Reviews by cawilliams1
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514676
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: James DAY 14

Normally I read fan fiction on fanfiction.net.  I know that over there you have the 4 stories seperated.  I think having all 4 stories combined is a much better arrangement.  Often when authors do multiple POV as seperate stories, it feels like you're rehashing the same story repeatedly.  This way when reading the different POV you don't already know how it's going to end.  Also, I don't think I could put up with James' POV for more then a chapter at a time.  I like the contrast shown in how proper SM is done, and how it's done by someone who doesn't know what they are doing.  I am so looking forward to James' plan unravaling.



Author's Response:

well I wouldn't have combined it at all except FanFiction pulled Bella's POV off......... but yes I do like it combined even if it was so hard to get it to this point.........

 

thanks for taking the time and coming over here to read it........ it won't be posted on FanFiction anymore.

Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Two things I noticed while reading:  Chapter 19 should actually be Bella Day 8 - Part A, not day 9.  Also, instead of having JPOV posted in chapter 41, chapter 40 has been posted again.  I thought you might want to correct these things.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

BS Banner

 

Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68247
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Beautiful story.  Very original.  Thanks for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you, outtake was emailed

Summary:

This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26605
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Jul 2011
Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Odd Bird

I really love this story right now, so please keep writing.  Your Edward and Bella are so funny.

Summary:

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Bella has a problem...she's just a tad bit distracted at work. Who knew facial hair could drive you crazy? Quickie One-shot that I planned to continue, but it never got any reviews. If it gets some interest, I will continue it. :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 490 Read Count: 1300
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2011 Updated: 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like to see you continue this.

Summary:

When Carlisle's coven of females is threatened by an interloper, Carlisle's instincts run away with him as he teaches his rival a lesson he'll never forget. Very OOC. Graphic. Heed warnings inside. For the TwiKinkFest.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9148 Read Count: 1876
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2011 Updated: 20 Dec 2011
Reviewer: cawilliams1 Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'd really love to see an outtake of this where Jasper takes Carlise out.  There's just something so wrong about the 'God of War' losing so easily.



Author's Response:

Sorry, but that won't happen. First, this is a one-shot, the whole point of which was to have Carlisle defeat Jasper. :) Secondly, this Carlisle, as I mentioned at the beginning, is not the Carlisle of the books, plus Jasper was both over-confident and underestimated his opponent.

Thanks for the review! :)