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Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 161380
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 53: 53 With A What

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Date: 14 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 57: 57 California Dreamin

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Date: 16 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 54: 54 New Addition Old Wounds

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Waking Up by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Bella was happy with her life with James until a new revelation causes her to run and a terrible accident traps her to a life she never desired.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9507 Read Count: 1682
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2013
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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 7998
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
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Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Epilogue

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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 82523
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Outtakes Part 1

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Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 211675
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Moving on - Enough is enough!!

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Making Plans

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

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Date: 17 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - “Going to the chapel and we’re…” (Or are we?)

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Date: 08 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 251743
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?

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Author's Response:

Thanks again and again for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  As the story comes closer to an end, it seems we have a lot of questions or comments that are geared toward answers already given in the story.  So we decided to give a little background to clear up the misconceptions and questions. 

Edward Masen: Father is dead, mother is bi-polar and left him in the care of Esme and Carlisle.  Mother is alive, but whereabouts are unknown.  Edward met ‘Tanya’ in college, they had a short affair and she left, after being caught in trying to get money from him.  Edward then shut down and treated all women as if they were not worth his time.  He refused to date or trust any women and he instead only was with a select few at Aro’s club, where he paid for sex.  Edward owns the restaurant where his parents used to take him to eat at, before his father died and his mother went off the deep end.  Edward is also one of the youngest English professors at UW. 

Bella Swan: Bella was born the child of single mother Renee Higbottom.  Renee met Charlie during one of his planned scams to get money.  Renee was very rich, as were her single father.  Charlie ended up impregnating Renee, but he was already married to Sue Clearwater.  Renee paid off Charlie and Sue to leave her and her child alone, but then subsequently died of breast cancer when Bella was three.  Renee’s father fought for custody, but grand-parents rights are not acknowledged in the state of Washington, therefore after Renee’s death the state went in search of Charlie Swan.  Once he was found Bella was placed in his and Sue’s care.  After Bella went to live with Charlie and Sue, she was treated iek a slave and was never allowed even normal things such as schooling, food, new clothes, and every other basic thing as parents we give our children without second thought.  Bella grew up starved for affection, so once she got to take care of the twins she gave all that affection she has been starving for to them.  Her love of the twins is unconditional as is their love for her.

I hope this helps answer a few questions and clears up a few things.  I’m not sure why, but we have several who think Sue is Bella’s real mother, and that is not the case at all. 

Thank you again so much for all the wonderful heartfelt reviews you all leave for us.  It is amazing to us that we have managed to instill such a deep devotion in our readers to our characters, and we are blown away by just how much emotion our readers feel for our characters.  I know that the character names belong to Stephenie Meyer, but these characters and the way they are in this story are in fact ours, she owns the names and appearance descriptions, but the attitude and demeanor and words are all ours.  Thanks, Kasi (& Nikky)

TEASER Chapter 28: Subject to changes during beta process.
I am so proud of Seth and Leah this past month has not been easy on them, but they have held their heads up high and got on with it.  There has been some name calling at school.  Now I know kids can be cruel but the things that they are saying, is coming from older mouths first.  Things no parent should be saying in front of their children.  Bella and I have addressed the school regarding the problems, but we’ve been brushed off like nothing is going on.  Mrs. Crown the principle said that people will talk.  She went on to point out that I was after all, Seth and Leah’s father, and I was shaking up with their big sister.  The way she said it, implied that Bella and I were doing something wrong.  After her rather rude little speech I called Caius and explained the whole thing to him.  To say that he was angry is putting it mildly.  He went as far as taking the principle in front of the school board, and she was put on a written warning.  Not only is her job and tenure in jeopardy, but her career as a whole is.  Since we have proof that she knowing let kids and adults harass the kids, she was warned that a lawsuit would be filed if the behavior continued.  Her biggest mistake was she was aware what the twin have been though these past five months, yet did nothing to help stop the harassment.

Caius informed me of another school that had room for more students.  It was little school that only had a little over one hundred students.  It went from kinder-garden to fifth grade and each class had mix of around fifteen children per classroom.  It was a private school, and ranked in the top ten of all schools in the state of Washington’s education program.  There was a sister school that managed the grades sixth through twelfth, also ranked in the top ten.   Both schools are quite prestigious and expensive, but cost is of no matter.  There are a few nice things the school is located close to where Esme and Carlisle live, but that also causes us transportation issues for to and from school.  Both Bella and I have talked about this and we all talked about it in family therapy.  Seth and Leah asked to just finish out this year of school where they are before deciding.  We agreed that this was the right choice for right now.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

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Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: She Devil

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Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come.  I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far.  And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she?  Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh.  I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter.  A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter.  Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise.  Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out.  There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat.  I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue.  She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun.  I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are.  Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them.   There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31.  Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up.  See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...

Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night.  I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in.  “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”

She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”

I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her.  “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.”  I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye.  “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you.  The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers.  Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band. 

“Baby, what’s wrong?”

She looks up at me and frowns.  “I was just thinking about my past.  There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.”  Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it.  “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me.  Her friend... he gave me a muffin.”  Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts.  “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?” 

My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head.  “Yes, baby, it was me.  I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”

Bella shakes her head at me.  “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you.  I wanted you to come back and take me with you.  At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch.  If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here.  They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”

I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly.  “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them.  I will not fail you or my children again.”



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Don’t forget to go read the BPOV chapter posted under the title Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of things have taken place over the past few chapters, and there is much more drama to come.  I know some of you are mad that we let Paul get away with her, but we were sure to not let him get too far.  And as for Sue, she sure is one sneaky problem, isn’t she?  Well we haven’t seen the end of her yet, and wait until the next chapter... insert evil laugh.  I will tell you this much there is lots of involvement from the fire department in the next chapter.  A lot of you want the kids names changed, it is like you can partially read our minds, you will be seeing a conversation about that in the next chapter.  Some are speculating about the Jess2002 induced surprise that is coming, but we have not hinted on it at all in either teaser, it will have to be a surprise.  Speaking of teasers, after Monday when Fictionators posts their teaser, I am guessing that the Facebook group will be on a posting frenzy, because well damn that Sue is making yet another appearance in that teaser, be sure to check it out.  There is so much going on in the story that even I am on the edge of my seat.  I loved reading the ideas people have posted for torturing Sue.  She is a piece of work, but writing her kind of crazy is seriously fun.  I want to say a special thanks to all of those posts we have been getting about hot and juicy the lemons are.  Nikky whole heartedly passes off the lemon writing to me... and I love writing them.   There will be a couple really great lemony scenes coming up yet in the book, I am currently writing a really great one for chapter 31.  Well not many questions for you all, so we will wrap this up.  See ya next week, Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 29 Teaser, subject to changes in full beta process...

Seth and Leah have just gone to sleep for the night.  I’m cleaning up the kitchen when Bella walks in.  “Hey, baby. I’m almost done.”

She gives me a little smile, but it’s strained. “I’m worried about Seth and Leah. They seemed quieter tonight than usual.”

I put down the dish towel and wrap my arms around her.  “We’ll be fine, baby. They’ll be fine.”  I hold her face and make her look me right in the eye.  “I will NEVER let her hurt any of you.  The three of you are my life now, and I love you all so much.” Bella nods her head and steps back, taking my hand in hers.  Her eyes travel down to my watch, and she trails her fingers across the band. 

“Baby, what’s wrong?”

She looks up at me and frowns.  “I was just thinking about my past.  There was this one time that I saw one of mo... her friends when I was at the park.”  Bella stops, and I know what’s coming, but I wait for her to say it.  “I had fallen down when a boy on his bike knocked into me.  Her friend... he gave me a muffin.”  Bella’s eyes meet mine, and I know what she’s trying to say, yet I give her the time I know she needs to gather her thoughts.  “I think that friend was you. I mean... was it you?” 

My hand moves to her face, and I caress her cheek as I nod my head.  “Yes, baby, it was me.  I am so sorry. I should’ve saved you that day.”

Bella shakes her head at me.  “I wanted you to save me. Even though I didn’t know you, I wanted to go home with you.  I wanted you to come back and take me with you.  At night, I used to dream about you, but I could never see your face – just the watch.  If you had saved me then though, Seth and Leah wouldn’t be here.  They are worth everything I went through and so much more.”

I pull her toward me, hugging her tightly.  “I still wish that I had saved you from her... from all of them.  I will not fail you or my children again.”

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Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start

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Author's Response:

Hello, thanks again for reading and reviewing this story.  Nikky and I put a lot of work into these chapters; as well do a large group of ladies who have become not only our sounding boards, but trusted members of our team.  I was shocked that the backlash on the pregnancy was not larger than it was.  I was very skeptical about making Bella pregnant and ironically Jess2002 (WHO HATES IT THAT EVERY STORY BELLA GETS KNOCKED UP) said it had to be done now, because (knowing our future plot line) it was the perfect fit.  So if you are one of the (so far) two negative reviews about the pregnancy we’ve gotten, please know that your reaction was shared at first.  After we thought it over it was easy to see that it however enhanced the love story between Edward and Bella.   The gender of the baby is picked, as well as the babies name.  The story is quickly approaching finalization, and with it I feel a sense of loss. 

