Reviews by debslmac
Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 922818
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
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Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

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Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

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Date: 05 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Put your foot down Edward!!!

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

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Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

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Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

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Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 77

I think the candy striper is Bree's sister 

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Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 81

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White Lightning by Shahula Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured Story


Bella is a young woman forced to move with her father as he strives to defeat heathens selling illegal spirits. Edward is the best known bootlegger in Tennessee. When their worlds collide, more than just moonshine will burn between them. 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12006 Read Count: 698
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
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Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Summary: Past Featured Story

Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich. What happens when he finds out her secret?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202993 Read Count: 68851
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2014
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Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: I'll Stand By You

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Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Words

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Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: The Cabin

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 In The Jungle

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Unwell

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Chapter 12 will post shortly.

EA

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Outta My Head

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Author's Response:

Hi, I think you will like the direction the next chapter will be taking our favorite fictional couple in and the realizations they are both coming to.

Chapter 13 will post on Friday and below is a teaser for ya.

Thanks for reading,

EA

"Kelsey, you know I really wish I could believe you," I told her, not making even the slightest move towards taking her hand.

"I promise you can, Bella."

Yeah right. Maybe when pigs fly.

"Really? Because I'm pretty sure I see things a little differently than you do. See, I know that the truth is you had no idea Edward wasn't already aware of my last name and who my father is. But I don't believe for one second that you have one ounce of sincerity in you when you tell me I should keep fighting for Edward."

"Come on, Bella. You're my friend. Of course I want that for you."

"No, Kelsey, we are not friends. Maybe we could have been. But that ship has sailed. See…" I took a couple of steps closer to her. "Friends don't relish in the fact that their friend's boyfriend may be on the verge of breaking up with her. A friend wouldn't be sitting there waiting for the perfect opportunity to swoop in and steal said boyfriend away. I see right through you, Kelsey. I see that you want Edward for yourself. And you know what?"

"What?" she sneered with a huff.

"I don't blame you. He's an amazing man, and yes I **ed up. I know I've hurt Edward deeply by not being completely honest with him. But I want you to remember this. You may have won the first round, but I intend to win war."

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Taking A Stand

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Come Take A Walk With Me

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Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 On The Waiting List

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Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, chapter 16 will be up by the end of the week. Below is a teaser to get ya until then.

See you then,

EA

I watched as my best friend's head snapped around so fast I was sure she was going to have a massive kink in her neck from it. Her face then lit up like the brightest star in the sky, causing me to follow her gaze and see what had her so damn excited.

I shouldn't have been surprised to find her eyes glued to Jasper. From what she'd told me, they had spent a lot of time together and she was falling fast and hard for him. I had never seen Al so completely enraptured by a guy before. However, Jasper wasn't alone. He had Edward, Emmett and Rose with him.

"Gah," Al groaned before exhaling in a long sigh. "I swear if there was such a thing as swagger patrol, all three of them would be put behind bars."

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Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Somewhere I Belong

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Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Times Up

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing over here too!! I greatly appriciate it.

~EA

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Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Wake Up Call

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Author's Response:

So glad you loved it.

 

So glad you loved it.

 

 

 

 

 

So glad you loved it. Thanks so much for reading the next chapter is finished and with my beta. Up next we'll get to see how Bella responds to him as he fills her in on everything. I'll post it as soon as I get it back form her and have it all prettied up. Until then I've added a teaser to get ya by.

See ya soon,

~EA

Chapter 18 teaser:

Her brows furrowed slightly as she stared at me, probably trying to gauge whether or not I was being honest with her. There was more that had to be said before she would believe me.

"I mean it, Bella. I love you. And I'm not telling you this because you said it earlier, or because I'm worried you'll walk away if I don't. I'm telling you so that no matter what happens between us from this moment on, you will know how I truly feel about you."

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Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Mississippi

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Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: A Part of the Family

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing in both places!!

EA

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Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Done

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Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Family and Freedom

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Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Somewhere I Belong

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

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Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 411976
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

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The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Banner by OTBGraphics, texture by Rachel


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 141874
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Anger, Apologies and Injuries

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Run-Ins and Interviews

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Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Lies and Deceit

Poor Bella

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Reconnections

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Reasons

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: News

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Fall Out

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Seattle

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Dr. Kate

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Words

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Renee

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Lunch, Thanksgiving and Incoming Bad Weather

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Baby, It's Cold Outside

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Jolly Old St. Nicholas

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: The Happiest Place on Earth

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: A Masen Family Vacay

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Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: NYC

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Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Mommy Dearest

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Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Babies and Beef

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Date: 03 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Ignorance Isn't Bliss

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: V is for Vendetta

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Baptisms and B&Bs

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Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: The Straw

I know he's stressed, but he went too far!!!  He definitely has a lot of ass-kissing to do!!

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Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 25: The Camel

loved this.  David is lovely remembering his daddy's birthday

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Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Bella and Marie.  I hope Lizzie remembers who the man is and tells Edward

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Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Reunion and Distresses

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Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Revenge, Redemption and Reunions

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Time Heals all Wounds

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Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: A New Story and a Happy Ending

Sniff!  loved this story

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Trial and Error

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Breaking the News

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: Where there is love

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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As a homeless drifter in Kentucky, Edward Masen finds work and a home with widow Esme Cullen and her two young daughters. Will he have the strength to stay away from Bella, whose innocence captures his heart?

 

Banner by amandac3


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Shena's Storys to Read, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168630 Read Count: 64957
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Sep 2012
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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Talking to Myself

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 : Misunderstandings & Multiples

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: Little Shit and Flossy

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: I love a rainy night

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: A place to call our own

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Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

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Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

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