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FWAR One-Shot Contest group announces our new theme...


 


 



 


(Graphics by Eva)


 


Whispers . . . anonymous bits and pieces of life shared from cyberspace.  Uplifting. Angry. Pleading. Sexy. Pathetic. Sad. Disturbing. Encouraging. Scary. Truth. Lies. Secrets. Confessions.    Some from close by, others half a world away.



Your story should feature Whisper* in some way. Is one of your characters obsessed with the app?  Does a misunderstanding arise because someone is sure they know who's posting those cryptic nearby messages?  Confession of a crime or a declaration of intent?

A pool of whispers will be provided.  Feel free to use one for inspiration or find/create your own.  If you use a your own Whisper, please provide us with the image behind your story.

Whisper It.

*Whisper is an anonymous social network for posting short messages with an image in
the background.  Download the mobile app or access online here.


 


For ALL contest entry information/rules/how to submit entries and what all you need to include, please read here.


 


**Remember this is an anonymous entry contest**


 


ACCEPTING ENTRIES:  October 26, through December 4, 2015.


VOTING:  December 7 through December 11, 2015.


WINNER ANNOUNCEMENT:  December 13, 2015.


 



 


 





 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


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Reviews by KeyeCullen
Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

What a happy reunion between you two!  You guys are better together than apart!!!  Yummy chapter.  Loved how Jessica got all in Ang's face.  Funny. 

I must have forgotten something...why is Edward going to tell off his mother?  Was it that she wanted/forced Edward to marry that heifer or something like that?  *Keye hurts brain trying to remember*  LOL!!

Are we assuming that Eric is calling both Spartan and Kitten or are you guys going to throw a wrench in everything and have it be someone else???  You two are lovely but sneaky girls!!  And I love that about you two!!!

Can't wait for the teaser and the next chapter!!!!  *Squee*

 

Keye

 



Author's Response:

:) I'm so happy to be back with DLIR! I missed her and y'all so much. Jess is a riot. LOL Edward feels it's time to put mommy dearest in her place. It's been years in the making. You need some tylenol? We don't want your head to hurt sweetie :)

Sneaky...who us? Nah well okay we are LOL. And we can't tell you that :)

Thank you so much for your awesome review sweetie.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Holy Shit what a chapter!!!  I mean, DAYUM!!!  That was completely awesome!!!!  I just adore Carlisle!!  Esme, well she is a complete beyotch, isn't she?  Saddling up to Ang like that!  Ugh.  Makes you want to slap a bitch, no make that 2 bitches!!!! LOL!!!

Kitten is going to be furious with Edward for not calling.  And who in the hell is sending them invites to the Ball???????  Is this part of Esme and Ang's plan somehow?  Or how about Eric............we haven't heard from him in awhile.  Hmmmm..........

The A/N cracked me up too.  You girls are on fire!!!!!

Keye



Author's Response:

hahahh yah Ari A/N are the best...xoxox and the ball is great....hehehhe u will see

 

I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.



I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.



His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.



His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.



My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.



“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.



Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…



I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”



I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

What a reunion!  Go Kitten and Spartan!!!  LOL!!

Keye



Author's Response:

LOL Hiya Keye! It was a awesome reunion wasn't it LOL.

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Hope Ari is feeling better.....well and that both of you are doing awesome!

Awwww.........Angela helped Bella, was sorry for what she did to Edward and realizes that she loves Ben.  Thinking you could die really improves your outtake on like doesn't?

Give Bella an Acadamy Award!!!

Okay, now that was an interesting turn of events.  Making Angela Esme's daughter!  Very interesting twist!  You girls done good!!!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

xoxoxooxoxox...I just posted so I hope u enjoy what i wrote...xoxo...and ya Ang is Esme daughter...who would of thought such craziness....oh wait ...that would be us LOL

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

Whew............buy ya'lls Esme is a ball of fire!!  She is a lot to handle.  I don't know how Carlisle does it!!  *smile*  I am wondering how she found out Angela was her daughter and if she helped set her up with Edward?  Esme ~ Card carrying member of the Mile High Club!  *snicker*

Hmmmmm...........well I don't think that Eric shot Bella.  Maybe Edward, Carlisle or Hale shot Eric???  Can't wait to find out.  Heck of a cliffie!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks babe.,,,,,and yah.......wasnt Bella..... :)

 

and Esme will have another POV...so u guys will know that whole part of her story.... :)

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

Geesh....so glad that the server problems are done so I could read this!!! 

Okay, I totally have to laugh whenever I read your A/N's.  J/s

*mumbles something that sounds like "damn evil cliffie"*  But, man oh man, what a good one it was.  Now I would like to say that it was Angela all dead and shit but something tells me that you would NOT make it THAT easy, right???

I cannot wait for the next update!

Keye



Author's Response:

hahahah......mumbles........i just posted

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

Awesome chappie.  I think that you captured the bitchiness...the craziness that is all Esme!  So nice to see her portrayed as the evil on her and not so nice-y nice as she always is, you know what I mean?    Can you imagine what Angela felt knowing she had a psycho for a mom?  Tsk!


Do we want Rose POV?  Um....YES!!!!!  C'mon ladies....REVIEW!!!!!

Please tell me that Carlisle is going to make it!!!!

Loved the A/N!!  You two crack my ass up!!!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow

Geez....Edward when all out ape shit didn't he?  So, I am wondering who is, finally, going to knock some since in his dumb ass!  LOL!! 

I thought the "dream" about Bella was priceless.  You got me on that one.  I totally thought she was there. 

Love all interaction between Edward and Fay!!!!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

Cracked up while reading this:

"You trying to get me drunk, man? If you are, just so you know, cuz I don't swing that way! I'm strictly for the pussy man."

"Not tryin' to get ya' drunk. You're already there and that's nice to know."