There haven’t been many questions, but there have been several comments about things that are complete misunderstandings.  So I figured I would list some of the ones I remember off the top of my head.

Edward wants to marry Bella, but he hasn’t yet proposed. 
Edward has been looking for a ring, and trying to his best ability to find out where his mother’s jewelry is. 
Edward is very rich, and doesn’t have to work, but like most people who are rich a great portion of his funds is wrapped up in investments, so not always does he have access to super large amounts of money. 
Edward’s father was quite a pianist and left Edward a rather large inheritance, as well as before his mother left she made sure to leave him money in a trust. 
Elizabeth knew she was ill and left thinking Edward would be better raised by Esme and Carlisle. 
Alice is not a blood relative of the Cullen’s, or Masen’s. 
Jasper and Rosalie’s parents died and in the will they left guardianship of them to Carlisle and Esme. 
Sue and Harry’s parents are dead, harry murdered them.
Bella’s biological parents are dead. 
Rose was always allowed to act out and as if she was better than everyone else. 

The next chapter is one you won’t want to miss for sure.  Before you sit down to read it, you may want to get a cold drink (not promoting booze, but I needed some writing parts of it), a few tissues, and be sure to tell yourself at least four or five times before you start reading – “Kasi and Nikky are happily ever after writers...”
Thanks again for the story love, Kasi (&Nikky)

 

 

Chapter 30 Teaser, subject to changes during BETA process.

Seth and Leah have taken to home schooling well; both are extremely bright children. Lucy resigned from her temporary position at the school, and is now helping us teach them at home.  Between the five of us: Lucy, Esme, Zafrina, Bella, and myself, the twins are receiving an excellent education.  They’ve both been a little more edgy lately, and upset about what happened with Sue. It’s been causing both of them to have more nightmares than usual.  Samantha’s advice was simple: just keep helping them feel safe and secure in their home.  We’ve talked about it several times, and I think they now understand that the school did something wrong.  I also know that they believe we will keep them safe.  

Mrs. Crown has been fired over her behavior, as were four other staff members.  This led to the papers getting ahold of the full story of what happened at the school.  When the story first came out, all that had been said was that there had been an attempted abduction. Since then, though, someone had talked – my guess would be Mrs. Crown – and it’s been all over the local news and in the papers.

 Thankfully, Seth and Leah’s names have been kept out, but reporters did manage to get some of the story behind Sue, Charlie, and Harry.  They were also able to gather some information on Bella, like the fact that she raised her siblings from birth, but they did not focus on this.  They focused, instead, on how Bella had to have known that her Uncle and parents were hurting and killing people, and hid it instead of going to the authorities.  

They talked about how when she worked, she left the children unattended and neglected.  That one line hurt Bella the most, and I had a hard time trying to calm her down. Of course, it also upset Seth and Leah.  To say I was ranting and raving over the phone lines to just about anyone who would listen, was an understatement. I had to take several deep breaths and remind myself that I supposed to help reduce the stress, not add to it.  

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 212391
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 Loose Ends

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Blood Swan by katiecav Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

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Las Vegas, Nevada, 1980. In a city run by some of the biggest mobsters in the country, only the strongest survive. Entry for the LikeTotally80sContest. Now expanded. AU.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13744 Read Count: 3494
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 02 Dec 2012
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Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Charlie's Secret by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Everyone has secrets, even Bella Swan, but how will she react when she learns of her father's? Will it affect her rekindling relationship with Edward? What other lives will be changed because of his little secret.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105805 Read Count: 11804
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2012 Updated: 07 Nov 2012
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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

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Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

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Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

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Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

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Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

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Saving Her by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

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A mysterious new girl comes to Forks High. Edward can't take his eyes off her, Bella can't take her eyes off Edward, and Alice can't see anything. What does this mean for the Cullens and Bella? Set after the Bella's birthday but Edward doesn't leave.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56613 Read Count: 3305
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1924]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 406515
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

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Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

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Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

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Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

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Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

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Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

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Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

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Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

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Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

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Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

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Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 120: Chapter 120

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Epilogue

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He still watches her. She still plays the drums. They just do it together. Drummer Girl and Creeper learn to love, trust, and grow together.  Sequel/Continuation to "Watching Her". AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102600 Read Count: 16693
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Score

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Shielding

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Drag

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Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Assist

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Drumroll

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Broken Up Beats

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: The Perch

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 420972
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2016 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

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Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

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Date: 06 Aug 2016 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

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Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

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