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Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
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Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Well I am so happy that they made it and I am want to say you did a great job. When the chapter ended I wanted more thanks for the early update but I got it when I was a work so all day long I was cursing at the clock to move faster, So i could get home and read it. I worked through my lunch and still had to stay 1 hour longer because the SOB who comes in to take over my shift was fucking his girlfriend and forgot the time. Ya he told me that shit when he came running through the door. I almost knocked his head off. I yelled at him and said I had a fucking appointment and his sex life was not important to me. He said this little i'm sorry that pissed me off more and told him to shove it up his ass. I think I over did it LMAO but I was not laughing at the time. Thanks for sharing and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can so does this mean will get another chapter on saturday Yes i have been told I am a greedy bitch but who cares :)....
Author's Response:
damn bammers - you make ME want to have a drink!!!! working on an out take - Fiorella will kill me if I post another chappie this week.
xoxo
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
I got it now thanks for the repost you tease I thought maybe you gave us a bonus see ya next time
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Loved it very much and excited we don't have a major cliffy see you next saturday thanks for sharing and so excited to see what will happen next....
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Loved it but now I am worried about Charlie was that alittle forshadow Is her need for charlie to accept her going to cause problems Is Charlie going to ask her to do something that she won't refuse She changed talking to Charlie I mean she was like 10 years younger I could see Charlie being that way He used before why not now That was the feeling I got reading this chapter Loved it very much and update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Hmmm - something to think about - this is interesting because I had a wonderful Dad (a bit like Charlie actually). He was a man's man, you know? He didn't say much, but I never doubted that he loved me, but he wasn't openly affectionate or anything and I think that is what young girls need to complete their emotional make up. So, what to do about Charlie - I need to give this some thought.
Thanks for firing up my brain!!
xoxo
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US
loved it very much and no I did not know you put up an outake this week I will find it and read it thanks and update when you can....
Author's Response:
thanks for the review
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45
I know what its like to have parents that don't care. I feel for Bella and this chapter was very hard to read I have most of those same feelings for my own parents. This chapter is very close to my heart and I want to thank you for writing it. Also if her life had been better she might have never met Edward and that just isn't OK.
I say you live the hand you were delt and when good things happen (in Bella case Edward) you thank whoever and smile. I am still worried that Charlie is going to try to push himself into her life to quickly and that could turnout very bad.
Loved it like always and I will probably read this chapter again later (BTW that whole broken falling angel wing comment are you telling us something because what I got out of it is that are little Bella is in for a breakdown that could cause a major ripple)If I am right sorry I just... you know me I over think and you get mad for spoiling and if I'm wrong let me know and I will reread it Because you put a forshadow in every chapter. I just don't know if you do it on purpose or if thats how you write. Update when you can thanks as ever... I really enjoyed the chapter thank you again for sharing it with us....
Author's Response:
wow - thank you so much for your insight - no I had no idea that I do that! As for a breakdown, I haven't written that in, but everyone hits bottom before they go up, so it's what Garrett said that was more of a prediction if anything.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I loved that chapter very much and you did a very job and I am so excited to see what will happen next I am so happy that he will give her more training before he sends her back to those skanks I could not be OK with other women touching my MAN So he needs to make sure they don't touch him because that is just not OK with me. Sorry I want to say more but I was hit by a drunk driver on Sunday so I am really druged up right now I will read the chapter again with a clearer head And review again If I missed something see you next week....
Author's Response:
Hi there b - are you okay??? Oh my gosh, I'm glad that you are able to read and move your fingers at least! Please take care of yourself and get better soon
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Loved it like always but I am worried for Bella she still seams off and they are all starting to notice I also hope they tell the guys about Alice before she goes thanks for sharing this and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - B will get better - as for A & E telling the guys - they'd better if they want to sit down again!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Loved it like always and I am glad Edward stoped those two bitches before Bella reached her limit. I hope she goes to coffee with both of them because if she is seen alone with another guy the Paps will be all over it in a bad way. I get the feeling there is one more test for these two and I think Riley has something to do with it. Those girls in the begginning made it sound like they know she is sleeping with him. Is he telling everyone that he is I guess will find out I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks......
