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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254842
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Loved the chapter! Can't help but wonder if now Edward has a clearer vision of the ring he wants for Bella. Sounds like it. Bella's reluctance to wax completely is heart wrenching. James really did a number on her and I am so glad that Edward has a firm grasp on that.
I wonder if Bella will like the book that Jane sent her? *giggle*
Thanks for the shout out on the waxing video. When I saw it, you were the first person that I thought needed to see it! *grin*
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
I think he knows what he doesn't want to get her....BTW that is areal book and it's worth reading and perfect for sitting on the beach...((it made me laugh)) Thanks for sending the link and the joke. I sent it to M and she cracked up. i sent you a seperate e-mail as a thank you for leaving a comment ....lml
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Cracked up at this:
“Now that’s not really true,” Paul interjected. “There seems to be an imbalance between your daughters. It would appear to the outside that Leah is pregnant and therefore not getting any sex, and Bella is not and gets lots of it.”
Yep, that is quite the first impression!
The couple handing Bella and Edward the pamphlet? Hysterical! I always wondered why people think that they have to butt into people's personal lives. But butting into someone's sex life like that? Wow! That really takes some balls.
Don't really do the rock collecting thing as a habit but I have done it on the occasions that I have found a really spectacular rock. Shells too. Whatever happens to strike my fancy. My son loves rocks. He would be the one in the family that would start a collection. I think it is a fab idea!
Yes, I do see some of Leah's point. It is probably good that they are hashing things out and clearing the air. I figured it would happen but not so immediately upon arrival. But hey! It keeps things interesting. And I think it is going to be an interesting visit with Paul around stirring the pot!!! LOL!!
Absolutely loved this and I hadn't heard it before. It needs to be on t-shirts and bumper stickers!!!:
“I use that book as a teaching reference. In it he says that there are two acronyms for the word fear. One is ‘fuck everything and run’ the other is ‘face everything and recover.’ In any situation that I can control…I choose to follow the latter.”
Love Seth too. His saying to give him 15 more minutes and he would have been defiling the couch!! LOL!! Loved Paul's retort!!! LMAO!!! But you have to admire Bella for facing her fears, head on, and working to elimanate them.
Enjoyed the chapter and looking forward to seeing what happens next!! Maybe some verbal combat later between Paul and Edward or are they going to become buddies? And, what on earth, does Charlie think? LOL! Inquiring minds want to know! LOL!!
Keye
Author's Response:
hi Keye..Wow! where do I start with a reply ....like I said, the tract story was very true,, that happened and there are some people in our church who would think nothing of going up to someone and telling them what they think and then say they are doing it for the persons own good. Paul thinks himself a comedian... and he should be fun...((a little bit of fun ))...I think before we make bumper stickers we better get Stephan King's permission ,,, but then I say .,.. lets do it!!!...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Kind of on that same vein, wasn't there a movie where someone said, "Sometimes people just need killin'"?? Maybe a Western? IDK. I'm thinking that might apply to James since he is so entirely evil! I don't think you can cure evil, you know what I mean?
And speaking of James.................not only is he evil but he is what? Arrogant, perhaps? What balls on the guy to come up to Edward like that. I don't know what I expected for Edward to do at that point. He did the right thing not playing into James' game. I think he was trying to provoke Edward though.
The bit about Seth asking if his bed was defiled, the couch *cough*........well, I find that all very funny!
The James flashback.................ugh.................scary. It is hard for me to imagine that Bella would not run, screaming to her father, Jacob, any and everybody, about James. But everyone is different.
So, James.............in the flesh..........dun, da, da, da, dun!!!!
Keye
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Very interesting chapter. Sad to learn about Bella's childhood. Edward seems to be helping by giving her good memories about the woods behind the school. Geesh, James is a complete dick.........still. It wouldn't hurt my feelings any if he should just happen, to say, get the stuffing beat completely out of him or something like that. *shrugs shoulders*
Enjoyed reading this and cannot wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Yes, it is sweeter that Bella hit James. Is it wrong that I want James to suffer terribly for what he did to Bella? And that it makes me sick that he gets to walk around, enjoying his freedom and possibly hurting other women?
I don't know what to think about Jared.
Keye
Author's Response:
Hi Keye ... i don't think it is wrong at all...as a matter of fact I agree with you...lol....louise
Author's Response:
Hi Keye ... i don't think it is wrong at all...as a matter of fact I agree with you...lol....louise
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
They took her dog on a booty call? That is hysterical!!!
Keye
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
Don't apologize...you updated and that is all that matters.
The gerbil story was a scream. RIP Squeakers!
I don't care if Leah understands or not, that is not excuse for her being a continous bitch. *steps off soapbox*
I don't that Bella will stay made long at Jake. She probably isn't mad now. She just wants him to sweat.
Nope my first dog lemon! LOL!!
Loved WFE! The movie was f-a-r superior to the book. I, personally, did not care of the majority of the book and it totally escapes me how it ever became a best seller. It was too short, not fleshed out and she spent way too much time on the nursing home stuff which was not the point of the story. Thank goodness the movie didn't do that. They knew the focus. My only complaint about the movie was that I wished they would have given us a tad more about J & M's HEA.
I found it extremely sad that his kids were not more attentive to the old Jacob.
Keye
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
What is up with the 600 bucks? Can't wait to find THAT out!!!
Ouch:
“Charlie,” Sue’s tone was forceful. “You know what they do to the victims of such crimes. The way defense attorneys treat them, they turn it around to make it look like their fault, like they were asking to be brutalized.”
“After what that bastard did, no one would do that to her,” Charlie seemed sure of himself.
“You just did.”
Sue’s accusatory tone couldn’t have been more forceful if she had slapped him in the face. My father’s features softened as he looked at me with regret.
Reality has a way of slappying you right in the face, doesn't?
Cracked up at this:
while Charlie reminded him not to drive too fast because Oregon wasn’t going anywhere.
Yep, I would have had to stare at him too:
I couldn’t help but stare, cool, suave, sex-on-a-stick Edward Cullen has a bit of insecurity in him.
Love the fact that Edward is learning Quileute and is using it with Bella!
*skips merrily along to next chapter*
Keye
Author's Response:
Hey Keye...I missed your witty humor...glad that your ok,,,
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Um....wow! I learn something new everyday!!! Love it!!!
Cracked up at Vinny and his whole "napping" conversation!!!
Yeah, well, get used to it:
“fucking women, they tell each other everything…nothing is sacred.”
ROTFLMAO!!
Got the look when you said the guys eyes narrowed when Emmett said to watch out when Bella became pregnant. With such a close family, Edward is not going to be able to keep that just he and Bella's private info is what I'm thinking. Everything seems to come out in the wash at some point and time.