And this:

What I heard was... I'm Lucifer, come take a walk on the dark side with me and explore my deadly ways.

And this:

He hung up on me! Wait a goddamn minute. Jasper doesn't have a fucking dog! He hates dogs. So, I call him right back, but he must have turned his phone off because it went straight to voicemail. That motherfucker!

*reaches for Kleenex*:

I closed my eyes almost feeling like my dad was patting me on the back. And in that mere second I heard his voice. "She's perfect. "

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home

Great BPOV!!  I love their decision to build a house there!!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer

I love Tony and Fay!  They are awesome!!!


Edward's proposal was sweet too!

 

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.

No they did NOT:

There I said it; those three hussies took her phone so I couldn't talk to her. Then they turned theirs off so they are all on my dislike list now.

Um....wow!  Get engaged then nothing!  LOL!!

 

The meltdown that Bella had over Edward's going to the strip club, not telling er about it then her finding his shirt he wore there?  Pricless!

 

Bella and Alice duking it out over wedding plans was pretty funny too.

 

Loved that Edward planned the reception just like the night they met. 


The glimpse into EPOV about the honeymoon was humorous as well.

 

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thank u sooo much for the review. it was great writing it and let me tell ya.....30000 words of honeymoon sexin is coming ur way soon xoxoxoxo DLIR and ARI

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That is some honeymoon!  Had to laugh at all of Edward's internal musings about playing tourist.  And when he got snookered?  That was funny!!!

You ladies do such a great job with this story!!!

Keye

Summary:

 

Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub.  After several profiles are searched she interviews two.  Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out.  Is he the right one?  BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons.  AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story.  The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com.  The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest.  Thank you to all my loyal readers. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48035
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Preparing For a Trip

Can't wait to see how their weekend goes!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~

I hope that you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.  I do recommend a cool shower on standby.....LOL or so I have been told.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Kasi

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Search Is On

Ready to read more!

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  The next chapter is at the BETA's being worked over so I PROMISE to post very soon! 

Thank you!

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Test Weekend

Well I have no experience with all of this so I cannot tell you if you were correct or not but I can tell that I enjoyed what you wrote.  I loved that Bella gave him his fantasy and and I curious about what scene he wrote out for them to play.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Merry Christmas (or whatever you celebrate) to you and yours !

Keye



Author's Response:

Merry Christmas to you too (if that is what you celebrate).  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it means a ton to me and as for the scene it will be in the next chapter and it is HOT!  I can not wait to hear what you think of it! 

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: His Scene

Well, I have no experience with all of this either but I have to say, that I am enjoying your writing.  Everything is clear, concise.........I like the way that you write the characters and I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~ thank you for reading and reviewing and thank you for liking my story enough to be looking forward to the next chapter.

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day

Well, as usual, you did NOT disappoint!  Loved the chapter.  I am so curious to see how this dinner is going to turn out.  As well as Bella accompaning Edward on his business trip.  So, needless to say, I cannot wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Ahhh thank you so much...the trip will be a few chapters out for sure....the next chapter will be the rest of their night and a little extra.....the next chapter is bigger then this one.....I am having a hard time breaking away and seem to keep writing.  thank you for your wonderful comments and for reading and takign the tiem to review...IT means EVERYTHING to me!  :)

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Hump Day

Well it is obvious that they care for one another and that can't help but make their entire relationship stronger, right?  Can't wait to read what happens next!

 

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  I am glad that you are enjoying it.  I am sending you the preview of the next chapter via the contact button on your TWCS profile.  Please check your junk mail, if for some reason you do not get your preview contact me via teamalltwilight (at) gmail (dot) com

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Oh What A Night

Wow, what a chapter!  I don't think I have ever read a story with a male sub that went into to sub space. Of course this is all new to me!!!   Anyway, sounds like they both had fun.  *sigh*

Can't wait to read what happens next!!! 

Keye



Author's Response:

I had to be different...Thank you so much for reading and reviewing you have no idea how much reviews mean to me.  This story is up for some really great awards at the inspireawards  blogspot there is a link on my profile please check them out!  The next chapter will be postign soon it is all done and ready to go, and as soon as I get the majority of the chapter after that finished then I will post it.  I am sending the teaser to you via the contact button on your twcs profile, so check your junk mail.  Thank you again.

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Naked Day

Nice cliffie!  I cannot wait to see what Bella thinks of Edward's journal entry!

Keye



Author's Response:

Hey thank you for the fast read and review of my story!  I have sent the teaser for the next chapter to you via the contact button on your profile here at twcs.  I hope that you continue to like this story it means a lot to me that you read it and review it.

Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Homeward Bound

Mmhmmmm..........so Edward confessed all to Bella but she is not going to go there with him. Very interesting. I do wonder what Peter will have to say about that?

I cannot  wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Yes Peter will play a HUGE part in the ending of this situation.  Have faith in me, I promise goodness will come but first more angst!  I am sending the wonderful teaser the same way I always do so check your email for it to come soon!  :)  Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Flowers and Plans

Finally the server is up and I can read updates!  *doing the happy dance*

So curious as to what is going to be done about Mike harassing Bella.  And what Bella is going to do with all this "love stuff" going on with Edward.  Clearly it makes her nervous and/or feel out of control.

Enjoyed the chapter.  Would say more but in a rush. Sorry!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

The next chapter will tell lots about your questions....I am sending the teaser here because the contact button ws not workign right....Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it!  Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! 

Enjoy….Kasi~

 

Chapter 12 Preview………………..

My skin is pale and I have dark circles of lovely black and purple under each eye, I look like a vampire.  I fought against my self all night, I just feel as if I should have collared him last night.  I can not believe I did something so stupid.  I need to fix this, and make this right. 

