Reviews by cindbear3
Summary:

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Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You alwaus write great, romantic stories. This one is starting off great! Update often!

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I really enjoy your story. It is so sweet with just the right amount of spice!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JaimeArkin

How long can you lust after your best friend's brother before you give up hope? How do you reconcile an attraction for someone you've thought of as a little sister? How long can two people dance around their feelings before they dance together? E/B AH Banner by JaimeArikin.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Kit's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80259 Read Count: 56323
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Nov 2011
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Can You Feel the Love Tonight?

Great story! I love the angst they are feeling. Hopefully, Edward gets his act together soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Glad you're enjoying it!

Sandra

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44756
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like how your story is beginning. Can't wait for an update! It seems so romantic!

Author's Response: I am so glad this story is being so well recieved. Thank you.

The Inheritance by iambeagle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three stipulations are keeping Edward from receiving his inheritance money, one of them being he must obtain a serious relationship. His solution? Pay Bella to pretend to date him. There's absolutely no way this plan can backfire. AH, EPOV

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64211 Read Count: 36558
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2011 Updated: 12 Oct 2011
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love your story. The snarkiness works great.

Author's Response:

:) thank you for your kind words!

Summary:


Cocky young Edward Cullen makes a promise to his best friend, James to keep Bella safe.

Will that include marrying her? Written by myself and Lynzi whose idea it was!


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109789 Read Count: 37578
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2011 Updated: 08 Sep 2011
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Claimed (V)

I love your story! It is so sweet. Awesome

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103458
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

WOW!!! Update soon!

Author's Response:

Not sure if you've seen it yet, but it is up. Hope it's not too disappointing. And thank you for WOW :)

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100852
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Contact

I love the story. Please update soon. Love the sexual tension.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 262605
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Warning Signs

Great story. I like the storyline.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the story love.  I love this storyline too, and I am so excited to be a part of bringing it to you all.  On behalf of Nikky and I both, thanks for reading and reviewing. 

Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 3 teaser, subject to changes during the beta process…
Fuck my life! I have been here in a hospital room all night, on a heart monitor.  They made me turn off my cell phone.  I was in so much stress; I should have had them call Emmett last night.  I am sure that I am in hot water with them all, for not showing up.  I am waiting for the doctor to come in with my test results.  It felt that I was having a heart attack, or something.  I really hope that was not the case, I mean come on I am only twenty-eight.  I am an overall healthy man.  I exercise and don’t eat a lot of fattening foods.  I mean people my age don’t have heart attacks, do they?

“Good morning Mr. Masen, I am Doctor Hall,” he says holding out his hand for me.

“Good morning,” I say shaking his hand.

“Well I read over your case notes from last night and this morning, how are you feeling now?” his face is giving nothing away.

“I feel a lot better than I did last night, everything has returned to normal.”

He nods his head writing notes on my file in his hands.  “How long have you been getting suffering from heartburn?”  He looks at me questioningly.

“On and off for the past three four months,” I say letting out a breath before talking again, cutting off Dr. Hall.  “Look I don’t mean to be rude, but what happened to me last night?  Did I have a heart attack?  That is how it felt, can’t you just tell me?  I mean really let me know what was happening, and then I will answer all your questions?”

He put down my file and stops writing his notes, as he sits back in his chair.  “I am sorry Mr. Masen I tend to get ahead of myself.  Last night you suffered a rather harsh panic attack,” he says. 

All I am thinking is this guy is off his rocker.  I mean really where did he get his medical degree, Mickey Mouse Club House, or the bubble gum machine?

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Walls We Build

Great story. I want to cry for her.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing our story.  Nikky and I are very proud of this story and it takes a lot to write things sometimes that even upset us.  We really needed to show just how darkly tainted Edward is, and unfortunately right now many of you hate him.  I know it will take a lot for you to relinquish those hatred feelings, but we hope that we are great enough writers and story tellers to achieve making you like him again.  We know it is always easier to burn a bridge than it is to rebuild it, but we promise to put forth the effort in doing so.  We want to thank you in advance for your votes, support, rec’s, and for just being on this twisted journey with us.  This story will be somewhere around 30 chapters when all is done and said.  We hope that you continue to read and review and share with us your thoughts.  From the bottom of our hearts, and to the moon and beyond... Thank you.

Kasi (& Nikky)

Chapter 6 Teaser… All Subject to change during the beta process…
The shitting feeling is still there, and I have no idea what the fuck I can do to get rid of it.  I head over to Jasper’s office hoping to see him.

“Jasper says that you can go in now.” I look at the woman speaking, and I give her a curt nod as I head into his office. “Edward,” I look at him and he stops talking, and tilts his head to the side.  “Okay, what is going on, what happened?” He asks as he waves at me to sit.  I sit down on the seat across from him and rub my face.  I sigh unsure where to start, so I jump up and start to pace the floor.

“I screwed up, and I mean I really screwed up this time.  Jazz, I fucking hurt her, and I mean really fucking hurt her.  I don’t know how to fix it.  How I can get her to forgive me for what I have done?  I mean, fuck I’ll be lucky if she even speaks to me again.  Well really I know she will because she, fuck, I don’t want to say she is weak, but if I talk to her she will reply. How do I make right Jazz, without putting myself out there?  I don’t want to get hurt again, I could with her and I can’t go through that again.  Fuck, but I don’t think she do that, to anyone really.  She’s not made that way, but I have really gone and hurt her bad.  I never gave her a chance, I was still. . . no, I am to fucking scared.  In this case I think I made a new friend, but the dream. . . and I thought she stabbed me in the back like all the others.  I see her face in my dreams, the last two nights have been worse than all the rest.  I can see how much I hurt her, and the bad thing is she did nothing to warrant my anger.  All she did was fucking help me, time after time.  So many times, and she has been so hurt before and I know it’s been bad.  I can see it clearly in her eyes, the pain and the fear.  What if I push it what if she can never let anyone in ever again because what I did.”  I am still pacing and pulling my hair, I am so upset.  “Fuck Jazz I was a real fucking prick, and complete asshole to her.  Tell me what I can do?  Please I need to fix this, tell me how I can fix it please?”  I beg him as I feel my breathing speed up.  Jasper who was still sitting in his chair looks at me and suddenly comes out of his trance, as I feel the cold sweats start.  “Please Jazz you need to tell me how to fix this.”

 

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly

i love the chocolate cock part. it was truly yummy!!!!!



Author's Response:

Many of you are wondering what he deal is with Edward and the talk of his lost son.  In chapter 5 there was a dream sequence that told a lot of what happened that fateful day when Edward found out Tanya was using him, to get his money.  She was not pregnant like she had told him, the problem is the night before they had unprotected sex, and she actually did give birth to his child.  Esme found out about it, but hid it from Edward trying to protect him.  Tanya and Edward junior later died in a fire.  There will be more to come on that, but it seems to be getting a lot of questions.  Now for Alice...She is clearly a not nice person in this fic, and to some she will partially redeem herself, but for some there is no redemption, her words and actions are far worse than any you have seen from Edward.  Siobhan is for the majority out of the picture, so she is of no major worry.  Uncle Harry is a very mean man, and there will be more to come about him.  We love our Aro he is one of the kindest and most loving men and we are proud to have written an Aro who is not only out of character, but also so very loveable.   Bella has come to trust Edward, and it shows.  A lot of you keep asking if she will sleep in the step-moms room, or if Edward will talk her into it...the answer to that is no.  The next few chapters have so much going on in them, I am sure that you will all have favorite parts.  We love hearing what your thoughts are so keep asking questions and we will answer what we can without ruining the plot. 

Thanks for Reading and Reviewing
Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 15 teaser...Subject to changes during BETA process...

It’s Saturday, and we are into the countdown to Thanksgiving.   Alice has called me numerous times, and left well over a hundred text messages and voice mails.  I have dealt with each and every one of them the same way. Without reading or listen to them, I just hit delete.

Esme found out during one of my talks with Carlisle about the stunt Alice pulled.  At first, I thought she would take Alice’s side, but was stunned when I found her on the phone giving Alice a piece of her mind.  Jasper has also said that he and Alice are talking, but not back to normal yet.  Jasper is really pissed at her.

Yesterday, Esme called me, and to my surprise, she asked me if I would still come over for Thanksgiving dinner.  She told me that she would understand if I did not want to come.  She said it was my choice, and she would still make my dinner if I wanted and bring it over to my home or Midnight Sun.  Not once did she try and force my hand.  After much thought, I said that I will be there.  I do enjoy spending time with the guys, even more so in the last few weeks.  I know they all were hoping for me to come, and I know I owe them a lot. I told them that I will join them and stay, as long as Alice and Rose keep their mouths shut. Esme, Carlisle, Emmett, and Jasper, have promised to keep them under control.