*scampers off, gleefully, to the next chapter*
Keye
Author's Response:
Don't we tell eachother everything?...lol....nothing is safe when women get together...lol
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
Now you can simply NOT say something like this and leave us hanging! LOL!:
What can I say, you don’t even want to know what happened with my mother-in-law and what she was a witness to. Let’s just say that almost 30 years later and it is still a topic of discussion.
Inquiring minds want to know!
Yes, Bella calmed him down quite nicely.
Bella seeking some type of revenge on Edward's past girls was funny. Loved the poem reference too!
The MTV Awards....loved them. Yes, Rob could have dressed better but I think he likes to be casual. But the joke was funny because Rob did mess it up. It is so him. Do you think Taylor was in on the kiss? He didnt' look like he was. He looked surprised. It would have cracked me up to see the look on his face if Rob had slipped him the tongue! LOL!
Can't wait to see BD, Cosmopolis and Bel Ami. BA is supposed to open in Novemeber! *squee*
So, I cannot wait to see what Bella's goals are!
Keye
Author's Response:
Bella was only daydreaming about all th nasty things she would like to do....lol,,,,and she needs to keep that shit to herself......
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
When Bella asked Edward why, I almost expected him to say, "Because I said so"! LOL!
Holy crap is right! Getting caught in a compromising position twice in one day is plenty. I would want to smack Edward for not noticing his family coming to the house!
Yes, yes...what is it indeed:
With all that going on around them there was no way for Edward’s parents be oblivious, so what was it?
Ohhhhh....so they thought Edward was flaunting his lifestyle so to speak.
Cracks me up!:
“What the heck!” Emmett’s loud voice boomed. “Haven’t you two had enough, there’s no nooky on the beach.”
At Emmett’s words Edward stuck his head out of the top of my shirt, stretching the neck opening as he looked at his brother, “Is that posted somewhere?’
Makes me want to run and make a "no nookie on the beach sign" LOL!!
Got to love Esme!:
Esme wrapped her arm around my shoulder holding me closer as her head leaned in towards mine and she whispered in my ear, “We all like our men to defile us dear.”
Why didn't Edward tell Bella about Jessica's letter and about Mike?
Uh oh...Bella messed up again! My guess is that Edward's hand is getting all itchy! ROTF!!!
Keye
Date: 11 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
When little Vinnie said that Bella couldn't "flash" Edward because Emmett didn't give her a flashlight, well that was precious!
Loved the whole chapter. The Cullen's always seem to have so much fun. I wanted to be adopted by them! LOL!!!
Can't wait to see what happens with all this Mike/Jessica situation.
Keye
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
Amen sister...couldn't agree with you more:
At that time I rationalized my points about how the establishment has forgotten the care of the individual to make room for what I consider to be socialized medicine. The insurance and drug companies have more to do with patient care then the physician who is treating them. I saw very quickly how persons other than the patient and their doctor call the shots with what is happening in the care of the individual. How certain treatments or pharmaceuticals are denied because they are not cost effective. It’s become a system of bartering for time and resources; we have exchanged quality of care for quantity, all in the name of making money for big businesses.
OMG...glad Bella had clothes one when she walked out and saw all the Cullen men..well, Jasper too, but you knew what I meant.
I adore Emmett and Jasper for very different reasons.
Edward using Jasper's "hobby" to set him straight on he and Bella's relations was PERFECT!
Why on earth would you lose anyone of the length of this story? It has flown by!
Can't wait to see what happens next. Have fun on your trip and be safe!
Keye
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
*dies laughing at this*
It was my own fault I told her to start at the beginning.
If he only KNEW what the girls talk about:
Is that a normal lunch conversation? And why the fuck is Alice telling Bella about Jasper’s balls?
Edward and the cost of the dress ponderings was flippin' hysterical!
Great joke played on Emmett. He fell right into that didn't he?
Go Esme!:
I think I just discovered where my Dom tendencies came from.
Great chapter....I cannot wait to read Edward and Bella's conversation about what happened with Alice, the dress, the kid reference and all that!
Keye
Date: 23 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Wow! I cannot believe that you have one more week of summer. This is the second week that my 8 year old has been in school!
Emmett begging for the baseball tickets was too funny.
How did Bella get the tickets? Have you said and I missed it? A friend?
Oh my gosh, can you hear your fans screaming "out-take of what happened with Esme and the Skank in the bathroom?" I can! *dies laughing*
Oz-born? LMAO!
Love this:
As long as they have clean clothes, hot food and a responsive body in their bed, they are happy. And once they always have those three things they will give their undying devotion to the woman who provides them with it.”
Yeah, well, you just have to be around a man that you want to have sex with....that is the key, isn't?
Like this line:
“And if you have enough energy to meet another women, you let me know, I’ll be more than happy to help exhaust you.”
Funny:
“That’s the first time I ever took my pants off after sex.”
Or both:
That sounded like a marriage or a D/s relationship
What burr is up Edward's butt about Jane and Bella's conversation? Geez....control freak much?
Huh....wonder what Carole's assignment is for Bella.
Yes, I am glad that she went out on the balcony to talk to Edward.....I just cannot wait to read the conversation! LOL!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Hi Keye... Actually my kids are going back to school a week early. They don't usually start until the Tuesday after Labor Day..and they get out around June 15th (something like that) ... Emery gave Bella the tickets when they were in Forks...She asked him to get them and Edward was standing there ((at the prade)) when Emery gave them to her...There is going to be an Esme OT...((there was always one planned I just needed to wait until the right moment and that's coming up really soon))...thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked the chapter...talk to you next time...louise
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
This chapter was filled with, I think, every emotion that one person could have....in short....it was excellent! Love the "red" at the end and I cannot wait to see what happens next now that the ice has been broken!
Keye
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
This was an emotional chapter. Glad you gave us some sort of comic relief in which Bella was trying to tell Edward a bit about all the other girl's sex lives...to include his mother! That was pretty funny.
Great update and I cannot wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Who the hell wants to hear about their mothers sex life...lol...Poor Edward and the mental pictures that created..lol...
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
You know, I would be thrilled to read any OT you want to write!
It is sad that Rose and Bella have that horrible situation to bond over. I still hope that the two men that abused them "get it" in the end somehow!
Had to laugh that Bella noticed that Emmett was "muscular" everywhere! LOL!!
I absolutely love that Bella kicked Emmett's ass! That was so funny. And everyone's reactions to it was pretty funny too!
I used to take Cardio-Kickboxing classes til the place shut down. It was the hardest class ever but I learned a lot and dropped a bunch of weight. I would love to find another class that good again!