Knowing I have to go out for a bit today, I put on my comfortable jeans and threw on a sweater.  It is really cold outside, I can see the ground outside is frosted over.  Looking in the mirror I see, that I look a little better.  Looking at the clock I see that Edward will not be down for breakfast for an hour and fifteen minutes yet.  I sigh and head down to start cooking breakfast.

 

Entering the kitchen I am surprised to find that Edwards journal is at the table.  The lights are on in the gym, so I assume he is in there working on his morning exercise regimen.  I quickly mix up the egg bake, and pop it in the oven.  Grabbing a cup of coffee, I sit down at the table and pick up the journal.  Opening the journal, I see that the last entry was written last night.  I take a gulp of the hot coffee, and start to read.

 

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The BDSM Embargo

Well hmmmm.....sounds like Bella and Edward have got some details to work out.  Master Peter's rules are interesting and IDK if I understand them at all.  Seems like they would do better just talking it out.  But maybe seperating them is best because it will keep them from doing the nasty and therefore clouding the waters so to speak. 

Curious to see what happens next.


Keye



Author's Response: Keye~ The reason I involved Peter was because he was Bella's Mentor and sometimes even the strongest people need a helping hand and in the bdsm lifestyle you have people you can go to and her goign to her mentor woudl be the best choice in her situation. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story. Here is the teaser of the next chapter you were promised, it is completely unbeta’d and is subject to have changes in it! Especially to cover my bad grammar, and poor use of tense! Sorry for the lag in gettign the reply in a timely manner. Enjoy….Kasi~ Chapter 13 Preview……………….. I was nervous about going with Edward for Thanksgiving, to his parent’s house. I got even more nervous when I found out it was Esme and Carlisle’s forty-ninth anniversary. I knew we were celebrating a holiday and that I was being included by Edward’s parents because they thought him and I were in an exclusive relationship. We were kind of weren't we? I felt compelled to buy them a gift for the anniversary. I got a very nice pen set and got it for Carlisle, I have one just like it and I love it. I had it engraved to read, ‘Dr. Carlisle Cullen’. I got a huge gift basket full of lotions, creams, shower gels, body wash, body sprays, hand soaps, and candles for Esme. Then for the both of them, I found a 1960 bottle of Chateau Petrus, Pomerol, France. I chose the 1960, because that was the year they were married. The broker I used to purchase the bottle of wine, informed me that it was one of the better bottles of wine from that year.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Changing the Rules

Best line ever:

"Some things just cannot be eaten amongst company," I

I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~

I loved that line too!  A LOT!  I want to say a HUGE thank you for reviewing my story.  I am very proud of this story, and I try very hard to make it be the best it can be.  I really am grateful to all of the readers and your reviews all mean so much to me.  I will be wrapping things up on this story very soon.  Before it closes, I promise to deal with all the loose ends.  I will have an epilogue, and it will cover a few years into the future.  Thank you for being a loyal reader, I hope you continue to enjoy the story through the end.  The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process.  My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed.  Here is the teaser you were promised, and yes there WILL be a scene.

XOXO, Kasi~

Chapter 16 pre-view.

EPOV

I am brought out of my thoughts by Bella getting up from beside me on the sofa.

“I think that we are going to head upstairs for the night.  Peter, what time will you be back from the office tomorrow?”  Bella asks.

“I only have to go in for a lunch meeting.  I will be home by two,” Peter replies.

“Okay, Master Peter, can we meet around four, to go over the rules?”

“Yes, that works well.  Are you prepared for tonight?”

“Yes,” Bella replies.

With a nod, Master Peter shows his agreement.

We all bid each other a goodnight, and Bella hugs Charlotte.  We go upstairs and enter into our room, and Bella turns to me immediately. 

“Do you agree to submit your entire being to me tonight?”

“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply.

“Are you clear on the rules for tonight?”

“Yes, Ma’am,” I reply. 

“I stocked the room across the hall with the things you would need to use to be prepared.  Be in the playroom in one hour.  Be kneeling, and ready for a full inspection.”

“Yes, Ma’am,” I say as I move back out the door.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: The Crash Aftermath

*dies laughing*  Love Esme:

 

I still can feel the warmth that passes through me, when I hear Esme tell the nurse, 'you clearly are more interested in trying to flirt with my son, who is beside himself with worry about his beloved laying on that bed, than you are about taking care of his beloved, who I consider my daughter. Take your trampy ass out of this room. I want your supervisor, now!'

 

Dying to know what Bella put in the safe and why?

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~

I love Esme too!  I love making her all loving, yet badass!  The next chapter will be a long one...Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  The reviews truly do mean a lot to me.  The preview of the next chapter is of course subject to changes, during the BETA process.  My tense usage stinks, so it always has to be fixed.  Here is the teaser you were promised, and I hope that you enjoy the closure I am giving some of the characters in the coming chapter.

 

XOXO, Kasi~

 

Chapter 18 preview…teaser

 

“Hello, ladies,” Edward says, as he strolls into the kitchen.

“I was just coming in to get Bella.  Dad would like to take a look at you before he goes to bed.”

“Okay, we will clean this up, and I will be right out,” I say.

“Bella, go ahead and see Carlisle, Charlotte and I will clean this mess.  Edward, please let your father know that I will be up shortly,” Esme says.

“Of course mom, goodnight,” Edward says while leaning over to kiss her cheek.  “Goodnight Charlotte,” Edward says.

“Goodnight girls, I am off to be checked over, than go to bed.  See you both in the morning,” I say.

I hug both my friend, and Edward’s mom than follow Edward out the door.  We walk hand and hand to the living room.  Carlisle asks me about my headache, and checks my blood pressure.  He suggests I take some Tylenol, and get some rest.  Edward and I head off to bed, after bidding both Carlisle and Peter goodnight.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New

This was a fitting end to a yummy story.  The fact that Bella wanted she and Edward to wear her parents rings was very sweet.  I love that.  I also like their right hand rings as well.  

