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Bio:
Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
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Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17368
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Outside Intrusions
I gotta admit, I came over here for the lemon scene from ff. I needed my fix! I love the idea of vamp sex in the ocean, all surrounded by the sensual feel of the water like that. It sounds lovely. Alistair is just bizarre. I thought he was weird in the books, and you just took that and made him weirder. How sad is it though to go through eternity with that state of mind? Anyway, it looks like you're setting up for some excitement! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, you're not the only one! I did too and I had to put in that little bit of their first time in the book. Alistair always reminded my of a schizophrenic a little with the delusional paranoia, which you are right, is a horrible way to spend eternity. But I needed him to be a catalyst for a storyline I'm really excited about! You're welcome and thanks for jumping over...hope you enjoy what's on the way!