This cracked me up too:
It had always been a point of contention with Emmett that Jasper jumped on our sister as soon as we left.
Another fab chapter...you never fail to disaapoint! Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Date: 16 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Hmmmm....yes Edward what do you mean:
“But I don’t like surprises” griping and pouting worse than any two year old.
“I know” he said touching the tip of my nose with his “… and that’s one of the things we are going to work on”
What the heck did that mean?
This was startling and funny:
“Such an innocent face, I’ll bet this one gets in the most delicious trouble”
Wow! Lots to digest in this update. James raping Victoria's 14 year old sister! Her resulting pregnancy. Then her hook up with Mike. Good grief!
Charlie's reaction through all of this was pretty funny in parts. But when both Edward and Charlie gang up on Bella when she said that she would just go talk to Karen? Priceless! Love that Bella then turned to Mr. Weiss and asked him if he was going to yell at her too! LOL!!!
Liked that Charlie spoke to Officer Hawk and had the conversation with Bella and Edward. I also liked that he asked Bella to call him, tell him about what James did so he could be put behind bars! Go Charlie!
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103
Well, this was certainly an informative chapter. Bella couldn't stay out of trouble to save her own life could she? And, is Dougie going to really talk to Edward about his prostrate and whether or not Bella "did it" right? *dies laughing*
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
This is very interesting and something that I had not given much thought about:
I took a deep breath “Each little step towards a deeper submission on your part excites me to no end, yet it also places on me the challenge of not only taking you there but making sure you are happy and fulfilled without stifling your personality. That all boils down to moving at your pace, if it was up to me we would have already been there and back. You’re the one who takes the lead, telling me what you’re ready to give and what you are not. Change is inevitable, your trust, understanding and desires are going to cause a natural progression to move into a deeper submission to me. You saw for yourself how your limits changed and that was only in a short amount of time. Now imagine five, ten, fifteen years down the road how much more you will be eager to give.”
Huh...hadn't thought about that she would be worried that Edward might want a slave like Jane. Interesting.
Like the analogy with the clarinet.
KSTW like as in KStew? LOL
As always, I enjoy reading your A/N's too. Honestly? People being rude over a story? *rolls eyes* Then not having the balls to name themselves? Sheer cowerdice and I like how you addressed that situation. You go girl!
Keye
Author's Response:
hi keye...ummm...no she wasn't worried that Edward would want that, Bella was more concerned that she would become that - a slave....
She wants to give him more of herself, yet it scared her becasue being a slave is not something that appeals to her...
KSTW?? LOL it does come out to K-Stew - that is funny and i had nothing to do with it - KSTW is a real TV station in Seattle - the rest was prue coincidence...lol
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Geez...nobody is good at keeping secrets it seems! LOL
The Fruity Pebbles convo was funny.
Bella's reluctance over a shopping trip and how Edward handled that was very amusing.
So Jess tried to break in the house. Got it. NOw what is the deal with Karen? What does she think that Bella has of hers? Edward? *puzzled*
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Man but Edward is demanding in this chapter! LOL! Having her stand in the corner? And I just bet he would have her stand in the corner in Safeway too! LOL! *smh*
Huh....an interesting reason why some ladies wear black!
Ohhhhh Jamie Lee Curtis!! That's funny to me for some reason.
Wow! What an interesting chapter indeed. I think that Bella seems overwhelmed that she has free reign over her own orgasms, don't you?
Keye
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Yeah, right! Mike's not coming back buddy!! LOL!
I find Douglas amusing!
Oh that was vulgar:
“Good because I’m planning on it being so thick, I’ll be able to scrap it off with a spoon.”
Good grief...wonder what the point of that is? Just because he can?
On Douglas, are you describing that guy who was that famous stylists assistant that now has his own show? Darn his name totally escapes me but I like him and that is who I am visualizing.
I feel like I received quite the education on the products. Got a kick out of Frank.
Man I had to go back and find the "sigh" that Edward punished her for. I hadn't realized that Bella couldn't sign due to other's people's actions. I thought Edward was only ticked when she sighed at him.
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
Huh...always wondered how to spell blayzah and now I know.
Emmett, as always, cracks me up. Here in particular about the dogs.
And what was up with Aro and Jane? I must have missed why she wanted to slap Aro?
Can't wait to read the description of Bella's ring when finished.
Awwww....Edward deleted all his numbers? He must have tons of space on his phone now! LOL!
Interesting:
She could explore the deep desires that lie within her all under the guilds of ‘it wasn’t me’.
One down and NINE to go in 45 mins???
WOW!
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
Wow....I couldn't even type our a review while reading. That was some tough punishment by Edward. Bella is right...she played right into his hands!
The lockdown? Why is Edward locking Bella down? I swear, why am I missing these things? LOL
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Thank you for this:
Jasper coming by to pick her up was on account of my fear about Bella being out on her own. I had no idea what Karen was capable of, Newton was not exactly the most reputable person and I hadn’t heard from Officer Hawk about Jess. Until all of those loose ends were tied up I didn’t want Bella out running around the city by herself.
That answers my question on the lockdown!
Damn...glad the punishment is over. Can't wait to read them discuss it!
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
Another great chapter. I have to say that I totally cracked up about Bella packing everything but the kitchen sink in her bag. It never hurts to be prepared! LOL!
Keye
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
Bella's comments on pate was a hoot!
Loved this:
What I won’t do is mourn the loss of something you never had. That gets you nowhere. It’s mentally exhausting and right now you need to be stronger than you have ever been, for Emmett, for the baby, and more importantly for Rose.”
Ha! I KNEW someone would need Advil! LOL!
Tapping? See? I learn something new everyday! LOL
She is grounded? Did I miss something?
Keye
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
Oh he tried to go all Dom on her and she held her ground. Good for her. That really wasn't fair play.
But I loved how Jasper was the voice of reason in all this.
Car trouble huh? Manufactured car trouble or just something that was bound to happen? And it was really great that Demetri was close by too.
Love the sapphire ring. Sounded really pretty.
I think Edward needs to get over the cereal thing and let the girl have some!
Keye
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
There is my Edward:
Call me an over protective dictator all you want, it wasn’t going to happen again because there was no way in hell Bella was ever leaving the house alone until the mess was settled. And if she didn’t like it – tough shit!
LOL
Okay...I give....she is grounded! ROTFLMAO!
Keye
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
Did you ever think that when you started this fic that you would ever be up to chapter 92? I find that amazing! And the story is still just as good as when it started. No small feat I would think. Just shows that you are a creative writer. Great job!
Love this:
She was gone, missing, but did that mean she was on the lamb or sleeping with the fishes?