Nice the that the Cullens accepted her into their family as a daughter.  Everyone needs love and now Bella has tenfold! 

Looking forward to the epis!

Keye



Author's Response:

The epi will be worth the wait I promise!  Thanks for reading and reviewing all along.  Thanks so much! Kasi~

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: A Sub Search: Epilogue

I so enjoyed this story!  You did an awesome job of wrapping everything up!!!  *Keye gives Kasi a high five*

 

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye~

Thanks for reading and reviewing this chapter and all the others you reviewed as well.  Thanks for being one of my best supporters.  I started a new stalker story with jess2002 and our author name is JessAndTAT check out Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso if you get the chance, I promise it is gonna be good...Ohh and this time it is Edward that is being stalked by a nut case!  WOOT WOOT...I personally woudl stalk Edward too if given the chance....Not Rob, I think himand Kristen belong together, but Edward, yeah I woudl so stalk that vampboy....hmmm, but damn he could read my mind and all the crap....darn it...oh well fantasies are fun anyway!  LOL

Thanks for the high five, and thanks again for being one of my followers.

Kasi~

PS hope to see you reading LK&IV...pro and chapt 1 are posted both here and fanfiction  :)

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Way to get started with a bang!!  LOL!! No pun intended!  I cannot wait to read what happpens next!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm thinking WOW!  Interesting story.  The rules are interesting too. 

I always knew I was bigger than every male in our family. It's not hard to miss when no one thinks twice about bending their wife over the couch, dining room table, and even the stairs. There was only one hard and fast rule, that there never be any children present.

I'm guessing it can tend to be a sight to be in that household for very long.  No telling what you might see. 

I have never understood why a man would want more than one wife.  Normally they cannot handle or please just the one so why would they want more?  I don't get it but I still watch that show on HBO about it.  Forget the name of it at the moment.  So, I am guessing that it is all about the sex perhaps and passing along the family genes?  Who knows.  I mean, I know what they say but I don't know if I believe it ......the whole "in the name of religion thing".  But I don't judge.  Not my place. 

Glad that Edward has found some happiness with Bella.  Too bad he cannot get rid of Tanya.  I think she is going to cause major trouble!!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well whatever happens to Tanya, James deserves the same or worse.  Of course those two completely deserve each other.  I enjoyed reading the update and I look forward to the next one.


Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward cracked me up when he was saying that Bella was so "selfless" in giving without asking for anything in return.  Oh yes, but good things cum to those who wait, right???  LOL!!!!

Can't wait to see what happens with James and Tanya and, of course, to find out about what Mary and Victoria's options are now.

Don't blame you for disabling anonymous reviews.  Not at all!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope that they catch James and Tanya soon.  Their killing spree is devastating to say the least.  Can't wait for the next update.

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow!  That was some cliffie!  I cannot wait to read more!!!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So Carlisle did not do that on purpose?  Make Bella feel unwanted?  Because, if he truly didn't, then way did Edward have to punish Bella not once but twice??

 

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*mutters something like, "damn evil cliffie"*

Well now I am super curious as to how James counteracted Carlisle's fertility drugs.  Very interesting.  And wouldn't heating the drugs do harm to them?  IDK

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You are definitely keeping it suspenseful!!!  LOL!!

Keye

Summary:

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It’s a one shot starting when Laurent is leaving the Cullen’s in Twilight. Just a naughty thought of how I saw his introduction to the first Denali.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1272 Read Count: 97
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2011 Updated: 09 Jan 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, I think you did.  So Laurent wants the Denali coven for his own huh?  Interesting!!!

Keye

Summary:

Banner

 

This is the OS written for Souther Fan Fiction Review, Tantalizing Tuesdays. Rated M for language and Lemon content if you are not old enough to vote you are not old enough to read. Enjoy E/B

 

Banner made by Alice S. Sweetcheeks

 

Just so you all know I suck at summaries 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3076 Read Count: 380
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just as good the second time reading it!!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye. Thank you I am glad you enjoyed the story... It was really fun to write.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 138710
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hmmmm....well this ought to be interesting.  Bella and Jacob seeing each other?  Can't wait to read all about it!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ugh....just don' understand how the judge could allow her mother to see Claire with what she did to her.  I mean, it was borderline sexual assault for goodness sake...but if they are supervised then that would make me feel better.  But it does all lend to the story.

Oh good news about Carmen signing over parental rights and visiting on Edward's turf.....sooooooo much better!  As you can see, I type reviews while reading.  Well, of course, you don't know that since this is my first review.  *ducks tomatos*  Sorry about that.

She really got Edward's goat with the Jacob thing, didn't she?  That was funny.

Yes, I just bet the color drained from his face:

Edward swallowed thickly, all the color slowly drained from his face as a tear dripped from the corner of his eye, splashing on the photo or our children. I wiped his eyes.

Edward's reaction to the news of the twins was sweet....after he caught his breath that is!  LOL!!

Jacob was an ass to Bella at Starbucks.  And I am wondering WTH is up with Tanya and Jacob....I can see all kinds of ethical questions coming to light!  LOL!!

Keye

 

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

The Village People huh?  Wow....talk about a blast from the past!

Hmmmm.....she couldn't get out of the car when he went around to the driver's side?

*runs to next chapter*

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

My last questions about Bella getting out of the car was more of a rhetorical question.  I mean, I know that it is part of the storyline. *smile*

Wow Jacob's emotions are swinging back and forth so much that he is giving me whiplash.

Ohhhhhhh....so she doesn't know that Charlie is her dad?  Interesting...wonder why her mom told her that her father was a druggie?

Billy is an ass!

Wow...big day for Bella...found her dad, was introduced to her step-brother, found out that Billy and Jacob were even worse people than she thought and that mother of hers?  Geez....I cannot even think what to write about her!

