Penname: Lady Luciole [Contact] Real name: Lucie V
Member Since: 03 Apr 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

  1. Date of birth : 20th April 1987

  2. Nationality : French

  3. Gender : female ... but I prefer the saying "in the ladies' team"

  4. Country living : FRANCE, Alsace, near Strasbourg.


I'm actually working as a Quality employee in a pharmaceutical factory.
Formers diploma (or degree) state that I'm a major in Biology and Chemistry in pharmaceutical and food process with a focus in Quality! I'm not very sure for my degres' translations...
In short, I will not be a regular visitor !


I don't write any story but I'm quite a bookworm who read a lot of fanfictions...


I have discovered this place following the story "The Perfect Wife" by Rmcrms5.


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Reviews by Lady Luciole
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 306059
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Waouh amazing work ! It's such an excellent story very original and full of horror, anxiousness and hope. I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't stop reading it once I started ! The subject is very serious and well treated. I pray the escape will go well ! I hope this story could get an HEA ending !

I can't wait to read next chapter very soon !

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 56100
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

I love this story : it's very entertaining ! I can't stop reading! LOL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

Nice parents & son discussions! I love the way their relationship progress. This plot is amazing ! Let's read what comes next!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

Evil Charlie !! Very frustrating ... And absolutely genius ! I'm so fond of your story !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

I love your plot : Chef’s cruiser coming up behind them with his lights on. It's awsome, genius, terrible ! You have a great mind!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

The sex scene is better than the cliffhanger ! Why oh why be so cruel ! I don't think SHE comes in this love scene... Time to make her like this also!Maybe a little Edward's POV of this scene would be good!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

I was really really frightened by this accident ! I pray for a happy ending !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

I love it !! I hope the sequel will be as great ! Amazing plot : it gives a new signification to 'love at first sight'! I think Renee may cause some problems in the future... Let's see!

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 43149
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - The Day After

Will it not cause any problem the fact that Bella refuses to experiment the real life as a student? Jane was a very nice spicy surprise! I love this sequel !!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

I love the lemons : you are amazing with them!! Just enough description to please without given into porn. B&E seems to like having a D/s relationship... I think it suits them well. What the hell is Alice problem?????

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy

I think I can understand why Jasper freeks out & Alice's reaction but I don't understand her blame on Bella. It's unfair.

I don't really like Alice anymore in your story : she always interupt them, says nasty things to Bella or the other, isn't happy for her friend& brother... She acts like an ungrateful brat with everybody!

And where are Emmet & Rosalie? MIA?

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest

HOT HOT HOT : the lemons of course ! She does as he commands and it's beautiful : domineering but not controlling ! It's a nice way to say this.

CREEPY CRREPY CREEPY : Phil ! It's smells like a huge drama !! ;-)

I want MORE MORE MORE of it : love, sex & drama !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

I don't understand Renee behaviour. How could she not believed her ouwn child? And her attitude with the other mother... it's sad for her : she is loosing her daughter for a man.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - The Proposition

The last chapters are so full of suspense : I'm so happy I didn't have to wait to read them one after the other !! Beware, too much cliffy frustrated the readers !!!! But it could also give them a reason to come read next chapter... All is a question of proportioning!! LOL

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3520]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1580150
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I love these chapters with the love making !!
I was a little bit worried with the no condom ... She isn't ready to become a mom.

I'm anxious with Carlisle : what is he up to? Why Bella hasn't told anyone about his treats?

Next chapter will tell I hope!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Oh my god ! This cliffhanger is fustrating! Fortunately I've got some chapter in stock.

I really really hate your Carlisle : he is evil. I hope Bella will forgive Edward!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Woah ! You're a genius : this plot is getting better with each chapter. This scene was incredible : you have a wonderful imagination!

I was hoping the answer about Esme's garden will come soon!!

Happy reader who will go quickly read next chapter.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Well thought! A garden for therapy : almost a title for a new story ! Very poetic idea.

I love it !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

I hate this cliffy ! It's so frustrating!

Amazing imagination as allways ! I need to read your next chapter!

I loved the pictures ! I miss them...