Author's Response:
hmmm - you know what speculation is like - bitches always think that if you are not like them you MUST be sleeping with someone ... well that's all that it is :)
Thanks for the review and your comments
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
I like to review at both sites and I know I said I would do more on FF but my daughter got me sick and right now I want to sleep. I had some feelings come up reading this again that I did not have the first time I read it. I think that ExJ over reacted big time and I think Bella is getting punished for Alice's mistake I think she knows that and I think that is where alot of her anger is Edward has not told her many things that has happened and I think he is a hypocrite and sending her very mixed signals I remember one part where he fired his manager because of Bella and the things he had done with her He flat out lied to her about what had happened but I don't remeber if he ever told her the truth this is why I am rereading it because I missed some of the little things that arn't important but In the long run its all important right I loved it very much but I really think Edward is not say what he should to the right people He said he messed up but he has not said what he should to Bella and she won't open up she has learned not to that is not something that just goes away What I have noticed is he will not open up to her Ya hes said things but truthfuly he has not opened up there are things that he could have said to Bella but insead he said them to AxJ and That pisses me off If I am way off base I am sorry blame the meds but I am rereading so I will admit when I'm wrong just gime me time loved it and see you next week and By the way Bella is not anywhere near ready for a kid so please don't do that to her that could really mess things up......
Author's Response:
Okay B, let's do this: Now you know that I'm not going to let B get pregnant - she is on the injection for a reason - no mistakes in this story! And because I know that you don't really sleep you can read the ot again!!
PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6
OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE
“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”
Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.
“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?” Jasper said.
Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.
Jasper smiled at her. “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”
Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”
Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice. She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control. Seeing him looking ill at ease was new. There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.
She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.
Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.
Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view. Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them. They had also taught them to stick to their guns.
This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place. Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with. She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.
Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them. They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest. Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!
He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his. Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves. Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.
Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had! Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name. Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.
Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with. He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else. Someone better.
So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated. He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college. The first one was on finances. Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.
He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character. Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.
It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on. He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was! Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice! His Alice! Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.
How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!
Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet. His face was a cold, furious mask.
“Jasper please! If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down! I can’t reach you when you are like this! If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there! If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.
“Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother! I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!” Jasper spat out as he held her.
Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes. “Jazzy, you are scaring me…”
This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…
Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.
Suddenly she was free.
Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could. Her whole body was trembling.
“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…” Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.
Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.
This was all her fault!
“Come to me…” Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.
Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.
Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.
“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.
“No. You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.
Her eyes searched his intensely. The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.
Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.
He cursed and rubbed his head.
Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!” She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.
Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself. Alice giggled and winked at him.
“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!” She said with determination.
“Gladly, Darlin’.”
“Okay, I’m going first. I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me! Do you promise?”
Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.
“I promise.”
Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off. I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way. The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room. He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him. I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.
Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode! That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD! I. will. Kill. Him.
Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.
He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise. I won’t freak out on you again.”
Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean. The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again. He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”
SON OF A BITCH!
Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.
She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz! I know better! I was raised to know better than that! With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect. You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty. And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better. Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’. Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.
His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.
“Jazz…”
“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen. Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again. Especially not me! God, Ali, I love you so much! Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck! It’s too much to even contemplate! Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you? When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then! As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you! And about how I was going to take care of you this time! I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’. I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”
Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.
“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock. You own me mind, body and soul. If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out. Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.” Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.
“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love. I am sorry too. No more secrets.”
Their kiss was a relief. For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving. Lips touched, brushed, nibbled. Tongues dueled and teased. Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.
Alice panted into his mouth. “Can I get my clothes back?”
Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”
Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”
Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”
Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”
Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.
Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!
“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest. Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.
“Alice?”
“Yeah?”
“Supervised visits only…” Jasper kissed her forehead.
“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.
She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session? She had heard that Gap was having a sale….
Everything was right with the world after all.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
I hope that you liked it!
Love
Michele
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Loved it very much and thanks for sharing with us I hope that everything goes well for them but I also know that they both have tempers that stop them from thinking right in the heat of the moment see you next update......
