Reviews by aries1826
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625230
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

oh my god....thank u thank u thank u for updating...This story literally makes my heart beat so fast in my chest and brings tears to my eyes.....pllzzzz dont let bella go with demitri..at least let edward give her a heads up on whats about to go down. Plz let Carlisle,Marcus and Demitri burn in hell..Now that would be awesome....update soon...

Ps. u should seriously consider turning this into a book. Its so original and has so many twist and turns. i kno i'll read it



Author's Response:

I actually have an opportunity to publish TPW this summer as an ebook. That's why I'm rushing to finish so I can start the rewrite to de-Twilight it.

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

its backkkkk!!!!!!yayyyyy!!!...i'm soo happy...awesome chapter..cant wait for more

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife

where is it?????? i not seeing anything but the AN and the end notes....please repost this. i need to know what happens..i'm going crazy over here

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

i still cant see it...whats happening...i wanna cry please try and get it to work

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OMG!!!!!!!! finally carlisle is dead...thank u its about time...its kind of bittersweet because it means this amazing story is almost over....cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

omg and so it ends...loved it short and sweet...i'm goin to miss this story soo much...i hope to get ur book wen it comes out and i'm so happy for u

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

awww...poor emmy...i think its time to bring rose into the equation..:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU/AH OOC Bad girl Bella Swan takes on a challenging bet to turn Edward, resident golden boy, to the dark side. Can one bet turn into a life time of love? Lemons and adult situations. Better Summary inside. Collab w/Luvrofink and Chartwilightmom


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64046 Read Count: 38007
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: The Good Boy Edward: I'd Wish It All Away

please let this be the edward/bella reunion...they've been unhappy too long



Author's Response:

You will have to wait and see. He's going to fight for her, you know he will.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

up date...update....i like this..quite interesting



Author's Response:

Next update friday!  We plan to update fri's until all 7 chapters are up.

Thanks for reading and responding!!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

do both POVs..its always nice to have both sides of the story

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

i think the quote for this chpater is from titanic.....the last line....i hope i'm right

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

“You think I'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me,"......thats the quote from miss congeniality....hope i'm right

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

"Are you trying to seduce me? Why? Are you seducible?" from a walk to remember....i hope thats it....cant wait for the next update..wont mind a baby cullen around

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

"If you're a bird, I'm a bird"......quoted from The Notebook...great chap as usual

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31183
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

omg...they sent bella didnt they.......it was a set up or something....up date soon pleaaaassseeeeeeee.....im dying to know whats really going on

Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

 

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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chasing Cars

oh my god!!!!!......i almost cried.....im finding it so hard to route for Bella with this one....everyone turned on Edward and she just left him to the sharks....sigh i feel this one......cant wait for the next update



Author's Response:

EEK! I really didn't set out to make anyone cry, but it seems that I have had the effect on several people. So glad that you are liking this.  

 

Preview

Everything that had happened to me replayed over and over in my mind, I knew that wherever I went I would be laughed at, mocked. Why should I think that I would be able to walk away from this unscathed, the laughter I heard in the school gym would only be the beginning of my misery. There is noting that I can do stop or calm it down, no that power had been well and truly in Bella’s hands and she’d thrown away that chance when she denied that we had anything together.  Then of course there is Tanya. She told Bella about us to make her jealous and to try and break us up. Tanya I thought always knew that I didn’t love her, she was just there at the right time and I thought that she felt the same way as I did, that what we had was just a bit of fun.

Neither of them could be trusted that was now clear, they had both hurt and betrayed me I pictured them getting together, laughing and joking as they compared notes on my performance. I snorted at the thought finding some humor in that dark thought.

Bella didn’t give up with the phoning or the messages. Eventually I answered one of her calls, I didn’t give her chance to speak as I snapped down the phone at her.

“Fuck off Bella. I really don’t want to speak to you now, or ever. Leave me alone.”

Mafia Bargains by Joce_Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 237]
Summary:

Traded like livestock, treated like trash, all by her own aunt and uncle. When she's put up as collateral, does Bella find what she's always needed in a man from the underworld? BxE Mafia AH/AU OOC Rated M just in case OS or continue? Please tell me what you think.stories/12096/images/Mafia_Bargains.jpg

***I am so sorry, I forgot your name, would the maker of this banner please contact me so I can give you the credit***


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 191091 Read Count: 59281
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Aug 2013
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Im reallybenjoying the slow burn of this story......I loved that u made james a good guy as well. A nice difference 

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

ok sooo i just read some of the reviews from this chapter and im wondering if im interpreting things differently because i think Edward was actually going to admit to Bella he wanted to be with her before the car alarm went off. I dont think he slept with Jane either and it didnt seem like he was gonna try to convince her to sell. Im on pins and needles waiting for them to finally get together and Edward to get his head out his arse. Quite an angsty story. Good job



Author's Response:

LOL!  I was beginning to think it was me!  I actually went back to read my own chapter to see if something had crept in or been erased, because, just for once I thought Edward might get the benefit of the doubt!  He didn't sleep with Jane and he was finally going to reveal his feelings, but fate conspired against him, and Bella's fear of hearing the one thing she couldn't bear to hear stopped her from questioning him.  I do sometimes think that unless I spell things out in words of one syllable, some readers are determined to misunderstand Edward.  He's been a fool, but only because he's never had to deal with such feelings before and he's terrified of committing himself and being abandoned again.

