Reviews by melanieintn
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Great chapter!

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

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Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

Great start!

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

Inspire Fanfic winning banner


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Highly drama filled chapter! Wonder what is wrong with Edward.

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice Start!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving my story a try! I hope that you'll continue to enjoy it.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wonder why vampires need hospitals, other than having babies. I guess your vampires are really different.

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Scary school!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Somebody needs to put Tanya in her place!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Glad that Tanya was found out!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Such a lovely nurse...not!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hot marking!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great Chapter!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved the hot chapter!

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Another hot chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!

I'm totally squeeing. I'm happy that you still like the story.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor Ben - he is up against a lot.  Hope Angela is on birth control.  Mike is crazier than I thought.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I knew your penname looked familiar! OMG you're the author of Planet Twilight, aren't you?

I read about half of your amazing story so far. RL got very crazy with crazy hours and school. but i'll get back to it asap.

Thanks so much for reading. And yeah *nods* Ben is up against a lot.

Thanks aagin,

xox

Jells

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Talk about mass chaos...lol and Charlie in riot gear....lol. Who knew a period could cause so much turmoil?  Thanks for the HOT chapter! Yes, I am the author of P.T. I have been going back through it, trying to clean up my grammar mistakes.

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter! Loved it!

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella is going to have to learn to not go anywhere without Edward. Definitely a danger magnet.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I'll have ch 19 posted today or 2mrw. RL is crazy atm, but I'm trying. lol

Thanks again. I appreciate all the comments! And I'll see ya soon at PT. I miss your story!

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bree is crazy; I thought something seemed off about her in previous chapters. The lemon was very HOT! The roar was probably Ben finding out about the pregnancy. Aro needs to be destroyed soon, so hybrids can become legal. Great chapter and looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

So sorry for the late reply. I've been having so many issues with my laptop. Since the last time I posted I had three viruses. Two weren't so bad but the last one was crazy. I wanted to cry. lol

Thank you so much! I'll have ch 20 posted asap. I'm almost finished with the rewrite. First draft was all lost =(

I'll be getting back to PT as well, now since my lap top is okay.

Thanks again,

xox

Jells

Summary:

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Banners by: Le Crepuscule

 

SUMMARY:  A twisted tale of a trio of people who all crave the other in many different ways and how they become an Eternal Trinity. AH/M


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10128 Read Count: 8778
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Aug 2013
Reviewer: melanieintn Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this, and it or something similar would make a great multi-chapter story.  Jasper would make a great dom for Edward and Bella.  You could create some vampire proof BDSM equipment.  I have had this idea for years and have not been brave enough so far to write it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: melanieintn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved the whole story!  Y'all did a great job!  Sorry you had trouble with FF.  Makes me leary of posting another story there, if I ever decide to write anything else.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awww....sweet!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yeah baby!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Cute!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Most people are conscious of their weight and it tends to make them shy and withdrawn.  At least it does me and others I know.  I was surprised she would ask him out, if he is his normal hot self.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bet Jessica would love to clean the bathroom.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice chapter!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmmm, Bella's journal is amongst them I'm sure, and he will be able to read her inner ramblings.  Bout as good as reading her mind.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wonder if she is still "technically" a virgin.  Edward is going to feel guilty for reading all of her private thoughts...at least he should be.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I never kept a diary or journal.  I was too afraid someone would get ahold of it and read it.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sounds like she is being set up with this dress.  She needs to put her foot down and get another dress.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Not liking Leah and Jake at all.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Those two are a piece of work and really deserve each other, meaning Leah and Jake.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Is it getting hot in here?

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Hot! Hot! Hot! with no condom....hmmmmm

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Rose is mighty pushy.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So Edward was the blast from the past.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

hmmm, is Edward fixing to screw up?

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

She will worry that he only wants her for the baby.

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved it!

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

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Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awww...the joys of moving.

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: melanieintn Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start!

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward is coming on mighty strong there.

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Charlie is very unCharlie like. If dinners with him go like that all the time, I would be making up excuses to distance myself from him.

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This Edward is very persistent.

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Charlie needs to grow up.

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

He is turning into the Edward we all know and love.

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Very protective Edward, I like it.  Video games have always seemed stressfull to me.  My husband and kids always loved them.  

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

:)

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter!

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

At least Charlie is coming around slowly.

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great story and I loved the ending!