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Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100558
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: misska Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You

Bella could always kindly ask Edward to get one of his shirts and then proceed to offer Tanya her top, while dressing herself in Edwards shirt! Afterall- if she really needs a top, beggars cant be choosers!



Author's Response:

haha! That was a really good idea :) Thanks for the review

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63795
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: misska Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Five

okay first... I LOVE this story... so thank you for writing it.

on this chapter:

well I must admit- you nearly gave me a heart attack... I was hoping and praying that this chapter would not end up or show Carlisle and Tanya hooking up- because I think I would just about die of a broken heart if anything happened between them too (not to mention, I'm really not liking the fact that she's married and was happy to make a gross play for Carlisle both by herself and then trying to get Bella in on the action- and it goes without saying that I would hate for Carlisle to ruin his blessed character in the story by cheating or anything near there...

 

But then... you blew me away with what happened between Edward and Bella this chapter... WOW! or WOAH!
While I'm intrigued to know why she kissed him back even a little bit- I really didn't see this coming... I didn't think Edward would be so pushy... I can't wait to read more and see what Carlisle's reaction may be.

I'm very interested to see what happens in the end... I can't see Bella with anyone but the very very lovely Carlisle at this point and I don't know if it's realistic to think that if something did happen between them- that Edward would happily keep Bella in the fam after his dad has already had sex with her... that's just weird and would make for awkward family dinners let alone explaining to Molly..."Hey, here is Carlisle- he used to be my lover but now he's more like your grandpa..." eeewww. But what will happen with the other leading characters (Edward) and not so-leading (Tanya, Esme).....

I'm on the edge of my seat anf keen as beans for more...

looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Wow-your review is so long!  Thank you so m uch for takign the time to read and comment to let me know what you are thinking!  I love it!

I want to warn you that Tanya isn't gone (neither is Esme).  Life can never be simple, thus this story isn't going to be simple.  Edward will find out some information in the next chapter that he doens't know what to do with.  You'll see what I mean when you read it.  Anyway, getting back to Tanya, she's a skank.  I never liked the character in Breaking Dawn.  Fan fiction is fun because you get to play around with established characters.  There are some characters that kind of always stay the same to me...like Carlisle.  He is my favorite character from the series.  he will always be kind and nice.  Edward always comes out all right.  I hope I have some what improved Bella (I think she's whiney and a bit annoying in the books, in the movies she isn't so bad).  Tayna to me is someone who just will always be annoying and a skank. 

Now, getting back to Back to Boston, Edward..poor Eddie.  he isn't a bad person or a creep.  he is just thinking compulisivly and irrationally.  Bella realizes the kiss was a mistake and it comes up again. 

 

I'm still working out the ending.  there are a few more twists and turns coming up. Hope you stay and read the rest of it!  I'm so glad that you are so intersted in it!  I'm about to post chapter twenty six now.

 

Thanks again for reading :)

-Lisa

PS-Your comments towards the end made me chuckle!  So funny!

 

Reviewer: misska Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three

Renee, hey.... glad she's not my mum.
Calling her daughter a tramp because she has another baby to another man AFTER THE FIRST LOVE DIED... classy- what is she just supposed to put an "no longer open" sign across her ovaries - cause guess what? I'm pretty sure that no matter who she dated next, if she fell pregnant to them- it would still be two babies to two different fathers!
She takes the cake though in telling Bella to 'play the field' after she's had the baby- because that doesn't scream "TRAMP" at all does it Renee...

I do kinda get the whole knocked-up and not married thing though- more in the sense that Bella and Carlisle haven't discussed committment or living together or anything like that yet and it's kinda pissing me off - it's like they're not taking the whole thing seriously enough, like they're living in denial or massive procrastination!

Not sure what to make of Bella telling Molly that she can't call Carlisle 'daddy' or give him a card that says 'dad'... if I were Molly I wouldn't be holding out much hope for actually being included once the baby comes- a fear that she's already expressed.

Not totally sure about the new plot twist/event either- seems a little much that something happens to Molly both times she's in the care of someone else - way to give her mum anxiety about ever going away again...
But in saying that- I've enjoyed the story so far and I feel like I can trust you to make it good :)

looking forward to the next update! thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

First off all, thank you so much for reading and leaving yoru thoughts.  I loved reading what you are thinking!

Renee is overboard just a little.  SHe isn't trying to be a bad mom.  She wants better for her child.  She was out of line and that will be addressed later on.  Their main focus is Molly after all! Renee might have soem remorse on some of the things she said or called Bella.

The committement speech will be coming up in a few chapters down teh road...don't you worry my friend :)

Bella's thoughts on the whole not calling Carlisle daddy thing is simple.  She loves him but doesnt' want to make the decision for him.  She feels like she is living a dream and has found her prince charming and yadda yada yada.  She doesn't want to press too many buttons.  She wants to talk about it with Carlisle first and not just assume that it will be okay.  She's not saying it to be mean or make her daughter sad, it's just she doesn't want to step on too many toes.

The new twist....why should Bella and Carlisle have it easy?  No one wants to read a story where things just happen so easily, do they?  What's a little drama?  I do think that Bella might be ready to move to the mountains and never leave and homeschool Molly and her new child after this exprence....however, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right?

Thank you for your compliment on writing adn trusting me things will work out in the end the way they were meant to be (or as I invisioned it:)).  I'm still going to try adn update this week even though I updated twice.

Thanks again!

-Lisa

 

 

 

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72893
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: misska Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm interested to know where you are going with this story. 

 

If it's a story simply about abuse, sadism and revenge - then I would prefer to know now. 

 

If it's a story that will end up with Bella being 'saved' or finding a way out either through another character like Edward or Carlisle coming good, changing his ways and being different to Bella, then I'm more likely to stick around. 

 

Would really appreciate it if you could let me know. Feel free to private message me - I won't give anything away that you'd like to keep private. 

I can deal with a bit of sick and twisted but can't deal with it if that's all there is. 

 

Will be be interested to hear from you! Thanks! 



Author's Response:

As I stated in my A/n at the start of chapter four, this will not be a feel-good story where Carlisle suddenly grows a heart and starts to care. He's insane, and heartless, a true sexual sadiest. Yes, Bella will get her revenge, but she will have to endure a lot first. Most likely, Edeard will not be making an appearance in this fic, still not sure about the Em, J, A, or R, and there will be a sequel.