A wedding planned in a week?  By Alice?  Gotta read about that!  LOL!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

OMG...you ATE SLUGS!!!  Ewwwwwww...........that has got to be a family story that gets repeated often I would think!!! LOL!!

Oh....photo and story for the rehearsal dinner!!!  LOL!:

I think I could have lived the rest of my life happily not knowing that when I was eighteen months old I ate a slug. 

Men are gross and COMPLETE flippin' babies!!!

Yes, Edward it was planned...don't ever underestimate 'girlpower'!:

“Oh, so this was planned,” Edward laughed, shaking his head.

Bella....press charges!!!!!!!

Seth and Claire?  I'm thinking Edward is not going to like that. At. All.

Hmm...was surprised by Edward's reaction to Seth and Claire.

Here's to "relaxing" with Edward!!!  *sigh* Damn lucky Bella!

 

Keye

 

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Laughs at this:

It's a little amusing that he is not only a member of the illustrious, snooty Ridge View Country Club, but also a member one of the biggest S&M clubs in the region. The irony is not lost on me.

Cracked up at the boys razzing Edward, telling him that he was the shittiest Dom ever and that Bella ran roughshod over him!!!!!

Funny line:

“It will teach you to always wrap that multiple-baby missile next time,” he laughed.

Out of the blue, totally unexpected and I love it:

“So, Seth, what are you intensions with my daughter?” I asked, giving him a stern look. He spit out the water he was drinking. Charlie turned around and asked him if he was ok.

All I can say, even though it would be fun to jack with boys interested in your daughter....I am sooooo glad that I have a boy:

Don't even think about having sex, because I will dismember you.” I glared. Then, smiled eerily. I never realized how much fun messing with boys interested in my daughter would be. Not, that I wanted to experience this a lot, but this instance had been fun.

Good way to put it:

“Bella chose to submit her body to me. Basically, I get pleasure out of bossing her around, and she gets pleasure from taking orders.” I hoped the super simple answer would suffice.

OMG...I cannot believe that he has to have this conversation with Bella's DAD:

I'm a kinky son of a bitch, but if Bella didn't want to do anything but the missionary position, then that's what we'd do.

Perfect end to this chapter:

Charlie laughed, “I think you're right.  You're one shitty Dom.” It was then I noticed my brothers were in the kitchen as well. They all burst out laughing. I couldn't catch a break.

 
Congrats on your nom!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loving the visual I got when you wrote about Edward's strip tease!!!  ROTF!!!  Yum!!!

 

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28


I love Carlisle's prescription for Bella and Edward....especially the one for Edward!!!!

And nothing like the family taking care of the kiddos so that you can have some quality smexy time!!!! LOL!

Nice update!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Catching the kids in the playroom?  Well I guess it was bound to happen at some point! LOL!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

You wrapped up this story nicely!

Summary:

stories/8628/images/Banner_The_Last_Thing_I_Wanted.jpg

 

With just weeks before the wedding, Bella and Edward's lives will be forever altered by one unwanted event. One event will change everything for everyone. Can witnessing one thing really ruin the lives of so many? Slash/Poly and everything in between.

with a lot pushing I mean helping from my friends I started this dark tale. It will not be what you think, So hold on to your booties its a bumpy ride with a lot of twists. Don't believe everything you read.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13496 Read Count: 4100
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wondered how all that was going to work with "claiming", "mates" and the jealousy and all.  But they all seemed to handle it well.  Can't wait to see what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow what a gripping story and what a cliff hanger!!!  Can't wait to read more.

 

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I am so happy you didn't freak out, This will be a very differant story, not everything is as it seems as you have seen with the first chapter. You have read my stories enough to know i love to do the unexpected. thanks again Nails233

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow!  What an exciting chapter!!!  I am riveted and cannot wait to read what happens next!!  That was some cliffie too!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! next chapter is almost done. nails233

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

As always with your chapter....WOW!!

Keye

Summary:

 

 

Edward loses the best thing in his life due to his addiction.  Bella cannot take the lies anymore.  Its over.  There would be no chance that Edward could get her back as his Special Forces Unit was shipped out to Afghanistan.  Nearly a decade passes by and Edward decides to call Bella where they reconnect and Edward tells her he has only loved her.  Bella is thrilled but stunned when Edward refuses to meet with her in person.  How can you tell someone you love them and yet not be with them?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6847 Read Count: 566
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this the first time I read it, adored it the second time I read and am still loving it now!  You always put so much time, energy, effort and heart into your stories.  Just one of the many reasons I enjoy your writing!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks Keye! You are making me blush. I find it extremely gratifying to know that people actually enjoy reading my stories. Thanks again.

The Car Wash by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Picture inspired one shot for now. But how knows. An early morning naked car wash could brighten anyones day but can it change your future? Mature theme. M for a reason. Picture inside.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9000 Read Count: 8656
[Report This] Published: 04 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Um, yeah, so I am going to need the address to that frat house.....pretty please?  *bats eyelashes*

LOL!

Keye

Summary:

 

flod

Banner by: edwards_girl_1918.. Author & Co-Author of some great fics... check ´em out!!!! Thanks Ari!!!

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5311 Read Count: 4505
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake #1: Submission 101... Playtime with Mistress Rose...

Loved this out-take!!  Always wondered what went on between Mistress Rose and Bella.  And now I know!  Can't wait for any other out-takes you cum up with!  LOL!!!

 

Keye

Hide and Seek by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A day of play for some not so childish vampires. E X B and an afternoon of adult fun.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 587 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2011 Updated: 20 Apr 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And a little fun it was!!! *wink*

 

Keye

Summary:

 

 

For those of you who read "The Perfect Wife" this takes place twelve years after the epilogue. You do not need to read TPW, but an understanding of the story is helpful.

