Reviews by shelly8721
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995763
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

God, I love this story.  I can't wait to see all the ramifications: Angela, Jacob, Lauren (bitch) and so on!!

This is by far my favorite story!!  I always stop what I am doing and read whenever you post a new chapter, even at work!

Thanks!!



Author's Response:

No more coffee for you!! I'm glad you liked the chapter

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

O.K.--so I think that Edward was a total FAIL this chapter!!  I know that Bella should know by now that he loves her, but I think he failed her as both a Dom and a boyfriend.  He kept asking her if she had any questions but how would she have known how to ask if other women were going to be hanging over him.  He should have warned her or better yet manned up and told the other women that he was no longer available.  Then to be angry at her for tainting his "reputation" as a dom...psh.  Perhaps Reiley needs to start hanging around a bit more and see how Eddie reacts to the green eyed monster.

Please tell me that Alice and maybe Jasper are gonna rip him a new one!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Shelly, thank you for your comments and your review. He does have responsablilities - but to be fair, so does she.

:(  I know, not what you wanted to hear. It DOES get better next week.

Michele

xoxo

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

O.k. so you talked me down off the ledge so to speak.  Sorry if my review last week was over critical.  I just really get into this story, I love it!!  I see now where you were going.  Just shows that I would suck at this lifestyle--I would have ripped the collar off at the party, told Edward to go fuck himself and stormed out the door!

I still think Edward should have talked to her more before the party and told her what to expect, so I am very glad that they are going to take that step now. 

Thanks for posting early and thanks for writing this absoutely fantastic story that I can't wait to read more and more of!

Shelly



Author's Response:

Hi Shelly,

thanks for the review and I hope you like the next chapter!

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Love, love, LOVE this chapter!  It was go great.  Thank you!!!!!

I think what has Edwards spidey sense tingling is that Jake and James must know where Rose lives and maybe are planning something, just happens that the girls will be there by themselves this weekend.....

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter (and story), can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review and the premonition :)

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

O.K. I was expecting the "Charlie is not your father" angle.  I can't wait until you reveal how Renee is not Bella's mom!

Great chapter!  I loved the road trip-that was fun.  And glad to see E/B get back into the saddle!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! thanks for the review

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Man that was a monster chapter!!  And well worth the wait.  So much happened, I don't even know where to start.  Great, Wonderful chapter!!

Thank you so much for writing this fantastic story. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that you are still with me! xoxo

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

I've had to let this sit for a few days... I have to admit I lost faith a bit with this chapter. I really don't want Edward to cheat on our Bella. I have since count my faith and convinced myself that you know where this is going and I will trust you with this sooty that I feel so invested in. 

 

I am almost more upset with Garrett than Edward. Oh btw, it must really suck to be a man and not be able to hide your arousal. I am not mad at Edward for being aroused--that is just his body's response to the stimulation. I am more upset with how his mind is working and not talking to Bella about this...

 

Anyway, thanks for another fantastic chapter and I can't wait for the next!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183820
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In

Hmm--still worried about Carmen.  Have a feeling that she is going to be causing a bit of trouble for E & B.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

Please post the next chapter soon--can't wait to read that conversation bewteen Carmen and Bella.  Hope this doesn't upset Bella's self esteem too much.  Also hope that this will be the end of Carmen for good.

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

Great chapter--hard but good.  I know the last chapter was difficult, but it wasn't all Edwards fault.  Bella could've fought a little harder too, not just ran away. 

That being said, I'm really glad that you're not having her just roll over and forgive him right away.

I love this story and even though it's been a little angsty, I just can't wait for more!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

I think you did a great job with this chapter.  My mom always told me "it takes two".  Even though as a woman I *really* wanted to lay all the blame at Edward's feet, I knew Bella really needed to shoulder some of it too.  Thank you for a wonderful chapter and hopefully we'll get back to the hot lovin' real soon!!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

I didn't like it...I LOVED it!!  Please, please don't stop writing!! This is my favorite story right now.  I totally loved how you did the reveal and I absoutely cannot wait to see what happens next!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324451
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

I think Edward needs to realize that Bella is still so young and insecure.  I think maybe he has forgotten that.  If he really wants this marriage to work, he needs to shift his priorities a little bit and start paying more attention to Bella.  I have a feeling that Bella is thisclose to running away.

Thanks for the two updates!!! Love it!!

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

Sad.  I hope that Bella leaving will make Edward realize what Bella means to him.  I still don't understand his attitude with Maggie.  He is telling no with his words, but by not REALLY doing something about her getting into his house, not actually pushing her away and not telling her to back the fuck off and really really mean it, he is telling her that he still wants her attention.

Hopefully he will go after her!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113788
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is such good timing for me!! I JUST finished re-reading PLU. I am ready for this story. So so glad to see there will be no cheating. Seems like 'ol Eddie needs to remember a few things and where his real priorities lie. 

Really looking forward to this story!

 



Author's Response:

Summary:

allo

Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

allo

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What a fun chapter!!!  I can't wait for Tanya to get the boot!!  And Rose hopefully wi need to eat some humble pie before long. 

 

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: shelly8721 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

YES!!!!!!!  That was AWESOME and worth the wait. Although I have a feeling that isn't the last we will hear from Tanya. 

 

Great chapter!