The grounded thing is funny. Like she is a kid or something. And this? I can fully visualize this:
Edward roared, throwing his hands out like an umpire calling the runner safe. LOL
Wow...the breakthrough for Bella, finally admitting that James raped her.
And that Bella has those three men, her father, her husband and her best friend and brother-in-law all wanting her protected is awesome. And though there was a lot of testosterone flying around and she needed an extra dose of chocolate to deal with it all *wink* well, better to have those men in your life than James, right?
Loved the chapter. On to the next one.
Keye
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
Loving the beginning of this chapter in EPOV! It is a scream to read what was going on in his head especially when Isabella sighed! LOL!
Edward is the man! Most men would run screaming from having period sex, wouldn't they? IDK.
Crack. Me. Up. that Edward didn't want her using his razor! Loved her reaction to it too!
I just love these two together!
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
that's one of my husband's pet peev's - me using his razor ... lol ... i just had to put it in there ....thanks for reading ... louise
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
Okay so I am ever so curious about their pending bet! LOL! Think Officer Hawk is probably a good guy. Perhaps something happened in his past that made him that way? Something that he didn't catch in an investigation and someone got hurt or perhpas he missed something with a family member and it resulted in their death?
I wouldn't sell my house either! I may not even sell it if I had a ring on my finger. Especially when their is not need to.
Those are amazing numbers on the reviews.
Keye
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough
So is she going shopping with Alice or is that just too obvious.?
Wondering about Edward's musings about Bella being double teamed by James and Jacob and the very real possiblity that she was but that she has either blocked that out or she was passed out. And, what kind of man would do that? I'm talking about screwing a passed out woman? Good grief. But at an rate I hope we learn more on that.
No, I get it...Bella signed on for all that and it seems to be just part of the process....I have no problems with it....she seems to be enjoying herself and I don't think that Edward would ever intentionally hurt her. He loves her and has his best interests at heart.
Yeah...so OCB....I don't think that Bella is going to be able to keep that up....she craves Edward too badly. And, doing that is only punishment to herself in my way of thinking! LOL! I mean, Edward can always jack off to relieve his miseries but she cannot. Sooooo....I'm thinking she is going to get the short end of the stick....so to speak! LOL!
Keye
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough
Bless your heart that is aweful!!! On all accounts! I hope that you weathered the storm okay. I am no stranger to hurricanes with living on the Gulf Coast so I feel for you.
We will be here when you are able to come back!
Keye
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
Well, lot's of interesting stuff here. Edward is awesome in that he gets Bella to admit things about herself that she didn't want to for fear of what that meant about her time with him...specifically that she secretly wanted his abuse. Which simply is not true at all. And, no one ever deserves that type of abuse, well, except for Tanya and perhaps she might need a "taste" of James. LOL
Loved that whole discussion there at the end between Edward and Eleazar. So, it seems that Bella is related to Caius somehow. Interesting. Can't wait for more to be revealed.
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40308
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Contract
Cool. I was curious about the contract.
Keye
Author's Response:
Now you know...lol
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Bella's 3rd writing assignment
Love seeing what is going on with Bella.
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105120
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Short is just fine...you are writing and that is what counts, right?
Loved the chapter...can't wait to find out what happens at the party and after! *giggle*
Keye
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer
Awesome chapter! Dayum! I cannot believe that Esme had a part of anything with Tanya!! Don't blame Edward one bit for moving out. Bella was so sweet when taking care of Edward afterwards!
Also sweet that Emmett, Rose and Alice came to the demostration as a show of support for Edward.
Okay, Adam Lambert? Love him! That whole album is awesome!
So, looking foward to whatever you write next!
Keye
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology
Well that chapter was certainly yummy. I am so glad that Esme apologized and got that all cleared up. I enjoyed the chapter and look forward to seeing what happens next.
Keye
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Put in my vote! *checks off list* Great chapter. Enjoyed it. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas
Bella's punishment beats a spanking any day!! LOL!! I will be interested in knowing what Jasper does find. Refresh my memory, does Bella know that Edward can read her mind?
Merry Christmas to your and yours!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thank you Happy Holidays to you as well! so she does not know he is a vampire or that he can read her mind. but really how long can that last? There is a very good explaination to why she hadn't picked up on the little things yet, but that will come later.
Michele / nails233
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Uh huh.........Edward says he and Isabella are not a couple and yet he does not want to share. Very interesting! *snicker* Fun scene between Rosalie and Diana!
Can't wait to read more!
Keye
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Whew! A pissed off Edward is a hot Edward!! Can't wait for more!
Keye
Author's Response:
Yummy when pissed!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I just had to look up Bloodwood. That is a very pretty wood!! Love the red hue! Simply beautiful!!
Hmmmm...........so could Bella read Edward's mind or are they just that intune with each other? *Squee* The ILU's have been said!
Cracked me up:
Her eyes twinkled when I held up the ruler paddle. 'Seriously? Nothing says I want to spank you like a new paddle.'
Or you could have said, "Nothing says I love you like a new paddle"!!!! LOL!!
Went and read Bella's POV. I am totally an EPOV kind of girl but reading BPOV added so much to your story. Really enjoyed reading it.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Loved reading this the second time. Glad that you posted it here as well. Sorry to hear that you are feeling that you are not getting the love this story deserves! Well I love this story and I am glad that you take the time to write it! Maybe you just need some pimpage. Have you thought about writing a little smexy something for Squeeze My Lemon over at FFn?
I will PM you with some info, m'kay?
Now cheer up!!!! *wink*
Keye
He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC
For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Interesting making James the good guy in the fic. I like the change.
Charlotte is smart in sending Bella to Texas. In her car and to Jasper. Can't wait to see what all happens with that.
And, why do I get the feeling that James is going to do harm to Emmett? And, why hasn't he already? Seems like he doesn't care for him.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
It's hard to create a good suspenseful story when we all know who the good guys and bad guys are before the story begins. I wanted to shake it up a bit. James has his own agenda which will come out later.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
And I'll bet that Emmett had something to do with Bella's fathers death too, right?
Looking forward to the next update.