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
First I can see why this chapter was hard for you it was hard for me also and I just read it First the way it was writin' was great But to be honest this was not close to a favorite chapter and thats not because of the writing I just didn't connect with it very well I started it and got pulled away 4 times and I would start over Edward just pissed me off in this chapter its like he was PMS through the whole thing I just don't think Bella could have done anything right in is mind They know she throws up when dealing with stress So why not assume she did and maybe ask her Some people are very embarassed about those kinds a things Bella was a little winey in this chapter and I'm sorry but I see nothing wrong with wanting to play but as you know I would make a bad Sub I really enjoyed the update so please keep going It just seemed like all that was happening was Bella being punished Also she really puts herself down alot in her head and as long as that countinues she will never get better Loved it and update when you can Please don't be mad.....
Author's Response:
I'm not mad - you understand why I struggled with it, but I had to write it this way - I tried to cut out the drama and it just didn't work because then it was just fluff and smut and this story is more than that. so I deleted my third draft and started writing and i wrote over 8000 words! In one afternoon.
So thank you honey - no hard feelings - thanks for the honesty, love.
Michele
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
My internet is down I am library girl for a while we have alot of preople in my town without power I have power and thats more impotant than internet so I have to wait for a while I will read and review on FF when i get it back Sorry I only get 5 min an hour because we only have 2 computers here and there is line right now because everyone has no net this sucks got to go *waves bye*pouts*
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Loved it very much and I am excited to see what will happen when Edward faces Riley Atleast I hope that will happen I am excited to see what Carslie did in to her in Washington Thanks for sharing and update when you can.....
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
Hello there Lady I hope your having a good weekend so far and I noticed the 1 year anniversery is coming up on this not so little story of yours.
Did you think it would be this big?
Are you suprised how many people look foward to this update everytime?
I want to say I am so happy for you, and Keep going, this is a hard month for everyone.
I am looking Forward to the outake and I am so excited to see what will happen next.
I just know the dram is not over and someone is waiting to strike. I just worry what it will do to them. They really are not over the whole Alice thing, Then the Esma thing. I hope they will close ranks and take this next bump head on.With there heads held high;)
Loved it all very much Have a happy holiday and a wonderful New Year Thank you so much for sharing this with us again and update when you can because there are people out here in the world that you are helping I use these stories to get away from everything and rest So thank you for that also..... Luv's Ya Bammers
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Um Hi you were on my wifes list of people to let know that she is right now haveing her Heart Transplant So she will be out for atleast 8 weeks this was sudden but she put some info on her fanfiction site and when she gets out of surgery I am suppost to add info there When she makes it through and gets home she will catch up and let everyone know what happend Thanks for the support you have given her through this time She has been so upset and your story and a few others have helped her get her mind off her personal problems Thanks again
Jeremy
Author's Response:
Hey Jeremy,
Please give Brenna my love and my very best wishes to all of you for her recovery and for 2011. Please tell her that she can read the latest chapter SLOWLY... she has to make it last till next time. Thanks so much for writing.
Take care,
Michele (peoplelikeus)
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Loved the pictures and can't wait for more Do we get to see Eddie go crazy when he finds out it will be longer than 2 weeks I want to see it Trust me I had a fit when he told me June !st they stoped me on July 15 when they found out my heart was having problems 36 days to go and counting....DOWN
Author's Response:
oh dear Bammers - you give me some really great ideas!! You bad, bad girl!
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
OMG that was great and Loved the pictures I am so excited to see where this goes And I can't wait to see who her mother is and If she was even looking for her and How she will fit in to all this Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can...I'm thinking a switch at birth and the mother doesn't even know she's missing her child or but that would mean that Charlie has another child out there or He isn't the father of the baby Renee gave birth to *pouts and stomps foot* Cliffy's suck....
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Loved it so very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.......
Author's Response:
always - thank you so much for your review xoxo
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Loved it very much and maybe we could get a roleplay of a cougar Bella and young Edward She needs to put on a little pressure LOL.....
