Reviews by xoxhjaynedxox
Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This might seem strange, but can your version of vampires tell their mate through smell... i should probably know this as i have read this at least twice over but....

If they do, what was Edwards reaction after Carlisle came home from work this day??

:)



Author's Response:

Hi again!

 

Yes, you're absolutely correct, my vamps can tell their mate thru smell.  So going back to that night....Carlisle was at work; he came home with many scents on him.  His time with Bella was limited and they weren't hugging each other; etc... it was basic patient/doctor contact.  He also saw several patients after her, causing their scents  to be mingled and muted... So by the time Carlisle got home, Bella's scent was too faint to be picked up thus he couldn't tell that she was his true mate.

Awesome question btw. Hopefully I can finish the outtake soon with Edward's POV. So far I have written his POV before he meets Bella and during the time he saves her.

Thanks again, love getting questions.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

AHHHHH!!!! LOVE IT!! This is one of those stories which i wish i hadn't found until it was finished as i really want to read all of it!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) Your comment made my day!! There's so much more to cover still.  This story will be around 30 to 50 chapters.

I should be able to post ch 17 this week sometime, =)

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

 

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG!!! Loved it!! Can't wait for the next part :)

 



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much. I should have ch 16 up really soon =)

Thanks again,

xxoo

Jells

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I know this is stupid, but i am reviewing this as...
im so excited that you uploaded and even better you uploaded on my birthday :)
I wish i had checked twcs yesterday now :( would have been the best birthday present ever!!!
Anyway, im going to read the chapter now and review again :)



Author's Response:

Aww Thank you so much. Sorry for the late response. I've been rushing to finish up a chappy for another story.

Thanks again, hope you liked it.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nice to see an update it's been awhile.

So sorry about your loss, I know there is nothing I can say to really help but you can always pm me if you need an ear.

cant wait for the next update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129735
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

ahh!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Ch 7 part 2 will be completed this weekend. =)

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

tfs

 

A beautiful woman on an airplane, a cocky flight attendent and a membership into the mile high club.

AU

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Categories: Mortal Instruments, Alternate Universe
Characters: Clary/Jace
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4131 Read Count: 612
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2011 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Friendly Skies

Hey,
I really like this oneshot...
Do you think possibly you could re-write it to make it a 15 or so chapter story?
And can you tell me what was meant by jaces last line?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am thinking about doing a full MI story. I have an idea that I am outlining while I finish up my other story.

As for Jace's last line, Clary said she was too busy for a boyfriend, so he was giving her what she wanted...no strings attached but with enough cockiness to show that he was in it for more. ...make sense?

Mr. Cullen by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mr cullen

 

Edward's life is changed when he and his family move to the small town of Forks, Washington. Being a teacher as a vampire proves to be a bit more difficult than he'd once imagined. Join Edward and the gang as they move to this new town and meet the chief of police's lovely daughter that will forever affect their lives. 

 

Disclaimer: I Do not own Twilight or it's Characters. 

 

Beta'ed by RAH70890

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107008 Read Count: 67309
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2011
Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like it so far :) Just waiting to see how it goes...
I like vampire and mate stories so... is this going to be the twilight type of mate that stephanie has or is this going to be a more primal animal type of mating??

Anyway can't wait till the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

I'm going to go with primal animal type of mating. lol 

 

Thanks for reading. Next chapter will be up soon :) 

The Archer by Camilla11 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Centauro

 

No, this is not a vampire story, but supernatural all the same. It is the tale of a princess in peril and the mythical creature who saves her. They will love each other passionately but, as it is the case with other cross species mating, it will not be easy. The time? Oh, some 2700 years ago. BTW, Kallisté and Alexios have the same meaning of Bella and Edward, in ancient Greek.

 

o65;λθε, Κp59;πρι,
Χπρυσp55;ασιν o52;ν κυλp55;κεσσιν o40;βραισ
συμμεμιγμp51;νον θαλp55;αισι νp51;κταρ
οo84;νοχp57;εισα. 

Come hither foam-born Cyprian goddess, come,
And in golden goblets pour richest nectar
All mixed in most ethereal perfection,
Thus to delight us. (Sappho)

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9744 Read Count: 1208
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: xoxhjaynedxox Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Wow... i like it so far. But another chapter would definately help me decide whether to keep it a tab open on my computer.... lol

Good Work :)
I have to ask though were you inspired by the picture that you have on the front of this story or did you find the picture later



Author's Response:

The story is all written, and short, (5 chapters). Can you keep your options open till Thursday? The second and the other chapters are longer than this one. But I HAD to end it with the centaur surprise.

In fact first I conceived the story (It came to me in a taxi, while we were stuck in the crazy Roman traffic). I wanted to leep the spirit of Twilight, i.e. an (almost) impossible love story between different species, while writing a story with no vampires). So I went surfing on google images looking for centaurs till I found this one.