Keye
Author's Response:
Yes he did. You'll find out why later
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Uh huh...........so the mayor's wife knows that Emmett and his family are dirty or something like that? Hopefully, one day, Bella will stop being so darn naive. I know that it is part of her charm but really, I hope that she opens her eyes. But this all makes for a good story. Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Bella's blinders are going to start coming off soon to what kind of person Emmett really is. Her friendship with Charlotte is going to be very important to her.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Oh that is scary stuff!!! Bella pregnant by and going to marry the man who killed the love of her life and her father?? Scary!!! And I am thinking that Emmett was ticked off because he realized that Bella's stuff was all seperated in the boxes. He probably knew that she was going to leave him. It sure is going to be interesting to see what happens next.
keye
Author's Response:
He's definitely pissed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh man that was cold. "I win"! Whew!! It is a good thing that Bella came home with that shirt to announce that she was pregnant. I shudder to think what Emmett may have done to her had they had a slightly different conversation. Say about the boxes labeled with a "B"
Bella marrying Emmett, I feel, is just adding one more nail in her coffin that will contain all of her unhappiness. When she finds out about the real Emmett, I cannot imagine what that is going to be like! And if she finds out about everything else Emmett has done? Well this story is just going to continue to be just one long roller coaster ride, isn't?
I cannot wait to read more!
Keye
Author's Response:
I promise Bella will get off the rollercoaster before the end. :)
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
What a chapter. Poor Bella and her baby. I almost hate to say it but perhaps it is better that she is not tied to this man forever due to a child. I know, I know, that is awful to say but you know what I mean.
Hard to envision the normally "sweet" Emmett doing these things, isn't?
Okay so I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Emmett is actually one of my favorite characters in the books. (Hard to believe since I just made him the evil bad guy) I am so sick of everyone making him out to be some sort of Village Idiot, so I was hoping this would help inspire people to do something more with him. Good or bad, he's still hot!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Wow....that is just so sad for Bella. And then Rose on top of all that? Just awful. Love how you turn everything on its head. Emmett is evil and James is good. Way to shake things up!
Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like doing the unexpected with the characters so that readers can't just assume they know what will happen next.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
So Bella is starting to figure all this out. Thank goodness! Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. I'm trying to get the next chapter done for sometime next week. New job is keeping me very busy.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I can certainly understand that. Don't you hate it when RL interfers with your fun? LOL!! Well, whenever you are able to update, I'll read it!
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Nothing wrong with a Jasper/Bella story and I am so totally Team Edward! But I am not obtuse in that I cannot enjoy another good pairing and this story ROCKS. LOL
I love all that "ma'am" - ing that Jasper is doing! *sigh* I am a sucker for a good ole southern boy!
Keye
Author's Response:
Glad you like my Jasper. More to come soon!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Loved the update/recap;. It was a good way to handle coming back to the story. Your Jasper is a great character. All m-a-n but very sweet. Have to say that I love that Charlotte was yelling at him too. LOL Can't say that I blame her.
Can't wait to meet Maria Whitlock and read what she has to say about everything.
Welcome back!
Keye
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. It seemed a good way to get back into it and to show what kind of man Jasper is. Like any well raised southern man, he's quick to temper, doesn't stop to think before he opens his mouth, but a heart of gold.
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Great update. Love Maria! Hit the nail on the head when it was said that she was a force of nature. And, can you imagine being tired enough to sleep 24 hours straight? WOW!
Keye
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've only been that tired twice in my lifetime and one of them involved allergy meds that knocked me out. I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have it up by next week. Happy New Year!
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
What a come back you made with this chapter! It was a fabulous and fun read!
Welcome back and congrats on all the good stuff in your life!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thanks for being patient with me!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Funny line:
“Sure it does. You just have to twist your brain into a pretzel and cross your eyes to see it.”
Man that is a mean look if he looked like he ate kittens and puppies for breakfast. LOL
Oop! A shotgun wedding, huh? LOL
Loving JPOV.
That song is perfect for them. Glad that Jasper made a move!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it!
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389560
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
Wow...so everyone is cracking down huh? What's up with that? Good grief! Thanks for the update. Betting that E & B feel much better now too. *wink*
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
I am liking your story. Your Alice is a scary person! LOL!!! Hell even Bella is scared of her! Ha! Good work on nailing Jacob. Alice is something. So, we are in Seattle now. Bring on Edward!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
ay this chapter was fabulous! OME!! But Tanya is a beyotch and she is going to be trouble!!! You know that is bad when a guy has to jack off in front of you while thinking of another chick and when he is finished, he throws up at just the mere thought of you!!! Ouch!!! IDK............I'm thinking he might should have told her that so she would know there was not hope. On the other hand, she might have cut his balls off and handed them to him. Yep, maybe just getting her the hell away from his person was the best thing. Hope she doesn't have access to anything of his that he deems important. Keys to his home, car, etc.
Awwww.........Edward purposing to his mom was so sweet that my teeth hurt!!! Loved that. And, of course, she would still have the ring.
The new toy that Rosalie was testing on Emmett? So? Which one was it? Just curious! *giggle*
The flashbacks were fab. Just added to the story!
So, I think Esme knows. Perhaps Alice told her? And why wouldn't Esme or Alice for that matter, bother to share this new found knowledge of Bella not getting married, with Edward????
Needless to say, I cannot wait for the next chappie!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Btw, I´m working on a blog, so I can put up pics of the things featured in the story. I´m not very creative when it come to that sort of thing, so it may take me a little while, but I´ll let you know! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
I don't know what I enjoyed more. The internal monologues of Alice and Bella. Anything to do with Mojo. The big reveal of Alice and Jasper to Bella and Bella's reaction to it. Alice's note. And it goes on and on. I really enjoyed the chapter and I am dying to find out what happens next!!!
Can't wait!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Hmmmmm.....didn't Jacob recognize Bella's father's house before he walked in? I mean he must have known he was going to walk in on a shit storm right? Even if he didn't know Bella was there, certainly he knew that Charlie was going to be there and be pissed at seeing him?
Leah? Well, she just sounds awful. I just feel sorry for her kid! Having to have a mother like that. And if she treats cute little Seth that way, I cannot imagine how she is going to be with a baby.
Jacob....ugh! Just when you thought he could not get any more low down, he far succeeded my expectations!!! Good grief! He is lower than pond scum!
So, I am ready to see what's up with the disposible phones and calls and stuff. I cannot wait to read what happens next!!!
Happy New Year!~
Keye
Author's Response:
Jacobs never been to Charlie´s house, Leah lives in New Jersey and he and Bella lived in New York. The only reason Charlie didn´t kill him, is because Leah is pregnant and Sue´s and Seth are stuck in the middle of the Christmas clusterfuck! Lol! You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Loved it! I am with Edward and Pet...............can't hardly wait til they get in the playroom!!! *giggle*
Keye
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for! Laterzzzz:) Krazi and Mojo xoxo www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
Is it hot in here or is it just me? *grin* Yep, that was HAWT! Loved the photo you found of Rob at the beginning of the chapter. That was priceless! So, perfect for just being told that Bella was a vigin!! LOL! So, if all this preliminary smexxy time is so awesome, I can hardly wait to see what Edward has planned for the first time. Is he going to keep it all vanilla or is he going to go in a different direction? I cannot wait to see what happens next!!