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I loved it very much but I really think that Edward gets away with to much. He knew money was going to be a hard subject for her and after what he called her in the car in the last chapter of course she would think that way. He has never once said sorry for that and I hope it will be addresed.
I think Edward is now going to be in the major way of a baby bug but I just don't see that they are anywhere ready for that. I think Bella's Mommy and Daddy issues need to be solved or that could be really bad for them.
You did a very good job with the time you had So thank you for sharing this with us and I am so excited to see what will happen next. I have a funny feeling that Edward might be pushing Bella a little to much But I guess we will see. Have a good week and see you in 2
Author's Response:
Hey B - Let me say that EDWARD AND BELLA ARE NOT GOING TO FALL PREGNANT NOW!!! I can barely cope with 2 characters being pregnant and working out weeks and due dates - googling baby names and baby sites - I will throw my laptop under a bus if Bella even THINKS OF having a baby NOW.
And you are quite right, she has to resolve some issues and just get used to being with Edward as Mrs Edward Cullen first. Edward is going to have to SUCK IT UP!!!
Edward can be a little arrogant, can't he? Little Shit! I will see you in a couple of weeks. Thanks so much for the review and the comments, darling.
xoxo
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Loved it and I am happy they were able to over come some of the issues But I understand where Bella is coming from She has never felt worthy with Edward and She just did not understand why he would want to show her off I get that He should not have called her a snob She is far from it and he knows it Thank you for sharing this with us and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
thanks B. the kids will get there...
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Pictures are HOT and hes young so it makes me feel like a perve My 30th B-day is on the 24th of March I should not be looking and that boys picture but he is very *Yummy*
Thanks for sharing this and I cried again when Edward told Em and his Dad what her mother did to her Thay need a vacation just the 2 of them and Bean needs to show up so they can smile Thanks for sharing this with us and see you in 2 weeks Its so far away.....
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
I was worried for you but I am glad your OK Thanks for sharing this with us and Alice reminds me of my Sis she fired her Planner and Priest 2 days brfore her wedding It was crazy I am glad they are Fwd with everything and I think this will help her with all there stress and they really need there vacation have a good weekend and see you next week I FF is a fail so here is a lick to help you get your story updated over there http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/20103/40031188/1/ Hope it works for you
Author's Response:
OH MY WORD - I LOVE YOU SO MUCH BAMMERS!!!!!! Thank you for helping me post on FF!!! I was going crazy - you are an angel (sometimes a naughty angel, but an angel, none the less).
Thank you so much for reviewing and having my back!
xoxo
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
I think its wrong for them not to tell about the strippers because he is always upset when she doesn't say anything even if its a small issue FFn is a fail everytime I try it so I will review when I get a chance Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can have a good week.....
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
You made me cry for both of them I was so worried Thanks for sharing this with us and I hope your doing OK see you next update because I am so excited to see what will happen next He is going to be down for monthes with will give us a very cranky and broody E So can't wait.....
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Hay girl I just grabed a chapter and started reading Hope your having a good week....
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64140
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Loved it very much and Also so sad for someone to feel that way by his own family but he was not brought into the family like they wanted bastards hope they all died painfully to teat someone like that And so very happy he has her can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing update when you can.....
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
loooooved it like always can't wait to see whay happens next thanks....
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
That was great so very sweet update when you can thanks.....
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
loved it sooo much thanks for sharing that with us update when you can so can't wait....
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Loved it like always can't wait for the second part thanks for sharing it with us...
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
loved it so sad its over but thanks you for sharing it with us....
Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society. He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent. Enter Bella Swan. Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both? All EPOV. Starts darker, quickly turns humorous. Language, lemons and some violence.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
That was so hot thanks for sharing it with us update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews, sweetie, so glad you liked it :)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Bella's Past Outtake
loved it as you know and I am so excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
:) Thanks for reviewing here too, hon. You're the best! Writing away tomorrow, promise :)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Oh No you left us with that and now we have to wait 2 weeks come on you have got to be kidding. By the way loved it very much but as a postal worker I say were off today give us a damn break LMAO see ya later....