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I was so sure I could handle this chapter after the cliffy and your note! But finally, it's even worse : an unreponsive Bella who asks to be set free from Edward even when she's in love with him! It's torture to read this : so sad !

I want to read the next chapter very soon... To much cliffy for my heart!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I COMPLETELY FORGOT TO TELL YOU THIS : I totally loved the way Carlisle died in this chapter. The honor of the true familly is safe and they can really start to live and control their own lives!

You have an amazing imagination! Don't stop writing : it shouldn't became dry!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Very interesting. I was afraid all along that Bella's date was someone new ... not Edward! You are great at suspence!

I find it strange that Bella lets the therapist took control over her life after everything she went throught. I'm not familliard with this, but is it normal that she asks her to stop seeing the Cullen? Why did she strip her bare?

Where is she going to school? What does she study? Jasper help her with which course? I want to know more!

:'( Only one chapter left! It's so sad!

Good luck with your project of novel... Read you soon!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

It was nice but so short ... abrupt ending ! I'm a little bit confuse by the time line since the death of Carlisle : How old is she???

I guess I have a lot of unanswered questions about Bella & Edward : what about their honeymoon? Where is their house ? Will it be children for them?

Have Rosalie, Alice and Esme any job?

I hope to read you soon for your new story!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

The picture at the begining of the chapter doesn't appear : could you maybe repost it? I love your illustrations!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121978
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love how Bella reacts to all the events : she's proud and strong headed ! I love this plot and can't wait to read more ! I thank your girl who motivates you to continue to write it !! LoL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

My faith is restored. I was imaging a lots of chapters full of hard discussions and explanations from all the characters in order for B&E to get together again ! Thanks !! I can't wait to know what will come next !!



Author's Response:

I'm glad. This night was just a minor hiccup in the road for them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a fractured girl with a life-threatening eating disorder. Her whole life changes when she meets Edward Masen. Warning- child abuse and dark themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99625 Read Count: 41654
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue: Two Years Later...

Very interesting story. I read it in one afternoon ! Some chapter are very dark but I really feel better with this happy end... A hard but very instructing reading. Thanks.

Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

Banner by FrozenSoldier


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15599
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Brave New World

I was afraid the first fiancé was Edward. Great plot so far ! I need to read what will come after!

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 33768
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Dilemma: Jacob's POV

very interesting plot ! so far the repetition of chapter in a different POV is well written and captivating... I will read more !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Moments: Bella's POV

what a screw up from jacob !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Perceptions: Bella's POV

waouh you really make me feel Bella's overload emotion! it was sure to come this crisis! extra  writing!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Persistence: Jacob's POV

she is infuriating ! with edward she want it all and now & with jacob it's please take it slow ! what is in her mind? I love the double POV it's really interesting

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Reassurance: Jacob's POV

B&J are ssssssssssooooooooooooo sweeeeeet & cute together !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Unease: Bella's POV

Edward coming on a bike? ... No. I don't know!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Unease: Jacob's POV

female wolf with no cubs : I think that was the next cruel thing !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Retribution: Jacob's POV

They just forget that Mike's mum was here ! = problem because she a gossip queen.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Admission: Bella's POV

and the silver figure is ... a vampire? Edward??

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

I'm team Edward but I love this Jacob : I'm really torn between the two !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Overwrought: Bella's POV

Will Jacob become an alpha wolf with his second pack? I think they are too many for only one.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Panic: Bella's POV

interesting idea to make this stash apparate  !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Unexpected: Bella's POV

YYYYYEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS the Cullens are here !! Strange discussion !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I was reading "The Perfect Wife" which come recently on this site. Then I just stumble across it on the site when I made a research for other stories! Your summary was intriguing & interesting !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Normalcy: Bella's POV

I love the funny ending !!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Normalcy: Jacob's POV

Will they finally explain to Bella what an imprint is ?

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Distractions: Jacob's POV

I want to know Bella's reaction to this imprint... Please I hope the next chapter will come soon !

Wisdom by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to upcoming Chapters 9 & 10: Revelation. Sam and Emily try to figure out what's going on with Jacob and what's causing Bella's volatile reactions.

 

~"Her name's Bella," he replied defensively. "Jake's got some kind of bizarre relationship with her."~

 

 

One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1211 Read Count: 332
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Wisdom (One-Shot)

I love it ! Their dynamic is interesting !

Gossip by ysar Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapter 23: Comfort

 

Bella skips lunch, and misses out on some very interesting conversation.

 

~ "Whatever," said Jessica, rolling her eyes. "You know Bella. She just has to have any guy I like." ~

 

 

But Angela's there to see and hear it all.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1309 Read Count: 338
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Gossip (One-Shot)

I love Angela & Ben. They are sweet together & very nice to Bella !

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 45814
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Illumination

Grrrrrrr I hate this cliffhanger !!!! But I love your plot so far : it's excellent ! I can't stop reading it so sorry if I don't review every chapter ! LOL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Daddy

Tania is a bitch ! I hate her as much as I love Abby ! Is Bella supposed to become her mother? Sort of better mother than the real one... I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Threshold

Will Bella join the tour soon? and take care of Abby for Edward? That would be good!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Infatuation

Infatuation Infatuation Infatuation & euh Infatuation ? I'm crazy about your story AND I want to go to this show !!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Velvet

Nooooooooooo I don't want to read the end of Bella&Edward together : they are soo sweet !!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Mockingbird

YES Bella is on the road with Edward !!!!! Awsome !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Fuse

I love this lime : it's amazing!!! It's almost a shame that it was a dream !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Decompensate

I love your style with the lime! Edward's Happy Time in the shower is so good!!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Superstar

I love the Zoo project in San Diego... It was also very promising that Abby asks to call Bella *mommy*. So sweet!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Sacrifice

OKay I will give you a "giddy and happy" moment : you are evil with your cliffies !!!! Hopefully I'm a late reader so I don't have to wait to read next chapter ;-p ! It has advantages !! Don't stop writing a story : it's the best way to loose readers.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Butterfly

Waouh ! What a powerful & excellent lemon !! Just one question : birth control? No condoms so, is she on the pill? Or will she get pregnant? ...

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Lucky

What the hell had Mike told the press?? I hope Bella will not be crushed by the court... Will her mother Renee reappear? Will she speak about Jacob? I hope they will not depicted her as a whore!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Confrontation

I hate this cliffy !!!!! You are evil !!!!!!! LOL ;-) Quick, I need to read next chapter !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Conundrum

I was very afraid for Bella's health ! No pregnancy is good for her at the moment. The friend's arrival was excellent ! I was wondering if they will see each other again!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Unstoppable

I love the song !!! I hope that Edward's secrets will not cause Bella any pain !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Proposition

I love the proposal : so great ! And the familly is accepting : awsome ! I can't wait for this trial to be over !!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Sanctuary

Waouh the hearing is eventful ! So much crap ! I like the fact that you don't let Tania's testimony took too much place in your description. It keeps us in Bella's POV and I much prefer this !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Change

Evil cliffly, amazing lemon, and lots of question !!! Why Bella needed to talk alone to Carlisle ? For her sleeping & anti-anxiety pills? What the hell is going on in this kitchen so early ? Thank god the next chapter is already published : I couldn't wait !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Harmony

Awesome the familly in reunited !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For the internationnal tour, I request a stop by France. Paris could be a lovelly get away for our lovely couple ! It's the capital of the people in love ! And as a part of the Vixens I'd like to have them stop in my country ! Thanks! LOL  ;-p

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Adjustments

I hope Bella will not turn addicted to those pills ! It would be terrible for her marriage !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Paroxysm

This is a fucking nightmare ! I don't know wich one is the worse : the attitude of Edward-Velvet, a drunk drogued Bella, or the pitiful ending of the night?

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Exacerbation

Is it a real suicide attempt or just an accident ? A result of the alcool & pills from yesterday and the hanghover & emotional state she was in the morning? I hope she will not become depressed or addicted and end like Tanya !! ;-(

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Realization

Ouf I was scared for Bella... Thanks for the little little trip by Paris ! ;-p

I find the birthday party really nice !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Completion

It's great that Bella starts to have a life apart from waiting for Edward!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

It was a beautiful story! Apparently E is quite successful even after all those years ! LOL I'm so sad that they didn't start a family : why no baby ?? ;-( So cruel !