Keye
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Very intense chapter. I cannot wait for them to find out who each other is. I cannot imagine how that will go. I mean they will be shocked but I cannot help but think that they weill be excited as well.
Good use of photos through the chapters as well.
I cannot believe anyone would say anything negative about Mojo. WTH???
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Keye
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Okay the conversations between Edward and his penis were priceless!! I LMAO reading all that!!! And BTW, what a hell of a cliffie!!!!!! I cannot wait to see what Edward has to say about all this. I mean, the whole evening was a shock to the system and now to be given this info too??? Wow!
Loved the chapter! I hope you guys are writing like speed demons on the update!!! LOL!!
Keye
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
So many parts that I loved about this chapter. This is just a few. Otherwise I would be quoting back to you the entire chapter! *smile*
I´d let him fuck me on top of one of those talking trash bins outside the CVS! Can we say, “thank you for the deposit!”
The feeling of his morning wood suddenly poking me in the back caused me to gasp. “Sorry,” Edward rasped, his voice still thick with sleep. His warm breath cascaded across my shoulder, causing my skin to pebble with goose flesh. “He wanted to say good morning; I hope you don´t mind.”
Pfft... mind? I was just thinking, how rude of me not to say, “Good morning” to him!
Where are my manners!
It took all the strength I could muster to get up off the floor and not go jerk one out before dinner. Instead, I headed to my room to wash up, changed into a pair of loose-fitting jeans and regrouped, all the while pouting like a Kindergartener. Yeah, Isabella took away my favorite toy... her pussy!
Wow, what a first time! I don't think it can get any better than that, can it? Oh and Edward said the ILY's! *Squee* Now you know that Bella loves him too. Maybe she was just surprised that he said it? I mean, she came to the hotel suite thinking he was going to dumb her so wth does she know? LOL!!! Like a guy would drag a woman to the Presidential Suite to dump her ass! More like take her to Dairy Queen for Blizzard! LOL!!!
Great chapter.........can't wait to read what happens next!! Oh, and I love the photos. Everyone who doesn't can suck it! *wink*
Keye
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoy my whacky sense of humor! Lol! Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Loved reading the chapter. Looks like these kids are getting along really, really, well* *winks*
Wow! That was fast Edward asking her to move in with him, with her dog no less. But, like, he said, he has been in love with her forever so........
The annulement! Yay! The 10 mil is not bad either! LOL!!
I cannot wait to see how Edward tries to get the dog on his side and Bella to move in with him! LOL!
!
Keye
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
Oh my gosh...reading about Edward vs. Mojo and all those antics? That was a scream!!!! And the score keeping? Genius!
Laughed out loud reading this:
I just chuckled lightly, they were the complete polar opposites, where Alice needed Ritalin, three times a day, and Bella was always as calm and cool as a cucumber.
Had to laugh at this too:
I cocked an eyebrow in his direction at the choice of his words. “Did you just say that you could feel the love radiating of me, Whitlock?” I grinned in earnest.
But, yes, Jasper put him right back into his place, right? *grin*
*grumbles something about 'damn lucky Bella'*:
“Besides... being fucked six ways to Sunday, looks good on Bella.”
Yeah, busted by Charlie I'll just bet!!! Buaahaaaa!
Keye
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...
Great chapter. Edward and Bella getting pulled over by Charlie was a hoot! But then you have the all out brawl at the end? Wow! Can't wait to see what happens next on that little topic!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18! Krazi xoxo
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Am I seeing double? LOL!!! This chapter is posted twice, right?
Keye
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2
Loved how Edward handled Tanya in that he got Tyler to get rid of her. Loved the photo of Tyler too.
Loved who you chose for Mrs. Cope too!
Snickered when I read this:
fucking purred with satisfaction.
The whole conversation between Carlisle and Edward was fabulous but I almost choked on my margarita (hey, it's Saturday night, what can I say) when I read this:
“Oh close your damn mouth, Edward,” he scolded jokingly. “I may be old, but I´m not dead. I know that Bella´s driving around somewhere in Seattle with your balls in her purse. Where the hell do you think Esme keeps mine?”
Good pic of the message from Isabella too.
Awwwww.....love the puppies!!
Another fab update!!!!! Can't wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...
Love the nod to 'Forrest Gump'!
Had to laugh at Esme's "thanking" Carlisle...so many times....for being able to keep Brownie! LOL!!!
Love dinner at the Cullens!! Oh Em Gee...that is soooo funny!!!
Oh yes, who wouldn't want Edward to make them say that they were moving in with them....in THAT way?? LOL!! Lucky heifer!!!
Died laughing when I read this:
My inner sex goddess taunted saucily while sipping a Mojito in one hand and holding an ice pack to her worn coochie in the other.
Belly Boop! Love Em's nickname for B!
Edward whining that he doesn't get his "special" time on Wednesday! LOL!! I am sure that Bella is going to miss that too!
Love, love, loved this update and cannot wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
Well hello UPOV? Good grief! He sounds like a monster!
*grins* I am loving Mrs. Cope:
“Don´t you stand there gaping at me like a fish, I´ve got eyes boy, and I ain´t no fool,” she saucily replied, eying me over her glass.
I can just imagine this:
Believe me it wasn’t easy, because I wanted to squeal like fucking girl, I was so happy.
That completely cracks me up!
Damn what a cliffie!!!
Hope your birthday was the best one yet!
Can't wait to read more later!
Keye
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
Had to laugh when I read this:
Flying always relaxed me, so it was no surprise to me that I had fallen into such a catatonic state once we were airborne. That, and a good hard fucking, will make anybody pass out.
Yes, the airlines would not be going broke all the time if they could arrange for this type thing! LMAO!!
Love your sense of humor:
I had no doubt that he thought I was a few nuts short of a Payday
Honestly!
Full named her and added "Black"? Ugh! Going to be a rough visit I see.
Okay, totally cracked up when Bella told her mother that she would have much preferred to disrespect her mother from home! Priceless!
I have to say....I am loving Phil's style...protecting Bella and seeking revenge against the Blacks? Oh yeah! Love that!
The long distance play time? Wow!
But the best thing? Renee sending her home to Edward! *squee*
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
You know me, gotta throw a little humor in the mix! Lol! Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!
Krazi
xoxo
FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!
Hope to see you soon!
Date: 13 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
I had to crack up about Edward and the dogs! Seriously...that was funny stuff right there...all of it! LOL!
Who knew that a little anal sex could get Edward to profess undying love! ROTFLMAO!
