Reviews by amandac3
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: ellab2005 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I'm a weirdo and don't usually review until the end of a story! You asked so nicely though so I thought I'd review now. I LOVE this story, it is so unique and I love the characters. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes although I'm quite upset that it's almost over, do you think you might write a sequel?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: amandac3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Awww... I'm so in love with him. These two make me smile big cheesy smiles! I'm finally catching up over here and am SO happy you've chosen to continue this story. It's one of my favorites. And I've also subscribed to your blog. Thanks darlin'. :)

Middle Ground by Mona Rider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 118]
Summary:

 

Banner by: Ellie Wolf

 

The Middle Ground is run by the most intellectual of mankind, and they run a facility that is known as Halfway Guild.

 

They take care of the sickly, elderly and control the procreation of the human species.

 

- June Drabble Wars -


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8111 Read Count: 22721
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Jun 2012
Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Notes

How did I not review this chapter??? Shame on me. I love the summary and am very interested in reading what you got for us. Hugs!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the ego boosting and the review! More tomorrow!

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm so intrigued about this story, it sounds interesting and really complex. I can't wait until tomorrow!



Author's Response:

I hope its not too complex but thanks for reviewing! More tomorrow!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Eeeeeeeeee!!! I'M SO EXCITED!!!! Ok... *deep breaths* I'm better now. LOL! I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. :)

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh my. LOL!!!

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

In case any boys came sniffing around??? LMAO!!! You kill me and I love you for it. 

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL! Oh Charlie... He sounds kinda like my dad in a way. :)

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Women things... LOL!!! Why are men so freaked out that? And Charlie's sweet.

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

How old is Bella? Did you already tell us and I'm having a blonde moment? LOL!! I'm playing catch up now! Whoop!

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LMAO!!! Flicking the bean. I love that saying. Off for more...

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Could you imagine Edward dressed as a drag queen??? HAHAHAHA! Love it True!!!

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You hatin... Oh sorry. Heeheehee!! Yup, song is stuck. LOL!!

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hate frozen ass cheeks. Happened many a time while I was growing up. :)

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

...and an innocence about him that made you think that there was actually nothing innocent about him. I love this and I love Emmett. Perfect. And Bella's inner monologue is killing me. LMAO!!


Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

*snickers* Love Emmett's witty comeback. Now where are these boys???

Reviewer: amandac3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yes, yes it is. I have a feeling she won't be needing any toys though. Lucky bitch. Sigh... LOL!!!

Summary:

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34749
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: amandac3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"What?  You’d be insatiable too, if you got to f*ck Edward." Truer words have never been spoken. LOL!!! Love it and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Haha... so glad you liked it amandac3... we've got lots more goodness coming your way!

Thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb and true

Summary:

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1563
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: amandac3 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah for birthdays!!! Loved it. So much fun. And I love the BlackBook pics, he looks so delicious. Thanks for sharing. :)