Carlisle ran a human trafficking ring. He was an abusive husband and father. Esme suffered cruel and horrific atrocities at her husband’s hand. Her sons, Emmett, Jasper and Edward were raised to treat her no better than a slave; undeserving of love and respect. Rosalie, Alice and Bella are brought into this life as their wives and together these women fight to change their outlook on life and women. At the end of TPW, Em/J/E have learned to change and passionately love and respect their wives.

Carlisle is finally killed when he attempts to hurt Bella, freeing Esme from a lifetime of abuse. His will stated he wanted to be cremated so his ashes would remain with his family, forever a symbol of his power over his family. Esme refuses to let him control her life any longer and takes his urn from the house returning empty-handed hours later.

TPW was Bella and Edward’s story. This is Esme’s story.

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4083 Read Count: 7761
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love, love, LOVE this!

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Pink Flamingos

I adore that you write from your own life experiences and I enjoyed reading where the flamingos came from!  Thanks for sharing!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

27 yr old Bella, is an overnight manger at the Wal-Mart in Forks, having been away at school things have changed, little Edward Cullen, 17, has grown up and he´s secretly crushing on B. Wonder where Edward´s disappearing to at night. 

MY CONTEST ENTRY FOR THE SPANKING THE MONKEY! 

 

Disclaimer:  AS MUCH AS I WISH IT WAS, OR MAYBE JUST ROBSTEN, SADLY NEITHER ONE ARE MINE!  SUCKS I KNOW! RIGHT!  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5468 Read Count: 2067
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2011 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: When I Think About You... I Touch Myself...

Holy crap that was hawt!  I just never knew how wonderful Walmart was!  *snicker*  The photos on your blog?  *wipes brow*  Can you got those "models" at Wallyworld???????  ROTF!!!!

Keye

To Be Branded by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

 

Edward is a century old vampire.  He has trouble balancing his submissive and fetish tendencies with his Victorian morals.  The Cullen’s rescue him from 10 years of abuse.  Can Isabella and her ranch be the balm to ease his wounded soul?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8310 Read Count: 2106
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 14 Jul 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Tonight's the night

Always curious as to different lifestyle types.  This so curious as Edward is a vampire.  Very interesting indeed.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

 

 

Banner by lovely and talented  Mehek18!

Checkout her awesome work: Mehek18.tumblr.com -

grass

Summary: 33 yr old billionaire tycoon, Edward Cullen is engaged to his childhood sweetheart and Chicago´s cutthroat DA, Isabella Swan; it would appear they were the perfect power couple, but everyone has secrets, some a little darker than others.  Enter 17 yr old Jasper Whitlock, recently orphaned and emotionally troubled he leaves his home in Texas and moves in with his cousin Rosalie and her husband Emmett McCarty, he too has a few skeletons in his closet.  As a favor to his friends; Edward hires Jasper to be his yard boy for the summer. What happens when just after two weeks more than just the hedges are being trimmed at the Cullen/Swan Esate?  And just how does DA Swan fit into all of this? Poly/Slash/Kink, OOC, E/B, E/J, E/BJ

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45044 Read Count: 36393
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Surprise Dinner Guest...

Surprise indeed....love the dinner guests!  And Jasper kinda teasing Edward?  Yesssssss......

Photos are nice too!  *winks*

Too funny:

Em ate enough that he would be perfectly okay hibernating for the winter, starting tonight. 

Yeah I bet!  LOL:

But dude, since he´s started working here, I don´t know, it´s like… like I can see a light in his eyes, like he´s almost happy again. 

Too funny that Edward was just not getting that Jasper was staying with he and Bella while Em and Rose went to Europe.  Then he had the "light bulb" moment!!!  LOL!!!

Can't wait til move in day!  *dies laughing*

No seriously......

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Two´s Company... Three´s So Much Better...

Loved the story. I think that you completely captured Edward's longing for Jasper here!!!  Your blog for this story is really nicely done.  Great background and yummy photos



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo


Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It´s Not Easy... Being Me...

Love the photos.  Poor Jasper...he is a bit confused isn't he?  And I am curious....does Rose and Emmett know about Edward and Bella's lifestyle or not?  

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Don't wanna give anything away, promise not to keep you guesing long!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!  Be sure to check out the blog for teasers and picspiration!  Chapter three's teaser has already been posted!

http://www.krazi4twisaga-thegrassisalwaysgreener.blogspot.com/


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Fijimoon is Far From over...

Why yes it WAS worth the wait!  LOL  Gotta love Alice too....direct and to the point!

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Naughtiness Goes a Long Way...

*gasps and scrolls up and down for the rest of the chapter*  Oh that is an evil, evil cliffie!!!!  *pants*  No you just did NOT do that!  ROTFLMAO!  Girl you got us good with that one.

Damn, I can't wait to read what happens next!!!

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Coming Together... The Consummation of the Trinity...

Bless Jasper's heart!  Terrible to read his feelings of inadequacies and the assault.

Great use of the photos in this chapter too.

Lotta love in this chapter!  Hope that goes a long way in helping Jasper heal.  Good call on using Keifer S. for the Officer.  He was such a butt in that movie, wasn't he? 

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Closer I Get to You...

Loved this:

“Javi no is stupid, jealous, yes, stupid, no.”

Love Jasper's note!

This is great:

Each one of them brought something different to the table, where Edward was my rock and security blanket, Jazz was my sense of adventure, the one who kept me feeling young at heart.

I'm jealous!  LOL!

Don't envy you on the actual physical act of moving.  I hope that went well though.  And, it sounds like you won't starve to death!  LOL!  If you don't feel like cooking then there is always Micky D's!

This was a great chapter!  I want to be a private island with the boys!!! 

