Reviews by carrangi
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Bella is really immature and I would love to see Edward be more dominating and for Bella to let him without throwing a hissy fit because with the way she acts she should listen to him! Great update cant wait for the next one and I hope everything is ok with your dad

Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89652
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

ahhhhh I must know what happens now! Great update! God I love Jasper

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Now that She's Home

oh man im really excited for the next chapter and am curious what could be worse than anything the cullens have imagined...great update!



Author's Response:

hee hee, that bit about it being worse than they imagined was a bit mean wasn't it.  Sorry!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story

You wrote that really well. It was very sad, espiecally how her parents died in a way that is obvious why she blames herself (even though I don't agree I would blame myself too). I REALLY want the Cullens to kill them! Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

thanks.  You're sooooo right that Bella is not to blame but how can she not at the same time.

LOL there is a LONG line forming right now of people wanting to kill!!!!   I'll be sure to give your name to Emmett!!!

Thanks for reading, I know it was difficult.

Rose kissed Emmett and told him she would be right back. As she came up to my room she was already thinking to me. "I know that had to be hard for you to hear Edward, but you really blew it!"

Huh? What was she talking about?  I didn’t do anything?
Rose came in and saw the confusion on my face. "Don’t look confused. You did nothing for Bella. You gave her no comfort!"

“What do you mean?” I asked. “I was holding her the whole time! Giving her every comfort I could!” I was livid at the accusation that I hadn’t been there for Bella. Of course I had.
Don’t get pissed at me. Tell me oh supportive one.  In all the rounds of hugs and comforting what did you say to Bella?

I searched through my memory trying to figure out what I’d said that had Rose so mad. As I searched the reason for Rose’s anger became apparent. I hadn’t said anything to Bella the entire time. I was so focused on not blowing up I didn’t speak to her. I wasn’t a total failure, I had given her strength through my touch, but I couldn’t believe I hadn’t spoken one word to her. I cursed myself for the idiot I was.

"I see you got it.  Listen it isn’t the end of the world but tomorrow when she wakes up you had better start sucking up! Seriously, she needs to know you don’t hate her, blame her, or think less of her."

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Into the Night

Please let the cullens kill them! I would really like to see that lol..also I love Jasper in this story (and everywhere else) I think its a good idea he does therapy with her.



Author's Response:

LMAO!  yeah most people are wanting a Vullen kiling spree!  Honestly I would LOVE to lay on a couch adn tell Jasper my darkest secrest!1  *SIGH*

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

Great chapter! I am glad they were able to just talk to eachother without extra drama or anything and I can't wait to read about the therapy sessions!



Author's Response:

after the last few chapters we needed some non-drama.  LOL  glad you liked it!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?

Awww a little fluff can go a long way lol. I loved the spider scene, it was nice after all the drama :) Im looking forward to her first Jasper session!



Author's Response:

glad you liked the fluff.   There has been some drama and thankfully it's over . . . for a little while  . . .

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I just spent my whole day reading your entire story and I love it! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am addicted to this story! Im nervous for Emma, I want James to accept her as his so he doesn't hurt her. I'm so excited to see what happens to Bella in Italy! Great Update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you and I will tell you this, Aro will not let anything happen to Emma.

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This is one of my favorite stories! Screw the people who leave nasty remarks, if they dont like it they dont have to read it! I cant imagine the rest of the mafia family will be of with james killing aro and im curious about their reactions. Im even more curious about what you changed because of those poeples remarks! You are a good writer dont doubt yourself! Is James just going to forget about Emma? Ahh I cant wait for your next update! Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for that. The changes I don't think I'll say since you liked it so much...lol... As for what James is feeling I think next chapter will shine some light on that.

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yayyyy I'm so glad youre back! I thought you abandoned the story! Sorry to hear about your computer. I loved this chapter! I wanted to cry when she was talking to Edward on the phone lol I can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!! And i'm sorry about the wait.

Summary: Past Featured Story

When Jasper and Edward find themselves out of luck in adopting a child, Jasper decides it is time to try a new route. What sacrifices will this couple make to become parents? Can Bella make their dream come true? Written for the FGB auction. JxE and eventually JxExB


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29005 Read Count: 22173
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

ahhh I am loving this story! cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 7: Ikkyo EPOV

I am really liking this story! I am a little afraid that jasper and edward are so in love it would be awkward for bella to be with them. They have known each other for so long its hard to think they could love her as much as eachother. I cant wait for the babies to be born though they will be such cute parents!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

I am loving this story! It's been a while since i found a jasper/bella story I really got into and this is giving me my fix. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying!  Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

I am so jealous of bella lol Good job!