Thanks so much for your review, and for understanding a little of where Edward is coming from.

Liz 

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15

Heyyy....I guessed first:( guess it got lost in the rest comments.

 



Author's Response: im sorry. i must of getting the reviews mixed up. thank you anyway for following this story and hold on tight. the next few chapters are going to be a bumpy ride. fiona (robsessed73)

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

My guess is alec..

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Daily Grind

So I'm going to go right ahead and assume that james is Alice's ex boyfriend. Not sure what's the deal with Alec thought but its obvious he is not who he appears to be. Looking forward to these plotlines being resolved soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"So, you have a kid?" He asks. "And you live with your best friend? Who happens to be a dude?"

I nod, and answer, "That would be correct."

"Isn't that weird?"

I smirk. Wait for it! "No weirder than the fact he's also my son's father." Needless to say, my date comes to a screeching halt.

BPOV. Family/Humor. Drabble.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24443 Read Count: 102175
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

im enjoying this. Its cute and family oriented

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285577
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

This chapter was hilarious....I love that Bella sent Tanya packing and I like that victoria is a good person in this story...good riddance to the skank and the cheat

Summary:

A tattooed loner moves to a small town to appease his deceased mentor. He stumbles across a modest Isabella at church. He wants her but balks at the age difference, and there’s nothing respectable about him. Is she as proper as he thinks, or does she just hide things well?

 

smy

BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9085 Read Count: 7390
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me Yours, and I’ll Show You Mine

I think I smiled through this entire story....loved it. Hope you guys do a few more chapters at least. Great story



Author's Response:

WOW!  To say that we are blown away by the response this one-shot has gotten would be an understatement.  Over 130 reviews in a week between FFN and TWCS, is pretty amazing to us for a one-shot.  We do intend to add a bit more to this, however we are going to be wrapping up a few more lose ends first.  We have the Halloween story already posted, it is called Crushes, Canines & Clowns, it’s the third year we have written a Halloween story and we hope you like it.  Also Jess2002 has joined forces with us and we formed WeeJessAndTAT and our first story together is, If I Die Young.  We started the story in honor of our great fan-dom friend and pre-reader/beta, Savannavansmutsmut’s birthday and it started posting on her birthday Oct. 24th.  We also have a Christmas story coming out.  It will post either as a one-shot or two-shot, but I will say this, it is BIG.  Right now we are thinking it will be around 30K word count.  Ropin’ A Sitter, Epilogue will be posting on December 1st, as well as a Future take of, Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT and an all-new Novella by TeamAllTwilight, called, The Things That Make You Click.  We hope to see some of you checking out those titles and more to come in the future.  Lots of things to come, but have faith we will be adding to this.  I doubt it will be a full blown WIP, but it does have some more storyline within us that needs to come out.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

PS.  Be sure to check out and vote in the Twi-Fic Awards, where WeeKittyAndTAT are nominated for several awards.  Here is our nominations: Fav - All Time Fic: His Cimmerian View is nominated.  Fav - Tiny Fic: Crabs And Cream is nominated.  Fav - LMAO Fic: Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave is nominated.  Fav - Drop Everything Fic: Meeting Her Needs is nominated.  Fav - Boomerang Fic: His Cimmerian View is nominated.  You can find the link to the website on our profile and voting ends November 3rd.  Thanks in advance, and even if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone there are some really amazing people nominated and we are proud to be pooled into categories with people who we ourselves look up to and read.  So thank you to whomever it was that nominated us in these different awards.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quite enjoying this story. However I think if its going to take this long to post an update you should try and make the chapters longer instead of a drabble 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135034
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well Emmett's a psycho. I actually feel bad for Rose because she's just being manipulated. Hopefully everyone comes together and gives him what he deserves.

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

danger

 

A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

fs


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84469
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story is so intense. Its almost hard to continue. Im so scared for her and I have no idea where this is going. One suggestion would be to put the translations for when they're speaking italian at the end of the chapter. I feel like I'm losing a bit of story because of it.

Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This story is giving me so much anxiety. Like its so well written but I want there to be forward movement. I keep wondering why would Anthony or any of them even do this? I feel I need to take a couple days away from this story so I can come back and see multiple chapters. This one a day thing is killing me.

Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

fs


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 47980
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: aries1826 Signed
Date: 04 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wasn't there supposed to be an update more than a week ago?