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Lol!  I wouldn't mind taking a trip with those two to a remote island myself, but unfortunately all we can do is live vicariously through Isabella!  Mickie D's lol! I never thought I'd see the day when I was tired of the golden arches, but I think I've kind of reached my limit! lol!  I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter!  Thanks for reading and always leaving me great reviews!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

After getting caught disobeying her Master, Bella must suffer the consequences of her actions. Rated M for adult content and BDSM material. My entry for the Edwardgetsfic'd contes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2999 Read Count: 5099
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is it hot in here or just me?  *giggle*  Hmmm.....so I am wondering if Bella will ever do that again?  Yes? No?    It will be interesting to find out.

A Redeeming Love by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Can you forgive the ultimate betrayal?  What if he didn’t deserve the girlfriend he has?  Can you forgive your fiancé?  Your brother?  Can you find love again?  Let’s find out…


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10553 Read Count: 1851
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2011 Updated: 15 Aug 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Redeeming Love

Great story!  Loved how you made the beloved Edward and Alice just complete asses!  Sometimes you just need a good Jasper/Bella story.  And Jasper's big thank you at the end to his brother?  Well now, that was just priceless wasn't? 

Loved this little one shot.  Enjoyed the heck out of reading it. 

Keye



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

:  When they say the split is amicable, do they really mean it?  Is that even possible?  The title says it all.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4646 Read Count: 427
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Marriage Ending

Love to know what was in the envelope about Felix's motatives.  Was it just that Jake's contract was up and they wanted to garner sympathy for him?  *shakes head*  That is just wrong. 

Glad that Bella stood up for herself here.  This was a great little story and I completely enjoyed reading it!

Keye



Author's Response:

The Cullen's wanted media support on Jake's side for the divorce, but they didn't have all the facts up front - thanks for reading - Beth

Summary:

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31 Days of Halloween / Picture prompt 18 / Can a Halloween Ball change everything? Can beauty find true love with an evil beast in one glance? Edward and Bella will find out when he exposes his true nature. Darkward

Banner by BusyMommy


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1821 Read Count: 1001
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story for Halloween!  Loved that he "saved" her.

Summary:

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Thanks to the lovely and talented vbfb1 for my wonderful banner!  Visit her page and checkout her amazing stories!

To the outside world, including thier friends and family, Edward and Bella are the perfect married couple.  Best friends, since junior high school, turned lovers... the inseparable pair married straight out of college.  They' ve shared everything from their first day of junior high, first school dance, first sexual experience, to the birth of their first child. Join Edward and Bella as the firsts just keep coming.  It will leave you asking, "Are things ever what they really seem?" 

This is my entry for the Twi Kinkfest!

Checkout all the prompts! (some are still unclaimed)
http: //twikinkfest.tumblr.com 

 

The Original Prompt: I´d like to see more lactation fetish fic – I only know of one fic about this, and I´m intrigued. ExB please, all human. Doesn´t have to be hucow, can be adult nursing.  Either or.

Rating: MA/NC-17

Warning: This story contains Infantilism and Erotic Lactation! If kink is not your thing, then you probably should move on!

18 and older please!

DISCLAIMER: TWILIGHT AND ALL ENTAILS, BELONGS TO STEPHANIE MEYER AND SUMMIT. ABSOLUTELY NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT WAS INTENDED!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21376 Read Count: 35416
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 21 Sep 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Standing Appointments...

Well that was interesting.  I think I read somewhere that there was nothing wrong with kinky!  LOL!



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Our Humble Beginnings...

Love this:

the size of a flea, but the heart of a lion

Edward remembering when he was little and Esme being pregnant with Alice was too funny.  Glad that ended happily.

Alice and her dare for Edward.  She knew, didn't she?  That they needed a little push?

Loved how Bella handled Irina aka Little Miss Juicy Fruit!  RTOF!!!

Love the flashback to their first time.  I am amazed that they waited so long but that was probably half of what made it so good, right?  *snicker*

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!

Krazi

xoxo

Summary:

When Carlisle's coven of females is threatened by an interloper, Carlisle's instincts run away with him as he teaches his rival a lesson he'll never forget. Very OOC. Graphic. Heed warnings inside. For the TwiKinkFest.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9148 Read Count: 1876
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2011 Updated: 20 Dec 2011
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice twist in having Carlisle be so ruthless!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

Rock Star by SoapyMayhem Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

O/S - "My job was to film her rise to fame. Falling in love wasn't part of the plan." Edward is commissioned by his brother to film his new protégé's rise to stardom. Bella isn't too happy with this arrangement. Written for TwiFicPics 'Rock On' Contest

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1003 Read Count: 1157
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it.  Definitely would read it if  you continued it too.  I like the whole concept of this.

Keye

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

I am floored that Jasper never had sex without a condom.  Glad but floored.

Love that Jasper loves Bella.  Yay!  And that he is going to take over Edward's teaching postition.  Wonder what Edward is going to think of that?  However, Jasper is the logical choice as he was Edward's teaching assistant.

Hmmm....Bella pregnant?  Well, it does only take one time...the right time, right?  LOL

Edward and the bar is very interesting.  Can't wait to read more on that!

Keye

PS:  Went back and skimmed 8, 9 & 10. 



Author's Response:

That was one lesson that Edward taught him from the start that was good!  And between you and me (and anyone who decides to read thru reviews), I haven't decided yet if she's actually pregnant... lol.

 

glad you're still enjoying and that this can be a distraction from all the woes of RL.

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Meet Dr. Cullen

IK...I am so scattered right now.  I am wrapping up the construction of my new home which is 3 hours away from my current home.  I need to be there supervising but I need to be here packing.  I need to be cloned!  My brain is fried and I am surprised that I know my own name!  All that plus I still have a job, family, my second job with FWAR.....you know how it is!  LOL! 

Keye

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

Yes, well, Edward completely and totally effed up, didn't he?  And Jasper, once again, showed up on his white horse!  LOL!  Good for Jasper.  Well I cannot wait to see what happens with Edward....he just doesn't sound like one that is just going to let this all go.

