been watching them both. So, does this mean that she will also NOT ALLOW Tanya to get to Edward or Bella?
Please update soon. I hope nothing comes between them. I have faith that Tanya will not win. She also said that the relationships based on sex and lust are easier to penetrate, but we all know they are more than that.
Author's Response:
Hey. thanks a bunch for your review, without giving tooooo much a way Elizabeth can't interfere so she won't be doing anything to help E & B ward off T, you are correct E & B are much more than just fuck buddies they actually have each other's soul and this part of their connection will play a major role in how this all plays out... hehehehehe I know you probably wanted more of an answer than that and I promise it's not far away, I will posting new ch tomorrow so keep your eyes open for it.... MWAH!!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
ok,ok,ok, where to start.....hmmm. FIRST AND FOREMOST; I FUCKING LOVE YOU! I mean what else can i say about you. Whatever i say will only be compliments and fucking roses anyway, so yeah.....
Up until now I have had my sailor tongue under wraps but my inner "FUCK'' radar is through thr roof now. I was so excited when Edward charged the hooch that i actually had my fingers crossed and chanting "kill the bitch-kill the bitch.' and when she was still alive at end of chapter i thought i was gonna cry.. like sobbing,snot faced hiccup cries. There is not a redeming thing Tanya can do, in my eyes to make me like her. I understand that once she wants someone she cant stop but why the hell would you chase someone who does not want you. Look, I have always thought of Tanya as a whore (yep, i went there) and i am glad Edward wont touch her. If she wasnt a vampire and had marble stone like skin, i would be scared to walk behind her. I would be scared i would trip over her pussy lips that drag behind her. Christ. even a big thick vampire dick would fall out of her, like if she laughed during sex, she would suck that person up as if she had a vacumn suctioned crotch. hhahahah,. *JUST SAYING*
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHAHA, You have no fuckin idea how loud I am laughiing, MWAH you're funny... to think my little story could bring out such emotions in you is awesome, I love how much you hate Tania that shit just cracks me up.... Sorry to disappoint you by leaving her alive but we can have soooo much more fun with her this way, lol... so even though she didn't fight E and was willing to submit to her death I still couldn't get you to think even slightly better of her? oh well she is a ho I won't disagree there but maybe she will be able to redeem herself one day... Keep in touch I want to know if I sway you at all... Thanks soooooo mich for your review I LOVED IT!!!! MWAH!!!!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
oh my god, oh my fucking god. do you remember when i left you thr review about Elizabeth , and if she would play a role in this? She may have not done it the way i thought but i was close, atleast in theory.
fuck, when i read last chapter I didn't know whether to cry, laugh, or cross my arms over my chest, stomp my foot and have a temper tantrum. That is the 110% truth.
Last chapter when i read the last word, signaling the end of chapter, my heart skipped a beat, and i was like NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I was irate, upset,furious, and i will also admit to be curious. Not in the way one would think. My curious is more morbid. I was thinking of the survival kit Edward would need if he did it. Like a flashlight in case he gets sucked in and cant find his way out. And the need to strap a 4x4 to his back , to avoid going in further than BALLS DEEP (heheh...sue me) and a parachute in case she queafs. HAHAH IM JUST SAYING>> love ya
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA your killing me!!!!!! tears are running down my cheeks I laughed so much at you review, love that I could make you feel a rainbow of emotions all at once that is just WOW... OMG the survival kit well kill me some more WTF my stomach hurts from laughing and my hubby things I'm weirder than he already thought I was for laugh/crying at a computer hehehehehe, he will never get the twi-thing hehehehehe.
MWAH!!! you have made my day / month / year MWAH!!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
yay! *fist pump* the evil slut ran with her crotch dragging between her legs.hheee.
have you ever wondered just how big a vampires dick is? I really hope I am not the only one. I mean is it big an thick like a cucumber? Or, humungus and painfully large like an eggplant? hehe. My lord I think one of us is gonna corrupt the other , or if that is too late, then I can't say I mind.I really wish I had her powers, because every bitch,cunt,slut that I ever come across would be fucking zapped with lightning. Burnt hair stinks, imagine other body hair....just saying, you cant wash that stench...You could literally smell a slut a mile away. *SQUEAL,LAUGH,COUGH,GAG **
I really love your story, it is original and different, and yet the same as others I have read. As I have said before WOMBAT*bows to the god of fanfiction* you ae amazing and My addiction as well. Thankyou for the shoutouts you have given "little ol me" , they let me know you enjoy my words and also you appreciate them. I wont disappoint you with my reviews. I love being a perv, my first words I spoke as a child were SHIT,FUCK,DAMN,CUNT,and my favorite,MOTHERFUCKER.