Great chapter.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination
Was momentarily confused since this chapter posted 3 times! LOL! But, honestly? It is so good that it should be posted more than once! LOL!
Master is grueling, withholding orgasms then having to work for endless nights. Then, on top of that, Bella having the week from hell...what girl wouldn't fall off the edge of insanity?
Can't imagine what is going to happen next. Will Bella get some smexy time from her boyfriend then punishment from Master? *eep*
Keye
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...
The "swimmers ear" comment was a scream! Never heard that term quite used that way. LOL
Loved all the photos and the chapter was superb. Interesting that Edward would not all Charlotte to meet his sub til he spoke to Peter. That sounds like it is going to be an imporant conversation! LOL
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!
Krazi
xoxo
Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.
As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.
“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.
“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”
Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”
“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”
“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.
No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.
Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only. “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”
“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.
“And what color are you now, Isabella?”
Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.
Trust me, Isabella!
You need this!
I need this!
We need this!
I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”
My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.
“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140942
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
My deepest sympathy to Ari!
Okay, the whole conversation that Angela was having concerning her waxing et al?? Hysterical!!
And Edward did not say a word about what he heard about a Ben "calling and calling". Does he already know or does he just not care to ask?
Edward hiding under the bed? Priceless! What some guys will go through for nookie!! LOL!!!
I pretty much LMAO while reading the entire chapter!! Ready to read when you are ready to post!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Keye
Author's Response:
The wax convo.......was real....I had a client that wanted me to put a T in her bikini...hence the I dont get paid to make shapes...LOL
Im so happy u laughed through the whole thing....I tried and had fun writing...hmmmm did Edward hear the things about Ben??? im not sure...we shall see
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted
Well, well, well..........interesting turn of events. Bella and Ang banding together to solidify the whole chicks before dicks thing is heartwarming! ROTF!!!!!!!!!!
This line cracked me up:
What does one say to that? I find your husband extremely fuckable, and I can't keep my hands off of him?
Oh and Rose? Man you have GOT to love her!!! I bet Em had to take a moment there and ponder a dominant Rose! LOL!!!!
And Edward, the gun virgin? Meet my friends Smith and Wesson!!!!
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read what happens next!!!
BTW, your how to get kicked out of church skit? Too funny!! You girls certainly keep me entertained!!!!! :-)
Keye
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy
Great story. Love it. Kitten and Spartan. And now that they have found each other, the real fun begins. As Kitten wants time and Edward wants Bella, he thinks that trying to make her jealous by doing things for his wife is going to help?? That's rich! Not to mention the fact that now his wife is going to think he wants her again. I do suspect that Eric and Ang will end up together therefore paving the way for Edward and Kitten to be together. And wow!! Elevator sex, huh? You know that there are camera's in just about every elevator in an office building, right? They gave some bored security guys some excellent footage!!!! LOL!!!
Well, I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Your review was fantastic...xoxoxo...heres another chapter coming right up....xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness
Oh the angst of Bella! You know it would be better if those two crazy kids would actually have a conversation! They are so passionate all the way around that it is proving difficult. LOL!! Edward. Dumb Edward, leading his wife on and pushing Kitten away. I'm thinking that is not what he is trying ot accomplish.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Ohhh i cant wait for the rest.........thank you sooo much for reviewing.....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings
LOved the chapter. Who would think that Eric would turn out to be such a douche? Yeah, I think it was him that trashed the house. It was too "personal" to be done by anyone else. Oh and the whole conversation about the "sports sock" and all that? Hysterical! And I cannot wait to see what happens now that Bella is going over to Spartan's HOUSE!!!!!! *squee* That is going to be something!!!!!
The video was rocking!!!! Loved it. What software did you use to make it? I am always curious about stuff like that.
Ladies, as always, great job and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
I use one true media for the videos.....its free. thank you soo much for the review...and yes....SQUEALLLLLLLLLLLS with u...she going to see spartan...heheheh....sports sock,..oh god its a joke between me and my friends at work for a while now...so i figure i write it in the story and share....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
That is priceless. Edward humping the couch! LMAO! Then standing there, little man in hand, when in walks the Troll and Kitten??? ROTHLMAO!!!! Okay, the cliffie at the end? I want to congratulate you on one hand for it being so genius and yet slap with the other hand because you left us hanging and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!! *giggle*
Oh and I love Emmett and Rose. I mean, when Edward had to hand the phone back to Em so that Rose could tell him to knock the crap out of Edward? Too funny! I just enjoyed the whole chapter.
I was also thinking that Edward better wise up if he wants Kitten. However, looks like Kitten just took matters into her own hands, didn't???
Like I said, I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
*squee*
Keye
Author's Response:
I cant wait for u to read the rest...were very proud of this story...love making u laugh. emmett and rose....Ari wrote that great....the fish everything....xo
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody
Oh yeah, Edward messed up big time when he told Ang to go eff Ben. No one knew about that but Bella, right? Well, Edward heard it when he was hiding under the bed. As if enough shit wasn't going to hit the fan, now they have a psyco beotch on their hands!!!! Mmmm...mmm...mm... I cannot wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
LOL We can't wait to see what happens next ourselves! We're busy working away on it. Yes Bella was the only one who knew. And Edward did mess up when he let it slip that's for sure!
Thanks you for your review!
x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0
Ari & DLIR
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Well I just loved the chapter. So much drama!! Angie is cracking me up. I mean, she doesn't really want Edward but she doesn't want anyone else to have him either. And the sad thing about it all is that Edward and Bella's "true" love suffers.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Well Im just about to work on part 2.....and then Im posting
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
The video was awesome! Really enjoyed watching that! I am glad that you clarified the name of it because I could not find it prior to reading this update. And this update? It was hawt!!!! Loved it! The reunion was oh so sweet! I can't really blame Ang for not wanting to let Edward go. Hell I wouldn't want to let him go either. So curious as to who is making the calls to both Spartan and Kitten. Are they the same person? And WTH are they calling them for? Geez?? Interesting that we have not heard much from Eric too. Wonder what he is up to??
The quilt was super sweet. I like that better than a diamond necklace any day. Don't get me wrong. Diamonds are nice but a thoughtful gift like that? Priceless! Good thinking on Edward's part letting Em know that they were going to be late. But wouldn't they expect that already? Especially since the kids have not seen each other in what? 15 days? So, really, is it all that much of a surprise that they would be late? Hell, I am surprised that they are leaving the condo at all! LOL!!! I would be hard pressed to do so!!!!
Great update. Totally enjoyed reading it. Loved the song choice and the video rocked as well!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Wow thanks for the awesome review! God that's just...awesome!
We loved writing this chapter. Nope I wouldn't let Edward go either! Huuuh We are wondering also who is making the calls :)
We are working away on the next chapter right now!
x0x0x0x0x0x0x0xx0x0x0
Ari & DLIR
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club
Great chapter. Funny that Kitten was trying to use sex to get the honeymoon desination out of him! ROTF!! Serves him right that she had a billion pieces of luggage when they boarded the plane.
The exchange with Alice when she came over to pack was funny as well as Emmett calling Edward up at 600am just because he was bored! *dies laughing* Rosalie didn't sound too happy with Emmett now did she?
I can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
hahahah were glad u enjoyed it ....lets just say...french spartan will heat up the second part....
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale
Whoop! Whoop!
ROTFLMAO at your beginning A/N!
Great line:
Well Mister, I'm-not-too-fuckin-smart-cuz-I-just-totally-pissed-off-Rosalie-Hale. Your ass is fucking going down.
Now, just who doesn't, LOVE this Rosalie?? My hero!!! LOL!
Geesh...but you keep the suspense up throughout the whole chapter. Can't breathe while reading it! And I cannot seem to read it fast enough to suit me either.
Carlisle...you just GOT to love him to:
"You're one hell of a women, Rose! You got any single sisters? A mom… hell, I'll even settle for your grandma as long as long as she's as feisty as you." I
Um...hello? Anyone else feel this same way? *Keye raises her hand*:
Not to sound like a bitch here or anything, but she should have thought about Edward before running to Angela.
Oh but your ending A/N?? The prayer?? OME!!! That was completely awesome!!!!
Do I have your permission to post that on another site, giving you both full and complete credit of course, but it is just to good to leave here and not share with others!! *bats eyelashes* Pwease??
If you would rather me not, I will totally understand and respect your wishes. I will cry uncontrollably, but I will respect your wishes.
Keye
Author's Response:
Whoop Whoop...thanks babes...u were the first one to do that :D
And we love to make u laugh with A/N
Ari writes Ro amazingly
and the prayer is totally not mine....someone sent it to me a while back and I found it approriate to use in the A/N sooooo go ahead and share cuz its been around the web soo not sure who actually wrote it
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners
Late, schmate..............you updated.............I'm happy! I mean, you could update everyday and I would be happy too. Estatic even, but late? Well late is better than never, you know hwat I mean??
OME Emmett is hysterical!! Well Rosalie and Emmett interacting are hysterical!! And all that Columbus stuff? A scream! I don't even know where to begin to say what my favorite part of the chapter was. I mean, it is ALL my favorite!!! Love this story! You guys do a fabulous job!!!
Wow! I cannot believe that Spartan already wants to get Kitten a wedding ring! *Squee* So, exciting!!!! Better rein in Em on the bachelor party though!! That boy is going to get himself in so much trouble! *giggle*
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the awesome review.....we have sooo much fun writing and to see reviews like urs make us smile and write more.....I love our em and ro....part 2 actually has me liking ro even more than Em....heheh......and columbus *snort* I had too...I was actually nervous about that part..wasnt sure if people would think what he did was tmi....so i didnt go into TOOOO much detail.....cant wait to see what u think of part 2
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2
Ok the Warning, Private Property portion of you A/N? Totally cracked me up!! You girls are crazy and I completely love that about you two!!! Just sayin!!!!
Wow! Some yummy drawn out smexy time! Now, I don't know how she resisted not completely jumping his bones at the spa, you feel me? I would have jumped him there AND at home. *shrugs shoulders*
Dun, dun, dun........is right. Eric is lose? Yeah well my prediction is that he is going to get his ass kicked by Edward or Rosalie and if I were him, I would probably be more scared of Rosalie! LOL!!!! I'm guessing she would tear his ass up!!!! *wink*
And oh crap....what if Edward didn't take the spare key and now Eric has it?????? Or is he even in the damn house already??????? Eeeeep!!!!
Emmett trying to pick out Rosalie's ring was really, really funny! And if I am not mistaken, Ang better sign those papers or I am guessing Rosalie will fukk her up!!! *giggle*
Well, needless to say, I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
hahahha omg ur review had me cracking up myself..... lets c where do I start...The A/N Ari is queen of those...I just try to do her justice. And the spa thing....I take my work really serious and wanted her first time "treating him" to be what she is devoted to....dont worry if I have my way they will bless that god damn spa....every inch of it......lol. FUCK ur theory about Eric having spare key and or in the house sent shivers up my spine nevermind....That i cant tell u but That was pretty good my friend. Dopey ring, Ari once again.....xoxoxoxo thank you for revieweing and let me know if u want a teaser i can send
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hell YES I want the teaser! Like you would really have to ask!! LOL!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
hahahahha ok twist my arm....ow ow ow
xoxoxoxo
"Bella?"
I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What’s he want?" Jessica whispered to me.
"I don’t know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.
He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.
Mike, that’s his name.
Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I’m Jessica."
I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.
His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.
"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.
He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don’t know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."
I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.
"An Angela Masen came to me today."
My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.
"What the fuck did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.
"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life. I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."
I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."
I shook my head not wanting to hear this.
"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick
Jumpin’ Jesus on a mother fuckin pogo stick! Damn, Edward cannot even get stuck in the elevator for 5 minutes without having something happen to Bella!! Good thing that the were able to get all that sex in because no telling how long they will be apart! *stifles giggle*
Great chapter. Totally hot. Almost made me sore just reading it ! *clasps hand over mouth not believing I just said/wrote that* LOL!!! Needless to say I cannot wait to find out what happened with Bella. BTW I am still ROTHFLMAO about Bella's safeword!!!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
LOL I love you! You are the 1st to give me that.
LOL Come on say it with me...Almost made me sore just readin it :) See it's not that bad right LOL
Bella's safe word was totally DLIR I mean who in the hell comes up with that as a safe word? Oh wait I know DLIR LOL God I love her. We are busy workin away on the next chapter.
Thank you for your kick-ass review sweetie!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
OME! Aren't Jessica and Mike adorable??? And I like your Mike........the way he looked out after Bella by giving her the tape? Sweet!
The ring! OME!!! Beautiful! I love that you have photos!! Rosalie and Emmett completely crack me up with their different styles of approachin things! Gotta love it!
Going to be interesting to see how Angela reacts to the new way of handling the divorce. She is going to be P-I-S-S-E-D. But, really, it has been more than enough time for Edward to get in line and get ticked off at her already. I know that he was trying to be nice but really, he has done all he should in that matter. It is time to move on.
So, Yorkie the Dorkie............can't help but wonder what is up with him.
All in all...........loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
I love this mike and Jessica...I cant wait for the story to progress xoxoxoxo
heres a teaser
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door