I love the way you describe everybody's life : with the help of the picture frame ! Genius and it gives a great feeling of happy memories !

Thanks for the story !!!

Loyalty by ysar Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.

What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)

~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~

~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2589 Read Count: 301
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty (One-Shot)

Aie what sort of plan is that ? A boy's one of course : there will be problems!

Forgotten by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Sookie awakens to find the world she knew is gone, having been replaced with people and a past she doesn't recognize.

 

~I was dreaming. I had to be. Things always get mixed up in dreams, right? People and places get switched around…you walk upstairs only to find yourself swimming…you try to run, but your legs feel like they are wading through wet cement…~

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2375 Read Count: 1285
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 28 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting plot ! When will next chapter come ? How many years did she forget?

Destined by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Companion story for Breathe Again. Written as a side to Chapter Fifty-Three: Nuisance. Jessica is convinced that she and Embry are destined to be together. One-shot.

~"Finally a guy that was worth it. And just in time for prom.." ~


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2129 Read Count: 192
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Destined (One-Shot)

A POV from the inside of Jessica's head : scary ! This girl is nut ! But I think you really understand the character. Good job ! LOL

Envy by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Companion story for Breathe Again. Written as a side to Posts 39-54. Rachel's having a tough time adjusting, and she's been taking it out on Bella. One-shot.

 

~ So I was jealous. I could admit that. I just couldn’t admit it to her. ~

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2212 Read Count: 183
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Envy (One-Shot)

It is really heplful to understand why Rachel could be so sweet with Bella and then just mean the next hour. Well writen ! I didn't think it could be jealousy the problem between the girls because I thought Rachel knows everything from Paul.

Concession by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Post #61: Confessions. Charlie's reasoning behind relaxing the rules and a peek at his talk with Jacob.

 

So yeah, there was a boy in my daughter's bed, and I wasn't entirely sure he deserved to see another day.

 

 

One-shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3275 Read Count: 325
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Concession (One-Shot)

Great ! An excellent POV!! I love Charlie : he is so cool and loving for his daughter and her situation !

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 115175
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

And another decision made by other for her : a wedding. First Irina rectified the situation by asking Bella what SHE wants. Than her father took anotherthing out of her decision. She is young but not incompetent : she knows how to take a decision and what she wants to do with her life ! Hello she is going to be a mother : it's time they let her act as a grown-up... as they allways have before !

You really know how to make us feel her emotional state. It's a great skill. I can't wait to read more about this last ultimatum! Please write fast! LOL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What does HEA means? I love your plot. This possessiveness is quite crazy but it makes a good story. This Daemon & Tania's baby are huge problem s for our couple. The cliffy is terrible ! I hope to read you soon!!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I don't like to choose : why not the confrontation AND the visit ? You could use Edward POV on this two events. But it's your choice in the end because it's your story and I don't know which POT you have for the events...

I really appreciate the strong mind that Bella expresses in this chapter!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Good a little bit of action ! I love the sneaky Bella who discovered Tanya's birth controls !! Very funny !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Waou your plot is getting better ! So many twists... I didn't see this one coming. I hope this will not put an hold on all the good lemon in your chapter !!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Are you against abortion or is it just to place the domineering Men make this decision to have a baby? I love your story and will continue as long as you don't stop writing some lemons ! LOL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Her mother is an amazing bitch soooo selfish it's unbeliviable ! Her father's reaction is a little more understable... So much action that she fainted !!LOL

I hope your father recovers well and soon... Take care.

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm dying to know what they are plotting!!! It's an excellent chapter !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

You ARE evil... But I  really enjoy it ! It's so excellent!!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 166678
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I first read your story on fanfiction. I love it !! The plot is excellent, B&Ed relationship is lovely and the twist are so surprising ! I never see a grandfather, an uncle or a sister coming from B's mother side !! Hope to read what happens next very soon !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Excellent chapter with (finally) very good explanations for Bella's behaviour. This dissociation thing is really scary ! I hope she will get better. The boys were amazing litlle heroes ! Lol A very good chapter... Pray the next one will come soon.

