Reviews by Tweemad
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has to raise his three kids alone after his wife dies. Little does he know that she plans on helping him out every step of the way. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19973 Read Count: 3266
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Hallucinations

Dang, you made me cry.

Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last

Dang, you made me cry again.

Summary:

Bella meets Edward at a grad party. Tanya's his girlfriend. So, what does Bella say when Edward asks her, "Are you sure?" while they're making out in the woods. Inspired by Kyrene's acknowledgement of the ridiculous term, "Are you sure?"


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3458 Read Count: 776
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2010 Updated: 24 May 2010
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I gotta say, I appreciate the effort.  I know it's not easy to put your stuff out there like that.  But, the whole story was really kinda dumb and unbelievable....sorry.  Plus it's not really all that enjoyable to read about stupid drunk kids not really doing anything.



Author's Response:

It wasn't meant to be meaningful. And this is based on my real life actually, so... I don't know. Minus the whole hooking up with a guy in the bush, that was my Saturday night.

It was supposed to be dumb, and I'm one of those stupid, drunk kids.

41 And Counting by AmoreBella88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella's been on forty-one failed first dates within the last three months. She's given up on finding her "one". Her forty-second date is on Valentine's Day. Will this one turn out to be the one that changes her mind?

 

AH, Bx?, OOC, rated NC-17 for language and adult sexual situations.


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2209 Read Count: 115
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Notes

Really cute!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 59003
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

I like the story so far, but you need a good beta.  And the word you are looking for is THROUGH, not threw.



Author's Response:

Ready by JustxxWicked Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella, a flight attendant, spends her flight to Italy thinking about her best friend's older brother. AH/ONESHOT

*AMAZING banner by mehek18!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5587 Read Count: 606
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2010 Updated: 29 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Stories don't lemons to be beautiful.  And yours was... thanks.

Summary:

Bella is a senior in college looking for a realtionship. Edward is a firefighter who wants someone to care for. They are set up together by none other than Alice. See where the road of life takes them and why you have to 'Just Have Faith'. AH

Epilogue was been reposted after many questions


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112119 Read Count: 48060
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

I like the idea for this fic, but Bella comes across as really immature.  She sounds about 14.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Yes I realized that she comes off as immature. That was not intentional. As I said in my a/n that this was the first story I have ever written it took some getting used to writting and getting a style down.

Back to Boston by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 390]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella decided to leave her college life when she was twenty one to tend to her family and matters she was forced to deal with head on.  Four years later, she goes back to finish her degree.  She is a very serious student and wants to focus on her degree adn the mystery she is hiding.

Once back in Boston, she meets a kind stranger at her work who seems interested in her.  Her lousy teacher's assistant is hot, but seems to be a bit conceited.  What roll will each of these men play in her life?

Secrest are dealt with in Boston head on and feelings are explored.  Follow Bella as she finishes her degree and tries to learn how to with  living a life once her secrets are reveled.

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Thank you Mehek18 for another awesome banner!  Check out her site at Mehek18.tumblr.com


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 261540 Read Count: 63783
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I have been reading this story from the beginning and have really liked it.  It does feel like the pace is dragging a little at this point though, and the switching between present and past tense in this chapter was uncomfortable to read.  Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you are interested in it.

I appreciate your feed back about the tenses.  The thing is when I write a story, I make an outline and I follow it.  When I type the chapter I sometiems copy and paste the outline and use it to write the story.  I do proof read what i write but obviously I don't don't get it all.  I don't have a beta so it's just me who reads it.  I appologize for the misuse in langauge.  I appologize and will try to work on it. I also got the last chapter up really fast and maybe should have spent more time with it. I really do appreciate the comments about this.  Thank you for bringing this to my attention!

Hope the next chapter will be posted by Sunday.  Hopefully this won't be a problem!

Thanks again,

Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117811
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I have really been enjoying this story, however I did not like this chapter at all.  I thought it was tacky.  Really, is that how people behave?  They don't even know each other!



Author's Response:

Well...I suppose they don't know each other that well, no. They just know that they like each other and yeah, they acted upon it. I am sorry you didn't like this chapter. Hopefully you'll stick around around for the rest of the story, but if not- I understand. Thanks for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

If you are going to write a story about people who work in the White House, including the President, you have to do it in a way that doesn't make them sound like they are all still in high school.  I love the idea for this story, but they have to sound like grown-ups.



Author's Response:

I was wondering what you considered juvenile about the way the characters sounded. They did not feel that way when I wrote this chapter or when I read over it so if you could let me know what you considered juvenile about the way they sound, I would appreciate it. Always looking for ways to better my writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He didn't want this lifestyle anymore, he wanted love, marriage and a family. Could Bella, who had already raised a family, of sorts, be the answer? What does Bella want?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168155 Read Count: 143875
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not following your math here.  If Edward is 39, and Esme is 55, then she was 16 when she had him.  And if they got the twins as babies when Edward was 17 and he is now 39, then Jaime is now 22 and would have graduated from high school severeal years ago.  What am I missing?

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Geez, I don't think Bella could have overreacted any more than that...  



Author's Response:

Well, I'm not sure how I would feel if I was in my boyfriend's town, seeing him sitting there with his ex enjoying himself, holding hands. I'm not one to stick around either. I won't fight with another woman over a man. If he wants her, she can have him. I go home and that's what Bella did. But I didn't say I wouldn't have a broken heart over it tho. Each one of us deals with a broken heart differently. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285521
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug

I'm totally liking the story, but you know that cos isn't a real word right?  It's text speak.

Dutch by nikkirocsurworld Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

 

A fluffy love story of two childhood friends. All EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13940 Read Count: 8229
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Age 14

I have a fourteen year old daughter and I am horrified.  Frankly no fourteen year olds should be behaving in that way!

Summary:

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They grew up together. Relationships and feeling changing, separating them. When an accident happens, they band together leaning on their faith, hoping that love will pull them through. AH, B/E


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21482 Read Count: 52662
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2014 Updated: 03 May 2014
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9: Stay With Me....

I'm liking this story a lot.  Just as a little FYI, you can't go to med school straight out of high school.  You have to complete a four year bachelor's degree, then four years of med school, then a residency.



Author's Response:

They aren't just out of high school. They have been in college for four years. At the time of the accident they have ALL graduated from college. I'm aware of the time that it takes for med school, but I am also writing fiction so I took some creative liberty here in order for the story to work. Thanks for reading.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Army Sergeant Edward Colonna returns home after six years overseas, only to find the love of his life in one, Isabella Swan.  Can their love survive the test of time when he is sent away again?

(Set during the Korean War era; late 1940's to early 1950's). Originally written for the Christmas Wishes Compilation..This is an expanded version.

Thanks so much to Cared Cullen for the beautiful banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38119 Read Count: 7837
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2014 Updated: 28 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue - December 1952

That was a BEAUTIFUL story!  I loved it!  It was made even better by knowing how much of it was based on real people and real events.  Thank you so much for sharing your crazy family history with us!



Author's Response:

 You are very welcome!  And thank you so much for reading.  Yes they are crazy...and I much prefer that term over 'dysfunctional'.  lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201890
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Tweemad Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter-21: Back to Square One

Bella sure is a brat.



Author's Response:

Because that's what I intended her to be. But if you continue with the story you'll see she's becoming more matured with each chapter. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann