Reviews by Alice05
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625246
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Alice05 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

There are more chapters, or not? I'm a little bit confused, but this isn't the end of the story?


The chapter was beautiful, and I really hope that Bella isn't pregnant.

I have one more question: You said in another chapter that Jasper met ALice two times, and am I right that the second time was when Alice tried to kill herself with jumping out of a window? And this was the time when she had been passed out?

 

I hope you understand me, I'm not so good in English, but I try to get better with reading english stories and that is one of my favourites;)



Author's Response:

No this is not the end of the story. There are only a few chapters left.

The first time Jasper met Alice was in her room at Charlie's when she jumped out the window. The second time was in her hospital room after. 

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19232
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Alice05 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Contest Nomination

Please write a new chapter to "Better than perfect"!
I love your writing, I love your story, I'm so interested in Alice' and Jasper's life... Don't forget this story, please.

I hope it will be continued soon. :)

 

Love,

Alice05.



Author's Response:

I haven't forgotten it. I just needed a break from TPW's world. lol  Plus I wrote a book this year that is available thru twcs publishing house - Blind Faith.  I'll probably start working on this story again after the first of the year.