Reviews by dreamtalker
Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 48919
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oooo shes a sneaky one that Victoria!

Maybe Emmett will kill her off if he has been changed lol

Watch by amandac3 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

"I can't believe I just watched that. I wonder if I should tell them?" Jasper is watching something he shouldn't be, but he won't stop, he can't stop. Things aren't always as they seem. Everyone has secrets.
One-shot entry for Beyond the Pale 2 contest.

**Judges Choice, SweetDulcinea - Jasper I'd Love To... Watch

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4405 Read Count: 2021
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great o/s with some nice little twists to it.

Is this going to be continued? would love to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. At this time, I don't have any plans to expand on this o/s. But if inspiration should strike, I just might. Thanks again. :)

~Amanda

Summary:

WWII

Contest submission for the Fan Fic Flash Fic week 6 challenge.

Based on the picture above.

 


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206 Read Count: 148
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2013 Updated: 08 Mar 2013
Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great little o/s. You managed to tell us all we needed in such a short amount of words. 

Well done!

I'm going to start your other fic too as it was rec'd by Kelly Trobaugh on the fb group TWCS Library. I saw this & thought I'd read it first :D

 



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you SO MUCH! What an amazing review. I appreciate it. 

:))

I hope you enjoy Caged Skylark. I'm so thankful to Kelly for recommending it. :) 

Enjoy!

Quinn

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

Loved the way Bella played all that.

I like to think of her driving off with "I did it my way" blaring out :D

 



Author's Response:

Ha - that would've been the perfect song to play. Wish I would've thought of it for the chapter list. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

What a showdown!

Awesome, just awesome :D



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! I needed Bella to stand on her own against them in her own way. ;)

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

Prefer this Jacob much more than the original. 

I'm glad you put this chapter in with the Jacob talk - it's at just the right place too :D



Author's Response:

Jacob will still have his irritating jerk moments in this story as well, but I am very anti-triangle so he will never be more than a friend. Bella might have to be pretty first about it, but there won't be any confusing the lines. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

Revenge served with a reality check for Edward.

Excellent ideas here - none of which I'd seen before. That doesn't happen very often.

Glad you've come back to this fix and republished it on here otherwise I'd have never have seen it. You've given me some hope that I may get back to my unfinished fics even though it's been a looking time.



Author's Response:

Hi there! I'm so glad you decided to give this story a chance, and trust me, it took five years for this story to get back on track. So there's always hope. :) I'm honored you felt my ideas for Bella's revenge were new and original as it is hard to find something that hasn't been done before. It seems like so much stuff out there today is a re-make of something else, which I guess this is too - my re-make of New Moon, but you know what I mean. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope to hear more from you soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

TrEe



Author's Response:

Hi there! Thanks for giving this story a chance. I hope you're enjoying it and hope to hear more from you soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

Lots of great Jasper and Alice stuff there - nothing at all not to like except ... I have to wait until tonight to have time to read the next chapter.

Can't wait to see what happens with Rose ;)



Author's Response:

Jasper and Alice are my favorite (aside from Bella and Edward of course). I just love their connection and believe that they are the most spirtually connected that even time and distance cannot cause a ripple in that connection. I'm lucky enough to have that kind of connection with my husband, and maybe that's why I'm so drawn to them. Soulmates. What Bella has planned for Rosalie will definitely cause a tantrum to the point the rest of the family is afraid she's going to kill Bella. ;) So much fun!

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: dreamtalker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

Looooove angry Bella :)



Author's Response:

Hi there! I'm so glad, especially as this chapter was probably the most difficult to write. I'm just relieved she's learning how to survive and stand on her own so that she can fight for what she wants. Thank you takin the time to read and review, I greatly appreciate it. :)

Much love,

~Lisa