Author's Response:
*SNORT* OMG girl are you trying to kill me!!!! I am crying a river of tears because of how hard and long I have been laughing at your review, I thought your fist line was funny then kept reading and I'm like OMG WTF ROFL shit woman, I think I need an ambulance for the pain in my sides.... *SQUEAL* WTF seriously and eggplant WOW where the fuck did that come from PMSL... you naughty little minx be careful or I will be forced to send Master Jasper to punish you *sigh* oh wouldn't that be yummy...hehehehehehe.... *COUGH, SPLUTTER, GASP* I can't even begin to express how much pain I am in now from laughter after reading your I wish I had powers comment... You just take the cake hehehehe Yes it is you whom is corrupting me LMAO I'm an angel and would NEVER EVER dream of saying let alonw typing such vile and demeaning words such as CUNT and MOTHERFUCKER.... HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.... Well that maybe a small white lie.... YAY OMG AND YOU BOW TO ME!!!!!! That's just DAMN FUCKING AWESOME hehehehehe I LOVE YOU!!!!! YOU NEVER DISAPPOINT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
hello again. great story. in response to your question regarding my previous penname, it was NaWiSi. just as good as your first, 1st, time writing this chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Author Note
i have been here since the beginning, under a different name, but all the same. i have waited too long for an update and hell yeah i want u to continue. you have too.
Author's Response:
thank you, I will & hopefully with my revising the earlier chapters and tweeking it the story will be a bunch better... what was your previous name???
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - First Encounters
woo-hoo! god i love this story, it keeps me on the edge of my seat. Every word i read, while loving every fuc**ing word, also pains me because that means one more word to the chapter being over. Do you get what i am saying?
I'm excited. When i saw you update with an authors note, i grabbed my tablet, grabbed a newport and ran outside to smoke while reading it. Thats when i sent you a review informing you I have been following this gem of a story from the very beginning and was a loyal "reviewer" too, and that it was under my previous penname (NaWiSi). I wanted to go back to the beginning and start over, i got a few read before going to sleep. Imagine my surprise when i went to continue, but could not locate any chapters but the first one. I panicked, OK! Lets just say i tapped into some dramatic theatrics and wanted to fall to my knees and yell to the heavens "NnnnOooooooooo, Nnnooooooo!
My husband clearly thought i was in a tourette mode.
I love your writing and i personally cant wait to read both a new chapter and your reply if you think i am REPLY WORTHY. JUST SAYING
Author's Response:
It's loyal readers like you my dear that get me all worked up and motivated to get moving on my next chapter. That you sooooo much for your review, you created the funniest image in my head of your little freak out hahaha. Keep your eyes open cause it won't be long until I spit out the next edited chapter. You gave me the biggest smile and I just wanna hug you for that.
Mmwah!!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Enigmas
OH MY GOD! *squeal* I got a shout out! *does the cabbage patch dance and the running man* God, I literally checked daily for an update, and since my kids are awake and staring at me for my not so elegant and quite rusty dance moves, i grabbed my tablet and locked myself in my car. What kids? *hehe i am joking, or am I ?....(yeah i am, i suck at lying.)
We are getting into the story now sister! I am excited, is it obvious? Nah, didnt think so.. I remember this chapter from before and dont even care that i am reading it again. It is like im a Never Say Never VIRGIN! *turns head looking for the idiot who said the word .....(stage whispers) virgin.* Nope cant find them, but forget them , moving on. In my opinion it starts picking up and every chapter tops the last. Have you read any of my previous posts from the last tide together? (dude, i said last ride) hehe, sorry, just missed our goofing off and in appropriate remarks.
Well now im just waiting for a new chap, and a response to my jabbering, if you have the time.Busy lady and all, with writing this epic story and all.
Till the next time my dear.......
Heather
Author's Response:
You crack me up!!! You have know idea how thrilled you make me knowing that you hang out for chapter posts. Hell girl, you deserved the shout out!!! I love your jabbering. Sadly when I removed the chapters all me past feedback ran away so I haven't been able to go back and review our previous banter... I'm frowning... giggle.... I love your messages, you paint such a funny picture in my head, I'm busting to get the next chapt posted so I can see more remarks from you.
:)
Everyone knows she belongs to me… apart from her.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2654 Read Count: 1742
Date: 23 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Bramare O/S
I love this!!!!! I would pay to have this extended. You are truly talented, and have a way with words.