Author's Response:
HAHAH I meant no insult to postal workers! But he questioned Edward Junior, this just cannot be done :)
Two weeks is not that long. hehe I know, it feels that way, but answers will be had!
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
What I am about to say is in good faith you won't be mad at me afterward "You fucking Bitch I have to wait 2 weeks and thats how you left us OMG If I die before this update I will be haunting you just warning you LMAO loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next in 2 fucking weeks(pouts and walks away)1st and 10 next week Emmett gets to meet his 2 new little sisters I wanted to ask you How is she able to go to the BBQ if she watches HS football on fridays see you next week.....
Author's Response:
Dude, you called me a bitch twice! HARSH!!! I know, you're anxious, I get it. hehe I'll look over my shoulder and try to avoid getting hit by a bus in the next two weeks :)
Bella's going to get someone to cover for her, it's being addressed. hehe
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
She loves him he loves her maybe they can both kick Victoria's ass and Mike can pee his pants and they can live happliy ever after but fight like dogs and fuck like animals sorry but I needed to get that out of me I have not had a smoke in 3 days and my husband and brother in law are trying to find away to get me back and forth right now because moving sucks but the nicotine fit is driving me batshit crazy smugs words not mine LMAO thanks for sharing and update when you can...
Author's Response:
Haha there you are again. How sweet are you, leaving me dual reviews in your state? I love ya, I really do!
They are on the same page, indeed, and Victoria is in for a surprise if she finds them. hehe
Sorry about the smoking cravings and the inability to move! Not fair!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Hay guess who? I can't wait for the next chapter it should be good Who am I kidding they have all been good see you next week....
Author's Response:
Thanks sweeite! I love your faith in me! :)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Ok fine and Demitri needs to watch himself he should know not to mess with a mate right loved it like always and update when you can thanks and the leg is fine I got a call yesterday morning to go into work and asnwer the phone all day so boring.....
Author's Response:
Haha Demetri stepped back and didn't do anything major. He's a flirt, that's natural enough. hehe Glad to hear the leg is doing better! Sorry about boring work, know how that is all too well!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
ya thats 2 more down 65 more emails to go I enjoyed this chapter very muck so thank you for sharing it with us.....
Author's Response:
:) And still you review both places? You're the best!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue #1
This has to happen to him nothing else has gone the way he wanted at first but he will get what he wants I hope they run into Mike loved thanks for sharing....
Author's Response:
Hahah yes this is very true. It wouldn't be Smugs and Bella if it went down smoothly the first time around :) Mike is coming up!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue 2
Just so you know I have a huge crush on Darkward so I am so excited for the next chapter/outake. I like Sweetward very much but Darkward wins everytime I really don't know why So please take your time and really give it to us OK I am so excited to see what he has planed for them Thank you for sharing this with us and Update when you can Also have a good week I went back to work today So funkin' happy but its Christmas and I'm a Mail Lady I was at work before the sun came up and left in the dark Packages everywhere Have a good week......
Author's Response:
Ahhh glad to hear it! I'm a little worried people will think I erased all his progress but I really think he needs to do this one thing to complete his journey. You'll see soon enough!
Yikes! Mail's insane this time of year, so good luck! We're almost there and things will hopefully calm down soon hon :) Take care!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue #3
I will miss them but maybe not if they show there faces again also an Outake in BPOV when Victoria showed up Also I would like to see a what would happen if they run into Alice and Rose and they see how well she's doing They really wheren't very good friends for her thanks for sharing and Have a good weekend and see you next Monday YAAAA EPOV so excited *squeaks*LMAO
Author's Response:
BPOV for the fight? Maybe...I don't know how much thinking she was doing during the action so we'll see if I can swing that. Rose is pregnant and out of school and Alice and Bella have grown apart, she can't really be friends with humans for long.
Haha yes EPOV is coming soon.
I'm really glad you liked it and I thank you for all your lovely reviews :)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake
Hay did you watch episode one while you were writing this and I while they were with Charlie did they deflower her bed if so maybe you can share it with us......
