Reviews by MarilagML
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Happy! Love it.  They thought she's cheating on Edward?  She couldn't even breathe without thinking about him.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

 

My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.

"Understood," he chuckled softly.

"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."

Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."

Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.

"Hello?" he asked softly.

"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.

"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.

"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"

"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."

 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

It's so sweet!  Edward got married with Bella and they had a baby. 



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14798
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: This Is Halloween

Sweet Halloween story.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Broken : EmPOV

Emmett have a wild ride. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Leave Out All The Rest : Jack POV

Victoria is evil!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV

Sweet!  I love the "shotgun in the car" dialogue.  Can't get over that one.  It's hilarious. :-)

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Good thing Bella was asleep.



Author's Response:

Thank you, bb. =)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oohh!!!  A vindictive Bella is a sexy Bella. :-)



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks, girl. ;D

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Leah?!  I didn't see that coming.



Author's Response:

Lol! Yes, it was her. Jake was the number one suspect of most of my readers.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeah.  After all that sex, give us a revelation!



Author's Response:

Hey you...lol! that is all I'm saying. *hugs*

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Of course she's crazy.  She's part of the mob!



Author's Response:

LOL. Yes, she is. 

Thanks sweetie for reviewing. *MUAHZ*

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

WTH was Bella thinking, trying to get to Snake with only Victoria as her backup?



Author's Response:

Oh, hey girlie. ;)

Bella is screwed if she get's caught. lol but don't worry, E has arrived, albeit, furious at the moment. 

Anyway, thank you for this review. *hugs*

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Gosh!  How long does the truth serum last?  Bella must be so desperate to get those answers to have Snake touch her like that.



Author's Response:

Lmao! Bella needs answers. Going near Snake was stupid but she just wanted to help out. In other words, she is desperate. lol.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow!  Edward is overprotective and fierce.  He needs to cool down a little and let Bella run the show.



Author's Response:

=) Thanks girl.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Jacob?!  I can think of several reasons why he'll do that.



Author's Response:

Yay, it's you bb! ;)

Jake needs to go hide now, coz Em and Ed would surely have his head. hehehe

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Torture Jacob he did. 



Author's Response:

Lol. 

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh gosh!  I wonder if going to Italy is a trap. It could be, couldn't it?



Author's Response:

There's a big possibility that it might. That's why E doesn't want Bella to go. 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I miss Rosalie and Emmett.  Happy New Year!  How are you?  Still need to adjust my body clock from staying up late for the new year.



Author's Response:

I'm fine sweets! I missed you. ;) hehehe tweet me if you're not that busy.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

WTF?!  Should Edward have eyes at the back of his head to watch Aro?  Aro seems like a snake to me. 



Author's Response:

Hey girl, I missed you. How was your Christmas? Hope it was fantastic! =D

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I can tell that Edward's freaking out.  I believe that the baby would be a welcomed surprise once it finally made it to them.



Author's Response:

Yes, once he'll get over his anger...he'll go to ask for forgiveness. Bella won't make it easy...but this story has a HEA...so you can bascially see where I'm going with this. hehehe

Thanks, girl! =)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Major grovelling.  Flowers, chocolates, and some foot massage might get her to forgive him. ;-)



Author's Response:

Totally agree with you there. ;D

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh good!  The baby was safe.  I half expected Emmett to beat him up.  Glad Rose interfered. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb. =)

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15843
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue...30 months later

Love the ending.  This isn't the usual writing you do so I'm a little apprehensive to check on it until everything is posted.  Once it is completed, I devoured the entire thing.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Advance happy birthday!  It's my birthday yesterday and I'm glad that you wrote a new fic. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can just imagine Emmett catching them. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'm voting for Rosalie seeing it. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's a dangerous territory.  But I agree.  They're not even blood related so go for it.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Dun dun dun!  I guess the revelation would be sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Poor girl.  Nightmares.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I feel sorry for Emmett.  That's like a wtf happened here?

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Cat fight!  That was a classic. 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

At least they're not hiding anymore. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sweet!  I love the Romeo and Juliet thing. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: My Other Brother

Too short!  Right now, I wouldn't mind if Bella attacked Tanya and Gianna.  Argghh!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Edward is sweet!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Sweet!  Edward getting accepted to Julliard.  Esme and Carlisle raised good kids.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Sweet!  Good job for standing their ground!  Can't wait for the epilogue. 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Not as happy ending but happy enough. :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

Wow!  Happy mother's day.  I think this was before their abstinence.



Author's Response:

Definitely.  In the next chap we'll find out how far along she is.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Emmett's mischievous.  He made me laugh.



Author's Response:

Bella, Edward and I have had our heads together for 2 days, plotting revenge upon Emmett.  He'd better be afraid. lol  Thanks!

