Reviews by im your density
Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters

yay, new chapter! i just wish it was longer :) i love this story, i hope you update soon!



Author's Response: Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!

Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: With Or Without You

that was really cute! i loved the ending, they are so adorable :) i like how you gave them a realistic situation, and they worked through it. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!! i hope you update soon :))))

Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy

loved it!! you got the chapter up fast! it was really good, i liked how edward is totally afraid of bella, that was funny. i can't wait until all of this drama comes to a head, i really want to know what happens!! i hope you update soon :))))

Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20

the ending was intense!!!!!! edward is going to freak!! how did he even get that footage?? that guy is a creep, i can't believe that he would do all that for his five minutes of fame that will obviously ruin his reputation! gosh! i loved the house and the dog and the car :P it was really cute, esp. when they got the two dogs and edward was trying to be all gruff about it. it was a really good chapter, and i hope the next one doesn't take so long to get!!!!!!!!!! update soon? please? pretty please? with sugar on top? :)))))))))

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297712
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

there was a quote from 10 things i hate about you, and how to lose a guy in 10 days!! i love both those movies :) this is such a good story, i hope you update on friday!!!

Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

the quote was "you think i'm gorgeous, you want to kiss me!" right? from Ms. Congeniality??

i liked this chapter, even though it was short :( i can't believe her mom would suggest something like that!!!! i really don't like her mom! i loved the christmas tree bit :) i can't wait for next chapter!!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

it was nice that they didn't have any drama for once!! i like the tatt scene :) and i can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

They needed a calm day ...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

who could have seen him put the code in??? i really want to know now! i wonder what heather has to do with this all. maybe she knows james, and he is going though her? hmm, ill just have to wait and see!!



Author's Response:

hmmm...I'm sure Edward will let you know in this weeks update  who he is thinking of,,,,,thanks for reading...i have your weekly teaser....lml

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Amazing Grace by Cullensgirl90 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

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Bella is given to Edward as a birthday present. He promises her that he will love her and never hurt her. Will he be able to keep his promise or will a dark secret tear them apart before their relationship can develop?

 Dark Edward.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185811 Read Count: 80457
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Amazing Grace

did you skip a chapter? because there seemed to be a huge gap between the last one and this one. and when did edward almost get arrested? im confused...

good chapter though, and i can't wait to see edwards reaction!

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty Three

i was surprised that bella didn't press assult charges when she was at the station after edward was arrested, or that the cops didn't tell her she had the right to press charges after she showed them her marks... good chapter! i am eager to see them back at home, and how they get through their little problems



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading!

Bella just wanted to get out of LA and get everything over and done with.  Like i said before, I have no idea how the law thingy works so I kind of made it up as I was going along. 

Next up, they are home!  The next chapter might be a few days.  I'm revising the outline and trying to figure out how many more chapters are left.  the story is almost over, but I don't know how many chapters are left.

-Lisa

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48030
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This story is turning a little odd, I'm trying to have faith and to stick it out but it's definitely testing my will a bit. Is this going to turn out as a Stockholm syndrome type deal or is this really what she wants? I guess I shall just have to see

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Changes Ahead

Your main  characters use the phrases man and bro quite often, you may think about using them less because they really don't add to the dialogue, it almost reduces it to sounding like 2 teenaged boys talking. I like the way the story is coming along besides that. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: After hearing her son’s birthday wish, Bella decides to contact her ex-boss whom she had a short affair with before quitting, to let him know that he has a son. Edward loved Bella since the first moment he saw her, despite her young age and position he sought her out on many occasions, to merely be rejected in turn. Now that she has returned he hopes they can make things work and finally be together.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151416 Read Count: 127183
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2017 Updated: 07 Jun 2017
Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 60: First Day at Disney

For the most part I have been enjoying this story! I know that you have already written it, but as someone who has gone to Disneyland well over 100 times, I would just say if you are going to describe such a well known place, try and get it accurate. The Californian hotel opens up to the park, taxis can't go to the front gates, Disney does not do wrist bands, there are no rides with fast passes in Fantasy Land, and Ariels ride is in California Adventure, not Dland. Still enjoying the story! I just had to let you know about those pet peeves lol ;) 

Reviewer: im your density Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 60: First Day at Disney

For the most part I have been enjoying this story! I know that you have already written it, but as someone who has gone to Disneyland well over 100 times, I would just say if you are going to describe such a well known place, try and get it accurate. The Californian hotel opens up to the park, taxis can't go to the front gates, Disney does not do wrist bands, there are no rides with fast passes in Fantasy Land, and Ariels ride is in California Adventure, not Dland. Still enjoying the story! I just had to let you know about those pet peeves lol ;)