Things with Bella are still going really well. Too well, in fact.  She…fuck! Every time I see her, I want to hold her close.  It’s no longer just me having dirty thoughts about her, a lot of dirty thoughts about her, which I still am, but I also want to hug her, lie with her, make love to her, and that is really fucking scary for me, for lots of reasons.  I am worried, because I wonder if she could even cope in that type of a relationship. I have been a pussy about it, because I haven’t had the guts to ask Peter or Jasper what they think.  I know it’s because I am afraid they may say she couldn’t handle it, or I am not good enough for her.  I already know that I am not, but one can always hope for his own redemption.

Watching Her by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 44]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She's his Drummer Girl. She plays. She dances. She's got secrets. He
watches her. If he comes out of the woods will she let him in or close the
doors forever? Daily Updates. AH.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95686 Read Count: 35349
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2012 Updated: 28 May 2012
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Cinderella

i love your story. it shows pure, sweet love.

Summary:

Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30285 Read Count: 21943
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 09 Jun 2012
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really like this story. Will you update/finish it?

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is an alcoloic who hits rock bottom. One day, his sister Alice is handed a card - Only Call if Desperate & ALL Else Has Failed. She makes the call that will change her brother's life, and a few others along the way.

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Categories: Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: mamih's favorites
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 285492 Read Count: 30581
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2015 Updated: 07 Jul 2017
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 42: The Temptations of the City Part II

Love your story! You can feel the tension and love.

Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 47841
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like your story! How often will you update? I like the strong Isabella. Great story!

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50915
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I feel sad for Edward. He finally realizes his feelings for Bella and she really wants nothing to do with him. I hope that your story has a happy ending. I am enjoying the angst, but I want to see the love ,too. Great story.

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91229
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow! Your story is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Dine and Dash by KittyTylz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary:

Rival gangs, rival hearts. Maybe he went too far but she was worth risking a gang war for. He wanted her, now he's got her... That dare was unexpected but it served its purpose, the purpose he needed it to.

Bella gets dared to dine and dash a restaurant but gets caught by the owner, Edward Cullen. He's a 19 year old deadly sexy gang leader and the enemy of the gang her best friend Jacob belongs to. Now he's found a way to spin her dare so that it works in his favor. She's stuck in his territory working at his restaurant to avoid a permanent record. What more could a Cullen ask for?

 

(Warnings for - Sex, Crime, Language, Violence, Self-harm)

(Pairing- Edward Cullen and Isabella Swan)

(Repost due to deletion)


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 255047 Read Count: 52669
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2017 Updated: 25 Mar 2017
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love your story! If you ever publish it, let me know so I can get it! You are a great writer!

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love your story but your keeping me in suspense!!

Summary:

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When a mysterious bad boy meets a spoiled princess, is it a recipe for disaster or are they just what the other needs?

*** Mase is Dark, Possessive, and really Cocksure... maybe quite a dick... But I luv him this way!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21481 Read Count: 6478
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2017 Updated: 21 Sep 2020
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A Demon ...

I like! Please continue on!

Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 145926
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love your writing! Love the story!

Summary:

26 year old, multi-millionaire Edward Cullen has a problem. After telling his mother that he had been seriously dating someone for the past 6 months in a vain attempt to stop her meddling ways, Esme is insistant that he brings his girlfriend home to meet the family. 

One problem: He doesn't have a girlfriend. 

Desperate for a solution he tries to enlist the help of his long-term escort Rosalie only to discover that she has unexpectantly quite and no longer works for the agency, or Edward. 

What will happen when the only option left for Edward is to take the angencies new and unexperienced escort home to meet the parents?

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Credit to Xanath for the beautiful banner.  


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30089 Read Count: 8180
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2017 Updated: 22 Nov 2017
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Interview - Edward POV

Sounds like the beginning of a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Thank you 😊 

Summary:

Mechanics and Mistletoe

Bella, an uptight, cold executive, is on her way home for Christmas. The first Christmas she’s been home since she started working for the Fortune 500 company that hired her from college, almost ten years ago. The only reason why she’s going home is to meet her brother’s new wife and her parents threatened to cut her out of the will if she didn’t make time to see her family. However, it’s snowing, a blizzard and Bella’s car wasn’t really designed for the cold. Or snow. Or anything other than sunny, perfect weather.