Summary:

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Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Fighting

Sweet ending!  I love a possessive Edward. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love him, too! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Camping

Awesome!  Edward is cute.  A little hormonal but cute.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News

Rose is pregnant?  Panicking. 

Isabella Swan by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12282
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2010 Updated: 08 Jul 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Carlisle!  That was cruel. 



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie. =)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This is one of the hottest chapter so far.  Edward is sneaky.



Author's Response:

=) Thank you. 

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Edward is one horny male.  Charlie died?  I wonder how it'll affect her.  Will she have "what if" questions?



Author's Response:

=) I'll post next chap. soon, girl. Thanks for always reviewing. ;)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He's just about ready to propose!  What's with all the trouble with Charie then?  It seems odd that he'll just give away the money.



Author's Response:

Well, Charlie just wanted them to recognize him, but he had every intention to give them the money. It was a way to for him to make amends.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That caught me off guard. Rose and Emmett got married before Edward and Bella? At least they got their happy ending. :-)



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you bb. =)

The Vineyard by EricaNoelle180 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 512]
Summary: Past Featured Story

France 1830

After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But  when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
[Report This] Published: 03 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

This is hilarious and I love how your Bella don't behave as she should.  However, there are some misspelled words.  I mean, they are the correct spelling but their meanings are not what you intended them to be.  I am tempted to beta this (just for the spelling).  Otherwise, I love your story and I look forward with your updates.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

What if it's Carlisle that's fathered Tanya's child?  Hmm?  Just a theory.  Love the story.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Awww!  Love it.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Kate is sweet!  I hope she doesn't turn into an evil monster when she grows up.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard

Oh! I love it. :-)  Edward getting worried like that.   I'm glad he didn't throw a fit.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Oh gosh!  That's horrible.  James cheating on Victoria.  

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Epilogue

Beautiful ending. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Oh gosh!  James!  I'm scared now.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

I did not see that one coming.  I like it when Edward called James an asshole.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Alistair is so awful!  Thank goodness for Jasper.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Oh my gosh!  That's a twist.  I did not expect that one.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

What happened with Kate? 

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 25: C25 Punching Bag

This is a new dynamic... Edward and Jasper are rivals.  How can Princess Isabella be so blind?



Author's Response:

Bella has grown up with Edward, he is her family. And she doens't see Jasper as anything other than the one that will save her country.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: C23 Fire and Ice

Jacob!  Hope he's coming to the rescue.



Author's Response:

Hmmm maybe :) thanks for the review, next update very soon

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: C11 Hunting Traits

Oh, that is just good!  Bella showing her skills again. :-)



Author's Response:

Im glad im not the only one who likes my Bella :) thanks for reading, will update after new years :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 26: C26 Red Gems

Victoria is evil, evil, evil!



Author's Response:

Yes she is lol, hope you enjoyed this chapter, thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: C5 Finding Jasper

So this would be a B/J ship?  I like this since it uses magic and sorcery enough.



Author's Response:

I can't actually tell you if its B/J or B/E because that would ruin some of the storyline, part of it is never knowing what will happen, i hope you keep reading to find out what happens in later chapter :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: C6 The Family Returns

It is cute. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: C7 Enter Jane, Stage Right

Oh!  Charlie still fighting!  Is Victoria a vampire or just a plain immortal?  How Victoria saw the world after reminded me of Bella's transformation as a vampire.



Author's Response:

Yes, Charlie is definatly still a fighter, he's not one to give up, even after being locked up for 10 years. Victoria is Immortal, not a vampire.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: C12 Betting Against Alice

I love Alice.  When's Edward's gonna be?



Author's Response:

Glad you approve of Alice. Edward wont make an appearnce for another say 7-9 chapters. Not sure exactly when, could be sooner, could be later :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: C13 Jelous Boys

What's up with Edward?  When exactly does he come in to the story?



Author's Response:

Thats the million dollar question isn't it, I dont see him appearing for a while, but don't fret Edward will make an appearance that one will not forget :) hope you keep reading even though Edward is AWOL :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: C14 Misguided Memories

Kill Victoria!  Bind Aro.



Author's Response:

Yes they are quiet a pair ain't they, but every story needs a badguy, hope you liked it and keep reading :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: C15 Fishing

I love Bella but I'm hating Irina right now!  



Author's Response:

Yeah Irina can be a handful but Bella hardly notices her behaviour, which will get worse before it gets better. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: C16 Promising Future

Jasper is the warrior!  I want to see Edward now too. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing ;) glad to see your following the story. Edward will come soon, I'll give you a hint and tell you that he isn't on Earth :p

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: C17 Truth Hurts

Victoria is evil!  She's using magic to scare Bella off. 