Summary:

I have searched for her since the day she was born, My singer. A singer is a precious gift. Its one I will protect and treasure always. That is if life doesn't screw it up! AU reg. pairs OOC  EXB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43691 Read Count: 23829
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I really loved this story : quite original with elements from the books. I was thrilled by the growing Voltury familly ! I was quite distressed by a small point in the beginning of the story : why Bella come live with her abusive father ? He beats his wife so why would she send Bella there ? Bella smelling problem was quite entertaining. I never saw Maggie coming. What had happen to the wolves ?

I love your style of writing and the original turns of the events ! Hope to read one of your other stories soon !

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60062
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Amazing story and original plot ! I thought a baby will come with this time travel where the birth control was illegal. I was crazy about your story !

Halo Effect by Missus T Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Celebrity Eric Northman plays good Samaritan when Sookie gets injured by the paparazzi following him. What happens when they discover that she has amnesia? When all is said and done, can you find true love in a flash of blinding light?

Banner by Sapfirerose.)

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196926 Read Count: 16665
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 18 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Blister in the Sun

Very original plot ! I can't wait to read more... So much sexual tension : they need some lemon !! LOL

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dry Before Sweet

I love the scene of making out in the hotel room : bestest cliché ! A buzzed Sookie & Eric from a tour of the wineries : it's so promising for next chapter!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chicken Noodle Soup

Yeeeeeeessssssss a lemon !!!!!! Very well writen by the way : not too graphic to become porn! LOL They live in a bubble during this vacation : what will happen to make it POP and what will they do after???? A meeting with Eric's familly is quite promising in drama ! Suspence !! I hope to read you soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked the lemon, it was really hard to write - I wanted it to be perfect for them. Ha ha. Well...you'll just have to wait and see what happens when they return home. :)

Sandra

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: What's in your Drawers?

I love the making up stories !!! I' very curious about the brothers' reaction !!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 22 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Nice Girls Run Away From Crazy

I love the cosy relationship they have ! And I'm really really excited to meet the brothers !!!!! I can't wait to know their reactions ! And see Sookie's revenge on Sophie-Anne for all the drama !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Northman Canoodling, Despite Drama

I think I could fall in love with the brothers : they are cute together ! I love the different kind of relationship each has with Eric! What does Chris do for a job? I didn't really understand Sven's new job... And I'm a little lost with their age ! LOL It was a nice meeting and I hope everything will be allright during their stay with E&S!



Author's Response:

Sorry to confuse you on the ages. :) Eric is the oldest. Chris is one year younger than Eric. Sven is four years younger than Eric.

Chris works at Boeing in Seattle, I haven't really said what he does, but in my head, he's a mechanical engineer. :)

Sven's new job is with American Experess as an account representative or customer service person. It seems entry level, but I had a friend that did it  and it was a LOT of training. You have to have at least a bachelors degree. They don't care what it's in as long as you pass their exam, then the training, and I swear it was like six months.

Hope that helped. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Batter Up!

Excellent chapter : the brothers are amazing !! And... Very strange ending ! Did she cross him there 2 weeks ago ? I need to know what else she remember!!!! PLEASE post next chapter really soon !!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Meaning of Everything

Amazing romantic & lovely chapter... a little bit short in lemon but the lime was very good ! I can't wait to see them "home" in LA !!!!!!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Bitten

Waouh amazing plot ! You have a really good tortured imagination to come up with this incredible story ! It's getting better and better with each chapter !

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Home

I would like to thank you for the different links for pictures through your story ! It really helps to put it in a real context... especially when you have never seen it !



Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews. :) I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.

You're so welcome for the links. It helps me to visualize things as I write, and as I reader I like to see things like that too, so I'm glad to share the information if anyone wants it. I'm actually pretty excited to know that you looked at them, I never know if anyone checks the links out. So thanks for letting me know!