Author's Response:

You and me both!!  Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

I can't wait for Jasper to kill Alex! I feel like Tony got off easy lol. Love this story! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Alex should be worried, his ending will not be quick and painless!  I'm glad you're enjoying, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: A Moment Changes Everything

Yayyy I love Peter! lol He is always one of my favorite characters to read! Love how you are handling this story and I can't wait for Jasper to get his revenge! But can you remind me why Alice needs help please?



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying, much more Peter to come!  I must not have described Alice's condition well enough, several people have asked.  It's back in chapter 9 when Rose and Emmett are there.  They describe Alice as behaving erratically and being barely coherent much of the time.  I'll review the situation a little more next chapter to refresh everyone!  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I cant wait for Jasper, Peter, and Emmett to get their revenge! This is one of my favorite Jasper/Bella stories! I cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm thinking of making the revenge scene pretty graphic- lots of people are screaming for blood, lol!  I'm so glad you like the story, thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Aftermath

I am loving your story! I think Bella and Mace have more chemistry than her and Edward do too! Cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for your review! :)

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: A Song is Worth a Thousand Words

hmmmm is it just me or is emmett looking mighty good right about now? I am more concerned about Emmett getting hurt than anyone else lol he is just an innocent bystander. Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Yes, I love Emmett.  He's one of my faves in this story!  He's uber sweet :) lol

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: White Violets

I absolutely love how you went about the whole emmett situation! It turned out perfect! I cant wait to see what Alice thinks about everything. I have a feeling she is going to be on team Mace. I know I am!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you loved the Emmett situation, cause I did too! :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!!

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Yellow Submarine

No0o0o0 I want her to end up with Mace! I don't know why but it just doesn't seem like she loves Edward. I feel bad for Mace but at the same time I want to tell him to get over it lol



Author's Response:

LOL!

Thanks for reviewing and telling me your hopes ;)

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Operation Spock Knows Best

ooooo I wanted her to end up with Mace :( but now he is seriously crazy and the idea doesn't seem as good to me lol. I thought the star trek convention was a very cute idea though!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! :)

Here is your teaser for chapter 18, and remember, if you reviewed my outtake, I will be sending you an extra teaser shortly :)
 

My insides felt as if they had been ripped out and run through a blender. I couldn’t even comprehend what had happened. I kept thinking I would wake up and it would have all been a bad dream, but I wasn’t that lucky. None of us were that lucky.

Jasper was able to make it to the hospital mere seconds after us. I had texted him with Alice’s phone after she spoke to Mr. and Mrs. Cullen. I knew she was going to need a bit more comfort than I could provide, and if anyone could come through, it would be Jasper.

He grabbed Alice and held her tightly, allowing her to put her full weight against him. Suddenly, I found myself extremely envious of the solace Alice found in the man she loved.

<i>Because the man I loved could be dying this very second and I have no one to console me…</i>

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: O Brother, Where Art Thou?

NOOOOOO I loved Mace! I'm so sad lol Ok and Bella being pregnant? The girl really cant catch a break lol but I think it is an awesome twist! I cant wait to see what happens and how edward takes the news!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review :)  I am glad you are another Mace lover!  That makes me so happy :)

 

I am more than amazed at my latest response to this fic!  With the exception of one anonymous sorta nasty review (LOL), my reviews have been so supportive!  I love you all!  I was so afraid ppl would hate me for 1.) Killing a sorta main character and 2.) the possibility of a spawn from a deranged character LOL!!!  It's amazing how many ppl are accepting of it either way.  I never thought I would have so much support with such controversial subject matter.  I am thoroughly amazed!  Thank you everyone!!!
 
Here is your teaser for chapter 19:

Edward pulled back and wiped away my tears with his thumbs, kissing the trails left on my cheeks.  He then kissed my chin and then my nose and finally landed on my lips with a searing, needy kiss.

 

We lay on his bed for several hours, just cuddling in silence.  Every so often, Edward would trail his fingers across my stomach and sigh softly, and kiss my head.  It was nice and comforting, and helped to settle my nerves.  A little.  Okay, not really.  But it was nice.

Summary:

Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 96110
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Nov 2010
Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sex on the Beach Outtake 1

I love this story and cant wait for the sequel but am excited for the rest of the outtakes! I was hoping Bella would choose them both. If I had the option that would be my choice lol I was wondering if you always planned on her choosing both of them or if you just sort of fell in love with them both while writing the story and changed your mind?



Author's Response:

I always planned for her to choose both. :) now picking the baby daddy is a whole different story lol i'll explain more on that next week.

xoxo

 

Cam

Reviewer: carrangi Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Sex on the Beach Outtake 4

Omg I loved the ending of this!!! I am a little nervous because the second story sounds like its full of angst and I just want them all to be happy lol is Paul definitely going to be the father of the second child? I really hope so! Cant wait for the next story!



Author's Response:

:D iam glad you liked it! thanks!

 

lots of angst in the second one in deed. drama drama drama.

 

xox

 

Cam