I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I thought it was both funny and intense at times which I loved.

Got to say having sex on the stairs is good fun, but does bloody burn LOL.

I like the two new harpies that have joined. Can’t wait to hear what trouble they cause Bella.

Edward just cracked me up when he was talking to Bella about the actor that she likes and when he said to her “They say that he’s helped to improve the level of vaginal moistness, in women the world over, above a certain age! Added to that is the fact that he also, allegedly, increased the sales of sex toys and batteries by over one thousand percent! How fucking mental is that?” At this point I nearly spat my drink all over my laptop LOL.

I liked it when Edward punished her by paddling her arse. I think it’s good to read about that side of their relationship too. She did after all break her rules and she has signed her body and mind over to Edward. I think they both needed this in order to keep that part of their relationship going. There is no point them entering into this type of relationship if he isn’t going to punish her for misbehaving.

I thought it was really interesting reading about Edward using bondage tape on Bella because I’ve never read about that before. All I could imagine was black electrical tape LOL.

I’m really looking forward to reading what happens next with that scene, and how they both cope and deal with. Thank you so much for updating, loved it and really looking forward to next one. Take care CB x