Keye



Author's Response:

Keye!  Thank you for heading over here!  I'll say that Edward's pile of shit is about to get deeper, but everything happens for a reason...  hehe

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

So Jasper is in love with Bella?  Yay!  I am thinking that he is the far better choice in this story!  LOL!  And you have me sooo curious as to who the two people were that Edward saw when he walked out of his office.  I am trying to think of those that he has ticked off in this story.  One was Angela and wasn't there another instructor somewhere in the mix?  One that was lusting after Bella?  *shakes head*  Memory is fuzzy on that one.

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Let's just say that Edward is still getting his wake up call... lol.  

Thanks darlin'!

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

Oh wow...score one for Angela Webber!  However, I just don't see Edward letting her get away with that crap.  Paybacks are a bitch!

Oh boy....she told him that she loved him! 

*races to next chapter*

Keye



Author's Response:

our dear professor cullen is finally opening his eyes and growing up... i don't think revenge will be in his plans.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

You know what bites is that when I press the + sign that makes the other stories I read on here's text bigger, it doesn't on this story.  *pouts*  Wonder why?

On the last chapter it enlarged only a portion of the chapter's text.  Never have seen that before.

Well I cannot wait to hear what Jasper has to say and where he is going to say it.  And, oh...we making a baby?  LOL

This is news:  Being abandoned by my parents, being drugged, being raped, being abandoned by my best friend.

Well I don't remember this being said before.  Are we going to learn more about that?  Perhaps through Edward's drunken haze? 

Oh snap...is that what Jasper is going to talk about with Bella?  Or is he going to do some ILU back?  Or both?  

Just so many options to chose from that I don't know how you do it!

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye



Author's Response:

Okay Keye... I should beat you for this review... lol.  Go re read chapters 9 & 10 (I think, it might be 8 & 9)... can't believe you forgot such an important bit of info!

 

xoxo

tb

Summary:

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One is the mayor, happily married to the perfect woman, adored by the townspeople.  The other is the sheriff, distant, gruff and feared. They both have secrets that can only be shared behind closed doors.  Written for the pick a pic challenge.

 

Banner made by vbfb1

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4664 Read Count: 2378
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this one shot.  Love the pairing of Jasper and Jacob.  I really liked how the old woman and the townspeople handled Jasper's confession and that Jake rallied there at the end. 

Love the Nod to Hungry Like the Wolf and Duran Duran!  LOL

 

Always love reading your writing!

Keye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Keye!  I made myself cry with this one :( ... lol.

 

xoxo

tb

Beach Bum by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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*DRABBLE* Bella is stuck in a loveless marriage, nothing more than a Stepford wife, when her world is turned upside down by the appearance of a certain beach bum and his dog. E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6805 Read Count: 32287
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2012 Updated: 18 Aug 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awwww.....so sweet. Shame about Carlisle though.  Got a kick out of the puppy names!  LOL!


Keye

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87329
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the concept of the story.  Like how you get more of BPOV through her journal entries.  Wondering if Edward did really kiss her on the plane and that was why her lips tingled when she woke up because, if not, then that was some dream!  LOL

Nice to see that Carlisle is the dad instead of Charlie...just to shake things up a bit! LOL! 

Can't wait to read what happens next and how much time you are going to jump ahead if any.

Keye



Author's Response:

Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far.  I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure.  The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it.  There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion.  Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15.  After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30.  Edward is 31, and Esme is 36.  We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all.  Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting.  We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday.  We are excited to hear more from you in the future.  Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)

 

Summary:

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On a cross-country road trip, Bella finds herself stranded in TX, her only means of help a sex store, because there is nothing else for miles around. Will the staff be friendly enough to help her get on her way again ... or just help her get off? There's a first time for everything. **Written for the 2012 The First Time Anonymous Contest**

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice/OC, Bella/Edward/Emmett, Bella/Rose
Genre: Erotica, Femme Slash, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4700 Read Count: 5378
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot dream with the boys.  I didn't think that you would let her first time be a threesome!  LOL! Love the add of the pics....awesome bike.  Thought the part well Bella asked what was wrong with Texans in that they have porn shops but no gas stations was a scream!  ROTF!!

Keye



Author's Response:

lmao Keye... sadly, it's almost true... can't tell you the times I've roadtripped and you see the damn things , just warehouses with "Adult Video" on the top, show up out of nowhwere yet there'll be a sign saying 50 miles to the nearest gas station.  It's crazy!  The same with the b/w Jesus signs... those things are everywhere downhere!

 

xoxo

tb

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113784
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hmmmm....Sam is a photographer and has an onsite dark room.  Nick acted funny in the first chapter and he hangs out with Uncle Aro with the stars.  Edward is a star.  He could have very easily taken that photo of Edward and developed it.  But why?  Not to cause harm to his parents but to drive them back together somehow?

Perks my ears up:

Nick's smile faded and he sighed softly. How could he tell her? He had his suspicions about her and that made his secret even worse.

Yes, I went back and re-read the first chapter.  LOL  And I am looking at Nick and Bella's conversation with new eyes. 

Curious as to what this is all about:

Jackson watched his mother walked down the hallway and his smile faded. Nicholas was also the one that shared his secret and now there were two of them.

This time he was going to take matters into his own hands and he was going to tell someone. He had to and he hoped that Nick would do the same.

And this:

Jasper sighed, "Look man, I just think that there are things going on with Nicholas and maybe Jack. I don't know for sure, it's just a couple of things that I've overheard."

Hmmm...then scrolling up and seeing Jackson's reaction to Bella's eating then going right into Bella being a submissive.....interesting indeed.

Okay well, this has been a very interesting couple of chapters!  Can't wait to read about Edward going to the club to see what Bella is up too.  Eep!

Keye