Author's Response:
Yep, I watched and paused and commented and played. haha Of course they broken in her childhood bed. A must!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cowtake
Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay Greenbay So have you changed your mind yet I thought this was a funny Outake and we could use some more I really love it when she makes him do something that you know is pissing him off I think she gets off on it Ya think........GREENBAY LOL
Author's Response:
Hehe how are you finding things you haven't reviewed? :)
Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)
NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences
That was disterbing the way he enjoyed what he was doing update when you can thanks....
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner with the Cullens
loved it very much update when you can thanks....
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner with the Cullens
loved it very much update when you can thanks....
Starts in the woods after Edward ends his relationship with Bella. What if Bella did act like a 17 yr. old when Edward said goodbye? What if her answer to his request for a promise was NO? I know I never would have agreed to anything he wanted! So why should Bella? Rate nc 17 for good reasons. Reg. Pairs V/H
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80206 Read Count: 21773
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
loved it can't wait to see what will come next thanks.....
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait to see whats coming up next update when you can thanks.....
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
wow what an edward thing to do loved it update when you can thanks....
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Well Tanya needs to die and I hope victoria gets it also loved it update soon thanks....
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
that was great update when you can thanks.....
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
that was great they got caught LOL loved it update when you can thanks....
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
loved very much like always update when you can thanks....
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
loved it very much thanks for sharing update when you can thanks.....
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
loved it very much thanks for sharing....
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Well I want her to say YES but that is up to her update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
But i still like to hear what you think! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Oh yes fun times ahead thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....
Author's Response:
There will definitely be more fun times, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
loved it very much and so excited for the honeymoon update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
We will try to update faster now that our three originals are banked for the contest/challenge. So sorry for the wait! More to come soon. Thank you for reading it!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
loved it very much and can't wait to see what will happen next thanks for sharing....
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
loved it very much and can't wait for more thanks.....
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I wonder how long this will last loved it thanks for sharing and update when you can....
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us.....
Author's Response:
So glad you've enjoyed it.
Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64200
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
loved it very much and glad there finally together....update when you can
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Loved it very much but way to short need more please update when you can thanks....
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I hope he saves her update when you can thanks.....
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
loved it thanks for sharing....
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Loved it and Mike is dead update when you can thanks....
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Loved it very much and I loved the paper that I have never seen before update when you can thanks....
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
loved it but don't kill edward please.....
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
loved it thanks for sharing and update when you can.....
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I saw that coming and I am really mad @ emmett I hope he fixes this loved it update when you can......
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can thanks.....
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Loved it very much and those were some pretty jewells can't wait for more and update when you can.....
Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can I love me some good Conward you write him well see you next time....
She was born special and had a destiny that could change the world. She is the Keeper! He will be the Overseer! Together they try to save the Cullen's and restore the balance.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64270 Read Count: 26857
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Hamilton Castle
i don't like her with other people please change it soon thanks....
Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC. Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.
It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.
*WARNING: Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
Loved it but still worried for her update when you can thanks....
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
looved it thanks for sharing....
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
loved it thanks for sharing....
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Loved it very much thanks for sharing and update when you can....
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
loved it very much and sad its over thank you for sharing it with us and so excited to see what you have for us next....
I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
wow that was great can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks...
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
What a bonehead LOL can't wait to see whats next thanks for sharing....
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
well crap and they won't be there update when you can thanks....
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing .....
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks....
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
loved it thanks for sharing update soon can't wait...
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Well that was not a happy chapter I just Hope that edward gets his head out of his ass before bella and the baby die please update soon don't leave us here for long thanks...
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
that was great thanks for sharing and those two could drive anyone to drink them selves to death update soon thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it. i know they could drive me to drink just writting them!! but i love to do it!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
That was alot of info loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks.....
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
tanya needs to be on that matress when she burns it haha update soon thanks....
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
that was great can't wait to see what will happen next thanks.....
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
loved it like always thanks for sharing update when you can thanks....