Reviews by sleepyinsomaniac
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer.  At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album.  What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip?  Anything can happen…if you let it.

 

 

 

 

This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift.  She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1831
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters

I think that continuing this story is a fabulous idea, and it doesn't matter that you won't immediately start posting chapters, so long as you eventually do. I'll definitely be looking out for it in the future.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement.  I would love to say I'll have the next chapter up next week but being a working wife and mom of three always has to take priority (damned parental responsibilities). ;)  But I do promise that this story will get written.

Thanks for the review!

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This does indeed sound interesting! I wonder what happened here, and will Phil find Bella? Please, keep on updating :)



Author's Response:

Will Phil find Bella? Only time will tell.............

Thank you for reviewing :) 

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153196
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

when will they talk about tanya??? i hope it's soon, because she seems to be at the root of their problems right now

Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wtf?!? stupid teenage thought process there, bella. she's being a petty child and needs a good dose of reality to slap her in the face sometime soon.

Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

What do I think will happen? I'm just wondering what the hell you've done with Edward. After the whole Vegas fiasco, you turned him into a total asshole. No nice way to say it, and I really hate that he's considering having something with Jane.

I can only insist that you do NOT make Edward cheat on Bella, or anything at all. If he does that, I would hate him. Bella has suffered enough already, and this would just destroy her. Please, start fixing things between these two. It's time for that.

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222337
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3

I can't help but get the feeling that Bella is the third wheel in this menage a trois. I don't like that, since as they have all mentioned many times, there's supposed to be 3 in this together. These past few chapters, especially, have emphasized that point. Sure, they took her out on dates, but who did they end up at night with? Not with her, and I didn't feel like Edward and Jasper connected with her as much as they did with each other. I hope you can find a way to really balance this.

Reviewer: sleepyinsomaniac Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2

Seems they just can't keep their hands off each other... so much for discreet :) I still sense an imbalance in their relationship, but the more they talk/work things out, the better their relationship seems to be shaping up. Good job!