Edward Cullen is alone on Christmas Eve, working, as usual. His family was long gone and all he had left was his family business, Cullen Towing Service and Garage, though that wasn’t going well for him. Business was slow. His bills were piling up and he was afraid he was going to lose his livelihood if something didn’t turn around. Over the radio, he heard about a stranded driver, stuck on the back road. Edward pulled on his winter coat, gloves and started his truck, driving to the location.

A small sports car was stuck in a ditch, almost completely covered with snow. A beautiful woman, wearing heels and a fur coat was shivering outside her car. Edward immediately recognized her as the girl he once knew and had secretly crushed on for years. Her brother, Jasper, pretty told him to fuck off and said that she was too good for him, a grease-monkey, a blue-collar boy.

Can this uptown girl fall for a guy with grease on his hands?

Banner by Clo ...  thanks girlie!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44621 Read Count: 13858
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it! They sound so sweet together! Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65686
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

So glad that you are still writing it. Love the flow and words.

Summary:

db

 

Edward Cullen works for the LAPD & goes undercover as a street racer to catch the elusive Emmett McCarty. In his discovery of the illegal dealings that Emmett does, Edward falls for Emmett's younger sister Bella.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27015 Read Count: 3775
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2019 Updated: 13 Feb 2020
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 7: The End of the Line

Yes!!! You can't just leave it here! 

Summary:

Home Improvement Project

 

 

Bella Swan would have been content to never leave Forks again after college, but an inheritance from her grandmother changed all that. Sometimes, a little change makes all the difference.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34487 Read Count: 7632
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2019 Updated: 29 Apr 2021
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Sign the Line

Like your story! I also like the way you write it!

Filia Noctis Ex by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

Story cover

"Don't you know who I am?" "Yep, I just don't care." A millennia ago, a vampire's entire world was torn apart. Now, she's out for revenge on her family's murderers, but first, she must revive Lucifer's first-Vladislaus Dragulia. Her father.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: Family, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27302 Read Count: 5068
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2020 Updated: 11 Feb 2020
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved your story!

Summary:

iv bag

Bella and Edward don't speak to each other after the van incident, yet their paths still converge. When Bella is attacked by James' coven in her own home, she is rescued by the Cullen family in the nick of time. Now, Bella must come to terms with her new life as a vampire and her growing attraction to Edward. AU.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90206 Read Count: 6456
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2020 Updated: 01 Jun 2020
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Shadows in the Snow

I love your story. I like the grumpiness between Edward and Bella. True love is there, they just don't know it yet.

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Rain Sows a Promise

Love it!

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 67921
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

Love your story! I like the tough Bella! Yeah Edward is a cutie, but don't let him push you Around! I also like Esme and Carlisle are so loving and supportive of Bella. Great story!

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

Great story! Like your writing!

Summary:

double crossed


 


Edward Cullen was ruthless, deadly, a man whore and was damn proud of each title.  The only child of the West Coast Mob Boss, Carlise “The Lion” Cullen. From the age of thirteen, he had been groomed to take over for his father when he retired. The day before his twenty-five birthday, his father sat him down and informed him that he was ready to hand over the reins to him, that was after he performed two more acts of loyalty to the family. Edward grinned, knowing that there was nothing his father could throw his way that he wouldn’t do or could do.


 


Isabella Swan the daughter of Charlie “The Books” Swan, the accountant for the Cullen crime family for all of his adult life, as well as friend and confidant to his Boss.  Knowing from a young age what her father did for a living, she decided she wanted to develop her skills in weapons and combat so that one day she could find a place in the family. Called to a meeting with her father and Carlisle, she thought that her dreams were coming true.


 


What happens when they are Double Crossed? 


 


 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5939 Read Count: 2124
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2020 Updated: 03 Jun 2020
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it!❤️❤️❤️❤️

Entrapment by Jemster23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Entrapment

 

For Bella Swan, desperate times call for desperate measures. For Edward Cullen, family is everything. *Voted First place in the Twilight Family Affairs contest


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 180073 Read Count: 44801
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2020 Updated: 12 Jun 2021
Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow! The drama! Hanging on your words! Great story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:) It makes me so happy to hear the story is keeping you hooked xx