Author's Response:

yes she is evil, she will do anything to win :) thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: C21 Proving Edward

Wow!  I love Edward's entrance.  He and Jasper had a fight!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, hope you liked it :) the interaction with the two boys will get better, trust me :p

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: C18 Tattoos and Bimbos

Where the hell is Jasper?



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in the next chapter, hope to post it tomorrow, but am having some technical difficulties. Thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: C19 Welcome to Forks

Oh!  Love triangle.



Author's Response:

hmmm maybe :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: C20 Seduction Techniques

Oh gosh!  This is getting complicated.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: C22 Aching Muscles

Oh!  I love the jealousy between Edward and Jasper.



Author's Response:

A little bit of rivalry never hurt anyone, so far :) thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: C27 Astral Trance

Gosh!  Isabella needs to rest.  She's pushing herself too much.



Author's Response:

Yes she is :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: C24 LaPush Temple

Nevea?  Are you serious?  Why would you base the name of Jasper's mother on a cosmetic product?



Author's Response:

I didn't know it was. It means from heaven. Also has the meaning of "butterfly" in Slavic.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: C28 Steel Caps

Jasper seems to be Isabella's choice in this.  Oh well.  Can't wait to see how this story unfolds.



Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not... Its going to take a while for Bella to see who she really wants to be with, for now she is just acting the way she always has. Jasper is special to Bella, he is the promised one, the one that can save her home from total destruction. She needs to figure out all the feelings inside her mean, at this point in time Bella is not thinking of romance, she wants to get Jasper safely to Haven. Thanks for the Review!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: C29 Manticore Attack

Wow!  Isabella injured.  This would take a while.



Author's Response:

I wanted to show that Bella is indeed human, she cant get injured and possibly die (but I wouldnt do that to you would I? Nah not just yet lol). Glad you liked this latest chapter and thanks for continually reading and reviewing, they mean so much to me to know that people are enjoying my story :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: C30 Stubborn as Always

That caught me off guard.  Bella kissing Edward.  



Author's Response:

She is not in her normal state of mind at the moment due to the Manticore posion, thanks for reading and hope you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: C31 Haven, Lies and Centaurs

Didn't like the ending.  It's hanged.  :-(  I mean, I enjoy the story but the ending has got to be more than that.



Author's Response:

That wasnt the ending, only the end of part one, its supposed to leave you hanging, with many questions still to be answered. Hope you continue to read part two when its posted.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

This just got better.



Author's Response:

and you made me smile....xoxoxo muahahah the things we have coming up.....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Gosh!  This is so good, Esme is OOC. 



Author's Response:

Yes Esme has a screw loose..LOL xoxo thanks for reviewing and enjoying

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

dlir

Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Are you mine yet?

Sweet!



Author's Response:

xoxoxo thanks

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Remember....Remember

I'm glad for this chapter. :-)



Author's Response:

xoxoxoxo yeah the story gets better now...I hope :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

bi

When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, in the process realizing everything isn't always as it seems. Canon couples, E&B Eventually, NO Cheating

 

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152943 Read Count: 29067
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Sweet outtake. :-)  It's a wonderful story. :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

cr

When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 29843
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Happy ending.  :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love the ending.  However, I didn't get the Suzanne part, too.  That confused me.

Adeste Fideles by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Past Featured Story

af

Bella returns home for Christmas for the first time in 5 years. Who awaits her when she arrives?

My one shot written for The Southern FanFiction Review's Countdown to Christmas.

Rated M for lemony goodness.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 2116
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Adeste Fideles

It left me teary eyed.

Summary: Past Featured Story

GupCL

Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3351
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A sweet sweet story. :-)

Stay...Please! by JennSull Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Bella is telling Renee the story of how she fell in love with Edward.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5939 Read Count: 101
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Stay...Please!

Sweet ending.  :-) 

Summary:

 

"When stating our vows, we hadn't believed '…until death do us part' would come into play..." O/S


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4446 Read Count: 277
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 29 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad it's here on this site now.  I actually love it so much I kept reading it over and over again at Twi'd.



Author's Response:

Omigoodness that's amazing. :o
Made my day. :D

~Sydney

30 Days by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary: Past Featured Story

30 days

30 days for him to make her prom queen. 30 days for her to turn his world upside-down. AU/AH. OCC. Canon pairing.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24840 Read Count: 39107
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2011 Updated: 03 Mar 2011
Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Day 30

Gosh!  This is short. :-)  It was nice while it lasted.

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Day 29

Last chapter already?  It's been a good ride.  Why is Bella having a headache?

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Day 3

Edward needs a map to Bella's head.  Congratulations with coming to the US. :-)

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Day 4

Bella's so smart!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Day 28

Awww!  Bella forgave him this time.