Reviews by Tendarts
Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40825
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

I would like to say that this is one of the best BDSM stories i have read! I love that Bella is the strong and confidant sub and later on Domme, and that the encounter she has with Edward brings him in to the "lifestyle". You write Edward as a very commited sub and also a very strong personality in the ëvery-day-life". Most BDSM story's I come across on Fanfiction are nothing compared with this one. They either have a broken sub-Bella or a very dark Dom Edward...Blah!

There is a "red line" trough out this story, they influence each other whit out them knowing and they end up together.
I don't think the last chapter was to much, It was a breaking point for Edward, but the way you wrote this, you can feel that he is going to get thru this with Bella.
I think your story is very well written and deserves much more feedback and credit than it has been getting.
I think that is why I write this review now. I usualy don't review because English is not my native languague and I find it difficult to express myself. I really hope you will continue this great story, I am very much a fan!

Greetings from the Netherlands,

Linda

 

PS: I will copy-post this review on Fanfiction



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I am totally blushing at all your praise :-) I agree that most BDSM-fanfiction-stories are very predictive and similar, and I wrote this one to bring something new to the ff-universe. I hope the story will continue to entertain you, we'll soon get some B/E action.

And don't worry about writing in English, it's not my native tongue either ;-) But I do know what you mean about being unable to express what you mean in a foreing language, I totally sound like a retard most of the time.

Thanks! L.R.

 

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

Wow, that was so NOT what I was expecting! I was really looking forward to Tanya getting punishd, but insted she gets away with it ! I don't know what to think of Carlisle and his infatuation with Tanya. I can understand his need to protect Esme, but maybe there are other ways to get back at Tanya? But then again, he has this "thing" for her.... Can't wait to read where this is leading to.

xox Linda

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129699
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4




Author's Response:

Thanks?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134479
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm enjoying the story so far!

Love the big sister Esme! I'm guessing that Carlilse is Bella's father? Maybe they meet and hook up?

Can't wait to read more!

 

xox Linda



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35416
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Standing Appointments...

oh my god!
I..I..I just can't stop reading, but I kind of want to stop because it's not my kind of kink, but i am seriously conscidering to read the next chapter! lol!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J

 

 

Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32440
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake #3 Never Squat With Your Spurs On

So I thought , lets copy all my reviews from FF to TWCS...............

I have to say, (shocking! ) I didn't review at all on FF! Bad Bad girl!

But I did enjoy this fic soo much!  So I'm going to go back and review each chap, even if it's only with one word.

XOX Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Loved it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love this story so much!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love this story so much!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Love this story so much!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this story so much!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love this story so much!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love this story so much!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Outtake #1 The Stool

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake #2 Jasper's Second Piercing

This story is fantastic! Loving it!

xox Linda

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

Loved this story!

Would love to see/read more of them and their lives!

Greets from Holland!

xox Linda

Summary:

KC - Just An Interview

This interview could change his life, and Jasper was ready, practised, prepared. Nothing could stand in his way... right?    

AH  Jasper/Carlisle

Banner by Yulliah Meghan

~xxXxx~

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5142 Read Count: 497
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG! The UST was just killing me here! And then at the end you fade out to black??? Why? Please tell me : why did you do that?                                      I was sooo looking forward to some hot sexy Jasper/Carlisle loving!

But besides that , I really love the story. So I'm hoping you'll make this a multi-chap fic, just for the lemons! LOL.

Greetz from Holland!

xox Linda

 



Author's Response:

Hi Linda! 

Thanks for the great review! To answer your question: this contest was all about the UST, and not necessarily showing the lemon itself, just the build up. I felt that as long as the reader knew that Jasper got his guy it didnt need me to actually show it. Sorry about that! 

KC

Summary:

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34749
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it! Can't wait for the honeymoon to really begin!

To bad the letters/fonts are all mixed up, they went from normal, to very big to very small. Not very easy to read.

Greetz from Holland!

xox Linda



Author's Response:

sorry about the fonts... not sure what happened as the original doc is all one font and we just did a copy & paste... but it seems to be happening around pictures in everything we've posted.  we'll mess around and hopefully figure out how to fix it... we're still getting used to the new site.

 

that aside, so glad you enjoyed the first chapter!

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! just no words.. but Wow!

 



Author's Response:

Hehehe thanks for the review hun :) xx

Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Summary:

Beautiful Banner moved to chapter 1 comply with Google requirements

 

One is the mayor, happily married to the perfect woman, adored by the townspeople.  The other is the sheriff, distant, gruff and feared. They both have secrets that can only be shared behind closed doors.  Written for the pick a pic challenge.

 

Banner made by vbfb1

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4664 Read Count: 2378
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awhh, so sweet! Great story!

xox Linda



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Linda!

 

xoxo

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Summary:

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Two men, lifelong friends, set out on their journey as lovers as they travel to Scotland for their honeymoon.  Will a secret wish they made so long ago come true?  Birthday shot for nmydreamz.

Thank you to Arc Morpheus for making the banner on such short notice!


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4472 Read Count: 968
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 17 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so sweet! loved it!

Summary:

 

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126007
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Tendarts Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm so curious about the relationship between Bella and Emmett! What are they doing in the room when he is grunting and stuf? Lol! Love it and can't wait to read the next chapter!